Chapters Chapter Two
You decide that you are going to move to this town. you were getting tired of doing the same thing.
Lucky there are new house that have just be built
Since it was Sunday you're brother and sister always come round for a Sunday dinner, You though that would be the best time to tell everyone you're moving to this town called ponyville. but the only problem is that you don't know how to tell them
it's now turned 5:30pm and you're parents have gotten back from there work and started making dinner
DING DONG
"Stargazer can you please get that" shouted you mum
You walk out of your room and down the stairs to open the door. You are soon grabbed into a headlock with a hoof rubbing in you're mane
"Hey little brother" said Jack Hammer still rubbing a hoof in you're mane
You're brother walks away to go into the living room
As you were about to close the front door someone else says you're name
"StarGazer!" says the voice
She walks past you and walks into the living room to say hi to you're parents and you're brother
You think to yourselfOh grate, Knowing that I'm the highlight to Rose Beats week, It's making me think twice about moving to this ponyville
You shut the front door and walk into the living room were you're brother and sister are sitting on the couch
Rose beat looks at you with her light blue eye. You start to feel a little uncomfortable because you were never any good at lieing to your sister
"Okay then" she say as he walks back to the couch
You and your siblings started to talk about what they have done in the last couple of weeks.
"Dinners ready" said your mum
Jack Hammer of course the first one up and and walking to the table
You sit with you're family eating you're family dinner talking about whats been happening
As soon as everyone is done eating you think to yourselfAlright you have to do this
"I have saying to say" make the fist thing sound really stupid. Check Pausing to add dramatic effect. Check
You look at your mum trying to hold back her tears as hard as she could
Oh please mum don't cry please
"Well son" you're dad said getting up from the dinner table "If it's really what you want to do then....I'm supporting you" He says putting he hoof on you're shoulder
He pulls you in for a hug and he tightly wraps his arm around you. Soon your Mum joins in on the hug and soon your sister does to
Moving Day
You pack up everything that you needThis is it. I'm finally growing up
you walk down the stairs to see your family waiting for you. Mum, Dad, Jack Hammer and Rose Beat
"You ready to go?" say your dad
as you and you're family walk out the front door and walk to the train station. No one has said anything since you walked out the front door.
As you pay for you're train ticket to ponyville and wait for the train your Mum is the first one to speak
"Well son looks like you're finally growing up" says your dad
"Goodbye little bro"
As soon as Jack Hammer lets go of you, You are then tackled to another hug by your sister
You here off in the distance the trains horn.
"ALL ABOARD" yell's a pony
you turn away from your family and walk towards the pony
"Ticket please"
You grab the nears seat and look out the window. Your mum and sister are crying again. You can see your Father and Brother holding back there tears.
As they wave to you the trains starts to move.
You give them one last wave.
You started to feel upset up you remember the song that Rose Beat use to sing to you and you start to sing it to yourself lightly
Once you finished singing the song and see Fillyadelphia is no longer in sight
tears started to form in you're eyes
You slowly close your eyes and drift of to sleep
Chapter 3
"Hey buddy"go away No. never OH SH-
You open you're eye's and sit up as fast as you could. You see the same guy you gave you're ticket to standing over you
You get out of your chair and put on your saddle bag and wait for the train to stop.
You stand next to the door.
The train doors open up and you take a deep breath
Here we go, a new life
Walk out of the train and out of the station
Now were is town hall?
You see a big building in to middle of the town from were you standing
I'm guessing that would be town hall
You walk thought the town see different colors of ponies minding there own business, Some of them gave you a weird look but you assume it's normal since you are the new guy
You make it to the big building in the middle of the town.
Okay you can do this. It's just like your history test
You walk into the building to see a cream colored pony with a gray mane at a desk she seems to be writing down something
"Erm excuse me?" You say
You fill out what seems to be hours of paper of information about yourself. You get done filling out the information and hand it over to mayor mare.Mr StarGazer I like the sound of that
You walk out the door of the town hall. Excited to find your new house. But there was one problem, You don't know were everything is
Oh Great, I should of ask her were it is
You walk though the town of ponyville, Lost as a lamb. You come up to a shop that looks like a giant ginger bread house
Sugarcube corner huh? Well I am feeling kinda hungry maybe I could get something from there. And directions
You walk into the shop to see no one behind the counter all that are in the shop are 6 mare's but you didn't really pay much attention to them.
You look around the shop looking for the owners
"Ya lost there sugarcube?"
You turn around to see the 6 mares looking at you
"Yeah I am"Back off sister you cant be hitting on me that fast
The two of you walk out the shop and you fly into the air
You spend the last couple of minutes talking to rainbow dash about what you done in your life
"Well here we are" said Rainbow Dash
You start to unpack everything that is in your saddle bag: Family Photos, Your certificate that you got when you broke the record,And some more stuff
When you finished unpacking you look at the, 2:25,I have loads of time A nice house, A very nice house indeed
BANG BANG BANG
you are woken up the a load banging on the door
BANG BANG BANG
"Alright Alright I'm coming" you shout
BANG BANG BANG
"Alright" you say opening the door to see a cyan pegasus stand there
Rainbow dash takes on a tour of ponyville showing you some of the shops and showing were her friend lived.
The time is now 5:00
"Well that was fun rainbow but I guess I should be-" you were cut off the the sound of your stomach growling
You follow rainbow dash to sugarcube corner and land outside the shop
"Hello there rainbow dash" said a pony with blue fur and pink mane "Who that handsome young stallion behind you?"Not you too
You look at the menu to see what they have
You feel something grab your leg you look down to see a baby pegasus with brown mane
Mrs Cake soon returns with with two strawberry cupcakes
As you and rainbow dash walk out of sugarcube corner you take a bit out of your cupcake.Wow this is really good Not gonna argue with that, Now how do I get home
You and Rainbow dash fly toward your home, You land next to the door
After the party were every one has left excepted for the Six ponies you first met. They tell you about everything they have done. They told you that they represent the elements of harmony.
But you were more stunned by the fact they defeated Nightmare moon, Queen Chrysalis, Discord and King sombra
After a couple of hours talking everyone when home.
Your living room was a complete mess
Meh I'll clean that up in the morning
You go upstairs and locate you bedroom, As soon as you found it you jump sight into bed. As soon as your head hit the pillow you were fast asleep
Racing a Rainbow
Chapter 4
You start to wake up from your deep sleep, but something was different, you woke up by yourself
You didn't wake up by the sound of your alarm clock or the sound of your dad walking into your room and waking you up because it was passed 12:00
You sit up onto your new bed and rub your eyes
You pull the covers off you and get out of your bed. You walk into your new bathroom and hop into the shower, You turn on the shower head and let the water run down your fur and think about what your going to do today.
First thing first, Clean up the mess from the party last night and write a letter to Mum and Dad.
You squeeze out some shampoo out of the bottle and rub it though your mane.
And i guess i could go and find a job as well
You rinse out the shampoo out of your mane.
You get out of the shower and grab a towel and rub your mane and coat with it.
After drying yourself off you walk down stairs and into the living room. Still a complete mess from last night.
Well lets get started
Using your wing as a broom you sweep up some cup and party streamers and sweep them into a bag. You take down some of the decorations and put them in to the same bag as the streamers and cups.
You walk out of your front door and put the bag full of party stuff into the nearest bin you could find.
You walk back into your house find a peace of paper and a pen and write a letter to your mum and dad
Dear Mum and Dad
Hey Mum, Hey Dad I just wanted to let you know how i was doing I manged to get myself a house, The house is pretty fancy, I'm going to have to send you a picture when i have the chance. I met some interesting new people, I met the mayor already i had to fill out some forms about myself. I also met 6 other mares named AppleJack, Twilight, PinkiePie, Rarity, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash. Pinkie for some reason trow me a party because i new to the town, It was kinda weird, But hey a party is a party so who am i to object to one. I hope the four of you are okay without me, Give my Love to Grampa and Grandma
Love StarGazer
You seals the the letter in a envelope and write your Mum and Dad home address and you tuck the letter under your wing.
You open your fount door and trot outside.
As you walk thought the town somewhat knowing your way around you manage to find the post office. You walk into the building, You see a gray coated mare with yellow hair she has bubble as her cutiemark, as was facing away from you sorting out her mail bag
OH MY CELESTIA WHAT IS UP WITH YOU'RE EYES!!!
"Hey your that new pony that pinkie trow that party for right?" she ask
You nod and walk over to the box with the sign Fillyadelphia on it. You put your letter into the box,You turn towards Ditzy
Okay whats next on the list? Find a job, That would be a good start
You walk though to town looking for the employment agency(A/N - I could think of anything to call it okay so shut up)
You continue walking thought the town seeing all the food stands
After a few more minutes of walk still having no luck on finding the employment agency
"HEY STARGAZER!" yell a familial voice
you were about to walk away when rainbow said
"Well how about a race?"Damn she knows my weakness
The two of you get set into a racing positions
"On 3"
To two of you speed of, You were just ahead rainbow by your tail, You start doing things with your wings that your grandpa told you on how to pick up more speed. Rainbow was still on your tail. What you did to pick up speed rainbow was always a tail away.
You start to get close to sweet apple acres and you were still in the lead. As you get closer and closer rainbow dash starts to get ahead off you.
You reach sweet apple acres. And rainbow dash beat you. You lay on the ground huff and puff trying to get your breath back
"Look like i win, You have to spend the whole day with me" said rainbow dashLets hope I'm getting better at lying
Time - 4:00
After a busy day doing all the thing that Rainbow Dash wanted to do you suddenly remember that you need to get a job
"Rainbow, Do you know were the employment agency is?" you ask
The two of you fly into the air and fly towards the bulletin board
You land in front of the board and look at all the different options
"So you have any idea on what you want to do?" Rainbow ask
You walk over to Twilight library and Rainbow starts to knock on the door
You walk over to the table were the quills are and grip one between your mouth and start to wright down your informationWhat am i a dog?
After a couple of second you get done with the applications and just wait there, from upstairs you can hear some voice but you cant make out very well
[Purple text - Twilight]
When are you going to tell him?
You were starting to get board
Soon the two emerge from upstairs and make there way down. Rainbow had the new Daring Do book under her wingWhy is she blushing? "Alright then, can we go to the post office now?"
You and Rainbow walk out of Twilight library. For some reason Rainbow was quieter then usual
You and Rainbow walk into the post office and walk over to the box that says application, You put the slip into the box, The two of you were about the walk out of the post office until you got stop by Ditzy
"Hey StarGazer fancy meeting you here again" she says flying over to you
You were about 10 meters away from the post office and Rainbow was still dragging you by you're arm
Time - 4:50
You and Rainbow walk thought the door of sugarcube corner to see pinkie behind the counter
"Hiya you two" she greets you
With a blink Pinkie disappears into the kitchen and with another blink she reappears with a cookie and a cupcake
"How did you do that?" you ask
You and Rainbow walk out sugar cube corner eating your teats
rainbow brakes the silence
Time - 5:25
You and Rainbow dash lay down on a cloud talk about how big of a fan of the wonder blots rainbow was
"I just remembered that I'm expecting a letter" she stand up and stretches her wings "Don't worry I'll be back"
You close you're eyes and go to sleep
Time - 6:45
You slowly open your eye. You try to get up but you feel wight on your right arm and your chest. You look over to a cyan pagasus laying on your arm and her arm across your chest.
You feel your cheeks burn up
You try to wake up rainbowWait what? is she dreaming about me? I'm not saying i didn't mind it Damn that cute "No I'm not mad, It just took me by surprise"
you open the letter and read it
Time - 9:00
You and Rainbow raced for hours, By the end of it you were the victor beating her by 1 point
After a long time of trying to get you're breath back rainbow is the first to speak
Time - 9:20
You make it back to your house and unlock your door, you go up to your room and make sure you set your alarm to 6:30.
You decide you were going to go to sleep now since you were so tired from racing rainbow dash
You head hits the pillow and you slowly close your eyes
Author's Note
WOW HOLY CRAP
Chapter 5
BEEP, BEEP, BEEP, BEEP
You were awoken from your slumber by the sound of your alarm clock. You let out a grunt and turned it off.
You get up from your bed and stretch your bones.
You walk over the bathroom and turn on the shower
Time - 6:40
You dry your self off from you shower and head out the front door. Closing the door behind you your stomach starts to grow at you. You to go to sugar cube corner to satisfy the needs of the best that is your stomach. You fly into the air and fly your way to the sugar shop known as sugar cube corner
It only takes you 2 minutes to fly over to the shop
You land outside sugar cub corner and walk in
Behind the counter was Mrs Cake you greeted you with a smile
"Hello StarGazer"
Mrs Cake walks into the kitchen to go get your teat
"Hiya StarStar"I cant believe she said that all in one breath 6:53 I need to hurry
Time - 6:56
You fly your way to the park were Team C meets up
You see 6 other ponies standing and talking to each over
You land away from the group to finish off the rest of your cupcake
"Hey you StarGazer right?" said someone from the group
swallowing the the cupcake peaces you have in your mouth you turn your head to see two mares walking over to you.
One of the mare that were walking over to you had grayish blue coat and was wearing a pink bow in her light blue hair, Her cutiemark were three blue and white dragonflies.
"Yeah why?" you say
"Hey StarGazer" said a voice from behind you
Every one who was in a talking suddenly stop a went into a line.
"Now this is the new addition to the team, His name is StarGazer, Teat him like everyone else"
Time - 7:25
After a couple of minutes of Rainbow Dash telling you and teaching what you have to do she leaves you to check up on the other teams.
As you kick the clouds you here a voice call out you're name
you turn your head to rainbow dash
"What did she want?" she asks
Time - 3:30
"Alright everypony, You all done good, I'm going to let you go home now" said Rainbow dash
everypony went flying off, You were about to but rainbow grabbed your attention
"Hey Star do you want to go to sugar cube corner?"Damn it, why is that so cute "Your not gonna stop are you"
Time - 3:35
"Hi again Mrs Cake" you say walking in
"Here you go kids" said Mrs Cake
As you and Dash eat your food Pinkie whispers something into Dash's ears
You are left alone at the table eating your cup cake when a pagasus and a unicorn baby's come crawling over to you
"Pound Cake, Punkin Cake, Get off that young stallion" said a stallion with yellow coat and orange mane.
You sit in your chair for a bit tapping the table with your hoof. You can here some voice upstairs, You assume that it Pinkie and Rainbow, You can barely hear them but there voice are all muffled
[Pink Text - Pinkie Pie] - Duh
You have to tell him soon Dashie, Before you miss it
You get up from your chair and go to walk out the door. Before leaving to turn to Mrs Cake
Time - 4:25
You land outside you're house to see a letter just on your door step. You notice that the writing is from your mum, It brings a smile to your face.You unlock your front door and sit down on the couch. You open the letter a read it
Dear StarGazer
Me, Your Dad, Jack Hammer and Rose Beat are missing you so much. I miss having my baby boy around the house. Rose Beat misses her little brother most of her music she been writing is about her little brother moving. Sunday dinner's wont be the same without the fourth member with the family at the dinner table. I'm glad you been making some new friends around the town. Let just hope you got a job by the time this letter reaches you.
You're Dad said the house is a lot more quieter now your not around
We all miss you
Love From Mum
A tear come to your eyes
Knock Knock Knock
You walk over to the door and open it to see Rainbow Dash holding a flier in her mouth
"Hi Dash, Whats that?"
For The One Who Coulden't
Chapter 7
You walk out of the tent, to see lots of ponies standing around the race track, You walk though the crowed of ponies and trot your way to your spot,
You walk over to your spot and stretch your wings because you need to push yourself to the limit this time because your up agents some stallions who look like they can brake the speed of time.
You look over to ThunderLane who looks nervous about the race but of course he trying to hide it.
You look over to Cloudchaser to look focused and ready for her wing to take on a hurricane.
You finally look over at Dash who is looking back at you with worried eyes
The starter of the race walk over and tell every one to start
Every thing goes dead quite.
Rainbow get down into the starting possession. You can see the pain in her face.
"ON YOUR MARKS!!!" shouts the starter
All of the ponies fly off. Rainbow Dash is last but see about a tail away from the pony in front of her. She mark her way to ThunderLane still in last place, all the other pony have gone when Dash tags ThunderLane. ThunderLane flys off in a fast speed catching up to the pony in front of him. ThunderLane manages to pass the pony and tag Cloudchaser. Cloudchaser is in 3rd place at the moment but she catching up, She doing all the wing ticks you taught her but it doesn't seem to be helping a lot, She's turning the corner to you. Your stomach starts to turn, word's of doubt go flying though you headYou cant do this You're going to let everyone down
You hear load to screaming and cheering coming from the side and behind you. A pony with a slick back mane and a mustache come up and pats you on the shoulder.
You go responded but you grabbed by a pair of cyan arm rapping around your neck and pulling you in for a hug.
"STARGAZER!!"
you turn around to see the two other pegusus from your team fly over to you
You walk other to Rainbow Dash who is with her friendsAww that's kinda cute
Time - 7:15
You walk in to sugar cube corner were pinkies "team dashie and starstar winning first place party" was held, you decided to show up late on purpose
You walk thought the crowed of ponies to get some punch from the table. Your stopped by pinkie
Pinkie shakes her head violently. She grabs your arm pulls you to the stage
"Hey eveypony" say pinkie in the microphone, All head turn towards the pink pony "We have the winner of the race here and he going to do a speech" she continues
Time - 9:00
You sit at a table with a cup of punch
One of the songs you used to listen to comes on
Rainbow Dash walks over and sits next to you
Time - 11:00
Everypony has left sugar cube corner, All that are left Twilight, Fluttershy, AppleJack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash and You
You finish the last sip of your punch
The other say there good byes to you and you walk down the street to your house.
You reach your fount door and unlock it
You make your way to your bedroom
You trow yourself on your bed and close your eyes
Author's Note
I hoped you guys enjoyed reading this chapter, I kinda had writer block when i was writing this
I also hoped you enjoyed the song that i put in the story, because i sure did
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Family Gathering with a bit of Rainbow (Part 1)
Chapter 8
It been a week since the relay race. You been doing the same thing over and over getting up, going to work, kick some clouds, finishing work.
Rainbow Dash would always offer you to hang out with her, You would always accept the offer. But when you didn't Rainbow Dash would beg you or follow you until you did.
Day - Friday
You had the day of work today so you just sat around your house doing nothing. You would play some of the music that your sister sent to you every now again. But the song you would play the most is the song that played at the party. (see last chapter for song). You would play the song out loud. You would even sing along with it some times.
Knock Knock
There was knocking on the door but you couldn't hear it because the music was too loud.
Knock Knock Knock
The knocking got louder but you still couldn't hear it.
You hear something tapping on the window so you turn your head to the window to see a gray pegusus look at you with a angry expression.
You get up and walk over to the door and open it
You shut the door and start to open the letter.
You start to read it
Dear StarGazer
Were having a family get together on the weekends, It wont be the same if the youngest of the family isn't there. We all need to see our little one. It's going to be at Grandpa and Grandma lake side cabin so please come along just outside Fillydelphia. You're big sister needs to see you face again
Love From Mum
The letter comes with the picture of the lake side cabin
You always loved going to your Grandpa and Grandma lake side cabin. You loved jumping into the lake and the fresh air.
You start to pack some of the stuff you need. But you can't forget the most important thing, an extra pillow, your Grandpa and Grandma would always set up the rooms but they only have two pillows, You can never sleep on one two pillow so you decide to bring a extra pillow.
As you pack some extra thing to take with you. like headache pills just in case your brother decide that he going to whack you around the head. You hear an knock on the door.
You walk downstairs and open the door to see a cyan mare standing there
The two of you fly other to the train station. You buy the train ticket for tomorrow.
You and dash walk away from the train station
"So now what?" you ask
Time - 8:00
You and Rainbow Dash a laughing your guts out on a cloud
After you two calmed down from all the laughing you try and get your breath back, You noticed that Celestia sun is starting to go down.
"Hey dash that was fun and all but i need to get back home and continue packing and plus i need to catch the train early as well" you say standing up
You fly away from the cloud and fly your way home
You land in front of your house and unlock the door. You shut the door behind you and you walk upstairs to your bedroom and continue pack some extra stuff. You have to reset your alarm you 6:00 so you can catch the train.
After a couple more hours of you playing some of your sister music you decide to go to sleep.
BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP
Your dreams are invaded by the dreadful sound of your alarm clock. You open your eyes and turn it off. You make sure that you turn of your alarm fully so it doesn't go off then your away.
You grab your saddle bag and strap it on your back. You remember to to put your keys in your saddle bag so your able to get in to your house when you get back from your family gathering. You grab you train ticket. You walk out the front door and fly your way to the train station.
You wait for your train still half asleep. You close your eyes for a few seconds. As soon as you open your eyes the train is at the train station. You walk over to the train door and hand the man your ticket.
you find an empty seat, You unstrap your saddle bag and place it on the seat next to you. You go to close your eyes again because you know that this is going to be about an Two hours and a half journey to Fillydelphia. You close your eyes and go to sleep
Time - 8:30What timing
You walk thought the City looking at all the building, You walking on one path and that was the path out of Fillydelphia, You walk out of Fillydelphia and and continue your way down the road. You keep walking for what fills like hours. Your hoofs start to get tired so lift you hoof of the ground you flap your wings,your about 5 center meters of the ground. You hoover your way down the road until you meet a dirt path. You land you look at a forest, You take a gulp you lift you hoof off the ground still 5 center meters away and hoover your way thought the forest.
Time - 11:00
As you hoover your way to your Grandpa and Grandma cabin you get the feeling that your being followed, You look over your shoulder every now and again just to make sure that SlenderPony is not following you.
A couple more minutes of hoovering thought the forest you start to get the smell of a lake. As a lake starts to come into view of to the left is a cabin. You land on your hoofs an trot your way over to the cabin
You knock on the cabin door
The door opens at revile a elderly pegusus mare with a brown coat and a blue mane.
You walk in to the cabin unstrapping your saddle bag and setting in on the stairs
You walk walk into the living from were all head turn towards you
You are then put into a head lock with a hoof going threw your mane
You then turn around and walk over you your mum
after she lets go of you, you ask
You clear your trout which grab there attention
You simply nod and tell everypony what you you have done when you moved to ponyville
After telling everyone your story, your dad says that he better get the BBQ fired up and get some food ready
Your Dad, Grandpa and brother walk out onto the balcony
"You find any mares that you like?" ask your grandma
"The food nearly done" you hear your dad say from the balcony
Knock Knock Knock
"StarGazer can you please get that" say your Grandma
You walk to the door and open it, You eye widen, Standing at the front door was a familiar cyan pegusus with a huge smile on her face
"RAINBOW DASH!?!?"
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Family Gathering with a bit of Rainbow (Part 2)
Chapter 9
"RAINBOW DASH!?!?"
"StartGazer what taking so long?" you here your Grandpa call from the front room
You walk into the balcony to see you dad behind the BBQ with your brother while you sister, Mum and Grandma are talking
After Rainbow Dash has met everyone and you all had something to eat all of you walk into the front room
Every one walks in to the front room and has a seat on the sofas, You sit next to your brother and Rainbow Dash sits next to you.
You decide to go out on to the balcony with your sister
"Hey there big sis" you say walking over you Rose Beat you has her front to leg on the railing
After a couple of minutes Rainbow Dash came walking on to the balcony
"Hey guys" she say
"Star, Can you help us move this" you hear your Dad say from Inside the cabin
You fly into the cabin, You mother points to the outside of the cabin
You look out the window to see Your dad, Grandpa and Brother trying to push what looks like a boat
You fly outside and help push the boat
Rainbow Dash and Rose Beat conversation while you push the boat
"So you like my little brother" Rose beat says with a smile
The four of you push the boat into the lake
Jack Hammer was to busy focusing on the muscles to notices what you and your dad were about to do
The two of you grab Jack hammers arm and fly up him up into the air
After you and your dad stop having your laughing fit you fly over to the balcony were Dash and Rose Beat were standing.
"Guess whose back" you say landing next to rose beat
Time - 11:30
After spending the rest of the day swimming in the lake and doing some stuff with your family, Everyone decides it was time to go the bed.
Your Grandpa and Grandma set up with room
"Goodnight eveypony" said your mum
you happily jump into your bed and pull the cover over you
You go to close your eyes
Time - 2:15am
"StarGazer"For Celestia sake
You get out of your bed and walk over to Rainbow Dash and Rose Beat room
You walking into the room to see Rainbow sitting on her bed with her head in her hoofs
After a couple of minutes Rainbow finally stops crying, she looks up at you
"You okay now?" you say smiling at her
You lay down on the bed
You close your eyes and drift off to sleep
I love you
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Family Gathering with a bit of Rainbow (Part 3)
Chapter 10
Time - 11:15
As you escape the dream world you hear voices, you continue to have your eyes close and listen to the conversation
You can still feel Rainbows arm warped around you and her head on your chest, But it feel like she watching you sleep
You start you open your eye and you are blinded by the light, You look down to your chest and you were right rainbow as looking at you
"Morning sleepy head" she says to youWow, her eyes are beautiful now i got the change to look at them
You turn back around and walk down the stairs
You enter the living room
In the kitchen you get out a bowl and some oats, you pour the oats into the bowl and walk you back into the living room
As you enter the living room you see that rainbow dash has taken a seat next to your sister and they were talking about somethingWow these two are getting along well
You take a seat on the coach next you your brother
You dig in to your bowl of oats
"Where were you last night?" your brother asks
After you finished your bowl of oats you get up and walk to the kitchen
You wash out your bowl and leave the bowl in the sink
You walk out the kitchen and go to sit down but your stopped by your Dad
The three of you walk out of the cabin
"So what do we need first Dad?" you ask
Time - 1:00
As you and Dash come back from the forest with logs and sticks on your back, you see that your dad has set up a ring on rocks
You and Dash set up the logs around the stone circle your dad has set up
From the cabin balcony your sister sayCelestia damn it that's cute
Time - 8:00
You spent most of the Day talking to your family waiting for time to go by
Your dad notices the time
You and your mum walk to wards the camp fire you see everyone had taken a seat
Your mum opens the bag of marshmallows and your dad hand everyone a roasting stick
As the 8 of you roast your marshmallows you dad says the most unusual thing
"So how about a camp fire song"
As you finish the song every one starts the clap
You stand up and take a bow
Time - 10:00
As You, Dash and the rest of the your family start talking about random things your Dad again says something unexpected
Your Brother was a wiz at tell scary stories
There was once a family who lived just outside a forest, There youngest daughter had a stuffed doll, The doll had a red dress and a rose hair, One day as the family where out on a picnic the young girl feel asleep, The family left the picnic sit because it was about to rain, The dad carried the girl on her back but they left the doll behind, As the rain pored down lightning hit the doll, The doll came to life, As it got up from the mud i began to walk to wards the young girls house, The doll entered the house by climbing threw the window, The young girl dad was a lumber jack and he left his ax on the table, The doll toke the ax and started climbing the stairs, The doll started sing "1, 2, 3, 4 I'm coming up the stair, 1, 2, 3, 4 I'm gonna kill you all" You doll opened the young girl door and walked over to her, the doll then sung again "1, 2, 3, 4 I'm going to set you to sleep" The doll chopped the young girl head off, The doll then walked over to the the parents house and did the something to them, The doll set the head of the pony's on the table and left the house. They say the doll is still out there wondering the world, The doll could be anywhere, So you better make your to lock your bedroom doors tonight, Because this is the night where is all happened
Everyone around the campfire was frozen in fear, You look over at dash to was shacking violently
"Well.....That was good Hammer" says your dad
You wrap your wing around her but she is still shaking and she doesn't even look at you
"I think you may of broke dash" you say
You wave a hoof in front of her, But she still doesn't respond
You think of the only way to get her back to reality,
"OH MY GOSH DASH LOOK OUT" you scream
Dash jumps in the air and she wraps her arms around you shaking in fear
"Welcome back to reality" you say
"Well i guess it time we all went to bed" say your Grandpa getting of the log
Your dad puts out the fire with a bucket of water
the 8 out you walk into the cabin and head up stairs
Everyone says good night to each other
You and jack hammer walk into your room and lay down on the bed
"Goodnight little brother, try not to have nightmares from my story"
Time - 2:00
"StarGazer" you hear a voice whisper
Chapter 11
Chapter 11
Time - 10:35
You wake up to see Rainbow's head on your chest and her arms around you with a smile on her face
You look over to your left to see your brother sitting on his bed with a huge smile
"Well Well Well” he saysAwww she looks of peaceful
"I'll leave you two alone" your brother says walking out the room
"Err Dash, can you maybe get of me please?"
You lay on your bed with dash's head still on your chest,...That was unexpected
"Well, I guess this is goodbye, again"
As your family all say their good byes, you hear them all say 'it was nice meeting you' to dash
The two of you walk out the front door and into the forest. You give your final wave to your family and disappear into the forest
As the two of you emerge from the forest and walk your way down the street, dash smiles and says
Time - 10:40
You land at the train station before dash does
As if on cue the train horn blows
"So how long is the trip?" dash asks you
Time - 12:10
"Dash" you say shaking her lightly "we're here"
As the six of you walk through the town walking, talking and laughing you reach your house
You unlock your door and walk into the houseOH DEAR CELESTIA it's exactly the same
Time 3:00
You wake up to some knocking on the doorRude How rude is this pony? If you’re trying to be cute, it's not working
After she finishes the glass she looks around the room
You look at the clock 3:15
You decide to go upstairs and continue your nap
Time - 6:30
You wake up again to knocking on the door. You walk down stairs and open a door, standing at the door is your favorite neighborhood Rainbow Dash
"Hey dash, what brings you here?"
The two of you land in front of the sugar cube corner and walk inside
After you have a drink of apple cider and dance around, you sit at a table and ThunderLane comes up to you
The two ponies extend your wings and hold them to the ground, you try to flap your wings but to no success, they’re too strong for you
ThunderLane walks over to your right wing
"What do y'all think you’re doing?" says a huge voice with a southern accent
You look over to see a huge red coated stallion with an angry look on his face
You try to get up onto your hoofs, but your legs were badly damaged
Soon everything goes black and you feel yourself hit the floor. You hear some muffled screams and gasps
A Kiss That Could Brake A Comatose
Chapter 12
You open your eyes slowly and see nothing, but a white void. You sit up with out any problems. You feel your wings
BEEP
"What was that?" you ask
BEEP
"Thank you" you say
You are then hit by a big flash of light
you start to hear voices but you can't tell who they belong to
You sit up slowly and you see Twilight, Fluttershy, AppleJack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie standing at the door and facing the opposite way, You see your doctor smiling at you
"Yes he is" he says happily
The six of them all turn to you and their faces all light up with smiles
You lay back down onto your bed
You feel dash's tongue dance around your lips, you open your mouth slowly but her tongue enters your mouth and starts to dance with your tongue.
She slowly brakes away and looks into your eye
"What, What was that for?"
"Alright love birds, that's enough" you hear AppleJack say
Her hair was straight and her mane and coat were a very dull pink
You turn back to Dash who has a smile on her face
"Well it's nice to see you're awake" says a big stallion voice
Time - 6:00
You spend the last couple of hours talking with your new marefriend and the other four elements of harmony
You smile and lay your head down on the pillowToday was a good day, Kinda
Calm The Aches, Stop The Shakes
Calm The Aches, Stop The Shakes
This chapter contains name cameos of some users who read this story
Chapter 13
Time - 10:45
You open your eyes to a beautiful site, Rainbow Dash with her gorgeous smile
"Well, Well, Well" you hear a voice say
Soon your doctor comes back
Soon rainbow dash walks in with a bag of food and a little orange filly with purple mane and tail
Time - 3:30
You tell your story and eat your hay sandwich
Time - 3:55
You open your eyes slowly to see Dash at the side of your bed with a daring do book in her hoofs
You then start to shake violently
"Are you Cold?" Rainbow Dash ask
After a couple more minutes talking with Dash, Pinkie soon enters the room
After a couple more minutes of laughter you all calm down and catch your breath back
Time - 8:00
The visiting time is over, Pinkie leaves but Dash stays by your side
Author's Note
I noticed most of the chapters has ended with you going to sleep. Oh well
Lets see if you noticed any of the hidden name cameos
Getting Out Of This Darn Place
Chapter 14
Being in the hospital for a week and a half really did a number on you
But luckily you were able to get out the bed and stretch your hooves a bit, you walk slower than usual because of what ThunderLane did to your hooves, you would fall most of the time because your balance isn't that good. The doctor says to give it couple of weeks and you'll be back to your normal walking pace in no time.
You had forgotten to take your pills once or twice, mostly every time you decided to take a quick nap. The nurse don't seem to be impressed by you forgetting
Nothing brings a smile onto your face like Rainbow Dash does when she walks into the room. She would visit you every day and sometimes stay the night with you. The two of you would spend most of the time talking or making out.....mostly making out. The rest of your friends would drop by for a visit every now and again and talk.
Time - 2:00
"Can you believe you’re finally getting out of this place?" says Dash excitedly
The nurse wheels you out of the room and down the hall and you see the doorSweet freedom
You hand Rainbow the key and she unlocks it for you
You walk upstairs slowly and walk over to the bathroomBest. Shower. EVER
After a couple of minutes of Dash rubbing you clean the two of you step out of the shower. You grab two towels, you hand/hoof one over to dashShe noticed
The two of you walk out of the bathroom and walk down the stairs into the living room
KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK
You and Dash stop the kiss
The two of you sit there Dash is still on your lap, you wait for the pony to leave
KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK
"I don't think this pony is going anywhere" you say
KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK
"I know you’re in there" said the pony knocking at the door
You walk towards the front door and open it
Time - 6:00
You and Dash sit on the sofa, you’re sitting at an upright position and dash's head is on your lap, you two sit there quietly. You run your hoof though dash's mane
About a minute later Dash comes back with a bag with steam coming out of itOne sip couldn't hurt
Time - 10:00
You and Dash didn't do anything for the rest of the day. You just sat around on the house, you took some pain pills when your hooves started to hurt, But you and Dash would pass the time by making out
You and Dash sat on the sofa with Dash head on your lap again
Time - 1:00
"Star"I'm not mad, I just want to see what you'd if I pretend to be mad
Chapter 15
You lay on your bed looking up at the ceiling lost in your thoughts while Dash is sound asleep with her arm wrapped around you and her head on your chest
What if my hooves never get better? What if I'm not able to fly again? Is my racing career over? NO! I can't think like that. The doctors said that they going to heal and I'll be back to normal In 6 weeks. This is all Thunderlane’s fault. That reminds me, I need to get back on him, and He should know, I play for a team that shouldn’t be messed with.
You turn your head and look at Dash, who is still sleeping
Aww. She is so cute when she's sound asleep. I do have to thank ThunderLane for one thing, If I was never hospitalized she probably never of admitted her feeling for me
You start stroking her mane while still in your thoughts
She has been by my hospital bed though out those six days while I was comatose. Man I love that word, mainly because many ponies don't know that it means. I need to do something to repay her. What would she want? new sun glasses? A new hat? A new wonderbolt poster? THAT'S IT. She loves the wonderbolts probably more then she loves me, but I'm okay with that. I'll get her wonderbolt tickets and not just any wonderbolt tickets, I'll get her backstage passes. Yeah she'll love it.
You stopped stroking her rainbow mane
"Don't stop" Dash says still with her eyes closed
You can't tell if she’s talking in her sleep or if she’s awake
She’s probably talking in her sleep again
"Stargazer" she says with her eyes closed
What kind of dream is she having?
"I told you not to stop" She says opening her eye slightly
Dash smiles, and closes her eyes again
I need to get those tickets. Sooner rather then later
After a couple of minutes of lying on your bed stroking dash’s mane you decide to out of bed. You manage to get dash off you. You walk downstairs mentally saying 'ow' with every step.
You walk your way to the kitchen and take your pills
You decide to play some music. You make sure not to play it to loud because you don't want to wake Dash up again.
You begin to get lost in your thoughts again
Alright I need to think of a plan to get the tickets without dash realizing. The wonderbolt’s next show is next month. Somehow I need to get away from dash so I can get to Cloudsdale
KNOCK KNOCK
You snap out of your thoughts by the sound of knocking on the door
You walk over to the front door and open it. Standing on the other side of the door is the mare that caused the trouble with ThunderLane. You just stare daggers at her
"Hi" she says
Dash looks likes she about to pounce on Cloudchaser
"I'm sorry" you say to Cloudchaser, closing the door
You break away from the kiss and stare into her eyes
You grab her hoof and walk out the front door. You walk thought Ponyville dragging rainbow dash with you. You nearly fall over a couple of time but you still continued with your walk to your destination.
"Star where are we going? You’ve been dragging me for a while"
You get an idea to make sure if she really calm or not
"Hey look, there goes Cloudchaser"
You rub your hoof under your chinIdea~♪
You grab dash's hoof again and make your way over to the Carousel Boutique
You open the door to the cloth shop to see Rarity working on a dress.
"Rarity I need you help" you say getting Rarity's attention
"Now dash there only one way I like to relax"
You walk into the kitchen and take some painkillers. You here some noises coming from upstairs. You make your way upstairs to investigate the noise
A Day And A Half With Three Small Fillys
Chapter 16
You walk upstairs to investigate the noise that you herd earlier. You hear three little voices come from a room.
You open the door to see three little fillies sitting in the middle of the room. One with a white coat with pink and purple hair, another had yellow fur and red hair, and the other you've known as Scootaloo.
The three filly's turn their heads towards you
The three fillies run out the room giggling and you hear them running down the stairs. You hear a thump from the floor below
"Oww" The three fillies say together
You chuckle to yourself as you walk out the room and down the stairs
You and the three fillies stand in the middle of the field
"So, what do you girls what to do?" you ask them
"Wow she is one good hider" You say walking thought the park with Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom
The three of you stand quietly and think
You notice a bush moving of in the distance with a small purple tail sticking out of it
"Follow me" You say a walking behind a tree
The three of you sneak behind every tree and bush trying not to be seen by Scootaloo
Because Scootaloo was trying to blend into her surroundings, she had to stop nearly every two seconds, which made it easier for you, Sweetie Belle, and Apple Bloom to get to tree before she does
You make it over to the tree and hide behind it hoping Scootaloo didn't see you
She moves closer to the tree, which means, she didn't see you
Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle start to giggle a bit
They cover their mouths and get ready to chase Scootaloo
As soon as Scootaloo gets close to the tree You, Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle jump out from behind the tree.
Scootaloo jumps out of her bush costume and starts to run.
Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and you run after her. You could’ve easily caught Scootaloo even with your damaged hooves but you always thought it was more fun chasing her.
The girls giggled as they ran, which brought a smile to your face and you laughed along with them.
Soon Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle jump on Scootaloo bringing her to the ground.
The girls laugh while they lay on one another.
You tap Scootaloo on the head
"Got ya" you say
The three fillies faces light up with joy
"Now since I got Sweetie Belle first, she has to count" you say
You, Apple Bloom and Scootaloo run off in different directions
You sit in a ditch hiding from the Cutie Mark Crusaders
After a couple of minutes the bush starts to shake
You get yourself ready to run
Instead of three fillies coming out from the bush, a ferret jumps out and walks over to you
"Hey little guy" you say to it
You hear three little voice getting closer
"Stay quiet" You say whispering to Fluttershy
The bushes start to shake
And three filly jump out
You don't run as fast as you usually do, because you want to give the crusaders a chance to catch you
As you run your hooves start to ache and you feel like you’re going to fall over. You manage to keep yourself from falling to the ground, but at this point the crusaders have managed to catch up to you.
You look behind you to see the crusaders just about to grab your tail. You swing your tail away from them and keep on running
You start to slow down because you want to get caught.
You get tackled to the ground by the three fillies who lay on top of you. They all giggle and you start to laugh with them because there laughs are so contagious
They get off you and you get back onto your hoofs
"Another round?" You ask them
You turn around to see cyan Pegasus with a rainbow mane standing in a position, like she going to charge at you
"You are SO dead" She shouts spreading her wings
"Uh Oh"
"I don't see this much as a punishment"
Chapter 17
"Uh Oh" you say as you are walking backwards
Dash takes three more steps towards you
You turn around and run for your life. You look back to see if dash is chasing you, but she wasn't there. You look ahead of you to see dash there.
You stop and run back the way you came
Dash lands in front of you standing in a position as if she is going to tackle you
"You really think you can run from me?" Dash asks
"Well, what if I use my wings?" you say teasing her
Dash gets out of her tackling position and looks at you with a confused look in her eyes
"But...you can't, the doctors said" she says actually thinking that you were going to use your wings
She fell for it. RUN
You run of in a different diction then before
You are then tackled to the ground with both of your hoofs pinned to the ground by Dash
You look at her with worried eyes
Dash raises her hoof
You close your eyes. Preparing yourself for the eventual impact, while instinctively turning your head to the left
Instead of getting a hoof to the face, you get a kiss on the cheek
You look up at Rainbow Dash who has a smirk on her face
"You didn't actually think that I was going to hurt you, did you?" she asks
Dash giggles and presses her lip against yours
While you and dash kiss, you hear two little 'Awws' and then a 'Eww'
You and Dash stop the kiss and see three little fillies staring at you
Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle look like they’ve seen a kitten and Scootaloo making a face like she’s about to throw up
"What?" you ask
You walk Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle home while Dash is giving a flying lesson to Scootaloo
After you drop the girls home you walk over to Fluttershy's cottage
You knock on the door three times and wait
Soon the door opens and a yellow Pegasus stands there
"Oh hi Stargazer" she say greeting you
Flutter shy nods
As you are turning around to leave, Fluttershy shy grabs your shoulder and turns you towards her
"You know, you're a really good coltfriend"
You and Fluttershy look at each other
Soon it starts to get really awkward
"WHAT ARE YOU TWO DOING!!!" a voice calls out
You turn around to see Rainbow Dash floating in the air with her arm crossed
"Nothing" you say
You hear Fluttershy's door slam shut
"Are you cheating on me?!" She asks
You break away from the kiss
"Your adding double to my punishment aren't you?" you ask, already knowing the answer
Dash nods with a smile and then connects her lips with yours again
You and Dash get back to your house and you collapse on the sofa
Dash sits on your back
"What are you doing?" You ask
(Warning: Incoming bow chicka wow wow action)
Alright. Tomorrow I'm going to Cloudsdale to get those tickets, But I got to find a way to get there without dash noticing. Maybe I could sneak out early in the morning while Dash is still sleeping. That sounded the most reasonable,
after thinking of other schemes that you know wouldn’t work.
You feel the weight of Dash getting off your back which snaps you back into reality
"Get in the shower" she says to you
She nods and the points to the door leading up the stairs
With a sigh, you get up off the sofa and walk past Dash. You think of all the things that dash might do to you as you climb the stairs, walk into the bathroom, and turn on the shower
Dash soon enters the bathroom
You get the bandage off your wings and get into the shower
You feels dash's hoof run down your body
"I don't see this much as a punishment" you say
You feel her whack your flank
"I told you to stay quite or do I need to whack your harder?" she asks seductively into your ear
You shake your head
"Good boy"
Chapter 18
You slowly open your eyes to the sun beaming on your face.
Your head is pounding for some reason.
You look over at Dash, who has her arm tightly wrapped around you, with a huge smile on her face.
What did we do last night? All I remember is that we got out of the shower, came into the room, and Dash turning off the lights
We didn't do it, did we?
You look over a Dash who is mumbling in her sleep
You look at the time
8:35
I guess it would be time to get going. One problem. How am I going to get out of Dash's death grab?
You grab on to one Dash's arms and lightly take it off you.
You slowly sit up from the bed not trying to wake dash up.
You walk down stairs and walk into the kitchen to take your pills
You grab as much money as you can, put it in a bag, put that bag in your saddle bag and walk out the door
You close the door slowly so you don't wake her up.
You make your way over to Fluttershy's cottage
Fluttershy is attending to some animals and she doesn't notice you arrive
One of the animals that she is attending to is Benny the ferret
Benny sees you and runs towards you
Fluttershy looks over to see where Benny had run to. She sees you and smiles
"Hi Stargazer" she says
You look down at Benny who looks up at you with his big eyes
You pat him on head and he wraps himself around your leg
Soon Fluttershy comes out of her cottage
"You ready?”
You look down at Benny again
"Sorry little one, you're going to have to get off me"
He unwraps himself and runs to the other ferrets
Fluttershy walks over to you
"I think he likes you" she says, giggles
She flies into the air, grabs a cloud and brings it over to you
She lowers the cloud to the ground so you can get on
You jump on the cloud
"Are you going to be okay with this?" she asks
Flutter Shy giggles and pushes the cloud
You lay down on the cloud and try to enjoy the ride
This feels really weird
You lay down on the cloud with your chin on the cloud
"Are we there yet?" you ask
"Are we there yet?"
"Are we there yet?
You lift your head up to see that you and Fluttershy are in fact almost at Cloudsdale.
A city that you have never been to before. You couldn't believe your eyes. It is amazing seeing it for the first time.
Fluttershy bring you closer to the city and it's a lot bigger then you imagined and a LOT bigger then how your dad described it
Fluttershy brings the cloud lower to the floor of the city so you can get off
You jump of the cloud and look in awe of the city.
You didn't notice but your mouth was wide open
You hear Fluttershy giggle
You're speechless, so you just nod
You feel Fluttershy hoof under your chin and she reconnects you lower half of your mouth with the top half.
"This is amazing" you say
You and Fluttershy walk through Cloudsdale making your way towards the area.
Cloudsdale was a lot more impressive than Fillydelphia. The buildings are made out of clouds and the place is filled of Pegasus of all sizes.
"We're here" says Fluttershy "Um...I'll wait for you out here"
You nod and walk inside and see a line at the ticket booth
You approach the line
You wait in the line, periodically turning your head from side to side looking around the area. It was bigger than you imagined, but the area seemed a bit out of shape and hasn't looked like it had been refreshed for a while
"The one in Fillydelphia's better" you say to yourself
Some Pegasus turn their heads towards you giving disappointing looks
"Hey Punk!" a female voice calls out from behind you
Get ready for a meager insult
"If it is the best city" you pause "Then how come it's never hosted the Equestria games while Fillydelphia has" you say raising an eyebrow and giving a smirk
You hear ponies behind you gasp
The mare in front of you widens her eyes
You are then grabbed by some ponies who are dressed in black
"Get out" one of them says
They chuck you out the door of area
"Don't you come anywhere near here for the next fore weeks Fillydelphia boy" one of them say then walks back into the area
You get up and dust yourself off
"How did they know I'm from Fillydelphia?" you ask out loud
I don't have an accent
You spot Fluttershy sitting on a bench with some birds
You walk towards Fluttershy who is too busy with the birds to notice you walking towards her
You sit down on the bench
"Oh you're back" she says turning towards you "Did you get the tickets?"
You put your hoof to your chin and think
"Maybe you could get the tickets for me?" you ask Fluttershy
Fluttershy still looks unsure
"Please Fluttershy" you say in a begging tone and pleading eyes
Your face lights up with a smile and you reach inside your saddlebag
You get your sack full of bits out of your saddlebag and hoof them over to Fluttershy
She takes the bag
"All you have to do is ask for two wonderbolt tickets and backstage passes" you say
You wait on the bench and hope for the best
You sit on the bench waiting for Fluttershy
On the bench next to you are two mares who look about a year younger then you, giggling every time they look at you
After a while you thought it was kinda cute. But after a while it started to get REALLY annoying
You look over at the mares through the corner of your eye.
They seem to be staring at you a bit more weirdly
You turn your head towards them and they still look at you
One of the girls had red coat and yellow mane, kinda like your sister’s but darker. The other mare has a blue coat and white hair
"There something I can help you with?" you ask them
The girls giggle
"Yeah you do" the blue one says
You shake your head
"Yeah you do. You’re from Fillydelphia right?" the yellow maned one asks
You nod
"You have that Fillydelphian accent" she continues
They both get up, walk towards you and sit next to you
"You have that sexy Fillydelphian accent" says the blue one with half closed eyes
Your cheeks start to burn
"You got a marefriend?" the red one asks
You nod your head
"Well I bet she's not as fun as us" the white maned one says
They start to lean closer to you
You spot Fluttershy come out of the area and you bolt towards her
"Fluttershy" you say startling her "Did you get the tickets?"
You break the hug, take the tickets and put them in your saddle bag
You look over at the two girls on the bench and they wave to you
"I think we should go" you say to Fluttershy
She nods and you both start walking
You and Fluttershy walk out of Cloudsdale
Fluttershy flies up into the air and grabs a cloud and bring it towards you
You jump on to the cloud and get yourself comfortable
You nod to Fluttershy then she starts to push the cloud back to Ponyville
"So, how much do you want to bet that Dash is going to freak out?" you ask Fluttershy jokingly
You chuckle
Fluttershy lands the cloud just outside your house and you jump off
"Wish me luck" you say to Fluttershy, while opening the door
You give her a wave and then close the door
You walk into the living room to see Dash who looks very angry
"Where have you been?!" she asks angrily
You get tackled to the floor and looking up at Dash who has pinned your hoofs to the ground
She starts kissing you repeatedly on the cheek
She then connects her lips with yours
You and Dash kiss for what seems like minutes
"Oh did I interrupted something?" a voice says
You and Dash look over to see Pinkie standing there
"What are you doing here Pinkie?" asks Dash
You look back up at Dash who looks down at you
You two don't say anything and you resume the kiss
Chapter 19
"Come on Stargazer we've got to go" you hear Dash shout from downstairs
You walk down the stairs to see Dash waiting
"Take your time" she says
You just roll your eyes
"Come on we’re going to be late" Dash say opening the front door
You and Dash walk out the door
"Get on" Dash says
Dash gets down low enough so you can get on her back
You climb up on her back
"You ready?" she asks
She flies off without any warning and you nearly fall off
"Did you have to go without telling me?" you ask, with a hint of fear in your voice
You hear Dash laugh
You've been at the party for about two and half hours. You've had a couple of drinks of cider.
You stand outside of Sugarcube Corner because somepony spread stuff in your face and you went outside to cough and get some fresh air.
"Psst"
You look around to see what the noise was
You start to get a little freaked out because you're the only one outside
"Stargazer” the voice whispers
You turn around to the alleyway beside Sugarcube Corner
You see a face peeking out of it
"Hello?" you ask the pony in the alleyway
The pony steps out of the alleyway and walks towards you.
That pony happens to be Cloudchaser.
"Cloudchaser?" What are you doing?" you ask, as she walks towards you
She then connects her lips with yours
You push her away instantly
"What the buck are you doing?"
You push her away again
You look over at the door to see Dash in tears
"Dash! It's not what you think!"
"IT'S OVER!!!" Dash screams and flies away
You run as fast as you can, but you can't keep up with her
You stop to catch your breath, with tears in your eyes
"You monster" you hear a voice say
You turn around to see Pinkie, Fluttershy, Applejack, Rarity and Twilight staring at you with fire in their eyes
"What?" you say ,still with tears in your eyes
A tear starts to fall down your face
She all shake their heads and walk back to Sugarcube Corner
Fluttershy stops and looks at you
"And I thought you were different" she says, walking back with her friends
You stand there in complete shock as tears fall down your face
A day had passed since the party
You walk down the streets of Ponyville with your head down. Everypony is looking at you and whispering to each other
You only have one place in mind, Rainbow Dash's cloud home
"You have a lot of nerve coming around here" a southern voice says
You lift your head up to see Applejack
You just look at her
"You are the worst type of pony there is" she says
You don't say anything
"Dash didn't do anything to ya' and you just go a ripe out her heart" she says
She gets close to your face
"Who the hay do you think you are?"
You push past her and walk
"Yeah you keep walking Fillydelphian boy" you hear her shout
You walk past the carousel boutique with your head still down
You hear the door open
"YOU!"
You look up to see Rarity trotting towards you
"What do you think you’re doing?" she asks with anger in her voice
You start to get a bit ticked off because of how close she was getting
"And you listen to me, I don't need you or your stupid curled mane getting up in my face, so play it safe and GET OUT OF MY FACE!" you say
She backs off with fear in her eyes
You snort some air thought your nose and walk your way down the dirt road
You stop and sit on the dirt floor, looking up at her cloud house
"Dash!" you shout
A yellow head pops out one of the windows
"She doesn't want to see you" she says but you can't hear it
She shakes her head
"Fluttershy will you please let me see her?" you ask
She shakes her head and then closes the window
For the last couple of days you've been trying to get dash to talk to you again. But no luck.
You sit in the park looking down at the ground
You've been sitting there for about two hour
In that time Twilight and Pinkie also had some words for you
"Howdy partner" says a big southern voice
You look over your shoulder to see Big Mac walking towards you
"You going to yell at me to?" you ask looking back at ground
He just looks at you
"I guess you’re just like every pony else, you’re not going to listen to me" you say looking back at the ground
You look at him with surprised eyes
"Continue" he says
--Later--
After you told him your story, he just looks at you
"You don't believe me" you say
You look at him with another surprised look
"But ah' don't think my sister or her friends will"
You two sit there looking up at the sky
"I have one question for you Mac"
He shrugs
--Later--
You and Mac have been sitting at the park for an hour talking
Mac gets up onto his hoofs
"I best be getting back to the farm"
You just nod
"I'll see ya" he says
You nod again
Celestia’s sun starts to go down and you still sit in the park looking up at the sky
"Stargazer!" a certain purple unicorn’s voice calls out
For buck sake
You get up on your hooves and turn around to see Twilight, Applejack and Fluttershy
"What have I done now?" you ask
You sit on you sofa looking up at the ceiling
KNOCK KNOCK
You get up from your sofa and walk towards the door
You open the door and an angry face instantly slaps your face
Standing on the other side of the door is Cloudchaser
"You've got a lot of nerve!" you say angrily
Tears start to form in Cloudchaser eyes, but you didn't care
She flies off and you hear her sob
You slam the door shut and walk towards your table and slam your hoof down on it
I've had enough of this town
You pack up all your things. You don't need to worry about the Wonderbolt tickets because you know that dash has them
Just as you were about to leave your house, you stop and think
You turn around, take a piece of paper and write a letter to dash
You finish the letter and put it in your bag
You walk out the front door with your keys
First stop, town hall
You walk thought the town. No pony is around which is good for you
You stop in front of town hall
You take a breath and open the door
Mayor mare looks up from her desk and looks at you
"What can I help you with-?"
You cut her off by throwing your keys, which land on her desk. You leave town hall without saying a word
Next stop Twilight house
You walk your way to Twilight library
"Hey Stargazer" a male voice calls out
You don't stop you just keep on walking
Buck off ThunderLane
"I heard you upset Cloudchaser" he says hovering beside you
He cracks his neck
"Get ready for another beat-"
You cut him off with an uppercut to the chin
You know that you knocked him out but you don't stop to admire your work
You walk toward Twilight's house and knock on the door
The door opens and Twilight is reviled
"What do you-?"
Perfect
You reach into your saddle bag and pull out the letter
"Give this to Rainbow, when you have your gathering" you say handing her the letter
She takes the letter from you and you walk away before she could ask any more questions
You walk towards your final stop. The train station
You buy a ticket back to Fillydelphia
You wait for the train to arrive with a blank mind
--Later--
After waiting for what feels like hours the train finally arrives
The train stops and the door opens
You walk towards it
"Tickets plea-"
You cut the ticket pony off by handing him your ticket
You take a seat and look out the window
Goodbye Ponyville Goodbye Everypony Goodbye Rainbow Dash.....I love you
End Song (Because why not)
Alright a another thing i need to add, I have Dyslexia,
A message to NextGamer: I get it alright need someone to edit my story, NOW SHUT YOUR FUCKING MOUTH
I swear to god I might as well cancel this story
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Author's Note
So......
Some of you have been saying that I NEED to make a sequel to this story. I wasn't planning on making a sequel to the story it was going to be a one off thing.
BUT!!!
On the bus on the way home from college I thought to myselfHmm they've been commenting on wanting a sequel so maybe I should
YOU HERD YOURSELF READING IT RIGHT FOLKS A SEQUEL WILL BE MADE
soon
sooner then you might think
SEQUEL
Go read it
So, I'm thinking about redoing this whole story. Because there is SO much more that could be put into it.
For example: Have Rainbow Dash fall for you over time instead of instantly
Having Cloudchaser play more of a part in the story
What do you think?
Also leave suggestions in the comments about adding to the story
And If you want to be the editor/proofreader for it, just let me know (winkey face)
So some of you might not know that the re-write is up so here you go
Re-write
Read this first: There may be some spelling and grammar problems during the story, lets see who's man enough to go through this story with commenting on the grammar/spelling mistakes
You lived in the city of Fillydelphia nearly all your child hood. You lived with your Mother, Rose Petal, your Father, Frost Bite, your older brother, Jack Hammer and your older sister, Rose Beat.
You were the youngest out of your entire family, including your cousins.
But you were lucky enough to be born a Pegasus
Your Mother and your two siblings were born unicorns and your dad was a Pegasus.
Your Dad
Your Dad had a job at the weather control in Fillydelphia. His cutie mark is a dark cloud with snow flakes coming down from it. Your Dad's coat was a dark brown color. His mane and tail were gray and had a ice blue streak going down it. His eye were a simple dark green.
As much as he wanted to teach you how to fly he was too busy with his paper to teach you, even on the weekends.
Luckily, he was able to get your grandpa (who was the ex-captain of the Wonderbolts) so he taught you every thing he knew about flying and taught you the move that only the the Wonderbolts knew how to do!
Your Mum
Your Mum owns a flower shop in the city. She has worked in that shop ever since she was a young filly. Your Mum's cutie mark is a rose. Your Mum's coat was a light red just like some of the flowers she sells at her shop and her mane and tail were just a simple brown. Her eyes were aqua blue
She would always take you and your siblings to the shop when she had the chance. Your Grandparents on your mum's side didn't mind you being there.
Your Mum also teached your brother and sister how to use magic. Even thought you couldn't do magic you would alway like to watch as your siblings would levitate stuff
Your Brother
Your brother, Jack Hammer, would always pick on you. Mainly because you could fly and he couldn't, But no matter what he would do to you you would always look up to him.
Jack Hammer is 5 years older then you.
Your Brother has the same color coat as your dad's and his mane and tail were to same color brown but a little lighter. His eye were also the same color as your dad's.
His cutie mark was a Jack Hammer. He got his cutie mark when he was messing around with some tools when some construction workers were doing some work on your house. He got he serious trouble with your parents and the construction workers. But now he works at building company.
Your Sister
Your sister, Rose Beat, would always be the one how would look after you. When you were being picked on by other ponies, your sister would always help you. Whenever you were upset, she would always be there to comfort you. She would even stand up to your big brother when he was teasing you.
Rose Beat is 3 years older then you.
Your sister has the same eye and coat color as your mum, but she had nice yellow mane and tail. You would always think she dyed her hair, but she always told you that is was all natural
Your sister's cutie mark is a rose with music notes around it. Your sis was very good at playing instrument from the guitar to the triangle. Name any instrument, she could play it.
Her favorite instrument is the guitar, because she like the way it sounds. She would play it for you whenever you were down and depressed. She would play one song for you that would always make you happy.
You
You weren't a shy Pegasus you always be up for adventure and full off life. You loved to fly really fast to feel the wind going thought you're hair and on you're face.
You had the same color coat as your dad but it was a little lighter then his. Your mane was the same color as your mum's, but you had a little bit of blue in your hair that you got from your dad.
Your cutie mark is a star with ribbons on the side. You got your cutie mark by entering a race. You came first and broke a record. After many years, no one had broke it.
You just turned 22 a couple of weeks ago.
It's Sunday.
You still lived with your mum and dad. Jack Hammer and Rose beat have already moved out. Someday you would work with your mum at the flower shop whenever it got to busy and on other days you would help your dad on the weather control.
After you got done with your work you would drop off some stuff in your room and go outside to fly around the city.
As you soared through the air and looked down at the city below you, you started to think to yourself.
I've been doing the same thing other and other again for the last 12 years. I still haven't moved out and I'm living of mum and dad's money.
You come to a complete stop and hoover in the air scratching the back of your neck
"It's time for me to grow up" You say out loud.
You go to fly back home, but something catches your eye. You turn to a pamphlet on the ground. You don't know what it is about this pamphlet and why it got your attention. You fly down to it and pick it up.
You stand there reading the pamphlet when....
"HEY GET OUT THE WAY TO STUPID KID" Shouts some random old man in front of you.
"Oh, sorry sir" You respond and you fly up into the air.
You fly back to you're house and go up to your room and read the pamphlet
"Ponyville huh?" you say "Sounds nice"
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Practise Makes Perfect......Well Almost Perfect
Chapter 6
You wake up. But this time not on your bed. Not on the sofa either. You woke up in the kitchen but you were on the floor. Getting up and stretch your back putting some bones back into place.
You scratch your back and walk out of the kitchen
"How did i even end up in there in the first place"
You try to think about what you did last night.
You remember that you couldn't sleep so you got up from your bed and walk to the kitchen to get some cookies and milk which Pinkie gave you as a "Welcome to ponyville gift". You warmed the milk and cookies up. You remember eating the cookies and drinking the glass of milk. You put the glass into the sink. you stood there for a while and collapsed on floor and you were asleep
"Oh yeah. Mum did say that i had a habit of sleeping instantly after a cup of warm milk"
You sit on the sofa and patting your knee
"Was there somewhere i needed to be?" you say "The park! whats the time?" you look at the clock which reads 1:25 "Oh NO!" you say flying out the door shutting it behind you
You fly your way to the park
"Lets hope Rainbow isn't mad"
You fly into the park to three ponies standing on a track, One with Rainbow mane facing away from you talking to the other ponies. One with Black fur and another with a shooting star as a cutie mark
You fly other to them
"Hey Rainbow sorry I'm late, Kinda over slept"
After a couple of minutes of the four of you stretching
"All right that should be enough for now" you say
Time - 5:40
After a couple of hours showing everyone how to do tricks with your wings, At doing lap round the track, You all get tired and decide to call it a day
"Alright, Remember to practice everything i told you, Practice make perfect......well almost prefect with this wing trick, but don't practice to much" you say "Dash"
The two mare fly away
You go to fly but ThunderLand grabs your attention
What the hell just happened?
The Next Day
Time - 1:30
half hour to the race. You fly over to the race track to see hundreds of ponies of different colors.
You land in front some pony taking tickets
"Ticket please" he ask you
you walk over to a table with a orange maned pony with carrots as her cutie mark
"Hi there are you in the race?" she ask
You reach the tent to see no one thereI was curtain rainbow would be here already
After a couple of minutes of waiting ThunderLane shows up
After a couple more minutes Cloudchaser arrives
Couple more minutes pass and it was 15 minutes till the race
8 minutes left till the race and Rainbow Dash enters the tent
You fly your way over to the orange mare at the table
You fly your way to your teams tent
You spend to last minutes until the race thinking to yourselfAlright you can do this, No presser on you, All you need to do is do the same thing you did 13 years ago, Wining the race and braking the record, The only difference is that you got a three other ponies relying you to secure the victory. No presser at all
you snap back into reality with Rainbow Dash in front of you
she walk out the tent
OH GOD THERE'S PRESSER!!!!
Epilogue
--Two Weeks After You Left--
AppleJack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie and Rainbow Dash walk into Twilight's library for their get together
"Welcome Everypony" Twilight says greeting her friends
Should I really give Dash the letter? Twilight thought to herself
She looks at Dash and sees how upset she is
"Rainbow, I have a letter for you" Twilight says hoofing over the letter to her
Rainbow Opens the letter faster then could Celestia
Dear Rainbow Dash
I know you won't listen to what I have to say, so maybe you'll read what I have to say.
I'm sorry, I'm living in a world of regret. But you have to understand that it wasn't my fault. CloudChaser kissed me. I pushed her away as soon as her lips connected with mine. You know that I would never betray you. Like I said you're the only mare I want to be with.
By now you're probably wondering where I am. I've gone back to Fillydelphia. It wasn't you that drove me away, it was your friends. I couldn't have them screaming in my ear at every chance they got.
These may be that last words I'll ever get to say. I love you. I'll always love you and nothing will change that
StarGazer
Tears started to form in Rainbow Dash's eyes she she reads the last sentence of the letter
"What did it say?" asks Pinkie
Dash nods her head slowly
"I just feel awful" saids Fluttershy
Dash look down at the letter again
"I love you too" she says under her breath
Author's Note
Thank you for reading this story. Everyone who read and stuck with this story since it first came out I thank you
Special thanks to Dak who proofread nearly every chapter
Thank you again everyone
I LOVE YOU!!
