MLP: Friendship is Forgiving Part 1

by ThatGuyOnTheInterweb
A high ranking stallion is sent on forced leave by Princess Celesita after a violent argument with Shining Armor after the Royal Wedding. Celestia hopes her faithful student and her friends can help this stallion through the power of friendship.

There is an ongoing war between the Changelings and Equestria. A stallion by the name of Tough Spirit has quickly risen through the ranks while gaining a plethora of experience. He ended up discovering the threat on Canterlot for the Royal Wedding and was appointed by Princess Celestia to advise Shining Armor on security protocol. Armor claimed Spirit's safety precautions took away some of the citizens' freedoms. Spirit argued that freedoms wouldn't count for much if they weren't properly protected until the threat was over. After the near disaster, Spirit was furious with Armor for not taking all of his advice, which escalated to violence. Princess Celestia saw that Spirit had spent too much time on the front to see the error of his choices, so she sent Spirit on forced leave to Ponyville in hopes her faithful student and her friends could remind Spirit why he joined and what he should be fighting for.

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Teen
Incomplete
Slice of Life
Dark
 

11555 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

5 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: Nightmares and Reality 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    2747
  2. Chapter 2: Nightmares and Reality (cont.) 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1554
  3. Chapter 3: The First Few Steps 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    785
  4. Chapter 4: A Change of Heart and a New Start 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    3603
  5. Chapter 5: One Brave Pony 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    2866