Land of Misery

by UnKnownSalvation

First published

After an "accident" sends Twilight to the other side of the world and leaves her without magic, she must get it back, overthrow a dictator, and reunite a divided country with the help of a new friend if she ever wants to get back to Equestria. Contains lots of OC. *Constructive criticism, advice, suggestions are all welcome* Originally on Fanfiction . net but at the request of a friend I'm posting it here too.

*Note: Some of the first chapters are a little... wonky. But it gets better as you go or so I've been told. I've been told I'm getting better at this so the later chapters should be more enjoyable to read then the first... 4 or so.

If you guys want to thumb this down, that's fine. But at least tell me what's wrong with it so I can fix it! And don't thumb it down just because you think the story can't be done no matter who wrote it. That's just proves how useless your particular opinion is to me and every other reader on this site.