Bronies in: Equestrian University
Chapter 2: Breakfast showdown
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Due to the suggestion in the comments, we have looked over some of the chapters and edited small parts, although we are not adapting the full suggestion to the fiction (One of our writers disapproved of the chapter long povs) on the main story however, the writer for Storm is rewriting the fiction in one POV on his own FiMFiction account (http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Storm%20Rider). Another reason for the chapter long POVs being disapproved of, is that we have already written a up to chapter 6 in the fiction and are adding onto it as I type this. Sorry for not being able to tailor to the full suggestion but one of our writers is physically unable to do so, reasons withheld
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Chapter 2 Sharp Rhythm's POV
"Well standing against a wall waiting for a friend is hard work" I huffed bored out of my mind. It's even worse on an empty stomach, I’m not a huge fan of lines which were a unorganised mass of shoving, hitting and spitting. I sigh and begin to patrol my way down the sides of the hall, looking for a avaliable table, I manage to find one and begin to pick my way through the crowd.
Storm Rider's POV
Twilight emerged from her dorm, smiling and blushing still "Hey, you ready to go?" She said excitedly
"Sure, I guess" I muttered as Twilight started walking down the hall, I sped up and walked alongside her. She turned and smiled at me, feeling as though it was natural, I opened my wings and wrapped one over her, pulling her close. All down the hall ponies were pointing, muttering and staring causing a strong blush for both of us, which was easily visible due to our light coats. We stepped into the dining hall my wing still pulling Twilight close, I scanned the area for friendly faces, finding one in Sharp I begin making my way over but suddenly a rainbow blur passing in front of us made us stop abruptly. "Now what the hay do you think you're doing?!" The rainbow pony exclaimed sounding incredibly angry. "Well… You see Rainbow Dash… Me and Storm… were just getting breakfast" Twilight spluttered, we tried to make our way around but a strong lasso gripped my hooves tightly "Where the hay do you think you two are going?!" A orange pony with a strong southern accent asked, I looked pleadingly at Sharp "Little help here bro?"
Sharp Rhythm's POV
"Oh no" I rush to my hooves and proceeded to trot towards my troubled friend when the same rainbow pony, the one that purple unicorn called Rainbow Dash got in front of me and said "who are you" squaring up to my face
"Well I'm Sharp and I'm here to help him"
"Well why are you helping him" the rainbow pony questioned me
"I'm his friend" I reply defiantly
"Well.... If he's got a friend why was he taking ours "the rainbow pony said still not giving up
"Look I don't know what is going on, Storm would you care to explain to me and miss.... I'm sorry I don't know you name it's..." I said to the purple unicorn.
"Twilight, it's Twilight " the purple unicorn replied
"Right where was I.... ah yes explain to me and miss Twilights friend what you're doing".
"Well… I was just waking Twilight to the hall-" Storm began
"WITH YOUR WING AROUND HER!" The rainbow pony interjected
"Well uhh yeah it was just… you know uh a friendly gesture" Storm managed to stammer obviously embarrassed by the situation at hand "That's all there is to it I swear…" he finished.
" huh this wasn't the way I expected to get introduced to miss Twilights friends" I said in the deadly silence.
Storm Rider's POV
I stood still, my wing still over Twilight as both our friends thought about my explanation, the rainbow pony still looked at me with disbelief and was about to rejoin the argument when the white unicorn from Twilights room walked into the middle enjoying her spotlight as the room watched "Well I for one think he's very sweet showing that affection though it is… a little too soon" the argument lapsed into a awkward silence, friends still facing each other off while me and Twilight stood of in a corner blushing deeply.
*RING*RING*RING*
"Well… looks like its time for class…"
Sharp Rhythm's POV
‘’Wow man really, you got a marefriend on the first morning, of the first term on the first year that must be an academy record or somthing like that" I said, walking alongside Storm, now that those crazy mares got out of our way
“Dude, she isn’t my... marefriend, we’re just friends, just good friends” Storm said while blushing which was weird, he doesn't seem like the type of stallion to do that must be picking it up from all his time with Twilight
‘’Well...... I don’t think everypony else see’s that way’’ I reply uncertainly ‘’well Storm, bro.... it looked affectionate.... I mean with the wing over her and stuff’’ I carried on
as we approach the art class, we noticed Twilight and her friends entering the classroom, once her friends had entered she looked down the hall straight at Storm and gave a cheeky smile and blushed. Before Storm had a chance to do anything back she had disappeared into the class.
“Uhh we need to hurry up dude... Don't want to be late on the first day...” Storm said obviously excited by the mares smile “We should uhh sit next to Twilight friends, get to know them”
‘’WHOA!, you sure you want to from what happened this morning’’ I exclaimed loudly
‘’yeah..... I’m sure’’ he replied starting to calm down from the mornings events
‘’yeah well keep doing what you’re doing and we’ll definitely think you're more than friends’’ I answer with a smart smirk
“Yeah buck you to dude” Storm replied shortly.
Upon entering the classroom I see Storm dart toward the chair next to Twilight who, by the looks of thing was expecting him too, I scan the room for another available seat when I spot one next the orange pony from breakfast hopefully she won't tie my legs up.
‘’hi, is this seat taken?’’
‘’no sugarcube, you can sit there’’
I take my seat and the orange pony started to speak again ‘’ I’m applejack, and you are?’’she said holding out her hoof
‘’ I’m Sharp rhythm’’ I reply shaking her hoof.
Storm Rider’s POV
I sit in the chair just as the Art teacher started talking, unexpectedly Twilight never took her eyes off me, ignoring the teacher completely. I returned the smile from before as she started to speak, again completely disregarding the teacher.
“Hey Storm Rider!” She exclaimed happily
I chuckled before answering this time “Just call me Storm, Twilight”
“Oh okay Storm, are you enjoying your time here so far?” She said, blushing
“So far its been good, I still need to meet my other two roommates though”
“I'm sure they’ll turn up, so what’s your.... favorite part of the day so far” She asked with a smile on her face
“Heh I’m pretty sure you already what it is Twilight” I laughed as I edge closer to her, facing her....
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