Eclipse of the Heart
Spike's Big Night
Previous ChapterThe next morning, Twilight was aching from the event that happened the previous night. She opened her eyes and noticed that Eclipse was not in the bed with her. Curious as to where he may be, Twilight got up out of bed. As she tried to walk, however, she felt a massive pain in her flank. Slowly, she limped down the stairs, her bum as sore as ever, and found Eclipse in the kitchen with a bowl of cereal he had just poured. He waved to Twilight. “Good morining, Twilight,” he called to her. “You had any good dreams?”
“Well, I can’t remember any of them due to my aching flank,” she told him.
“Oh, was I too rough?” Eclipse asked, concerned. “Sorry, I’ll try to be gentler next time, if there is one.”
“It’s not that you were too rough, it’s just…” Twilight hesitated for a second. “It’s just that that was my first time.”
Eclipse’s eyes opened wide. “Oh, I didn’t know,” he said. “Sorry, I didn’t think I’d be taking your virginity. You’ll be walking funny for weeks with what I did.”
Twilight smiled at the stallion. “Yeah, but I don’t care,” she said. “I still think it was worth it.” She limped up to Eclipse and gave him a slight peck on the cheek.
There was a knock on the door and somepony called out to Twilight. “Hey, Twilight,” the voice called. “I’m back.”
Eclipse was shocked. “Is… is that your boyfriend?” he asked.
Twilight laughed. “No, he’s just my assistant around the library,” she told him. “If he asks, you’re my boyfriend and please, whatever you do, don’t tell him about last night.” The unicorn opened the door and outside, Spike was standing.
“Finally,” he said. “I thought you’d never open the door.” Spike looked at Eclipse. “Who’s he?”
“He’s my boyfriend, Eclipse,” Twilight stated. “He’ll be staying with us for a while.”
Spike stared at the pegasus for a second. “Your what?” he questioned. “Why’d you never tell me about him? I’d love to hear that story.”
“Oh, well we just crashed into each other at the market a few months ago,” Eclipse said. “Nothing out of the ordinary.”
“Oh, bummer,” Spike sighed. “So, how do you feel about books, Eclipse?”
“I enjoy a good novel every now and again,” he replied. “Why?”
“Because Twilight’s going to have you read a lot of them,” he said. “Seriously, I haven’t even started on the last book she gave me because I’m still reading the one before that.”
Twilight bopped the dragon over the head. “I do not force you to read books,” she said, defending herself. “I suggest you read certain ones because I think you might enjoy them.” The purple unicorn limped over to Eclipse. “Sorry about Spike. He’s a little melodramatic.”
“I can tell,” laughed Eclipse.
Spike noticed Twilight’s limp. “Hey, have you been hitting her?” he asked. “Twilight’s limping pretty badly. I swear to god, if you have struck her even once, I’ll call the cops.”
Eclipse and Twilight became worried. “No, I haven’t been hitting her.” Eclipse replied.
“I just fell down the stairs and sprained my hip really bad,” Twilight said. “The doctor said I won’t be able to walk right for a while.”
“Oh, pity,” Spike said. “Anyways, want to hear how my night with Rarity went?”
“Sure,” Twilight said. Eclipse shrugged. He still hadn’t met anypony besides Twilight and Spike so he didn’t know who Rarity was.
“Alright, so I took her out to the Prench restaurant,” Spike started. “You know, the one that is really expensive and has a bunch of sophisticated ponies in it? Anyways, then afterwards we headed back to her place and then…”
“And then?” Eclipse and Twilight echoed.
“I managed to get her into her reproductive state and we bucked!” Spike exclaimed.
Twilight was surprised. Eclipse however looked like he was unsatisfied with the story. “That’s all you’re going to say? You’re not going to go into detail?”
“I’ll go into detail, on one condition,” he said. “You two tell me why Twilight’s walking funny. You’re not very good at lying.”
Eclipse and Twilight sighed. “Should we really tell him?” Eclipse asked. “I mean, I don’t exactly know if he’s able to keep a promise.”
Twilight gulped. “Yes, we’ll tell him,” she said. “He was bound to find out one way or another.” The unicorn looked at Spike and finally confessed. “He and I…” She tapped her two front hooves together twice while making a clicking sound.
Spike had the stupidest smile on his face. “Oh, I see,” he said. “That’s what happened. I knew you couldn’t fool me.”
“Now, I believe we had an agreement,” Eclipse stated. “So about last night.”
“Geez, you’re really intent on that, huh?” Spike asked. “Alright then. We got home from her house after going out to dinner. I was in the restroom taking off my tie when I heard a knock on the door. ‘Spike,’ Rarity said. ‘Please, when you’re done in there, make a quick visit to my room.’ Knowing it would have been rude not to, I complied with her. I opened the door and there she was, horny as ever. She asked me to ‘relieve her.’ I obviously did. I mean, when the love of your life asks you to buck her, what else are you supposed to do?
Anyways, so I climbed onto the bed with her and got on top of her. Then, I slowly stuck my thing into hers.”
“Hold on a second,” interrupted Eclipse. “You’re using very obvious words and you’re saying them too often as well. Try saying something like, ‘I slowly made my way into her.’ Make us have to think of it. Show, don’t tell.”
Spike sighed. “Fine,” he said. “I slowly made my way into her, then retreated and thrust again, somewhat faster. I kept repeating this motion as she moaned with joy. I’d never done this before so I was a little messy, but the concept was all the same. Eventually, she’d made a very loud squeal as I slipped it all the way in. Pretty sure I had hurt her, I asked if she was okay. She told me she was fine and not to stop so I kept going on. Finally, she collapsed, screaming with pleasure, not being able to take any more, so I allowed myself to cum. Thankfully, Sweetie Belle wasn’t home, so she didn’t have to find anything out.”
Eclipse shrugged. “I could have told a better story with what I and Twilight did, but you did okay,” Eclipse said. The pegasus then turned to Twilight. “I doubt she wants you telling other ponies. How’s this? I tell you a secret I’d hate for anypony to find out that way, if I blab, you can too.” Spike nodded his head. Twilight looked at Eclipse to see what he was talking about. The blue pegasus pushed his mane aside and revealed a horn.
