Eclipse of the Heart

by GeoJeff213

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance
Length: 2317

Twilight meets a very nice pegasus one stormy night, but he may not be all that he seems.

One night while Twilight is gazing out the window, a strange pegasus pony named Eclipse shows up. His love for books and interest in magic matches hers and the two realize each other's potential together. Later, however, she finds out who he truly is. Will Twilight leave the one pony that's ever loved her back? Rated Mature for lots of sexual content.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-01-05 16:58:24 UTC

The Magical Pegasus

Twilight sat there staring blankly out the window of her library. The rain pitter-pattered against the house. A sudden knock on the door snapped her out of her trance. She slowly stepped hoof by hoof off of her bed and descended down the stairs to the door. Slowly, she opened the door to reveal a navy blue pegasus with false leather saddlebags that was no older than she was. His black hair was drenched, yet it somehow managed to stay spiked. “Can I help you?” Twilight asked the pony.

“Sorry to intrude, ma’am, but I would appreciate a place to stay,” he told her. “I have no money and know nopony around here. If you help me, I’ll be forever in your debt.”

“Of course,” said Twilight. “Come right in.” She stepped out of the way and held a hoof out to the side, indicating for him to enter. As pegasus walked in, the second a part of his body entered the tree, it instantaneously dried off.

He looked around the library. “You appear to have a lot of books,” he stated. “Yet none of them were written by J.R.R. Trotien.”

“Who’s J.R.R. Trotien?” Twilight asked as she closed the door. “I haven’t heard that name before.”

“He’s a newer writer,” the pegasus stated. “About a month ago he had a book called Lord of Harmony published. There’s going to be three in the series and some ponies have been talking about him making a prequel.” The pegasus reached into his saddlebag and grabbed a book out of it. “I guess I could start paying you back by giving you a copy. I’ve already read it and am waiting for the next one to be released.” He walked up to Twilight and handed her the book. “My name’s Eclipse.”

“I’m Twilight Sparkle,” she said, taking the book, “Princess Celestia’s apprentice.”

“You’re Celestia’s protégé?” Eclipse echoed. “Well, I’m glad you’re the pony I got to stay with.” Eclipse looked around. “You’ve got to be a pretty trustworthy pony to do that.”

“Well, thank you,” Twilight said.

Eclipse chuckled. “And that’s not the only ‘pretty’ thing about you,” he complimented.

Twilight started to blush. “Oh, stop,” she said. “Um, how about I get the guest bedroom ready for you?”

“Of course,” Eclipse said.

As Twilight walked by, she noticed that on his one side of his flank was the moon with what appeared to be the sun’s rays behind it and the other side having a dark orange moon.

That night, Twilight experienced her first nightmare in ages. She was just strolling along in what she believed to be the Everfree Forest when a blue mist passed her by. The confused unicorn looked around. Twilight resumed walking until there was nowhere else to go. The world ceased to exist in front of her. Nothing kept her from going, but nothing allowed her to enter the nothingness either. Slowly, Twilight turned around where the blue mist was waiting. When the mist took solid form, it became Eclipse with a starry mane wearing Nightmare Moon’s armor. He started to slowly step toward her until finally he was close enough to strike her down.

Twilight jolted awake, terrified. She walked over to the guest bedroom’s door. Gently she pushed the door open. Inside, Eclipse was staring out the window, watching as rain struck it. “Excuse me, Eclipse” Twilight said.

Eclipse’s head turned you Twilight. “Oh, hey,” he said. “What can I do for you?”

“I know this may sound weird,” started Twilight, “but would you mind sleeping in my room with me? I just feel like I need a guardian.” She was pretty sure he’d decline.

“Of course I don’t mind,” he said. “After all, I’m still in your debt.”

Twilight smiled. “Thank you,” she said. The two ponies entered the room. Twilight looked at Spike’s bed, which was empty due to him spending the night at Rarity’s house again. In her sleep, Twilight started having dirty dreams about her and Eclipse having intercourse. During this time, Twilight’s body entered its receptive phase where her clit and anus became visible.

Eclipse woke up after having similar dreams and entering his emissive phase where his cock became visible and extended to a fourteen inch length. He tried to hide it until he noticed Twilight’s plot. Lightly, he poked Twilight’s shoulder with his hoof. “Hey, Twilight,” he said. Slowly she opened her eyes, shaking a bit with how badly she wanted it. “Sorry to wake you, but you appear to be horny.”

She looked down and noticed what Eclipse was talking about. “Oh, I’m sorry,” she said. “Does it make you feel uncomfortable?”

“Should it?” Eclipse asked. “If you want, I can fix your problem.”

“Are… are you trying to get me to have sex with you?” Twilight questioned. She wanted it so bad, but she didn’t want to seem like a desperate whore. Eventually, she gave in. “Yes, please do it,” she pleaded. “I can’t handle it anymore. Just please be gentle.”

“I’ll try,” Eclipse replied. “I don’t exactly have a fetish for receiving or causing pain.” Eclipse moved the covers to reveal his boner. Twilight was amazed by how big it was. She didn’t think it would fit all the way. The pegasus got atop her and slowly pushed his way in. The purple unicorn let out a moan of pleasure. Eclipse removed his dick and thrust it back in again a little faster this time. Twilight panted as he kept thrusting his member in and out. It felt much better than clopping.

Eclipse then decided to go all the way in. He pushed until the unicorn’s pussy gave resistance. Knowing he could put his fourteen-incher inside, he pushed even harder until it finally gave away and let him in, though he wasn’t done yet. Twilight screamed her pleasure, but she knew she wasn’t climaxed, and he had yet to cum. She pushed herself against his cock, wanting it to go in further. Seeing her do so caused Eclipse to comply and he pushed the remaining four inches inside. He kept ramming it in and out until finally he heard her scream louder than Luna’s royal Canterlot voice. The soundproof walls of the library contained the noise however. Twilight had finally climaxed, and Eclipse had cum. Both started to pant as they relaxed and lied back down and they exited their reproductive phase.

Eclipse chuckled a little. Twilight’s satisfied face looked at Eclipse and before he could realize what was going on, Twilight dove her face at his and kissed him, pushing her tongue into his mouth. After what Eclipse wished could have been forever, Twilight stopped the kiss and hugged him as she fell asleep, her body up against his.

Eclipse couldn’t help but return the hug. He caressed the sleeping unicorn’s beautiful purple mane as he, too, dozed off.

Spike's Big Night

The next morning, Twilight was aching from the event that happened the previous night. She opened her eyes and noticed that Eclipse was not in the bed with her. Curious as to where he may be, Twilight got up out of bed. As she tried to walk, however, she felt a massive pain in her flank. Slowly, she limped down the stairs, her bum as sore as ever, and found Eclipse in the kitchen with a bowl of cereal he had just poured. He waved to Twilight. “Good morining, Twilight,” he called to her. “You had any good dreams?”

“Well, I can’t remember any of them due to my aching flank,” she told him.

“Oh, was I too rough?” Eclipse asked, concerned. “Sorry, I’ll try to be gentler next time, if there is one.”

“It’s not that you were too rough, it’s just…” Twilight hesitated for a second. “It’s just that that was my first time.”

Eclipse’s eyes opened wide. “Oh, I didn’t know,” he said. “Sorry, I didn’t think I’d be taking your virginity. You’ll be walking funny for weeks with what I did.”

Twilight smiled at the stallion. “Yeah, but I don’t care,” she said. “I still think it was worth it.” She limped up to Eclipse and gave him a slight peck on the cheek.

There was a knock on the door and somepony called out to Twilight. “Hey, Twilight,” the voice called. “I’m back.”

Eclipse was shocked. “Is… is that your boyfriend?” he asked.

Twilight laughed. “No, he’s just my assistant around the library,” she told him. “If he asks, you’re my boyfriend and please, whatever you do, don’t tell him about last night.” The unicorn opened the door and outside, Spike was standing.

“Finally,” he said. “I thought you’d never open the door.” Spike looked at Eclipse. “Who’s he?”

“He’s my boyfriend, Eclipse,” Twilight stated. “He’ll be staying with us for a while.”

Spike stared at the pegasus for a second. “Your what?” he questioned. “Why’d you never tell me about him? I’d love to hear that story.”

“Oh, well we just crashed into each other at the market a few months ago,” Eclipse said. “Nothing out of the ordinary.”

“Oh, bummer,” Spike sighed. “So, how do you feel about books, Eclipse?”

“I enjoy a good novel every now and again,” he replied. “Why?”

“Because Twilight’s going to have you read a lot of them,” he said. “Seriously, I haven’t even started on the last book she gave me because I’m still reading the one before that.”

Twilight bopped the dragon over the head. “I do not force you to read books,” she said, defending herself. “I suggest you read certain ones because I think you might enjoy them.” The purple unicorn limped over to Eclipse. “Sorry about Spike. He’s a little melodramatic.”

“I can tell,” laughed Eclipse.

Spike noticed Twilight’s limp. “Hey, have you been hitting her?” he asked. “Twilight’s limping pretty badly. I swear to god, if you have struck her even once, I’ll call the cops.”

Eclipse and Twilight became worried. “No, I haven’t been hitting her.” Eclipse replied.

“I just fell down the stairs and sprained my hip really bad,” Twilight said. “The doctor said I won’t be able to walk right for a while.”

“Oh, pity,” Spike said. “Anyways, want to hear how my night with Rarity went?”

“Sure,” Twilight said. Eclipse shrugged. He still hadn’t met anypony besides Twilight and Spike so he didn’t know who Rarity was.

“Alright, so I took her out to the Prench restaurant,” Spike started. “You know, the one that is really expensive and has a bunch of sophisticated ponies in it? Anyways, then afterwards we headed back to her place and then…”

“And then?” Eclipse and Twilight echoed.

“I managed to get her into her reproductive state and we bucked!” Spike exclaimed.

Twilight was surprised. Eclipse however looked like he was unsatisfied with the story. “That’s all you’re going to say? You’re not going to go into detail?”

“I’ll go into detail, on one condition,” he said. “You two tell me why Twilight’s walking funny. You’re not very good at lying.”

Eclipse and Twilight sighed. “Should we really tell him?” Eclipse asked. “I mean, I don’t exactly know if he’s able to keep a promise.”

Twilight gulped. “Yes, we’ll tell him,” she said. “He was bound to find out one way or another.” The unicorn looked at Spike and finally confessed. “He and I…” She tapped her two front hooves together twice while making a clicking sound.

Spike had the stupidest smile on his face. “Oh, I see,” he said. “That’s what happened. I knew you couldn’t fool me.”

“Now, I believe we had an agreement,” Eclipse stated. “So about last night.”

“Geez, you’re really intent on that, huh?” Spike asked. “Alright then. We got home from her house after going out to dinner. I was in the restroom taking off my tie when I heard a knock on the door. ‘Spike,’ Rarity said. ‘Please, when you’re done in there, make a quick visit to my room.’ Knowing it would have been rude not to, I complied with her. I opened the door and there she was, horny as ever. She asked me to ‘relieve her.’ I obviously did. I mean, when the love of your life asks you to buck her, what else are you supposed to do?

Anyways, so I climbed onto the bed with her and got on top of her. Then, I slowly stuck my thing into hers.”

“Hold on a second,” interrupted Eclipse. “You’re using very obvious words and you’re saying them too often as well. Try saying something like, ‘I slowly made my way into her.’ Make us have to think of it. Show, don’t tell.”

Spike sighed. “Fine,” he said. “I slowly made my way into her, then retreated and thrust again, somewhat faster. I kept repeating this motion as she moaned with joy. I’d never done this before so I was a little messy, but the concept was all the same. Eventually, she’d made a very loud squeal as I slipped it all the way in. Pretty sure I had hurt her, I asked if she was okay. She told me she was fine and not to stop so I kept going on. Finally, she collapsed, screaming with pleasure, not being able to take any more, so I allowed myself to cum. Thankfully, Sweetie Belle wasn’t home, so she didn’t have to find anything out.”

Eclipse shrugged. “I could have told a better story with what I and Twilight did, but you did okay,” Eclipse said. The pegasus then turned to Twilight. “I doubt she wants you telling other ponies. How’s this? I tell you a secret I’d hate for anypony to find out that way, if I blab, you can too.” Spike nodded his head. Twilight looked at Eclipse to see what he was talking about. The blue pegasus pushed his mane aside and revealed a horn.