The Twilight Evening

by Toron and Zeno

A Dash of Glitter

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Evening Glitter sighed as she looked at the 'map' that she was given by one of Twilight's friends. The one with the ridiculously long name that had been shortened to just "Pinkie Pie" had given her a hand drawn map. If one could call scribbles and randomly placed, poorly drawn buildings that.

"Okay, this time I'm sure to nail it." Dash said, grinning as she eyed the open sky in front of her. She shot forward starting to do forward loops that gradually brought her towards the ground in long circles.

Eve didn't see any of this, trying to read the images on the map. "Man... Twilight's got some unique friends... First the really quiet one and now a really loud one... That doesn't know that I can't make heads or tails of--"

Dash's eyes widened as when she was supposed to land on her hooves, she saw another pony on the road and crashed on top of her. "YEOW!" Eve cried out when Rainbow Dash impacted her. "Owie.." she groaned, then made her magic pick up the map and she dusted herself off with it. "Are you ok?" she asked Dash

"Yeah, think so." Dash groaned getting up. "Well, at least I didn't break my wing this time."

"What happened, exactly?" Eve asked

"Uh, was working on a new trick. Guess I should thank you since you broke my fall." Dash said, rubbing the back of her head sheepishly

"It’s cool. Maybe you should scope the area out a bit better next time though." she suggested politely

"Oh please! I'm the best flier in Equestria! I don't need to worry about stuff like that." she said, shrugging it off.

"Uh, you just crashed into me. What if it had been a filly?" she said, giving her a look

"I would've been able to dodge a filly. You're a bigger target." she said bluntly.

"Hey, you make it sound like I'm at fault!"

"No, just saying you’re hard to miss, literally." Dash said.

"Well you need to take your share of the blame. One of us could have been really hurt!"

"Eh, I survived last time." she said nonchalantly. "You almost done? I want to get back to my practice."

"You know, you didn't even say sorry." Eve said, glaring

"Oh yeah. My bad, uh... Actually, who are you anyway?" Dash asked.

"My name is Evening Glitter." she answered. "And you are?

"Rainbow Dash. I'm the weather manager for Ponyville, and fastest flier in Equestria." she said proudly.

"YOU'RE Rainbow Dash?!" she asked in shock. "Impossible!"

"Oh, you've heard of me?" she asked with a grin.

"Yes. From my friend Twilight Sparkle. But from what I've seen, you're rude, accusing and careless. Nothing like what she said. And manager of the weather? HAH! As if!"

"Oh, so you're another egghead." Dash said with a bored tone. "Wait, what did she say about me anyway?"

"A kind, and loyal though eccentric friend. Though, I don't see kindness from you at all yet. And I am NOT an egghead!"

"Hey, I'm the most loyal pony there is. And I am SO kind to others! You just caught me when I was a bit distracted." Dash said.

"Oh sure. And placing blame on everypony else is a kind thing to do?" she scoffed

"When did I ever blame you for anything!?" Dash asked, getting in her face.

"Get out of my face! And you tried to shift all blame for YOU-" at this, she poked Rainbow Dash in the chest with her hoof. "Crashing into me!"

"I said you're big and easy for me to crash into! I never said it wasn't my fault!" Dash snapped.

"That 's what it SOUNDED like!"

"Then listen more closely next time! That's what Twilight's good at." she said.

"Ugh... Whatever. Go... Pretend to monitor the weather or whatever it is you think you do." Eve said, turning and walking

"Hey, I'm a great weatherpony!" she said, flying after her.

"Of course you are. More like a Rainbow Dash fanpony who THINKS she can do that. Because I don't think Twilight's friends could be like you."

"Oh yeah? Tell me what to do and I'll prove it right now." Dash said, looking at her.

"Hmm... How about you make it rain for a few seconds."

"No prob!" Dash said, flying straight up and grabbing a cloud. She then put it over Eve and stomped on it to get out the rain.

"AH! Hey!" Eve yelped, jumping aside

"What? You said to make it rain! I was just following orders." Dash said, smiling and shrugging as she then sat on the cloud to relax.

"Why YOU!" Eve shouted, RD getting grabbed by magic

"H-Hey!" Dash yelped trying to grab the cloud. "Let go of me!"

"I don't think so! You need a good lesson in manners!" Eve said back, looking around.

"A what?! What does that mean?" she asked, still trying to fly away Eve stared at a tree, long branches stemming off. Suddenly, a large branch snapped off of it, being controlled by magic. "HEY!!! What are you doing with that?!" she asked, flying fast but not going anywhere.

"Oh just... THIS!" she yelled, the branch giving a hard slap to Rainbow Dash's flank.

"YOUCH! Hey, cut that out!" she said frantically.

"No! I think you deserve a good LOOONG spanking!" Eve scolded, the branch spanking hard and fast.

“OW OW OW! You can't spank me! I'm not a foal!!!" Dash yelled, kicking rapidly.

"I know! You act way to bad and rude to be one!"

"N-No! I'm too old for a spanking!" she lied.

"Oh? So you haven't been spanked recently by that Applejack friend of Twilight's?" she asked, raising an eyebrow

Dash looked back, blushing. "H-How did you-"

"Twilight and another friend I made here. Point is this. YOU. ARE. NOT. TOO. OLD!" she yelled, the branch giving a spank to her cutie mark with each word

"OWIE! OWIE! That's too hard, stop it!" Dash cried, expecting to see some more red on her cutiemark later.

"When you look more like the color of an apple on your flank, I'll chill out. For now, enjoy your spanking!"

"N-No, I don't want to!" she said, trying to cover her rear with her tail. The spanking stopped briefly as Eve glared.

"Move your tail."

"B-But it'll hurt." Dash whimpered, sniffling as she looked back.

"You know, I'm better at magic than Twilight. If you don't move your tail, I'll make this worse."

"Please... can't you just stop now?" Dash begged, looking at her.

Eve went behind rainbow to see the state her flank was in, not answering yet. Dash's flank had a number of red lines crossing it, but they were individual. Same could be said for her Cutie Marks, five red lines going through each. "... Nope, raise the tail."

"Please, no!!!!" Dash begged, kicking her hooves.

"Either raise the tail or get what Crimson got."

"W-What does that mean?" she asked, her voice trembling.

"Two implements at once. Look, just a few more and we'll be done. Wanna make it worse on yourself?"

".....No." Dash said quietly, raising her tail.

“Good." Eve said, then began landing harder spanks than before.

Dash started crying louder. "OWIE! I'm sorry, I'm sorry!" she wailed.

Eve gave three extra stinging swats to her sitspots and then slowly lowered Dash, but didn't let her go. "Now, why did you get spanked?"

"F-For being rude... and blaming you." Dash sobbed.

"Good." Eve said, letting her go and hugging her.

Dash hugged her back, still crying.

"Shhh.. It’s ok, it’s over now..." Dash continued hugging her and crying for a couple minutes before she calmed down. "You better now?" Eve asked, looking at her

"I-I guess." she sniffled, looking back at her flank.

"So, if you're really Rainbow Dash... Is it true that you're aspiring to join Spitfire's group?" she asked

"Heh... yeah. Even got to spend the day with them after winning the Young Flier's Competition." she said, managing a grin.

"Cool... I assume you don't know by this time, than you must not have been told." she mumbled. "Okay, well, I have to try to decipher this map Pinkie Pie made for me."

"What's that mean?" Dash asked.

Eve levitated the map in front of her, showing Pinkie's apparent view of the

"Uh, maybe you should let me show you around town. What'd you say before though?" she asked.

"... Oh! Oh nothing, just muttering to myself. Its totally nothing."

"Well, okay. So, anywhere you want to go? You're near Applejack's farm, but that's on the edge of town really." Dash said.

"Everywhere. So far, I know where Twilight's house is. And a bakery."

"Alright, well you probably should've just asked Pinkie to give you a tour, but I can show you Ponyville myself." Dash said.

"Just... don't tell anypony what happened. I've got a reputation to keep."

"Sure. If you can hide your flank then that's fine by me."
Dash gave her a glare before flying back up to the cloud from before. "Just follow me from the ground." she muttered, staying on the cloud as she started flying.

Sure." Eve said, following along on foot-- er, hoof. "Really... This will end up being one great experience..." she muttered to herself, smiling.


Author's Note

Zeno: Here's chapter 2. Edited solo by Toron. We worked together on chapter 1.

Toron: Yeah, all me. Next chapter will be all you, right?

Zeno: Yeah. Anyway, we were thinking of making a tumblr guys. But we don't exactly know how to draw MLP characters in vector or however its done.

Toron: Yeah, so mind giving us some tips? Greatly appreciated.

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