the mysterious pony

But there was a note that said "I will never be killed." every body was siting and crying rarity went down and I didn't even talk to her! she lost to much blood! Who made this creation! I talked to all the remaining of the mane 6 and told them I think I know who is up to this. we go to this one house that  I saw the smile pony in once. I busted in and there I saw the smiley pony. he didn't want to mess with us but he showed us some kind of path we went down there to find ourselves in an empty room. rainbowdash goes crazy and tries to break the walls down while pinkie pie is hoping around apple jack is hitting the walls to and fluttershy is freaking out! then a hatch opens. the pony that came out made rainbowdash furious. It was lightning dust. "hello there rainbow dash."

"What do you want?"

"I want revenge on you for making me lose my chance to be a wonder bolt!"

they had a huge brawl of words. Then soon enough  it turned into a fight! I threw rainbow dash a spear, fluttershy a pistol, applejack a rifle, pinkie had a cannon, and I took a shotgun. soon enough  a whole gang of weird mentally insane ponies and disfigured ponies. "like them? They're my creations I took from a whole nother world! The smiley one charged at me. There was a pony with no face and had tentacles which charged at  fluttershy. a swirly faced pony jumped at applejack and they disappeared. and pinkie pie faced a girl version of the smiley pony. but rainbow had lightning dust. "Why wont you go to sleep Lavapool?" "how do you know my name?" "I know all" the smiley pony stabs at me I shoot him in the leg. He falls back. I hit him in the head with the stock of the gun which knocked him out. I took his knife slit his throat again and made sure he died this time. I turned over only to see that flutter shy was dead. the pony stabbed through her chest and now had a pistol he shot at me. "I've gotten shot at enough today but I don't think you have."  I threw the knife which sliced of a tentacle and luckily hit lightning dust! I shot his head off and blood was now already around the room which was already red. all the sudden a bright flash shows up. then applejack appears. she had shot wounds and slices in her legs. "I got him..." "OH NO APPLEJACK!" she lost to much blood! she did a good deed to take him out. soon enough I hear pinkie scream for help. I run to save her when lightning dust falls down and hits the smiley pony crushes the pony's bones but the knife falls and hits pinkie in the head. I go up to confront lightning then rainbow comes down and stomps on her neck choking her. "you were the one to ruin your own chance." Soon enough lightning dust gives out.