BFF's 4ever (a my little pony fimfic)

by CrystalUnicorn

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Comedy, Random, Adventure
Length: 973

Hello everybrony. This is my first FIMfic so I hope you like it. You will be introduces to my OC named Crystal.

Crystal is a unicorn whose magic is not so well. One day her whole personality changes and she becomes a different pony. But she is able to snap out of it because of one certain pony in cloudsdale flightschool.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-01-10 20:19:59 UTC

Chapter one : Crystals dark story part 1

Crystal was looking into the puddle of water she just created “CRYSTAL! This spell is one of the easiest ones in all of Equestria! , and still you failed to even come close to the right results” There it is again. Everyone in the class started to laugh at her. After class Crystal  walks home on a special route. It went past the Canterlot castle gardens. And it was the safest route since nopony ever went there. Everypony in het class bullied her. Even her parents didn,t give her any atention. She lived in the shadow of her younger sister. Who is a pegasus and has great fly abilities. Her sister was not the most modest and friendly pony in Canterlot. What makes it extra hard to survive while being at home. She looked at the thousands of trees in the beautiful garden. She would wish she was allowed to live there ...alone , away from this nightmare life. When she arrived at home her father , Moneysource was waiting for her. And that didn,t mean very good things “ Crystal , you truly are the black sheep of the family , “ Then he raised his voice “How dare you even fail a spell as easy as this one!” Crystal looked down to the ground and softly said “I-I'm sorry dad , I tried so unbelievably hard , but it just doesn't work out that well” She walked slowly inside. “hehehehe nice try pathetic Cry-baby” Hurricane sat in front of the door leading to Crystals room. “Can I please be alone? “ Crystal asked , she knew her sister wouldn't just go away “Well I lt you go to your room if you do something for me” Oh no not this again. Crystal hated everything about her younger sister , Dark hurricane was like a second Discord. Not that she personally knew him. She read about him and how Luna and Princess Celestia stopped him. Before Nightmaremoon of course. She decided to become a litlle braver. “No , I already did enough for you” Hurricane showed no emotion but if you looked in her eyes you could see anger, she slowly walked away from the door “You'll regret it sis!” And the pegasus flew away. Crystals room was small. They lived in a big mansion they had more than 30 different rooms. 20 of them weren't even used , but she had the smallest room in the whole house. Because she is the black sheep of her family. Her family was mixed up between pegasi and unicorns. Her mother Memoryshower had a very special talent. She can show someone else's or her memories like it is a 3D movie. Her aunt was a unicorn too. She knew her aunt was also very good at magic. But she doesn't see her other relatives that much.  So she doesn't know that much about them. At least no bad things , only the things mum and dad told her.  A big part of the family where pegasi though. Her father was one of them. She walked over to her bed and curled herself on the neatly made bed. And before she even realized she fell asleep.

The next day

When Crystal woke up it was still 6 o clock in the morning. Meaning that everyone is supposed to be asleep. But then she heard voices from the room next to hers. The living room! She slowly sneaked to the door to hear the conversation/.

“I don't know what to do with her anymore!”

“But can't we just talk to her?”

“no way she doesn't deserve to be treated like one of us , she,s a disaster “

“But dear maybe if we support her more , her magic will come “

“she doesn't even has her cutie mark. Even her younger sister Hurricane has hers already. I tell you it's not gonna work!!”

By then Crystal didn't hear the conversation anymore. She ran to the kitchen as fast as she could “Where did mum hide the knives? “ Crystal searched everywhere but she couldn't find anything sharp enough to cut a throat. Then her mother came in “Dear , what are you doing ?” “I'm going to end it all , I'm going to end it !!!!”She said frustrated “MUM WHERE DID YOU HIDE THE SHARP STUFF” her mother became aware of what Crystal wanted to do. “I won't tell you, Suicide is not the answer for your problems” “YES IT IS , I SAID THAT I,M GONNA END IT RIGHT NOW!!!!” Her father came in too “WHAT in the world is happening here!!!!!” Memoryshower looked to her husband “She wants to commit suicide” Her father looked at her , Crystal was really angry. For the fist time of her life she stood up for herself. “You won't even mind , I think . “

Her father started screaming “TO YOUR ROOM , NOW!!!!!!!! “ For one moment Crystal wanted to yell it out ,to let her emotions come all out. But what happened is something nopony expected. She became calm and with an emotionless tone she said “oh daddy dear , you need to learn how to treat a kid , because you are the worst person ever. Or actually together with that stupid dumb sister of mine.” Her mother looked at her and the first thing she saw was. A totally grey pony. All the colour had faded out  of her daughter and now she looked like someone with an heart made of ice.

“I am no longer that weak doormat you two could step on , solve your own problems know because I won't share my knowledge with anypony else that Princess Celestia” And wtih those words she walked outside “I have got some bullies to punish”.