This is the story of My OC Afterburner. I don't expect much interest in it, but that's why I'm posting this here, so hopefully I can get some feedback as to whether or not I should continue.

It is written in the first person and will most likely turn a lot of people off

THERE IS NO GORE YET! You will see sex but only in descriptive form as it is not to be a clop fic

This is my first foray into writing and I'm looking for all the constructive criticism I can get. Thanks for looking into the fic and please feel free to leave a comment if you have any suggestions.