A strike of thunder

by NOOOOOO nononono

Rating: mature
Tags: Tragedy, Dark, Romance
Length: 1578

When you kill everything a pony cares about,you'll also kill them

Thunder Lane wants revenge on Rainbow Dash.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-05-04 05:00:01 UTC

A strike of thunder

A strike of thunder

By VitoSilence20

It was a beautiful morning in PonyVille . There was blur of a rainbow in the sky.

The rainbow was heading toward PonyVille Elementary. But who else could it be?

It was Rainbow Dash, on her back was her #1 Fan, her adopted sister Scootaloo!

"Uh, Rainbow Dash I don't feel good" Faked Scootaloo. Rainbow Dash stopped to a halt, and turned her head and stared at Scootaloo "Your faking" She said.

Scootaloo started making a fake nasty cough. That convinced Rainbow Dash,she turned toward her cloud home "Alright,but Scootaloo you already skipped two days of school,tomorrow your definitely going tomorrow;You hungry?" Rainbow Dash asked her.

Scootaloo`s stomach rumbled "Ya" She replied. Rainbow Dash flew to a nearby restaurant,and they walked in.

Rainbow Dash walked up to the cashier "Hello um... Can I have a sandwich?;With extra cheese" Rainbow Dash asked. She turned her head toward Scootaloo "What do you want squirt?" Rainbow Dash asked her. Scootaloo thought and finally spoke up "Can I have a salad?;with no tomatoes,please" Scootaloo asked.

The cashier wrote every thing down "That will be 7 bits" The cashier said. Rainbow Dash pulled 7 bits out of her bag.

She handed over the bits. The cashier counted when she finished she walked to the back.She came back with a bag "Here you go" The cashier handed over the bag.

Rainbow Dash handed over the bag to Scootaloo "Hold on ok" Rainbow Dash said.

They flew out and started heading home.

They arrived,but something caught Rainbow Dash`s eye. There was a pony putting her pet,Tank the turtle,in a bag. She turned and saw the pony wearing a black hoodie "Hey! What do you think your doing!" She yelled. The figure turned around. He step toward the two of them. Rainbow Dash stood her ground,but Scootaloo started making a run under him.

She failed miserably. The figure bit her tail and threw against the floor,making her pass out;Rainbow Dash got pissed. She tackled the figure,but the figure got her in a head lock. In a matter of seconds Rainbow Dash passed out.

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Rainbow Dash woke up,on a huge room almost empty,except the trash; In front of her was Scootaloo but she had a blind fold and gag on, and her wings were nailed down,she was also strapped down. She tried to move but she just notice she was also strapped down.She tried flapping her wings,put even her wings were nailed down. She tried screaming then she heard a similar voice.

"Hi Rainbow Dash" Rainbow Dash knew who it was,it was Thunder Lane.

"Thunder Lane,what are you doing here... Can you help us?" She asked. Thunder Lane just smiled "Oh Rainbow Dash your so stupid, don't you remember me in your home?" Thunder Lane laughed. Rainbow Dash was confused,then she realised the pony in her house was Thunder Lane.

Rainbow Dash started going crazy "Get me out of here you bucking asshole" She screams. Scootaloo woke up.

She tried screaming,but the gag muffled her screams. Thunder Lane turned his attention to Scootaloo "Oh poor Scootaloo;I'm gonna bang your pretty little-bucking head till it explodes". Scootaloo tried screaming again.

Thunder Lane turned around and walked into the darkness.

He came back with a table on it were equipment (Knife,Hammer,Chainsaw,butcher knife,scalpel,a pick axe,and a rag) then she saw something else;It was a... Shell?

Thunder Lane pounded the shell. Then Rainbow Dash really saw what it was. It was Tank.

Rainbow Dash was shocked "So I wonder what will happen if I killed this thing?" Thunder Lane said. He grabbed the hammer. Rainbow Dash started screaming.

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Thunder Lane slammed the hammer into Tanks shell. Hit after Hit then shell finally broke exposing Tanks body.

Thunder grabbed the butcher knife,ans started butchering His body.

Rainbow Dash started to cry.

Thunder Lane finished butchering his body. He turned his attention to Scootaloo. He walked over to her,and started touching her. Rainbow Dash felt like puking on site,but instead started screaming.

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  Thunder Lane moved behind Rainbow Dash,and started pushing her table to Scootaloo;Thunder Lane pushed it till there body were touching. He unfolded the part that held her head as well as Scootaloo`s;He also ungaged her.

Scootaloo started yelling "SOMEPONY PLEASE HELP US!!!" She screamed. Thunder Lane put the gag back in her mouth.

He turned his attention to Rainbow Dash "Here is what I'm gonna do;you kiss Scootaloo,not just a peck,but a long one like if you were a Filly Fooler" Thunder Lane said. Rainbow Dash had no choice but to do it.

Thunder Lane ungaged her,and Rainbow Dash locked her her lips with hers. As her saliva transfers over to Scootaloo- Thunder Lane was getting a boner.

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Thunder Lane moved Rainbow Dash away from Scootaloo. He walked over to Scootaloo and 're-gaged her,He then went on his hind knees. He licked Scootaloo`s sex.

Thunder Lane started sucking. Rainbow Dash almost puked.

Thunder Lane finished. He got up,and turned around; Rainbow Dash knew what he was gonna do. She used her tail to cover her sex.

"Rainbow Dash move your tail,if you don't I'll hurt your little friend over here" Thunder Lane said. Rainbow Dash still didn't move her tail. Thunder Lane grabbed the hammer. He walked over to Scootaloo.

"You wouldn't dare" Rainbow Dash exclaimed. Thunder Lane started pounding Scootaloos wing. SNAP! Scootaloos wing bone just cracked. Scootaloo started screaming,Rainbow Dash started seeing tears coming out of the the blind fold.

Rainbow Dash couldn't see Scootaloo get hurt again,so she lowered her tail. She's lost,and she never loses. As her tail started to lower. Thunder Lane walked over to her.

He went on his knees again,and licked Rainbow Dash`s sex. He started sucking once more.

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Rainbow Dash started to moan. Thunder Lane stopped,and moved away from Rainbow Dash. He walked over to Scootaloo.

He got there. He then inserted his dick into her slit;as it widened. Rainbow Dash started to gag up.

Thunder Lane started pumping in and out. After a while he spoke up, "I'm gonna cum" Thunder Lane said.

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Scootaloo cried and cried. Rainbow Dash on the other hand stared in shock,mouth hanging open. She can only watch her little "sister" get raped by-by this monster.

Thunder Lane let out a loud moan as he cumed inside Scootaloos frigid body.

He removed his penis from her body;as cum ran down her leg,Rainbow Dash just threw up,right then,and there.

Rainbow Dash just started crying again. Tears running down face hit the floor. Let out big huffs and whines.

                             ***

Thunder Lane just grabbed the rag,and walked over to Rainbow Dash. He put the rag around her mouth. "Im really getting tired of your bitching" He said.

Rainbow Dash no longer cared. She couldn't do anything,put watch.

As that happened,Thunder Lane walked over to the table again. picking up the knife.

He walked over to Rainbow Dash,and picked up her head. "Your gonna watch this" He smiled.

                         ***

He walked over to Scootaloo. He grabbed the knife,and jab it in the bottom of Scootaloo's little wing.

Rainbow Dash started to tear up. As Rainbow Dash's tear started to slid down her face,Thunder Lane kept-on cutting the poor little fillys wings.

As you can't tell if the wing was a wing anymore. Thunder Lane  threw the knife,and walked back to the table,he picked up the scalpel,and walked over to Rainbow Dash again.

"Your gonna love this" He then laughed. He flew over to Scootaloo,and jabbed the scalpel into the soft stomach of Scootaloo.

Rainbow Dash started to release more tears,enough to make a river.

He cut-up,as Scootaloo's blood ran down her body,Scootaloo passed out from the pain. On the other hand,Rainbow Dash couldn't.

He finally made a decent size hole. He then jabbed his hand into her stomach;puliing our her intestine-Large and Small.

Finally Scootaloo died of blood loss.

"She's dead already!" He said,with those words Rainbow Dash poured out more tears.

He teased Rainbow Dash. He grabbed the pickaxe,and again flew over to Scootaloo's dead body.

He striked the Pickaxe into her neck,as the blood satisfied him,he kept hacking at her neck into he finally chopped it off.

He grabbed the chainsaw,and started it. The sound of it, send a tingle into his spine. He flew over to Rainbow Dash "Now time for you,your sister is dead,your pet is dead,so... Revenge Bitch!" As he stroke the Saw into her chest going through her heart-killing her.

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Rainbow bursted into reality. She sat-up. Sweat running down her head,and her body cover in sweat.

She looked around,she was in her cloud home.

She started to smile,'it was only a dream' She thought.

She looked around,something was wrong... Scootaloo wasen't next to her.

She paniced. She off her bed,and ran out her room.

She tripped over tank. Tank stuck his head out. She got and turned around "sorry... Have you seen Scootaloo?" She asked. He turned his head tord the kitchen.

The lights were on,she could hear noises.

She walked in to see Scootaloo opening the fridge. She looked in "watermelon... Put I can't eat it it's for a picnic" She said.

"You hungry?" Scootaloo jumped,and turned around. "Oh Rainbow Dash... Yes I am" She said. Rainbow Dash walked over to the fridge,and pulled out a zap apple,that Applejack gave to her.

"Here" She handed over. Scootaloo grabbed it,and just stuffed in her mouth.

They both got in the bed. "Goodnight,love you."