The Twilight Adventures: The First Journey

by Prince Shadow
sometimes curiosity can get the better of you, Twilight will find that out sooner then she thinks when she finds a colt that has been kept secret for a thousand years.

Twilight is in her basement when she notices a door that wasn't there, what she doesn't know is that she will be taken on an adventure that will take her a lot further away from home then ponyville when she steps though that door. A diplomatic struggle between two universes, two ponies too stop it and why is Doctor Hooves there? What's with the sun glasses? And most importantly who is that strange black alicorn? All of these questions will be answered or not, well you know how The Doctor is.

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Rated T for mild violence and some vulgar language

Teen
Incomplete
Adventure
Alternate Universe
 

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