StormXTwilight

by Storm_Rider

First published January 13th, 2013 21:30

Eh, I got asked to try write a clop scene involving my OC and a OC of my friend, it is based from the OCs and ships that are in another fic I help in writing. This is my first attempt at writing a clop scene so suggestions are appreciated except for the "To short" ones since this WOULD be combined into another chapter which would be over 1000 words adding onto the 1000+ here.

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StormXTwilight

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Storm Rider gets rode ;)

Seductively, Twilight eyed me from across the room and began to strut towards me, hips and flank swaying slowly side to side while she was biting her lip still giving me that hungry stare. Suddenly she galloped forward and jumped at me, allowing myself to be tackled we fell backwards onto the bed lips locked with her on top and in control. As our tongues intertwined she began to grind herself on me causing my stallionhood (Penis…) to harden and bulge out of my pants, Twilight began to unbutton my shirt hooves trembling in excitement and anticipation. She then started to kiss my neck and trail down my chest and stomach, teasingly she looked up before extracting my stallionhood and sticking it in her mouth and begins to bob up and down on it, slowly at first but she quickly began to build speed until I began to gasp and groan
"Twilight! I'm… about to…stop!" I gasp, she looked upwards as I continue to gasp for breath, I quickly recover before pulling her up to my face saying
"My turn." I said flipping her over onto her back before lowering myself down to her glistening marehood, I began to run my tongue over the lips over it, hearing her moan every time I did so. After a minute of this she began to moan heavily and started pushing on my head forcing me deeper inside her until she climaxed.

Fluid from her orgasm ran down my chin as I straightened up and positioned my stallionhood to penetrate her. I began to push myself inside, I could tell it was her first time from the feel of her marehood around my stallionhood. Soon I came into contact with a obstruction, her hymen, I pushed the full length of my stallionhood into her breaking the hymen, as Twilight let out of small whimper I waited for her signal before pulling out and began thrusting again. Both of us moaned as Twilight positioned herself under me to keep up with the pace, I began to thrust harder and faster hearing Twilight's breathing quicken as she started to slowly moan my name, she let out a small scream before moaning in the delight of a second orgasm.
"Twilight… I'm… I’m about to…" I manage to say under quickening breathes, a small nod from Twilight encouraged me as well as the soft moanings of name as I thrusted one last time before cumming inside her. I pulled out and collapsed next to her, wrapping my hooves around her, she pushed herself as close as she could and huddled against me, hugging me closer
"I love you Twilight"
"I love you to, Storm"

I closed my eyes and quickly fell asleep, for nothing else mattered to me, except my loving marefriend who was now asleep in my arms huddled against my chest.

Next Morning
I woke up to Twilight still hugged as close to my chest as she could, and with Celestias sun merely a crack of light behind the mountains, I sighed before extracting myself from the bed and pulling on my crumpled clothes from last night. Heading out the bedroom door I nearly collide with Sharp who for some reason was up at this disgusting hour
"Oh… hey" He said with a small smile playing its way across his face
"What's so funny?" I demanded, yeah I'm not a morning person whatsoever
"Oh nothing… Just that me and AJ could hear you and Twilight going at it"
"Sharp, we're grown bucking ponies, we can do what we want, besides why wasn't you do doing it with AJ if you were that interested?" I said with a smirk plastered on my face, Sharp stayed quiet and slowly walked away mumbling something about timing, smirking with my small victory I continued downstairs to eat.

After my gourmet breakfast of toast (yeah I really need to learn how to cook...) I headed back upstairs and into my room only to see Twilight standing right in front of the door with the same seductive look as last night
“Um, good morning Twilight?” I said uncertainly as she took a step closer to me and kicked the door closed
“You ready for round two?” She asked
“U-” I started before Twilight jumped on top of me and pinned me down, she leaned her head down a bit her bottom lip, teasing me before licking her lips and leaning her head down to mine, forcing her tongue into my mouth. She began to grind her marehood against my stallionhood, causing it to stiffen. She pulls her hoof off me, stands up and starts walking back to the bed swaying her flank as she walked teasing me, I stumble to my feet over excited as Twilight moaned from the bed “Ohh come on Storm” which sent me into overdrive, I galloped towards the bed and pulled Twilight into a close embrace.
Laying on top of me, Twilight began to kiss my neck before trailing downwards like she did the night before, as soon as she reached my stallionhood she looked up at me with a naughty smile before running her tongue up the full length of my stallionhood then sticking the whole length of it in her mouth, the feeling of her saliva and tongue running along my shaft almost made me climax right then, she was clearly enjoying herself as she rotated her tongue around my shaft while bobbing up and down the pleasure of her touch was overwhelming. It was beginning to get hard to think as all I could focus on was Twilights touch, I felt my breathing quicken and began to pant
“Twilight! Im.... Im...” I panted out, she rolled her eyes playfully as she straightened up and positioned her flank just above my stallionhood “You seem to forget that I’m on top” I joked “Not this time, I’m taking control” She said licking her lips teasingly before lowering her flank onto my stallionhood, I gasped in pleasure at her touch as she slowly lowered her flank so that it took the full length of my stallionhood, I placed my hooves on her hips as she began to build speed in bouncing up and down on my stallionhood, we both began to moan as I started to thrust with her.
Twilight put on a burst of speed as I heard her breath quicken, I could feel my own climax coming up and determined to finish like a champ, I matched Twilights speed
“Ohh Storm” she moaned and involuntary screamed as she climaxed, I could feel the fluid trickle down my shaft and pool on my stomach and with one final thrust I climaxed and released inside of her as she collapsed onto my heaving chest. Twilight wrapped her hooves around my back as I wrapped her in my wings, I gave her a small kiss on the snout before nuzzling her cheek as she fell asleep in my arms yet again.

So that my my first attempt at a clop scene in a chapter (NOT CANON IN ANY WAY, SHAPE OR FORM TO ANY FIC I’M INVOLVED ON) how did I do? I thought it went pretty well despite the fact that I now hate myself for writing that.