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Equestrian Fall

by angelheart
A mystical power takes over Equestria and begins to cause problems, but what really worries Twilight Sparkle and gang is the fact that Princess Luna disappears, Celestia stops replying to letters, and an ancient mystery alicorn suddenly appears.

This is a pony war story. The story will be serious above all else. I started posting this on here, got a comment that really hurt me as a writer, but realized nopony has any right to tell you that you can't write how you want. It is not disrespectful to write with an alicorn, and it won't stop me from writing and posting this story, or any other. I will rate appropriately, and anypony with a problem is welcome to voice their opinion, but I will continue writing, and expressing my love for MLP by creating my stories.

Now, the story revolves around four ponies in particular. Twilight, Celestia, Raven (OC), and Angel (OC), though the rest of the mane six will pick up more later. Darkness starts to overtake Equestria, and unicorns are left without magic. Unbeknownst to the citizen's of Ponyville, an evil pony, seeking revenge and the throne, has begun to wage war against Celestia, and has even attacked Canterlot. However, when an alicorn named Angel Heart appears in Ponyville they begin to understand whats going on, and set off to Canterlot to find Celestia. What they find is more than they expect, and the innocent ponies of Equestria are dragged into a war that has been waiting to finish for thousands of years.

Teen
Incomplete
Tragedy
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
 
OTPM

4033 words: Estimated 20 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

  1. Ch. 1 2013-01-13 21:59:00 UTC
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