The Shadow of a Marine

by Patric12345
This is the story about a Planetary Marine Cpt named Shadow. When an FTL drive malfunction sends him to Equestria getting home is not an option.

Shadow is a little off at best he wants to at least act like a pony… But thats hard when your a Marine habits are habits and its hard to break them. But that all changes when he deflects a blast meant to kill a certain mare named Twilight Sparkles. The blast reveals his Alchanite leg. That moment begins a long and complicated romance between Shadow and Twilight.

This is my first Fan-fic I want constructive feed back if possible.
Thank one of my good friends and the best damn editor I could ask for 7H3B055 he gets a lot of the credit for correcting my grammar and making sure every thing made sense.

Teen
Incomplete
Adventure
Sad
Romance
 

6547 words: Estimated 33 minutes to read

6 Chapters:

  1. A wake up call 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    409
  2. Wait what? 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    608
  3. A Suicide Attack 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1405
  4. Failed First Date 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    984
  5. Work Related Chaos 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1019
  6. Second Date 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    2122