Now Thats Just Great

by lemelon

Rating: teen
Tags: Slice of Life, Human, Romance, Comedy
Length: 2440

Two best friends on their way to a friends part decide to mak e it the best of all parties in their life and go all out on it and just forget everything else just for this one night. But none ot them imagined where this would take them.

Two best friends on their way to a friends part decide to mak e it the best of all parties in their life and go all out on it and just forget everything else just for this one night. But none ot them imagined where this would take them.
Folow the to see what can go wrong even in the simplest of problems if you place the right duo in the mix.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-01-15 01:50:02 UTC

Chapter 1

Matej and Jan were getting ready to head out to the local motocross track

just like any other frieday after school. Getting out of school and heading

home the debated about all of the thing that are going ti happen today.

"So are you ready for this one" asked Jan as they made their way to their

homes to unpack all of their school equipment and get on the road.

"Jup and you know what ive been thinking?" asks Matej, just before he was

interupted "OH WOW that something new... Your are thinking bout something.

Well it was about time you start doing that." To what he replied by simply

giving him a "oh just fuck off" look.

"No. what I wanted to say is, do you think we should make another photo

shooting on training today since this is the last time your giong on your

bike for this year?"

After a few seconds of thinking Jan replied with "You know what, I think your

right... Yeah we should do that"

But after a few seconds of thought Matej asked with a woried expresion

"But is there enough space in your car?"

"Probably not. I guess i should ask my mom to borrow her pick up for today

and we should have just enough space" replied

Jan as he was contenplating if that would eaven happen since his previous

attempt at begging hism mom for her car usaly ended with either no sucsess or

eaven threats about her kicking his ass if he ever dares to take it, if she

said no before.

"I guess Ill just have to put extra effort in it this time, and I guess we

could do that."

An hour later and a half of convincing and debating all of the possible outcomes

of taking his moms pickup and retirning home with just one dent in it he

quickly and with undiable happines loaded all of his eqipment and bike ont

it he then drove off the get Matej and head on the road. Once there they loaded

up all of Matejs speakers and mixing tables into the truck they went off

with a serious debate. "You know... Ever since Im single now and since im

still kinda pissed because of it, I think we hould just get crazy wasted today

and just have a great time. and forget the entire week." Said Jan as he was

reflecting on all that happend in this week.

"You know what... It was a long time since I ever just went with the party

and had a good time without beeing woried about tomorow."

Said Matej as he was liking the idea.

Noding his head Jan said "Good. In that case we sould make this training

short and try to get as many good shots as you can, so I wont be to fucked up

for the party."

With that they remained silen for the remaining of the one hour drive to the

track just enjoing the music they were playing while driving there.

When they arived there they were pleased to see that the track was empy and

that meant no distrctions while riding, or taking pictures and recording.

While Jan was getting his bike and himself ready to go to the track,

Matey prepared his cmera and all of his equipment making sure nothing was

mising sice half of the gear wasent his but his dads, and the last thing he

neded was another reason for arguing with his old man. Starting the bike up

for a minute to warm it up Jan went to Matej and said

"Just try to find the good ol sweet spots like last time and im gonna go for a

few rounds and then were getting out of here."

As the sun was starting to fall below the horizon Jan came of the track for

the last time and getting of his bike saying

"OK I hope you got some good shots, cuz I am BEAT and I ant going into that

hellhole again."

Just giving him a thimbs up Matej started packing up his gear while Jan got

his bike back on the truck and getting ready to leave. With all things set they

went off to the party since thex had to get there early and set everything up.

Since Matej was the DJ tonight and had to make a good impression on the peapole

there since there are going to be a few of the local club owners there, hoping

that he could impress them enough to give him a chance to pop up in their clubs.

After many arguements abou suposedly mising gear and other things all was finaly

set an ready for the party to begin. Just one hour into the part the entire house

was full to the point were tying to get out of the house was a chalenge in itself.

But that didnt stop any of them from diving head first into the party and all of

the beavereges that were conviniently placed right nex to them. Since Matej is

more skinny than he is tall meant that things started to quickly get out of hand

for him and couldnt continue with the party, witch meant Jan had to take his place

behind the mixing table and continue the party for the nex two hours for the last

of the peapole remaining there. Ever since the birthay boy went out cold and was

placed in is room the party quickly as it started begin to dim down.

When it was three in the morning it was time to pack up their things and go back

home.  But since Matej was out cold in the pasenger seat of the car, meant that

Jan hat to get all of the equipment back to the car and drive home. Witch wasent

one of the smartet ideas since he did have quite a bit of to drink but they still

had to get home somehow and just sleep for the next 24 hours and hoping to not

wake up and endure the dire resoult of tonights party.

After thirty minutes all of the gear as back in the car and Jan got in the car

and went off. Eaven though he was slightly drunk he maneged to get trough half

of the drive home with out any problems... That is until however he got to the

highway. Being tired from ridong for a few hours and partying for the rest of

the night and the drinking meant that he was becoming more and more sleepy and

begun to slowly close his eyes.

Fighting to not fall asleep on the road Jan put the pedal to the floor, hoping

to get home as soon as possible and justgoing to bed. But the thought of sleep

made him eaven more tired and he again slowly without any warnings begun to

close his eyes. That was happening for the nex five minutes untill it was too

much for his body to take and it just shut off, closing his eyes and instantly

falling asleep, his head landing on the stearing whele...

Perspective: Jan

Slowly waking up and coming to his senses by the steady and annoying beep of an

unknown source he begun to goarn and turn in the bed saying

"OOOHH cmon just five fucking minutes... It probably isnt 10:30 yet, GOD WHY?"

But after that his memory slowly ceme back to him and he started to remember what

was happening before he got home. But the problem was that he wasnt home... Oh no,

far away from that. After falling asleep behind the whele dosent usaly end with

waking up home in bed, no but either dead or in a hospital.

The thought giving him fear to open his eyes he begun to slowly think about what

might have happend.

After coming up with no good things that might have happend he slowly begun to

gather himself and slowly started to open his eyes for a moment just to confirm

his fears "Laying in a hospital bed... Perfect, but at least im not dead" he siged

and started looking himself up and checking for any injuries, but was shocked when

he found none. Thinking to himself about the possibilities of just driving in a

straight line, until coming to a stop for someone to find them and take them to

the hospital. Blinking his eyes awake he quickly remembered about Matej and begun

looking around the room and searching for his friend.

Looking around the room he found him laying in another bed across the room still

either sleeping or unconscious. He slowly started to rise out of bed but suddenly

cameto a stop as hi head felt like he was being stabed with a kiant butcher knife.

After a few seconds of just sitting on the side of the bed rubbing his head and

cursing to himself for being so stupid to do that. As he got out of bed to stand

on his legs he forgot about the heart monitor atached to him witch upon him standing

up fell off and begun to beep loudly. Before he could get into another fit of rage

due to the headsplitting sound of the heart monitor the door to his room suddenly opend.

Looking up to his hero of the mornig he begun to just stare at the person that

saved him from the dreadfull sound of the heartmonitor, or rather the ?pony?...

After trying to get a few more words out of him, but failing miserably since he

could eaven get a sound out of him, both due to the sock and his sore throat.

After a few seconds of this, he simply smiled stupidly and fallen onto the bed

out cold angain.

He awokke again as he had a splash of water hit his face, making him jum to a

sitting position and turning his head to see Matej standing next to him with a

glass of water in his hand and a smile across his face.

"Cmon wake up ya big lump. Do you know how boring it is in here alone after a few

hours?"

Blinking his eyes and again regaining his awerenes he started with a sigh rubbinh

his forehead "Do you have any idea what was it the booze last night?"

Matej just giving him a confused look, so Jan continued with "Seriously, I had

this weird halucination of a pony in a nurse suite coming to check up on me."

Matej after a few seconds of a woried eqpresion on his face simply stated

"Remember all of those times I said your nuts right? Well, do you belive me now?"

Jan just shook his head and give a slight chuckle and laid back into bed asking

"Oh yeah and you probably dont eaven remembre all of the supid shit you did last night,

so dont give me this shit. I just wanna go back to sleep cuz my head is killing me."

After a moment of thought Matej asked "Yeah sure... But first, do you mind telling

me what the fuck are we doing in a hospital?"

Turning around to face him Jan said "Look I dont know... After you passed out I took

you in to the car and just kept playing misic until three in the morning.Then I

took all of your stuff to the car and drove off, and that kinda the last thing I remember."

Taking a few seconds to process all of this information Matej pot on a look of fear

and said "Dude, do you have any idea what has happend? Do you realise you probably

totald your moms pickup? Man you are seriously dead when you get home!"

At the thought of his moms car totald sent him flying off the bed to check for the car

as if his life depended on it... Witch in a way did.

As he got out of bed and and ran out of the door quickly closing it behind him,

until a few seconds later he came bolting back in the room panting like he just ran

a marathon and pale, like he just seen a ghost.

Matej noticing this give hin a questioning look and asked "Wow whats gotten into you?

You just went trough the door and a few seconds later your back looking like you

were running for your life... What happend?"

After taking in a few more breaths he said "Do you remember when I said that I

thought I had some weir halucinations?"

"Yeaaaaaaaaah?"

"Well, I think you should go and take a look for yourself." He said as he removed

himself from the door, alowing him to go trough.

As he opend the door and took a look left and then righ then coming back inside asking

"Yeah I dont know whats wrong with you... Its just an empty hallway, like seriously what

did you see?"

Getting behind his bed he said "well take a walk trough the hallway..."

Shaking his head and sighing he exited the room and went down the hallway.

After about thirty seconds he came bolting back with the same expression that

Jan had when he came back into he room.

"See I told you Im not going nutts... You saw it too didnt you?" Jan said quickly

after matej closed the door behind him and sitting down with wis back to the door.

"OK either were both going insane or this shit is real... Either one Im not liking it."

Said Matej slowly catching his breath.

"Well we gotta do somethong, I mean like what the hell is going on here? Whay are there

horses walking around the hospital?" asked Jan with a look concern on his face.

After a few seconds of thinking Matej asked "Wait. You said horses? Dude Im not shitting you,

but I didnt see a horse..."

"What do you mean you didnt see the horses...? Then what tot you so worked up? What did you see?"

Asked Jan with confusion clear on his face.

"I dont know what I saw... It looked like A FUCKING UNICORN!!!!" Ended Matej with a shout of

panic and loking to Jan.

"Right, seriously I think you are the crazier one. Unicorns dont exist." Replied jan

giving Matej a curious look on his face.

"Look, I dont know what is going on but we gotta get out of here... And fast before so..."

Matej was cut off as he felt a presure on his back as someone tried to open the door.