Chaotic Harmony

by Chaos Eclipsed
The tale of a lesser known pony, Eclipse. Eclipse is armed with the power of chaos, but he strives to serve the greater good. Unfortunately, Equestria is far from what the surface will tell you, and even further from the peaceful nation we know.

Author's note: Before you freak over the whole HERMAN! ERMEHGERD, DERSLERKE! thing, read this first. There is only one human, he immediately gets turned into a pony for reasons that are not explained (you've been warned) and this does NOT put a heavy focus on his adjusting to life in Equestria. There's more than enough of that already written.

Also, I am fully aware of the fic by the same name written by Shirotora. The issue has already been addressed. You are not the first to notice the name and you will not be the last. Leave it at that.

Welcome to the story of Eclipse. He's not well known, and for good reason. Being a servant of the princesses themselves will do that. But I'm getting ahead of myself.

This story begins right when he comes into Equestria. Not a native to Equestria, or any lands nearby, Eclipse is a little... odd at times. But that might just be the chaos magic. What? Oh, yes, he does have limited chaos magic. Mind you, he won't be taking over Equestria, but if you get him angry, it's certainly imposing. Then there's the friends he'll make along the way...

Begins pre-season three and advances.

Leave comments to tell me what's good and what's bad. That way, I can improve what's good and make what's bad, er... less bad.

Teen
Incomplete
Adventure
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Human
 
PPO

111534 words: Estimated about 9 hours to read
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54 Chapters:

  1. A new arrival 2013-01-14 23:52:29 UTC
    1719
  2. wakey wakey... 2013-01-14 23:53:40 UTC
    1803
  3. Dusted reprieve 2013-01-16 23:32:43 UTC
    2640
  4. The tie in 2013-01-22 23:01:36 UTC
    1440
  5. All aboard 2013-01-26 01:39:51 UTC
    1558
  6. Crystal reclamation 2013-01-30 01:17:37 UTC
    3424
  7. Ball and mug(ger) 2013-02-03 03:24:21 UTC
    1961
  8. Apples to apples 2013-02-05 14:05:32 UTC
    1693
  9. Jailbreak 2013-02-07 03:01:39 UTC
    1794
  10. Desert ambush 2013-02-08 02:51:09 UTC
    1693
  11. And lift-off! 2013-02-10 15:32:20 UTC
    1493
  12. Cave of Elders 2013-02-12 03:03:38 UTC
    1783
  13. Gift of the Elders 2013-03-20 19:32:46 UTC
    1112
  14. Meeting the Tribe 2013-03-22 19:41:52 UTC
    1901
  15. Strafing run 2013-03-25 19:42:32 UTC
    1110
  16. Train jacked 2013-03-26 16:12:03 UTC
    1641
  17. Calm before the storm 2013-03-27 12:48:02 UTC
    940
  18. The storming of the mine 2013-03-28 12:48:56 UTC
    2132
  19. Star's intrigue 2013-04-02 16:48:13 UTC
    2123
  20. Celestia's message 2013-04-05 16:34:41 UTC
    1368
  21. Eclipse's offer 2013-04-25 20:09:12 UTC
    1560
  22. Royal's stand 2013-05-02 20:17:48 UTC
    3102
  23. Finishing the battle for Appleloosa 2013-05-17 17:54:16 UTC
    1536
  24. *bang* *bang* Up yet? 2013-06-07 20:15:05 UTC
    1704
  25. Quarter to a hundred 2013-06-13 20:19:38 UTC
    1114
  26. Meanwhile, back at the palace... 2013-06-25 15:41:39 UTC
    1208
  27. Surprise! 2013-07-01 04:18:22 UTC
    1753
  28. So, uh... yeah... 2013-07-13 06:47:10 UTC
    2921
  29. Defending A Major Scientific Facility: A 'How Not To' Guide 2013-08-02 22:23:39 UTC
    2244
  30. Reunion in combat 2013-08-10 16:56:36 UTC
    2482
  31. Yelling at questions won't give you answers 2013-08-19 04:58:15 UTC
    2197
  32. And you are...? 2013-08-24 06:07:49 UTC
    2716
  33. Contact 2013-09-03 14:38:22 UTC
    2517
  34. Entering the Hive (But not the bad one) 2013-09-10 23:06:12 UTC
    1764
  35. The blackest reaches contain the key to the nexus 2013-09-12 23:09:58 UTC
    1671
  36. First rule in fight club: ...Wait, there are rules? 2013-09-15 05:20:50 UTC
    2165
  37. We know there's a secret, we just don't know what it is 2013-10-28 01:26:45 UTC
    2359
  38. Thorn's memory, Dizzo's friend 2013-11-28 01:02:23 UTC
    1421
  39. Where shadows reign 2013-11-28 16:04:21 UTC
    2359
  40. Don't look back 2013-11-30 03:04:47 UTC
    1783
  41. Start a brawl that can't be won 2013-12-29 03:16:35 UTC
    2766
  42. Vangar's Stand (part 1) 2014-01-25 23:28:11 UTC
    3458
  43. Vangar's Stand (part 2) 2014-03-10 04:14:09 UTC
    3159
  44. After Vangar's stand 2014-05-02 19:53:27 UTC
    2614
  45. It's been a long time since the last update, but you will not have to start over because... (cont. on Author's Notes) 2014-09-14 07:30:43 UTC
    1911
  46. The current record is 12 times, done by Britney Gallivan. 2014-10-10 05:04:47 UTC
    2049
  47. Existential angst is good for the soul! But it's not going to stay for long, right? 2014-11-02 08:14:38 UTC
    3409
  48. Little details come around 2015-01-13 18:34:58 UTC
    3432
  49. To Braycover 2015-01-23 21:08:50 UTC
    3150
  50. We made it to fifty? 2015-02-14 22:49:59 UTC
    3151
  51. Split 2015-05-18 02:52:03 UTC
    1300
  52. Grinding for XP 2015-06-15 00:45:39 UTC
    1526
  53. Explanations and services rendered 2015-07-19 22:40:18 UTC
    2124
  54. Everybody's looking for something 2015-08-16 17:35:27 UTC
    1581