Eyes of Stone
New world order
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"I'm gonna tollerate and love the SHIT out of you!"
-Dashie
Chapter One
New World Order
You wake up with a yawn stretching your forehoof as far as you could get it. You set it back around Jade and put your chin on her head. You didn't wan't to wake her. Closing your eyes to get some more sleep you felt movement under you. Opening your eyes you notice Jade had turned around and was fiddling with you chest. She looked up and met your stone gray eyes and gave a weak smile.
"Hey babe..." Her voice was so quiet. You ran a hoof down her cheek and rested it under her chin. She smiled at the contact. You removed your hoof and wrapped it back around her pulling her close. She snuggled in your musclualr body. Working on the farm before the inncedent had left you well toned. Keeping it like it was wasn't as hard as you had thought. A few push ups here and there picking Jade up and curling her every so often. You kept your body in great shape. She ran a gentle hoof over your rippling chest. She stopped and met your eyes again. "What are we gonna name it?" You shrugged.
"That depends if its a colt or a filly. We won't know... Hay, we don't even know if you got anything in there yet." You poked at her stomach. She giggled and tried to brush you off. You pulled your hoof back up away from her and ran it through her mane. It was so silky and smooth. You wished you sould use it as a bed sometimes when the couch was a bit too uncomfortable.
"Are you sure you're okay with a foal? We never really talked about being parents..." You look deep into her eyes. She never could turn away from them. She leaned in for a quick kiss and then let out a small squeek as you poked her stomach again.
"I'm not to fond of the idea... No, I'm not to dure I want one... But if you want one... Then I won't keep you from happiness... It was stolen from me and I'd rather not see the same happen to you... I had a dream... It was to raise a family and settle down in a small little town... Have my foals run the farm and their foals foals.... Do on and so forth... Well, that all dissappeared with my sister..." Jade frowned as she recalled the story of your sister dying due to smoke poisoning.
You rolled out of bed and walked off to the door. Jade rolled onto her back and watched you leave. At the door you stopped. "Aren't you coming?" You heard a rustling as she bolted to your side. Her head ducked under yours and she rubbed your neck with her head. You wrapped a hoof around her and walked down to the bathroom.
Jade stopped at the closet to get towels while you walked in to start the water. After a few minutes she walked back into the bathroom. "What took you so..." You turned to see her leaning up against the door frame in the sexiest pose yet. You slipped an evil grin as you approached. Standing on your hindlegs you wrapped your hooves around her waist. "Seconds already? I thought you didn't like it in the tub?" She smiled and gave you a kiss.
Warning mature content skip to next bracket if you don't like!
"I want it..." She said with a seductive voice. "We only stop to break for more...: She stuck her tongue out and put it in your mouth. Pulling it back out she smiled with her own evil grin. "I'm feeling very dirty today." She walked towards the tub and dipped a hind hoof in and yanked it back. "The water is to high and to cold..." You walked up behind her and slilently slipped into her. She moaned a little and turned her head. You could only see one eye but it told you the whole story. Her eye was half closed and told you to take it slow and steady. You lifted up more until you couln't fit anymore in. You lifted her up and stepped into the tub. She shivered as the cold water hit her skin. You used a hind hoof to release a bit of the water so it didn't spill out. Plugging it back up you let her rest easy on your body. She didn't like having her back to you if your weren't in bed. With a practiced twist, she spun on you and landed belly to belly.
You moved your fore hooves to her hips and she began to slowly bounce on you. She gave you a light kiss and began to moan quietly. You smile that evil grin. (From now on all smiles by 'you' are evilish until said otherwise!!! This shit takes up vaulable clop room... Speaking of which...) Her moans grew a little louder as she picked up speed. You rolled her oveer in the large tub and put her head in the little cubby hole that was carved out. She reached out to the edges and forced a good grip as you began to take over. Each of your thrusts was perfect and on beat. She gasped in pure extacy as you changed up angle a bit. Her clit was tantalized by the way your awkward angle brushed against it. You saw her tense up and grip harder before letting out a very loud moan.
"You're... not... gonna... win today..." She said between hard breaths. You smiled and stuck you tongue down her open throat. She tried to return but didn't have the strength. You knew her weakness. You hoof was rubbing her cutie mark preventing her from winning this little bit of fun. You two had made a contest out of every orgasim ever since the first night you were together. You won most of the time. She let out an overexagerated moan and gripped the back of your neck. You smiled and picked up pace just a bit mashing your cock in her pussy. If the water wasn't there you would have felt her giveway by now. The water was cold for a reason. 'Just a few more thrusts!' You watched as she bit her lip drawing a bit of blood. You gasped and out flowed your juices. Her followed very soon after.
Naughty time is over...
"You... cheated..." You said between pants. She shook her head. "Oh yes you did..." She shook her head harder now. When she stopped you saw her lying smirk. You kissed her and rolled both of you over onto your back. She looked back and turn the faucet back on to hot to get the water to heat up too. She smiled as she placed her head in her favorite spot. Your chest just seemed to be her little relief spot. If she had a problem she made you lay down to get on your chest. It didn't bother you. She was light and all of her boddy standing on your chest didn't even falter your breathing. You should know she tried it. Twice.
"So you really want this?" She had her eyes closed but she definatly wasn't asleep. She nodded and hugged you tighter.
"I want you to be the father... I know you will make a great dad... I just wish you could stay..." You put a reassuring hoof on her back and began to run it up and down her back. She wimpered a little and soon tears were streaming down her face. You ligthly run a hoof over her cheek and catch one. She doesn't look up as you finish wiping them away only to have them replaced by more. You sighed and gently picked her up.
"Alright bath time is over... Time for a time out." She smiled a bit at the remark but didn't let up the stream. After pulling the plug and drying off you carried her to the bed and dropped her onto it. She let out a squeel as she fell a few inches to the soft covers. "Ya big baby..." You gave her a small punch and went back to the store. Walking to through the hallway you heard a conversation going on. Picking up the pace you turn the corner to find a couirer. He was oddly fimiliar. You facehoofed as you remeber scaring the hay out of him. Shaking your head you approached him. "Can't you read?" The stallion nodded. "Well does it say we are open?" He shook his head. "Then why are you in here?" He paused for a second. e looked like he was gonna say something but just gave up. He turned around and reached into his saddlebag. He pulled out a small envolope and hoofed it over to you before bolting away.
You flipped the envolope over and sure enough it had your name with the shop's address. 'No one knows I live here...' Curiosity spiked you turn it back over and rip it open. You find a letter inside with some very neat hoofwriting on it. You skip to see who it was by. 'Rarity?' You didn't know anypony by that name. You looked over hte letter:
Hello there,
I was reading the paper the other day when something bothered me as I read. It said you had beat the daylights out of an innocent pony in Buckingham. It was a very interesting story. I'm suprised he didn't press charges. I guess he deserved it if you beat him up. Anyways, I'm getting carried away.
The thing is me and a few of the girls are going to Buckingham to visit your sister's grave. We are coming on the 12th so mark your calendar. If you have one. Twilight will be in Canterlot so she won't make it sadly. Pinkie was being Pinkie when I tried to talk to her. She won't be coming either. Rainbow said there was suppose to be a major storm that day as well so of course she isn't coming, AppleJack, Fluttershy and I will come and visit. Fluttershy misses you.
I hope to see you well and happy.i sent the letter to this address because that is where the paper said you were staying at the moment. I didn't have any other way to contact you so this is the best I could do.
Sincerly,
Rarity
You read it over once. Twice. Even a third time. 'The 12th?' You turn to the calendar behind the counter and squint. 'Today is Saturday so...' You see the numbers clearly. 'Todays the 11th?!? They are going to be here tomorrow...' You put the letter in the trash and head to the door. Pushing it open and walking outside you turn towards the cemetary. 'Time to pay Amy a visit...' It was quite a walk to the outskirts of town. The shop sat smack dab in the middle of Hoofington street. The cemetary was on Cartsdale a whole two miles away outside of town.
As you walk down the lonely road you look to the scenery around you. It was pale and most of it was dead. Nopony ever cared for anything here in Buckingham. It was much diffrent back in Ponyville. At least there was a variaty of colors and hues. It was a marvelous sight. You weren't paying enough attention to the road when you smack into something.
You look over and notice a smaller pony on the ground. He wasn't much just a scrawny little colt. "Get lost..." The colt was stricken with fear and couldn't move. You nudge him with a fore hoof. He still doesn't move. Grasping him and hauling him to his feet you pat his rump and soon he gets the message. Off he went with a cloud of dust following him down the road. 'I hate foals... Why does Jade want one? I don't think I could just abandon my foal if I had one... I hope she isn't pregnant... We should really talk this over before we do anything to rash... We did it what... Twice? Maybe she is past... Ah who am I kidding... I'll just talk to her when I get back...' You kicked the ground sending dust into the air.
You finally got the cemetary with no delays besides the little colt. You look at the hours open and notice they were closed on Saturdays. 'Thats strange... Usally its Wednesdays...' You sigh and begin the long walk back to the Gardening Hut. 'Why does stupid shit like this always happen to me? I lost my family and my hope now I have to deal with three ponies who didn' know I was still alive until a paper told them... My life FUCKING SUCKS!!!' "Hey watch yer mouth sunny..." Yout turn to see an old mare walking to her shed from a rickidy old house. You stare at her with that famous stare. You didn't care what anypony heard from your mouth.
You shrugged and kept on going. A large rock stopped you. Staring at it for a while you realize what was going on. 'Oh great! My life is so shit driven that a rock interests me...' You kicked it as hard as you thought possible and watched until it disappeared from sight. You kept on going until you saw the town's outline and then began to sprint. Running into the shop you notice Jade humming as she watered the plants. You let out a relieved sigh. She didn't pay you much mind until you turned her head and kissed her.
"We really need to talk..." She looked at you very confused.
"What about? There really isn't much on my mind... You don't ever talk about what's on your mind... So... It must be about the foal... It is isn't it?" You nod. "Well, I need to get a test that's for sure..." Her face went red.
"Well that doesn't bother me... I don't really know if I want one or not... I just need some time... Think we could hold off until then?" She thought about it for awhile before giving a slight nod. "Good... I know your really happy... I just don't know if I could ever be happy again... To much has gone on..." You sigh and walk off.
"Wait! Are we still on for tonight?" 'Oh shit! The reservations...' Jade had booked a nice little resteraunt for the two of them. You weren't fond of the idea at first. Jade had to nag you into saying yes.
"Yeah... We are still on for tonight..." You walk off down the hallway. You were just gonna sleep off your mind until tonight.
Author's note:
Ok guys... I said this fic would be more interactive and I wasn't lying... If you can spot the hint and guess it right you get your vote counted as two... I will annouce at the begininng of each chapter wether or not there is a decision point...
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"What do you mean I can't have it? It's so fucking blue though!!!"
-Dashie
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