What Was Once Lost

by The Anonymous Colt
A pony returns for a chance at redemption, but all is not what it appears. All Hell has broken loose

This is my first fanfic, so please comment me so that I can imrpove my work. It's because of you guys that writers become famous. It only got a teen rating because of the beginning, and even then its not that gruesome, but better safe then sorry! The tags might change as the story progresses, so keep your eyes peeled. All right, enough introductions, let the story begin . . .


A pegasus with a dark past has been brought back from the eternal inferno, given a chance at Paradise if he is able to give salvation to a certain boastful mare, or risk being thrown back into the fire, along with the mare he pledged to save. But as the tension escalates when demonic presences begin to emerge from an ancient evil, howling for the blood of the living, the colt's goal for redemption soon turns into a war between two arcane beings of great power, a war he will have to fight in if he wishes to enter Paradise, and save the land of the living.

Teen
Incomplete
Sad
Romance
Comedy
Adventure
Slice of Life
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
OTM

10317 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

3 Chapters:

  1. Epilogue 2012-01-28 06:04:12 UTC
    3383
  2. Chapter One: New Guy In Town 2012-01-28 06:07:58 UTC
    4469
  3. Chapter Two: The Pink and Orange Mares 2012-01-31 06:14:11 UTC
    2465