Razzle Dazzle

by zombiebwains

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance, Original Character, Cutie Mark Crusaders, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1685

A non chlopfic love story with Applebloom. I have been inspired by the story Nocturne, and trust me my story is a must read

A love story with Applebloom. I have been inspired by the story Nocturne, and trust me my story is a must read

Published 2013-01-20 01:10:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-01-20 01:10:02 UTC

love at first site

RAZZLE DAZZLE
Chapter 1:
Love at first site

“Is he here?” “When are we going to be able to meet him?” “You say he aint got his cutie mark yet/”. “Calm down girls” Applejack said to the three cutie mark crusaders. Today was the day that Fluttershy’s younger brother was coming to visit for about three weeks.”I’m just so happy I could burst” yelled Sweetiebell as a spark of magic discharged from her horn. “What’s his name?” Asked Scootaloo, as she flapped her wings bringing the orange excited Pegasus a few inches off the ground. “His name is Razzle Dazzle and if he’s anything like Fluttershy then you best not be acting up like this”. After thirty minutes of waiting a small, black carriage, pulled by two Pegasus came to a Halt at Fluttershy’s cottage. “He’s here” Said Fluttershy with a happy squeak. Fluttershy and her younger brother had a very good relationship with one another. They weren’t able to see each other often anymore but when they did they really had a great time. Other then helping small animals they shared a lot of the same interest.

As the carriage doors opened it reviled a dark green Pegasus with pink hair (the same color as Fluttershy’s) but resembled doctor hooves main style. His eyes were the color of the sun, so bright. “Fluttershy” yelled the young colt as he in braced her in a giant hug. “I missed you so much; the house back in Canterlot is so boring without you”.

Applejack and the other cutie mark crusaders all looked at each other in confusion (what could Fluttershy do that would make something less boring, if anything should would make it more boring.) Any who Fluttershy introduced her friends.”Razzle this is Applejack”, “Howdy” yelled Applejack interrupting Fluttershy. “And this is Scootaloo, Sweetiebell, and Applebloom.” The yellow earth pony and the Pegasus’s eyes met.”Howdy I’m Applebloom”. “Uh hi I’m Razzle.” Both of them blushing after words, Scootaloo and Sweetiebell looked at each other in confusion at the looks in their eyes both of them thinking “why is Applebloom acting so shy?” Asked Sweetiebell. Applejack leaned right next to Fluttershy and Whispered “I aint think we need x-ray vision to see what’s going on here” Fluttershy just giggled and nodded quickly at Applejack. “So how was the trip from Canterlot, oh-uh- but if you don’t want to tell me that’s fine.” “It was great” Razzle said with excitement “all the ponies I have met in Ponyville so far are so nice, not like all the snooty ponies in Canterlot.” “Well that’s great” Fluttershy said happily. “Here let me show you to your room” as the two walked Applejack looked at Applebloom with a sarcastic grin “So you like the new colt” she said with a wink. Applebloom turned beet red “to be honest I really do like him.” Applebloom said this with a sparkle in her eyes from the thought of Razzle. After that all you could here was the loud giggling coming Sweetiebell and Scootaloo.

Later that day when Razzle had, the cutie mark crusaders showed him to their clubhouse in hope he would want to join their odd clan. Scootaloo and Sweetiebell just kept talking in excitement to find out that Razzle and Applebloom were zoned out in each other’s eyes. “Eh um” shouted Scootaloo, were here. Razzle looked in aw “wow you guys built this.” “Yep shore did” yelled Applebloom hoping he would be impressed. The four ponies went inside and the cutie mark crusaders showed him around a bite. Then out of no were the tree of them shouted a question at the same timed like the practiced it before.”SO DO YOU WANT TO JOIN THE CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS?” “You know I do” said Razzle in delight. Sweetiebell started to giggle in tell it turned into a full laughter. “What’s so funny” said Applebloom in a mad tone because the colt that she likes could be being picked on. “It’s his accent; it’s really funny, in a good way. Razzle laughed with here. Razzle had a very deep Australian accent. “Yeah I guess it’s a little funny” said Applebloom starting to giggle. Scootaloo looked at Razzle in confusion “how come you never say mate.” “Oh, because every pony expects me to say since I’m from Austallion, I learned to stop saying it to confuse people” Razzle just stood there and smiled proud of his accomplishment. “Why” asked Sweetiebell. “It’s just humorous to me.”

Just then there was a loud knock at the door. Scootaloo went and opened it ajar and asked “who’s there”. “It’s Rarity” Rarity said this holding out the y in her name, and Rainbowdash. They walked into the room to see Sweetiebell and Scootaloo jumping up in the air in excitement.

“There’s a really big storm coming by the weather team, Scoots come on were going home.” Sweetiebell and Applebloom were still happy that Rainbowdash had taken in there homeless friend for a little while, but everypony know that Rainbowdash is probably going to adopt her. Scootaloo cheered in excitement “ok lets go home Dash.” “Shore thing kido, wait who’s the new kid.” Applebloom jumped up with a scream of joy “this Razzle Dazzle, Razzle for short; he’s Fluttershy’s younger brother and are newest member.” “Oh Razzle, I remember seeing you when you were just a little foal, you had the cutest eyes.” Rarity said this like she knew everything about Razzle.” “Yeah Razzle, I remember you to, and I see you still have that awesome pink mane.” “Yep, shore do” he exclaimed, happy that someone didn’t find his mane filly like. “Ok see you around kid” after rainbow said that she flew out the window at top speed with scootaloo wrapped around her back. Rarity looked at Razzle and yelped “those hideous colors” and walked on in a gruff with Sweetiebell. “Don’t listen to Rarity she’s a fashion pony, and don’t worry she’s still jealous of your eyes; and I think your colors are beautiful.” Applebloom said the last part with a sparkle in her eyes.

As they looked at each other peacefully a huge streak of lightning and thunder hit their senses. It started to rain harder than either of the two ponies have ever seen it rain. “We should stay in this here clubhouse for the night” Applebloom said boarding up the windows with planks of wood. Razzle agreed and looked for any materials he could find to survive frost bite. The pony turned up with one heavy blanket and a small mattress. “Looks like will have the share” Razzle said this turning beet red.

Applebloom did the same. Razzle was thought it was funny that that the first day he meet Applebloom he would get to sleep with her. He chuckled to himself at the joke he just made. “What’s so funny?” Applebloom asked in a curious tone “Oh I thought it was funny that the first day we met were sleeping together.” At first Applebloom was a little mad at the statement but ended up fining the humor in it. “Yeah I guess that a little funny” Applebloom said giggling. “You know, I really am I got to join this awesome club of yours, back in canterlot I’m the only one without a cutie mark” Razzle said the last part with a hint of sadness in his voice. Applebloom sighed at the statement “I’m pretty shore Scootaloo, Sweetiebell and I are the only ones without a cutie mark in Ponyville; we always get picked on by two other fillies at school.” “Well what do they say?” “They call use blank flanks.”Razzle looked up and asked “what are their cutie marks.” “Diamondtiara has a diamond tiara and Silverspoon, well, has a silver spoon. Razzle just looked at Applebloom and laughed. Applebloom had no idea what he was laughing about. “Who, who…” Razzle was still bursting with laughter. When he finally stopped he got his words. “Who wants that on their flank as a talent, I bet the only thing that stands for is being snobby.” Applebloom looked up at him, herself laughing “I’m glad there’s finally a pony standing up for me” Applebloom ran over and gave Razzle a big hug. Razzle stopped laughing and returned the jester.

When they broke apart from their embrace Razzle started laughing again. “I mean come on what special talent does that even show, all I can think of is selling the two items. Applebloom started to laugh as well “and is it kind of ironic that their names are there cutie marks.” Razzle sighed “well we probably don’t want to throw them under the bus to hard; we don’t want to look like the bullies.” “Yeah you’re probably right. When the filly and the colt were finished with their conversation it was late into the night. The two cozzied up onto the mattress and fell asleep. Both of them dreaming of one another.

Back at Fluttershy’s cottage Applejack was forced to stay the night by the weather conditions. Fluttershy was in tears “I can’t believe the first day Razzle came to visit I abandoned him” The yellow Pegasus continued to sob, she wanted to go outside and get him but Applejack wouldn’t. Fluttershy was happy one of her friends was over to comfort her and let her vent out all of her sadness. “I’m shore they made it to the house, and shoot even if they didn’t that club house of here’s is a sturdy as a lid on a pickle jar. Fluttershy couldn’t help but giggle at this. But right after her mind went bad to bad thoughts that may have happened to the two. Applejack and Fluttershy already got word from Rainbowdash that Sweetiebell and Scootaloo were safe. “It will be alright sugar cube there love will keep them safe.

Author's Note

Well guys first chapter, i want everypony to share this chapter if they think it is good. It is about 1700 words, i do think you will enjoy it.If i have enough good comments i will continue.