This story is short yes,
but I got an editor and the cover art was made by a wonderful artist, called Ruirik,
who has a story going called Fire and Rain, go check it out.
The editor who helped me on this story is Sojourner, he also has a great story going, Unbound .
Go check them out, and if you liked this story please give it a favorite, thumbs up, or just leave a comment, I would be grateful.