Hidden and Alive

by StarPowner

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance, Comedy, Adventure, Random, Dark
Length: 611

Alve was always thinking the ponies around are mean to eachother, untill he meets a pony that will change his live forever.

Alve, a blue-black pony always lived in the everfree forest, away from everyone. After years of being alone he meets another pony, that takes him to ponyville, to go and make some friends.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-01-21 17:31:52 UTC

Second Contact

Hidden and alive a story by Starpowner

Chapter 1: second contact

It was a night, and the moon was shining proudly. I walked through the forest, seeing an owl in my stroll. It stared to me. I shoke my head and went to my house, in the middle of the Everfree Forest. Oh wait, I haven’t told who I am yet. Well, I’m Alve Gathear. I know it’s a pretty strange name but hey, I haven’t knew my parents! I invented it by myself for fun! I live in the Everfree Forest, not having contact with anyone because the only time I saw someone, that was lost in the forest, he was pretty mean to me so I don’t want to see any other people anymore. I don’t trust anybody.

As I neared my house, I saw a silhouette behind the window of my old, wooden shed. ‘Who ever found out where my house is!!!??? And even goes in it! Maybe it wants to steal my furniture, that I made myself!’ As I walked to the door a picked up a plank with my mouth, as defend for if it attacks me.

I was standing at the front door. The door was already opened. I ran inside and in my head I was thinking I am going to scream something like ‘Leeroy Jenkins!!!’. I immediately turned on the lights. I saw a yellow pony standing there. It has a pink mane, and a cutie mark that showed 3 pink butterflies. It, or I actually have to say ‘she’ looked in shock up at me. We were just standing there for I think 30 seconds. I could see she was scared, and didn’t want to steal or hurt me. She began to talk; ‘oh I’m sorry… I was just looking for Angel. I’ve lost her again…’. ‘Who’s Angel?’ I said, looking a bit confused right now. ‘My bunny’ she said, with a silent voice. I looked around. ‘I haven’t seen him’ I said. She responded: ‘oh well, I will go then… I didn’t want to annoy you.’

She walked to the door. I looked a bit confused to what just happened. As she step her first hoof outside door I turned to her. ‘wait!’. She looked back at me. ‘I could help you finding him, you’re the first pony I’ve ever talked to, except for an insulting lost pony I met once.’ She smiled a little. ‘that would be nice.’

‘I think its better to search tomorrow, because its night right now and it is not easy to search for something if it is dark.’ I said. She stepped back inside my house. ‘Yes.’ Was all she responded. ‘But my house is a hour of walking away… and its too dangerous to go trough the forest right now. As you maybe know about Timberwolves?’ She asked. ‘Yea, I see them sometimes out of my window at night.’ ‘You could stay here until its day again if you want. I don’t care.’ She cheered. ‘Thank you!’ I looked to a chair, I once made of cotton I’ve found in the forest. ‘If you want you may sleep there.’ I pointed to the soft chair. ‘Or I will sleep there so you can sleep in my bed.’ I saw she was thinking. ‘I will sleep on the settee.’ She smiled.

Well, this is my first story I’ve ever wrote so if you got any tips, please tell meh! Critism is welcome, as long it is not too bad. :D

Every chapter I make will be a little longer, so I will get better at writing every time.

Hope ya liked it!