Calm before the Storm alternate ending

by pikachu sparkle

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Sad, Dark
Length: 751

the first few paragraphs are NOT my work read the actual story before reading real story written by thunder seethe and please dont be a grammer nazi

Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are thrown into a war between the three races of Equestria. They must determine where their loyalties lie, and for whom they are fighting for.

Inspired by JWoodony's song, "Calm Before the Storm."

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-01-29 02:03:22 UTC

Better Alternate ending

When I awoke I saw two unicorn guard's counting the total dead pegasi among them was Fluttershy's body I saw it and went mad but when i tired to flap my wings to burst into the clouds. I remembered the whole in my wing mainly due to the massive pain through my wing, when i screamed in pain the two unicorns jumped as they turned and yelled "we have a live one over here".

They started to walk away, when a lavender purple unicorn approached, Twilight Sparkle.

She began to cry as her horn came to life and i started to feel the warmth of the magic envelope me i began to scream"Twilight please PLEASE don't kill me I cant die I just cant." Rainbow began to cry the unicorn simply smiled. "Oh really why should I spare your life unlike Fluttershy over there but i guess since you asked nicely and everything...Just kidding i didn't kill Fluttershy but scirously why should i let you live unlike these other pegasi?"

Rainbow began to feel a feeling of blistering rage at the mention of Fluttershy's but,she didnt snap on Twilight for the sake of her life.

"You don't get it we WERE friends at one point why cant we go back to being that way it used to be when we were friend's I just can't stand to loose another friend during this retched war!"

The unicorn stood there with a smile on her face still knowing she had the upper hand but something told her to let go of ranibow with her magic so she did so. "well i don't know how could you be helpful to the unicorn's?"

Twilight asked still bearing a smile but with less enthusiasm this time.

"i could help being a eye in the sky and be a spy for the unicorn's."

Dash said with life straining in her eye's .

"well OK I guess I could spare the rules this time in the meaning of our friendship." Twilight said with full apathy.

With a flash of yellow magic Princess Celestia appeared.

She had a look of disappointment on her face as she said "Twilight i expected better of you I expected you to be strong like you said you would be when you were signing up to be a commander a Bravo team."with that said Celestia's horn began to glow a vibrant yellow as Rainbow was lifted in the air ahe screamed in pain as Twilight heard a snap from rainbows front left leg then from her right leg

Twilight screamed in terror before yelling"NO! LEAVE HER ALONE BEFORE I MAKE YOU!"

This caught Celestia of guard as she looked at Twilight as she set the half broken sky-blue Pegasus on the ground.

"Oh and how do exactly plan to do that you worthless pathetic whore! I'm the ruler of equestria the most powerful being on this planet, I'd love to see you even try..." she was caught of guard as she was enveloped in a magenta purple aura surrounding her body when her bones began to snap she let out screams of pain as she did this Twilight smirked and said "Oh is that right then if your so powerful then why dont you stop me from ending your life right now."

Celestia tired to reason with the lavender unicorn but to no avail as her bones began to continue to snap.Until her whole body snapped in half rainbow only seeing the last moments of this tragic performance because she was to busy crying in pain but she turned to twilight with life vanishing from her eye's before saying in a very faint voice "Twilight can you do me one more favor while im gone?"

Twilight looked to her with tears in her eye's "NO you cant die you just cant die on me i can cast some magic and heal you before you die and you'll be fine and we can live together like the good O'll day's."

Rainbow giving a weak smile before talking again"no please just let me die it's better this way,just do me one favor while I'm gone. Be strong for me Twilight dont cry in sadness while im gone remember me for who i was.and scince this the last time we'll ever get the chance to see each other again." she reached up to Twilight a friend kind of kiss before she fell lifelessly to the ground and her eye's shut and became cold.