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Love Can Suck

by DuBrony
Looks like you're getting lucky with a pony tonight... too bad she's not interested in your looks. Or love, for that matter.

( A second-person human narrative. Warning, blood's gonna spill and love's gonna fill the air, if you know what I mean!)

After flirting with a special somepony for a month, she finally asks you to go out on a date with her. Reluctantly, you meet her outside of the Everfree Forest, where she lives. She escorts you to her house, and you shut the door behind you, a wonderful scent filling your wanting nostrils. She glides past you and walks in a room. A moment later she appears, dressed in a fine black garment. Her grin is pristine white and dazzling. Something about her makes you want to scream and hide, but your heart aches for her. You smile; things couldn't possibly go wrong... what's the worst that could happen?

Edit: I made another picture (spoiler, in case you haven't read!), you can find it here. (Warning: First-person, and a quite a bit of blood!)

Edit 2: Wow, 500 views? I didn't think a story as sickening as this would get so much appreciation...
but my next one isn't going to have an ending as sad as this. Actually, I don't think it could get any worse... but, thank you for reading! I look forward to another large-ish crowd on my next fic!

Complete
Sex
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Human
Romance
 
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4006 words: Estimated 20 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. The 'Date' 2013-01-24 16:20:52 UTC
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  2. Epilogue 2013-01-26 09:27:37 UTC
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