Nightmare Star's Revenge

by Jack of a Few Trades

Rating: teen
Tags: Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Romance, Princess Luna, Original Character, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Tragedy, Main 6
Length: 1001

This time Celestia will die. (writers stuff) Please excuse grammar problems im very lazy :D.

This is a story where once friendly Nightmare Star is sent to live on the stars for 1,000,000 years and has come back for some great revenge.

Published 2013-01-31 23:30:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-01-31 23:30:02 UTC

A Surprise Visit

             Chapter 1

    A Surprise Visit

It was over Nightmare Moon was gone.  they were surprised to see to 3 ponies 2 medium size one the size of Celestia. when the dust cleared they were even more surprised to see of them looking strangely kin. one got up to help the others up saying get up mainshep you to luna then mainshep says while getting up does it look like I love the ground Nightmare. Then Nightmare  noticed the other 7 just starring at them with unexplainable faces. the star ponies are back home also then Nightmare star snapping back at her that they had names. Then readdressing them well it looks like Nightmare Star and Mainshep have come back home to. You want a present looking like he was about to attack. Everyone glaring at him because of his Very deep voice. I still remember how mother and father told you to end my life and right there you did but something happened and nobody liked who they saw NIGHTMARE STAR me in my Nightmare Form everyone scared to death you all sent me to the star DO YOU KNOW WHAT HELL MY LIFE HAS BEEN. they saw the darkness in me in the future FROM THERE MISTAKE but now now In more than one form. We all could have lived such a great life but YOU LISTENED AND KILLED YOUR TWIN. now let me give some of your Great Friends some knowledge After killing me I was taken and given another chance FOR MY OWN SOUL I was told to never forgive and forget all of the things done Mom and Dad hated me you were both loved For injustice I was forgiven Now You 6 In the past I worked in a place called the Rainbow Factory One of you were born there after discovery I was Sentenced to death BY MY OWN PARENTS now I know Mainshep is about to side with Celestia and one of you want to side with me. I don’t know who though if you want to help me get my justice I will keep the same rules and raise the sun and moon (Rainbow Dash) ME! “GASP” (everyone but Nightmare and Rainbow Dash look astonished at Rainbow Dash and the Alicorn Nightmare) (RainbowDash) Just don't hurt my friends please (Nightmare) As you wish Thank you for helpfulness and understanding. only one hurt will be celestia if you want to see how much of good idea that was fire a friendship rainbow at me I won’t dodge or anything and I Won’t be hurt. (Rainbow Dash) are you sure it took out Nightmare Moon? (Nightmare Star) Yeah im sure go ahead. Silence as the fire at him not doing anything to him. (Nightmare Star) Didn’t Hurt hehe. (Celestia) This is madness Nightmare there doesn’t need to be any more fighting. (Nightmare Star) Hm easy for you to say. Come on Rainbow Dash when your ready (Whispers where he will be at and leaves) (Fluttershy) Well Rainbow Dash if its ok but why are you going with that mean pony

(Rainbow Dash) I don’t know it just feels right (Twilight sparkle) But Rainbow Dash he wants to hurt us. (Rainbow Dash) he doesn’t want to hurt us he wants revenge on Celestia im leaving now I don’t want anymore of this (Applejack) Woo nelly you aren’t going know where. (Rainbow dash) There my wings. i’l go were I want. were going above the Celestia!

The Beast Inside

                                                         Chapter 2

                                                                                           The Beast Inside

Nightmare Mumbling as Rainbow dash entered the cold dark room. (Rainbow Dash) Is there any lights? (Nightmare Star) No but i can make some fire (Poof) fire (Rainbow Dash awed in amazement) Wow how you do that (Nightmare Star) Perk of having a heart of fire. (Rainbow Dash) Was that a metaphor? (Nightmare Star) No. (Rainbow Dash) Im kind of getting (Nightmare Star) me to and sorry I don’t have anything for us I MEAN you to sleep on. I don’t have any bits. (Rainbow Dash) Its alright you don’t have control of that. (Nightmare Star) Well I got an idea (Flies out of the cave and then comes back with a cloud). There something softer than the ground. (Rainbow Dash) Thanks Nightmare (Smiling back to him) (Nightmare Star) anything for a friend of mine. Oh wait sorry you barely know me. (Rainbow Dash) Well I am helping you get revenge. thats a friend in my book. (Nightmare Star giving a little grin) (Rainbow Dash) Well Good Night (Nightmare Star) Good Night (Saying under his breath) buddy... (Next day) (Rainbow Dash) SHHHH don't wake him up (Pinkie Pie) IM SORRY RAINBOW DASH

(Nightmare Star) waa huh HEY BACK OFF (Twilight Sparkle) We don't want to hurt you (Nightmare Star Goes invisible) (Twilight Sparkle)  You Tell us he could do that (Rainbow Dash) all I know is he can make fire out of thin air (Nightmare Star) I hate spies. (Rainbow Dash) Im not a spy. come out they want to help us. (Rarity) Can we hurry this up there is dirt everywhere. (Twilight Sparkle) Are friend made a decision. may have been a dumb decision, but we are friends that what we do. if your her friend then your are friends to. (Nightmare Star de cloaks and says) Well then I guess your my friends then. You are? (Fluttershy) flu flu fluttershy (Nightmare giving his hoof out) Nice to meet you. (the rest of them giving him there names him shaking there hoof then Twilight suggesting showing Nightmare Ponyville) (Nightmare Star) Wow things really changed, but after a millions years thats what you got to expect. (Rainbow Dash) What was it like back then. (Nightmare Star) Paradise Fields of green grass, Rivers, Trees all the wonders you could think of just waiting for you. Till Celestia killed them. (Rainbow Dash) Who (Nightmare Star) My friends are brothers and sisters merciless killing spree. I CANT LET THAT HAPPEN AGAIN.