The Elegance of Nature

by Lightning Star

Chapter 1

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It was a rainy night when it happened. I was walking home with some new materials I wanted to try out in my dresses. About a block away from home I heard a peculiar sound coming from the the alleyway. Normally I would have disregarded it as some stray animal or something else of the sorts; but there was something strange about this sound. Against my better judgement I went into the alleyway to investigate.

To my horror what I found in the alleyway was Fluttershy, and the sound was her crying. I immediately ran to her aid.

"Fluttershy!" I shouted. "What's wrong?!" The only thing I was given as a response were soft whimpers. When I leaned in closer to examine her for injuries, a foul stench met my nostrils. It was a stench I recognized: stallion juices! But that's impossible, she's wearing my old...I gasped in horror when I looked to the side and saw the chastity belt I had given to her tossed aside like a piece of rubbish. It didn't take me long deduce what had happen. "Oh Celestia!" I shouted as I grabbed her and took her to my house. As fast a bolt of lightning I snatched up the phone and rang the police. "Hello police? My friend was just...she was just raped!" The police officer on the phone assured me that everything would be fine and somepony would be over right away.

I set down the phone and turned my attention to Fluttershy. She was curled up on my couch still whimpering. I leaned down and put my hoof on her shoulder. "Darling, everything is going just fine. The police are on their way and they'll catch that low-life who did this." But I realized that it would not change the fact that what happened happened.

Fluttershy valued her virginity second only to that of the lives of animals. She had wanted to save herself for the special somepony she decided to spend the rest of her life with. She wanted this so much that she even asked me for my old chastity belt that mother forced me to wear in my teenage years. She once confessed to me that she fantasized about her husband slipping her out of her wedding dress, giving the key to him, him removing the lock from her and taking her virginity.

And now, all of those dreams have been taken from her. Her virginity, her purity, her dreams, all taken in a single night by some putrid stallion!

I realized that our friends needed to know about what had happen. I picked up the phone again and rang Twilight.

"Ugh." She grunted. "Hello?"

"Twilight it's me."

"What do you want Rarity? Do you have any idea what time it is?"

Why the nerve! I had half a mind just to hang up on her. But I remembered that moods such as hers were normal for a pregnant mare. Mother was even worse when she had Sweetie Belle. "It's Fluttershy Twilight. She was...raped!"

I could hear Twilight gasp on the other end of line. "I'll get the other mares and be right over!"

My friends arrived before the police did. What on Equestria is taking them so long? The mares were shocked to see the state Fluttershy was in.

"Shy?" Applejack said when she approached her. "Shy it's me, Applejack. Were all here Shy." Fluttershy kept on whimpering. She was clearly traumatized by the event. Applejack stamped her hoof on the ground. "When ah find the no good varmint who done did this ta her, ah'm gonna buck his apples right off!"

The other mares had no more luck talking to her either. I asked Twilight if she could do anything for her.

"Surely you must have some sort spell to help her!" I pleaded.

Twilight just shook her head. "Sorry Rarity, this has to do with her mind. Not even Celestia herself could help her."

Finally the police arrived. A tall stallion in a blue uniform entered the house and looked at Fluttershy.

"I take it she was the victim " We all nodded. The police officer approached Fluttershy. "Ma'am I'm going to need you to sit up and tell me what happened."

Fluttershy sat up and the officer took a seat across from her.

"There's not much to say..." She said timidly. "I was walking into town so I could pick up some food for my animals."

"This late at night?"

"I forgot to pick up dinner for them. There's this twenty-four hour store that sells pet food that I was going to."

"All-Nighter's" Pinkie said.

"Yes I know. Please go on."

"I cut through an alleyway to make my trip shorter. Then a unicorn moved a dumpster in front of me. I turned around and saw his face. He had a scary, evil smile. The next thing I knew he pinned me down and started whispering dirty things in my ear.." She started to tear up. "When he saw my chastity belt...he tore it off like it was nothing...then he...he..." She burst into tears.

The police officer closed his notebook. "So he used magic?"

"Y-yes."

"Ok. We'll get a team of unicorns out there ASAP to track him down." He nodded and left.

Pinkie tried to cheer Fluttershy up. "Here that Fluttershy? They're going to catch him, lock him up for a million-bagillion years, give him a hundred lashes, maybe even give him a hard hoofing up his..." Suddenly Pinkie hugged Fluttershy. Then we all did.

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