Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestriaby bricannChaptersChapter 2: Next Stop CanterlotChapter 3: A Royal ChatChapter 4: TroubleChapter 5: Should We Do It?Chapter 6: Escape is Necessary (And Life)Chapter 7: A Troubling RevivalChapter 8: Meetings and NegotiationsChapter 9: The Moment Of TruthChapter 1: Where are we?Author's NoteChapter 2: Next Stop Canterlot***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 2: Next Stop Canterlot*** As they enter Twilight’s tree house, Akiza and Luna take a moment in awe. Twilight smiled, “This is my home. As well as my own library. Okay now, back to what we were planning to do; Write a note to the Princess. Spike!” “Yeah Twi- whoa! What- who, um... hi,” Spike jumbled words seemed to bounce around the room. “What new surprises will they have in store? First unicorns and pegasi, and now purple and green dragons! What’s next?” Akiza asked in a low whisper. “I don’t know. But we are on another planet, so I guess anything is possible,” Luna said. “I hope you’re right,” Akiza said. After that, they listened in on Twilight and Spike’s conversation. “Okay, Spike, listen, these are humans from another planet. Their names are Akiza and Luna. They were sent here for no reason by what they know of, but that is all I know. For now, I need you to take a note to the Princess,” Twilight explained. Spike pulled out a paper and a quill. “Tell me what to write,” he said proudly. “My dearest teacher, I hope you have felt the dimensional disturbance as you do, with you being immortal. I have two creatures here that come from another planet; in which I believe you might need to talk to. I have them right with me. I ask that you help me and tell me what to do. Your faithful student, Twilight Sparkle” and with that, Spike rolled up the paper and blew a green flame onto the paper in which it flew out the window as sparkling, green smoke. No later than 2 minutes, Spike did a loud burp and a roll of paper appeared from his mouth and landed on the floor. He handed it to Twilight's magic grip, “Here, Twilight.” Twilight grabbed the piece of paper with her magic and read it out loud: “Dear Twilight Sparkle, I appreciate you telling me of your discovery. As I felt the magical disturbance, I worried it would fall into the wrong hands. Now that I know that you have these creatures, you speak of, I might be able to get some more rest. But, I need you to bring these creatures and your friends so I can talk with them. Please come to Canterlot at your earliest convenience. Your loving mentor, Princess Celestia” “Who’s this ‘Princess Celestia?’” Luna asked. “She and her sister Princess Luna are the rulers of this land. They are immortal, as well as they are a rare type of pony, an Alicorn, a pony with both wings and a horn. Princess Celestia can raise the sun while Princess Luna can raise the moon. They are kind and wise, as well,” Twilight answered; proud with her answer and knowledge. “Oh! So it’s not bloodline that makes them a princess? It’s their power and type they are? And isn’t it strange that my name is the same as your Princess Luna? But, then again, where we come from, your parents name you and it is different on our world,” Luna said questioning her own thoughts. “Yep! That about sums it up. I have to admit, it is strange that your name is the same as our Princess,” Rainbow Dash says in another proud tone. But the proud tone, turned to concern at her last thought. Akiza looks down at her arm with her mark. At the corner of her eye she once again captures sight of something on her other arm. It was her duel disc! She looked at Luna’s arm and she also had her duel disc. Next thing she noticed was that they had their decks. “Luna! Look at your dueling arm,” So Luna did. Only to notice her duel disc and deck; as well as noticing Akiza’s deck and duel disc, as well. “Akiza, why do we have our duel disc? Why will we need them in a place with peace? As Twilight states,” Luna ask more frightened than ever before. ‘If we have their duel discs, that means that...’ she thought. In the badlands a creature with a coat as black as night, bug like wings, and holes in the crooked horn, mane, and hooves. It felt it. When it did, it calm eyes burst open and gave an evil grin. “Ha! Ha! We need to find that creature. The creature that slipped through the dimensional gate. So we can get our revenge and take over Canterlot once again!” the bug-like creature said to her subjects, “Send out a search party! Time to go hunting.” Back in Ponyville, as suddenly as it seems, Regulus and Ancient Fairy Dragon appear in front of Luna. “Regulus! Ancient Fairy Dragon!” Luna burst out. “Who and what are you talking to?” Rainbow Dash asked as if Luna had gone crazy. “You see this deck? It has creatures called duel monsters in it. Luna can talk to the spirits of the duel monsters. Her three main duel monster friends are: Kuribon, Regulus, and Ancient Fairy Dragon. Not only can she talk to them, she can enter their world. I wish I could see them though. It must be a well deserved pleasure to talk to creatures as friendly and nice as the duel monsters. Even though when they are in battle, they can be fierce; they are kind and loving to their duelist,” Akiza explained “Maybe I can help. I have a spell so you can talk and see any spirit. Luna, is that okay with you?” Luna nodded in return. Twilight started the spell and cast it upon the room. Less than a minute later, every pony and person in the room could see Regulus and Ancient Fairy Dragon. A blue dragon was the first to speak, “I’m Ancient Fairy Dragon.” A white lion with a gold mane was the next and last to speak, “I am Regulus.” “Now Regulus, Ancient Fairy Dragon, what is it that you wanted to tell me?” Luna asked. She had a look of concern. Regulus started off, “You have come here along with Akiza to help fight the evil that is heading this way.” “It comes to capture you and Akiza to use you for its own evil purposes. We don’t know its name nor what it is, but, what we do know is that it seeks revenge,” Ancient Fairy Dragon finished. “Do you know what this creature looks like?” Pinkie Pie asked. “I am afraid not. All we know is the motives and what it plans. As well as, why Akiza and Luna are here. But we must go for now. Just remember Luna, we will always be here to protect you,” and with that, Regulus and Ancient Fairy Dragon disappear, along with the spell on the library. “Any more surprises do you have in store for us?” Rainbow Dash asked with a little bitterness. “Well, I can make duel monsters become real with my psychic powers. Just don’t get me furious, or else I will lose control of my powers. I can also make my monsters create real damage,” Akiza said nonchalant like. While Luna took a look at Akiza and back to the three ponies, Twilight, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie all just stared as they tried to soak it in. Twilight was the first to break out of her trance, “Okay, Rainbow Dash, do you think you could go get Fluttershy and Applejack, while we go get Rarity?” “Totally! Where should we meet up?” Rainbow Dash answered; you could tell she was excited for an adventure. “Let’s meet at the train station. From there, we will get on the train and head to Canterlot,” Twilight Sparkle concluded. As soon as she finished Rainbow Dash burst out of the door. “Alright Akiza, Luna come with me and Pinkie Pie. Just as a fair warning, you may get a lot of stares from other ponies. Also you may need another way to get to Canterlot. The train is meant to fit us, ponies. Not so much of a bigger type of pony. How are you going to get there?” Twilight asked thinking. “I got that covered,” Akiza said winking at Luna. Luna understood what she meant and nodded in approval. “Okay,” Twilight stated confused; and with that, they left to get Rarity. As soon as they reached the train station, they watched as Akiza and Luna brought out Ancient Fairy Dragon and Black Rose Dragon. They watched as Akiza and Luna hopped onto their dragons as though as they were not just some spirit. “Twi, ya mind fillin' us in some more?” Applejack asked, completely confused. “I will on the train. For now, let’s get to Canterlot,” Twilight said. They boarded the train, while Akiza and Luna took off to the skies. Traveling close behind so they could stay with their new friends. Luna was slightly afraid but having far more fun. After all, who is able to do this when they're out of the Spirit World? Chapter 3: A Royal Chat***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 3: A Royal Chat*** As they walked through the streets of Canterlot, Akiza and Luna looked in every direction. Different colors and types of ponies were everywhere. This was quite an amazement and shock to them. Not only were they in amazement and shock, but so were the citizens of Canterlot. Ponies stared as Akiza and Luna walked. They whispered and wondered about what they are and what they are doing in Canterlot. They soon walked up to the gate of the castle. The guards stopped them. “You are Twilight Sparkle, are you not?” “Yes,” Twilight said in a flat, even tone. “What is your business with these creatures you are bring?” one guard asked. “I found them in the Everfree forest while looking for a friend who lives there. I am taking them to Princess Celestia out of her directions,” Twilight said. “Very well, you may pass,” the other guard said. They let the group pass. Akiza and Luna ducking their heads a couple inches so they wouldn’t hit their heads. But, the guards never let them out of their range of sight. Once they were in the castle it was the other guards doing. They walk slowly through the halls. Akiza and Luna took in every detail; Every crack and molding, every design and shape. To them it was like something you would see in a fairytale. They soon enter the princess’ throne room. The two princesses sitting on top of their thrones. Twilight and her friends bowed. Seeing this, Akiza and Luna bowed as well. “You may rise,” Princess Celestia said. Akiza and Luna; Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. They stared at each other in disbelief. Both trying to soak in the fact that they are real beings. Princess Celestia was the one to break the silence, “Who and what are you? I can feel great power surging through you both.” Luna was the first to say her name, “My name is Luna.” Akiza was the second, “My name is Akiza. We are humans from the planet Earth. We are also signers and have abilities.” “What are signers? I suppose they are something that comes from your planet,” Princess Luna asks in confusion. “Every five thousand years, five signers are chosen to do battle against people called Dark Signers and their Earthbound Immortals. Me and Luna are two of the five signers. The other three are on Earth,” Akiza said, “But that is not all we have on Earth. Signers are also chosen due to their skill as a duelist.” “What do you mean by duelist?” Princess Celestia asks. She seemed like she thought it as killing someone else. Akiza and Luna, hold up their duel discs. Luna is the one to speak this time, “This is a duel disc. You can use this to battle each other for fun; and this is a deck with duel monsters in them.” “Luna can speak to the duel monsters’ spirits from the Spirit World. Even the duel monsters that are in the cards.” Akiza explained further. Princess Luna looked surprised and confused, “How is that possible?” Akiza answers the question in a calm and even voice, "It is like how I can make these cards become real and can create real damage if necessary. These cards have real beings inside them. Luna can talk and enter their world. I can make them become real. Not some holographic display. You can just ask them,” Akiza pointed to the six colorful ponies behind them, “They have seen it with their own eyes.” Princess Celestia smiles and says, “Well, you certainly have extraordinary abilities. I believe you should return home and say hello to your friends.” Luna spoke up shyly, “Your highness, we don’t know how to get back. Let alone the fact the reason we’re here... is to help you fight an evil who wants revenge.” “Where did you get this information?” Princess Celestia says concerned. “A couple spirit friends of mine. Their names are Regulus and Ancient Fairy Dragon. They told me that a danger is coming. A danger seeking revenge,” Luna answered. She was genuinely concerned and Princess Celestia could sense that. The princesses looked at each other and nodded in approval. “Thank you for this information,” Princess Luna said. Back on Earth, Yusei, Jack, and Crow are in the garage working on the new engine, “So, Yusei, have you seen the twins or Akiza lately?” Jack asked. “Afraid not; and I have a bad feeling about it,” Yusei said. Suddenly Yusei’s Mark of the Dragon lights up. He looks up to see that Jack and Crow’s is lighting up, too, “Hey guys, what’s up with our marks?” Yusei asks. “I don’t know, Yusei. What do you think?” Crow asked. “I don't know but, my mark is telling me something,” Yusei said, and he placed his hand on his mark. The others did the same. “Akiza!” Luna said as she fell down a cliff. She grabbed a small ledge. “Luna!” Akiza called from the top, “Grab my hand!” Luna reaches for Akiza’s hand and slips. She screams, “AKIZA! HELP!” Next thing you know she falls into the water. Yusei came back to reality, “Did you guys see that?” “Yeah, Yusei. We need to find Akiza and Luna; and fast,” Jack said in a determined voice. “My mark is telling me that they’re not here, Jack,” Yusei said. “Of course they’re not here!” Jack says as if Yusei was an idiot. “I mean not on this planet, Jack. They are not on this planet!” Yusei says as if it is a big deal. “But, Yusei, how is that even possible?” Crow asks. Yusei looked down, “I don’t know, Crow. But it's possible. Just like...” Yusei looked up and saw their duel runners. They had a red glow around them. As if, the power from their marks was surging through their duel runners. “You guys, let’s ride!” They got onto their duel runners and drove off onto the highway. Just as they entered the speedway, the Crimson Dragon appeared. “Hey, Yusei! Doesn’t all five signers have to be here in order to summon the Crimson Dragon?” Crow asked. “Yeah, but it obviously wants to do something with us; and it must have to do with our friends,” Yusei replied. “So then what are we waiting for?” Jack asked. “You heard him. If you have someway to help our friends, lead the way,” Yusei said to the Crimson Dragon. With that, the Crimson Dragon roared and soon they went faster than light and disappeared. To where they will be, they do not know. Chapter 4: Trouble***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 4: Trouble*** “Ugh,” Yusei looks around to see his two friends laying next to him. They start to wake and stand, “Jack? Crow? Where are we?” “I don’t know Yusei. But I am guessing, since the Crimson Dragon brought us here, this is where Luna and Akiza will be,” Crow said. Buzzzzz... a quiet buzz sound came from around them. “Wait. Did you guys hear that?” Yusei asked. “Yeah, sounded like a bug,” Jack said. Suddenly a black figure with bug-like wings and a horn with holes appeared in front of them. It grabbed Yusei and pulled him into the shadows. “Yusei!” Crow asked and they ran after him. Only when they found him, they all got knocked out. In the Canterlot castle, Akiza and Luna are talking to the princesses. Akiza and Luna telling them about what has happened to them on Earth, while the Princesses tell of their experience and battles. Just as Luna is about to tell them how she saved her Ancient Fairy Dragon, their marks lit up. The marks felt like a small burning sensation on their arms. “What is happening? You never said your marks light up,” Princess Celestia demanded. “Well, we didn’t think they would, heck, they barely ever light up,” Akiza replied, “I think my friends, the rest of the signers, are here somehow. By what my mark is telling me, they are in some serious trouble.” “No kidding, my mark is telling me that... that they have been captured by something! In all honesty, I think it is the creature that wants revenge,” Luna looked up at Princess Celestia with sincere concern in her eyes. “In other words, we need to save them and fast. They are the best duelists I know. If they get them on their side... this is not going to end well.” Princess Luna face went into severe concern but says in a calm, cool voice, “I have an idea who it might be. I can feel it.” “Who do you-- Oh my! You don’t think it is, do you?” Celestia asked her face showing the terror she felt. “I do; and I fear it may be true,” Princess Luna says. “Who do you think it is?” Akiza asked she appeared with the deepest concern for her friends. In unison, the two princesses said together, “Queen Chrysalis of the Changelings.” “She is very dangerous and will do anything to get her way,” Princess Celestia said. “We must save them. I will go with Akiza, Luna, Twilight, and her friends on a rescue and peace mission. Where we will only save Akiza and Luna’s friends and try to negotiate peace between us and he changelings,” Luna suggested the plan. Everypony was ready to do anything to get somepony or someone out of Queen Chrysalis’s hooves. With reluctance, Princess Celestia concludes, “I will allow this but, be careful and do not attack unless necessary.” “Of course, sister. It is a peace mission after all. Come my friends, we have a long way to go,” Princess Luna agreed. Jack woke up, “Ugh, what happened?” Yusei woke up after right after he heard Jack’s voice, “I don’t know, Jack. But, where are we now?” Next one to wake up is Crow, “Yusei! Jack! What happened? Last thing I remember is chasing some bug-like thing that captured, Yusei.” Buzzz... a quiet buzzing sound filled the room. “Please don’t tell me those things that captured us are in the room,” Jack said. “Yep, Jack, they seem to be all over this room,” Yusei said. “They’ve completely surrounded us,” Crown says, his senses on alert. The door opens and some dim, green lights flicker on. A creature, about as tall as Jack with bug-like wings and a long, crooked horn with holes in it and also it had holes in the mane, tail, and hooves, strutted into the room. “I am Queen Chrysalis of the Changelings. I’m glad you’re awake. I almost thought the hunters had hit you too hard on the head,” Chrysalis said. “What do you want?” Yusei said. “I want you to help me get revenge. There is a land known as Equestria, that I have tried to take over and got pushed out all the way to the badlands and back to hive. I want revenge and with your help you can make that possible. I hear rumors saying that Equestria has a couple creatures like you three. They have abilities beyond anything we have,” Chrysalis says. “Are you talking about our friends? We will never come close to trying to destroy them or anywhere that houses them and keeps them safe,” Jack says determined. “You got that right, Jack. Plus, this isn’t our planet; this isn’t out fight! So you can count us out!” Yusei says, “We don’t fight fights that aren’t our own,” Jack and Crow nod in agreement with Yusei. “Well then, you leave me no choice,” she uses her magic grip and wraps it around Yusei. She lifts him up high into the air, almost hitting the ceiling. “Put... me... down!” he gasps out as the magic squeezes him to keep him from moving. “I think not,” Queen Chrysalis says with a wicked grin. She walks him out of the room and into the one next to their room.The door shuts behind them. One servants of the queen, as it seemed they were, laughed and said, “He is going to get it now.” Jack and Crow looked at each other in complete concern. Although there was a thick wall and a locked door between them and Yusei, the next thing they heard, they will probably never forget. They heard a scream. A scream of horrible, absolute pain. It was Yusei screaming. Crow was the only one to scream in concern, “YUSEI!” In the other room, Yusei could hear Crow’s yelling, his worry. As the queen’s sharp horn cut into his body, he gasped out each of his friends names, “Akiza, Luna, Crow, Jack... I’m sorry.” Chapter 5: Should We Do It?***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 5: Should We Do it?*** “Jack, it has been at least thirty minutes since he started screaming and he is still screaming but it is more quiet. Like he is giving u,.” Crow panicked. “Crow, just calm down. Yusei is tough. He’ll pull through,” Jack said, he had been trying to calm him down since Crow started. The screaming of pain and suffering suddenly stopped. Jack and Crow just stare at each other; their concern worsening by every second. Jack started to feel as though Crow may have been right. ‘Did Yusei really give up?’ Jack thought. Then, the door burst open with a loud bang. Yusei was thrown in but he was unconscious. He barely made a movement or sound. His chest was barely moving. As though he was hanging on by a thread. But he wasn’t the only one who came through. Following behind him was Queen Chrysalis, “Ugh, your friend put up a good fight. But, they always break though. But I never expected him too faint. But now you may change your minds.” Jack and Crow ran over to their friend, who looked like he was about to plunder over the edge. They look at his body. His blood was spilling like a flood. It was disgusting but the lacerations were deep and close to fatal. In return, Crow yells in anger, "What? You think by hurting our friend to the point where he might die, you can get us on your side. Keep dreaming! You just made us want to stay out of this fight even more!" “You got that right, old pal, and if we did end up taking a side, you bet it would be with these Equestrians,” Jack was just as angry and willing to do anything to protect his friends. Chrysalis getting even more angry and desperate to get them on her side. So she says, "If you don't help me then you will never see the world again. And your friend will live but get a worse punishment than I already gave him." As Luna, Akiza, Princess Luna, Twilight, and the rest of her friends walk through the Everfree Forest, they talked between one another; but not loud enough to attract predatory creatures. Suddenly then burning sensation in Akiza’s and Luna’s arms grew even worse and their knees dropped to the ground. They were in deep pain; and they knew what was going on. The others soon looked back and saw their two companions on the ground in pain and rushed over to aid their friends. Princess Luna was the first to ask the question that everybody was thinking, “What’s going on? What’s wrong?” “It’s... it’s Yusei; he is majorly hurt,” Akiza said standing up. “We need to hurry, Princess,” Luna stated very concerned. She stood up as well. "Princess, how do ya know the way?" Applejack asked. "I used to have a changeling friend before I took the throne. But then, the time comes and I was no longer able to see her," Princess Luna replied sadly. "Alright then, Princess," Applejack said. Back at the Hive, Jack and Crow way their options; their pros and cons. “Jack, I don’t know. We shouldn’t leave our friend to be beaten and tortured; but then we end up having to destroy a a whole civilization and two of our friends.” Crow says unable to decide their fate. “I don’t know either, my friend.” Jack says. Yusei wakes up for a moment realizing what was happening he said, “Don’t do it!” Jack and Crow looked at their ill-shaped friend. “Just get out of here. I will be all right. Jack... Crow... Leave.” and with that he went under again barely able to live on. He was close to giving up his life for his friends. His last thought before going under was, ‘I will give anything as long as my friends get out of here safe.’ “Yusei!” Jack and Crow ran over to their dying friend, when the green magic grip engulfed Yusei once again. He floated up, to the ceiling; and then the magic grip let go, He plummeted all the way to the ground and there was no way to catch him in time. He landed with a thud and his moan showed he was still alive but barely. Crow and Jack look down upon their friend and saw his duel disc on his arm. “Crow do you have your duel disc and deck?” Jack asked his determined face confused Crow but he did as they were told. He had his as well. “Yeah so?” “So, time for some payback and some vengeance for our friend,” Jack said. This time Crow understood him; he grinned. They pulled the first cards on their decks. Their best cards appeared in their hand. Jack showed Queen Chrysalis his Red Dragon Archfiend card, “You’re going to be sorry you ever messed with us.” “Oh, a card. I’m terrified. Not!” Queen Chrysalis gave a laugh that only the wicked could pull off. “Well you should be! Because you might wanna watch this,” Crow and Jack activated their duel discs and summoned their dragons. While Jack summoned Red Dragon Archfiend, Crow summoned his dragon, known as, Black-Winged Dragon. They became real living creatures. “Now attack Red Dragon Archfiend!” Jack ordered. “You heard him, Black-Winged Dragon! Attack!” Crow yelled. Chapter 6: Escape is Necessary (And Life)***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 6: Escape is Necessary (And Life)*** As Black-Winged Dragon attacked, over one hundred changeling servants blocked the path; But all of them got knocked out in the process. The leftover force rammed right into the queen. It slammed her against them wall. Before she could even get back up on her hooves. Red Dragon Archfiend hit her knocking her out. “Okay, let’s get Yusei and get out of here!” Crow exclaimed. “Right,” Jack agreed. They ran over to Yusei, who was still unconscious on the ground. Jack picked him up and put Yusei on his back. Yusei gave a small moan, showing he was on the brink. “Hang on, Yusei,” Jack said and secretly pleaded for his life and they ran. They ran through every tunnel and hall looking for the exit, looking for daylight. Once they found it a hoard of changelings covered the doorway hall. So Crow summoned Black-Winged Dragon once again and cleared a path. Not a moment too soon, as an angry Chrysalis was closing in. Her eyes blazing with fury. As the rescue group got closer to the hive, they saw a bunch of changelings supposed to be guarding the door run inside, looking angry and in a hurry. Then as fast as the group of changelings ran in, even more burst out with a high intensity force. Not only did a bunch of changeling burst out all fainted, but two figures burst out as well. As they ran and got closer, Akiza and Luna were able to recognize the two figures. So Akiza called out to them, “Jack! Crow!” She realized something, ‘Where is Yusei’ When they reached her she noticed Yusei on Jack’s back. “What happened to Yusei?” Luna asked. “Well, it is a long story. We don’t have that long. We need to get out of here,” Crow said and looked back to see Queen Chrysalis closing in. “I have a fabulous idea. Summon your dragons. Princess Luna, can you create a spell to make the others fly?” Akiza asked looking at Princess Luna. "Yes, why?" Princess Luna asked. "Because it's time to fly," Akiza said. With that, they got on top of their dragons. With Akiza's psychic help, they flew off towards Canterlot. Chrysalis growled and cursed under her breath due to another defeat. 'This is just the beginning,' She thought to herself. “Princess Luna? I didn’t expect you back so quickly. How did the peaceful negotiations go?” Princess Celestia asked her younger sister. “Well,” Princess Luna looked up at her elder sister, “We weren’t exactly able to negotiate. By the time we reached the hive, the three friends of Luna and Akiza were trying to escape. Well, two of the three were trying to escape; with an angry Chrysalis behind them.” “What do you mean by ‘two of the three?’” Celestia asked. “The third one was unconscious on one of the human’s back. He seemed in terrible condition,” Princess Luna said sadly, “I am sorry we could not negotiate.” Princess Celestia took a deep sigh, “Where are the humans now?” Princess Luna answered with deep concern, “In some living chamber. They took a lot of medical bandages with them. They said they were going to try to heal some of the hurt one’s wounds. I believe they said his name was, Yusei.” They stared at each other. Princess Luna’s eyes grew wide, as well as, Celestia. They gasped and started to run through the hall. As soon as they entered the living chambers where Akiza, Luna, Jack, and Crow were, they looked around for the bandaged Yusei. Jack sees Princess Celestia as she approaches Yusei, “Who are you?” he asks. “I’m Princess Celestia and I assume you have met my sister, Princess Luna.” Celestia said looking down upon her younger sibling. “Yeah, we've met,” Crow says, “ I’m Crow and this is Jack.” he said pointing over to his friend. “Very nice to meet you, now, may I take a look at your friend?” she asked her words calm and kind. Jack nodded and moved out of the way. They all watched as Princess Celestia’s horn glowed its golden aura. As she ended her scan of Yusei’s body, her eyes opened as though she was scared and shocked, “I need a medical table and equipment,” she told the guard; in turn he ran to go get the supplies. “What is it, sister?” Princess Luna looked at her elder with great concern. “It seems he has a powerful poison magic buried in her wounds. I know how to get the poison out; but, by the amount of blood loss and how much poison has been forced into his body, I am afraid I cannot guarantee he will make it. It is risky but I must try if he is to have a chance at life,” Princess Celestia says just as the medical table and tray of equipment roll in. “If it is okay with you, I will begin the procedure,” Her eyes we determined to save their friend’s life. They were hesitant but, allowed her to begin nonetheless. And she began; she undid the bandages already placed on Yusei. With that she saw how severe the cuts truly were. It pained her but she used her magic and surrounded him with it. He moaned but she kept the process going. As they watched from behind, they saw him getting worse by the minute. They felt his pain as though it was their own; but they stayed strong and held together, for Yusei. ‘Please, please let Yusei be okay,’ Akiza prayed, ‘It was Yusei who broke her out of her curse as the Black Rose. It was Yusei who brought them together. It was Yusei who wanted to be her first friend; and who saw her as a real person.’ Yusei moaned once again. “Yusei?” a man in the shadows asked concerned. Yusei looked at the mysterious figure. It was his father! A man who was sent to the Netherworld when the first Ener-D reactor malfunctioned. “Father? Where are we?” “We are in the Netherworld once again. I wonder why you are her,” Yusei’s father said. “I was being tortured by some creature. A very intelligent but sinister creature. That is not all before that we were sent to another world to help Luna and Akiza,” Yusei said, wincing at the painful memory. An hour had passed since Princess Celestia had begun the treatment. An hour of waiting and praying; worry and fear. “Alright, the treatment is done,” Celestia stated, “I have gotten out as much of the poison as possible. I don’t know precisely how much is left or if the amount can kill him. For now, he needs to rest, only time will tell if he will make it.” With the bleeding stopped and the bandages wrapped they place him on a bed set in the middle of the gold and white living chamber. Twilight and her friends left the room, with Twilight only looking back once. The princesses waited as the Akiza, Jack, Luna, and Crow gathered around Yusei. They were all praying for him to survive. “You may stay with Yusei for as long as you’d like. Just be careful of who ever enters the room,” Princess Celestia grants. After that, the two princesses leave the room, shutting the door behind them. They look up for only a second before looking back down toward their resting friend and prayed once more for their friend to live. Chapter 7: A Troubling Revival***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 7: A Troubling Revival*** “You going to give in and help us?” Chrysalis asked. “We will never help anyone who wants revenge and seeks others’ pain,” Yusei fight against the magic grip was starting to seem futile. “Well if you insist,” Chrysalis laughed and used her sharp horn to slice deep into his skin. His blood was starting to flow out like a flood. “Yes, bleed! This can all be over if you just give in; join us! If not I will enjoy your screams and cries of pain." Yusei screamed louder and louder as the wounds grew deeper into his flesh. His back, legs, sides, and all of his body was getting sliced and cut deep by this Queen Chrysalis. He started to wonder if he would ever see his friends again. Terror began to fill inside of him. He may be hard to scare but, this shook him to the core. This pain was unlike anything he had ever felt. He kept screaming in terror and pain. Suddenly a loud burst of sound came through the door. He heard Crow! “YUSEI!” Crow kept screaming. “YUSEI!” He didn’t know what to do, so all he did was say the names of his friends, “Akiza, Luna, Jack, Crow... I’m sorry.” He cracks his eyes open, only to see a bright light fill the room before everything goes black. In reality the four signers and friends sit on Yusei’s bed and watch him as his eyes move from side to side and cringes. Akiza asks the big question on everybody’s mind, “What’s wrong with Yusei?” Yusei walks through a dark land. A land in which there is no light; most of the time. Suddenly a great light appears. But, as fast as it came, it left. Leaving the great Crimson Dragon in its place. The Crimson Dragon flew toward Yusei looking him straight in the eye. It grabs him and carries him as though it was carrying a small parcel. “Where are you taking me?” he asked the great dragon. All the dragon did was roar. The next thing Yusei saw, was a bright light in front of him. So bright he used his arms to shelter his eyes. Akiza, Jack, Luna, and Crow looked at Yusei with deep concern. His eye brows cringed as though he was trying to open them. And for once in two days, he finally opened his eyes. “Hey guys,” Yusei said as he looked at his friends. He looked around to see an unfamiliar area. “Where am I?” “Well Yusei, it’s a long story. But you're safe in the Canterlot Castle of Equestria, not only that but you need to recover. You have suffered majorly; been asleep for two days,” Crow informed Yusei. Yusei suddenly cringed as a massive headache overtook him. He started to remember everything. “I remember. The Changeling Empire must be stopped,” he tried to sit up only to be stopped by Jack. “You’re in no condition to fight. But we, however, are. We will protect this planet for you and all the creatures that helped you.” Jack said with a small smile to cheer up Yusei. Yusei gave a grin back to Jack and a look of relief to his friends. He soon closes his eyes. The four friends look at each other in concern. They turn back to Yusei to see he is passing into a deep sleep. They sigh to know he is only asleep and not something worse. Princess Celestia walks through the door, “It is nice to see Yusei has such caring and devoted friends. I am also glad to see you are willing to help us protect our land,” she smiled, “I was hoping to check up on Yusei’s condition, to make sure the poison is out of his system completely. May I?” Jack nods and the others follow. So she lets her gentle, magic aura encase Yusei for a full check of his body. She takes the magical aura around him fade. “When did Yusei wake up?” she asked Jack. Jack was confused, “He was awake about five minutes ago, why?” Princess Celestia replied in a sad tone, “We now have two problems on our hands. First of all, Queen Chrysalis is readying for an attack. Lastly, the poison in your friend seems to be growing again. In this case, there are two outcomes; death or everlasting sleep,” This shocked and scared everyone in the room, “There is only one cure, but I fear Yusei may not have enough time for you to find it, let alone get the antidote.” “We’ll do anything to make sure we get our friend back alive,” Jack says in determination. “The antidote is in the high mountains of a place called, Germaney. That is over three thousand miles away from here, a full five days flight,” Celestia responds. “By Yusei’s condition, he may not have that long.” “But we have to go!” Crow interjects, “He’s our friend!” They all nod in agreement. “Princess will you stay with Yusei and watch over him? Make sure nothing happens to him,” Akiza asks. “I will, now go now, and hurry back,” Princess Celestia agrees. Akiza, Jack, Crow, and Luna all leave to go get the antidote. 'Good Luck,' Celestia silently wishes them. She turns and looks towards Yusei. He cringes from the pain the poison gives him. Buzz... a buzz sound came from behind Celestia. She turns around to see nothing. “Who’s there?” right as she finishes she gets hit on the head and knocked out. She faints. A faint, creaky voice came from the shadows, “Target captured.” the creature picked up Yusei and drags him away. Chapter 8: Meetings and Negotiations***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 8: Meeting and Negotiations*** Princess Luna suddenly hears the window, from the living chambers where Celestia is, slam shut. She breaks into a gallop. When she enters she gasps with shock. “Sister! Wake up!” Princess Luna nudges her sister to wake her. “Ugh,” Princess Celestia stirred trying to regain full consciousness. Starting to regain her memory of the night she shook her head to encourage her memory. “What happened?” Princess Luna asked. “I- I was attacked and knocked out before I could even figure out who was in the...” Celestia broke off and looked straight at the bed. Yusei was gone! She look down sad and guilty; guilty of breaking a promise. Back at the Hive, Yusei wakes up to the stone, cold room he remembers. The tortuous prison in which he was cut and sliced. Pain jolted back from the memory. The door burst open, and a creature came in. Yusei’s eyes opened in complete and utter fear. It was his torturer, the queen of this place, and one of his worst nightmares. Once again, Chrysalis picked him up using her magic. She laughed. “What do you want? Why did you bring me back when I won’t help you?” Yusei asked strongly, but he felt rather weak. “It’s simple, really, you’re my bargaining chip,” Chrysalis said. “Bargaining chip for what?” Yusei asked, feeling weaker every minute. “You see, I want to take over Equestria, if it wasn’t obvious. I will threaten them with just one thing.. you,” Chrysalis said shocking Yusei. “What do you mean, threaten them? How?” Yusei asked. Although he was getting weaker, he was growing stronger, too. “My threat is simple; if they don’t surrender, you die,” she said sinisterly. “Now don’t expect anything special. I will try to make sure your stay here as miserable as possible and watch you suffer. This is all because you attempted to get out of my grasp," she finished pretending to examine her hoof. “You’re sick!” Yusei yelled. He tried to squirm out of her magic grip, but had no such luck. Chrysalis got infuriated at that comment and took a good slice as his leg. With the grip so strong, Yusei could barely move. No way to avoid or move from every slice. They pain worsened as more slices were thrown. He screamed in pain. The door closed to have everything turn pitch black. Jack, Luna, Crow, and Akiza flew through the air. As though, the sky was the limit. As refreshing as it was to be in the air, they knew they had a task on their hands. Something appeared in front of Jack; it was a note. “Jack, what is it?” Akiza asked. “It’s a note from Princess Celestia; saying we need to come back,” Jack answered. “Like now?” Luna asked worried. “Yeah, it says here ‘that something horrible has happened and we need to return now’,” Jack read, “Is it just me, or is that a bit worrying?” “We need to get back, Jack. Can we go or what?” Akiza questioned. “Yeah, let’s go!” with that they turned around and headed back to the castle as fast as they could. When they reach the castle, they run as fast as they can to the Princess’ throne room. When they entered, they could feel the sadness in the air. “Hey! What’s going on?” Crow asked. “What could be more important than the antidote?” Jack asked. “I realize your confusion and concern; but, what can you do with the antidote,” Princess Celestia let it soak in for a moment before continuing, “if he is not here?” “What are you saying? That he suddenly walked off in the middle of the day without anyone seeing him,” Crow said. “I am saying he was taken, once again. We know it is by the Changelings and by Queen Chrysalis. But why she took him we do not know,” Celestia stated in a sorrowful tone. “What happened? How could you have not saved him?” Akiza asked absolutely concerned. “I was watching him, when I felt a movement behind me. I looked behind me to see nothing there. Last thing I remember is waking up to Luna’s nudge,” Celestia stated, “I was knocked out before I could do a thing. I am terribly sorry.” They didn’t seemed pleased but Luna spoke up, “Is there anything we can do to get him back?” Before Celestia could say a single word a wrinkled, old piece of paper appeared in front of her. She started to read it and her mouth dropped. “Well, what does it say?” Jack asked. Celestia cleared her throat, "It says: 'Dear Princess Celestia and Other Humans, If you want to see your friend Yusei again, come to the Sheerful Cliff in one hour, to negotiate the ruling of Equestria. Signed, Queen Chrysalis of the Changelings.' Celestia read aloud as she wrote at the bottom, ‘We will be there in one hour. -Princess Celestia’ “You do know this is most likely a trap, right Princess?” Crow asked. “I know, Crow,” Celestia said. “In that case, there is no doubt we are all coming with you! No matter what you say,” Jack said determined. “Of course. I am certain I will need your help to rescue Yusei. Chrysalis will most likely not give up Yusei without a fight,” Celestia said. With that in play, they leave to go to Sheerful Cliff and stop Chrysalis in her tracks. After an hour long flight to Sheerful Cliff, they reach it to a not so pretty sight. Chrysalis was standing before a large pole. But it was no ordinary pole, it had a rope tied to the top; and hanging from that rope was a torn up, unconscious Yusei. “What did you do to our friend?” Jack yelled angrily. “He put up a good fight but, not as much as last time. He will surely be in deep trouble if negotiations do not go as planned,” Chrysalis simply stated as though it was nothing unusual. “What do you want, Chrysalis?” Celestia asked getting straight to the point. “Isn’t it obvious? I want to rule Equestria, as I have already tried as you already know,” Queen Chrysalis said nonchalant. Celestia answered, “I will not allow that to happen.” With anger, Chrysalis lights up her horn and Yusei starts to scream and moan in deep and undesirable pain. “What are you doing to Yusei? Why are you?” Akiza asked confused and furious. Chrysalis grinned, “I’m giving Yusei a little ‘push’. The longer I do it, the fast the poison moves about and kills him. Then again, if it doesn’t kill him, I don’t know what it will do. After all, they die usually.” “That’s why I won’t let you take over Equestria. You kill for pleasure,” Celestia snapped. Chrysalis’ horn grew brighter and brighter; Yusei’s screams and moans of pain intensified. Jack was getting infuriated, “Don't make this any worse for anyone, just give up and hand over our friend!” This angered Chrysalis even more. To the point where Yusei’s pain grew even worse and he couldn’t even scream as much anymore. It was Luna’s turn to get mad and yell, "What are you doing?! He's not some creature you can torture to get what you want!" “That’s exactly what he is and if he doesn’t behave he’ll fade away!” Chrysalis snapped back. Celestia calmed down but was still sturn, “You have one last chance, Chrysalis. You will give up Yusei and leave us.” “Never!” Chrysalis refuses. She was treated horribly by ponies in the past but not anymore. Celestia gathers around the four signers and whispers to them. “Get ready to go save Yusei.” Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth*** In a sudden instant, Princess Celestia raised into the air and used her horn to attack the queen. With the sudden stream of light heading her way, Chrysalis defended herself by attacking the Princess with her own magical power. With the distraction in place, Yusei’s friends sneak past Chrysalis to go untie Yusei. But in their haste, Chrysalis saw them in the very back corner of her eye. Chrysalis yelled, “Get them!” Then, before anyone knew it, a hundred or so changelings appeared out of thin air and attacked the four signers. In return to the attack, Jack and Crow brought out their duel discs and summon their best beasts; Red Dragon Archfiend and Black-Winged Dragon. Jack yelled back to Luna and Akiza, “Go! We’ll hold them off! Get Yusei to safety!” Akiza and Luna nodded and started to run to Yusei who was on the edge of the cliff. As they were getting closer to Yusei, a Changeling drone approached Luna and pushed her off the edge. Akiza reached for her but got cut short. Luckily, Luna was able to grab a small ledge before anything bad could happen. “Luna! Grab my hand!” Akiza called. With a struggle, Luna reached for Akiza’s hand. When she couldn’t reach, the small ledge holding her broke. “Akiza! Help!” Luna cried as she fell. Jack and Crow watched the horrible situation, feeling helpless and useless. But, something caught Crow and Jack’s eye. It was Yusei’s mark and it was glowing bright. Then as sudden as Yusei’s mark glowed, the Crimson Dragon appeared. It sent a glowing bubble that encircled Luna. And floated her upward and out of the ravine. Luna stood on the ledge of the cliff next to Akiza, who sighed with relief along with Jack and Crow. With a realization of the situation at hand, they ran towards Yusei. They untied Yusei in a rush but careful not to injure him more than he already was. Akiza looks for a pulse and finds a very, very faint one. Luna saw that she could barely see Yusei’s chest moving up and down in a steady breath pattern. “Akiza, I think he is already fading away. Look he is barely even breathing,” Luna said in an overwhelming jolt of concern. Her eyes starting to fill with tears. “We got to stay positive, Luna,” Akiza said trying to cheer up Luna, as well as herself. Her eyes were also starting to well up in tears. They look down at Yusei, “I’m... sorry...” he said and with that his mark disappeared along with his breath. Akiza and Luna started to cry and sob at Yusei’s side. Jack and Crow looked back to see Akiza and Luna sobbing at Yusei’s side with their tears dropping onto him. They watch in shock but their anger grows in numbers. Jack says, "You'll be avenged old friend," and he orders his dragon to attack. Crow's dragon follows and Crow says, "No one ever takes a life without paying for it." Their dragons take out every changeling battle drone, and ram right into Queen Chrysalis. In the hit, Princess Celestia’s attack hit the Queen as well, as the energy of the light hits her, she says one thing, “I will be back! And when I do, you will all pay!” With that the queen screams and disappears. They all run over to Yusei in a desperate attempt to see if it was true; If he was dead. By the time they reach him, his face and body are already losing color. Celestia's ears fold back and she says, "I'm sorry I was not able to save him," and walks away in a sad and discomforting mood. As they all mourn the death of their best friend, Ancient Fairy Dragon and Regulus appear. Luna feels their presence and looks up to see them. “What are you doing here?” she asked. “We are here to help Yusei,” Ancient Fairy Dragon states. “Help him? How can you help him if he’s...” Luna broke off, unable to say the word. “We will show you,” and they did. They leaned forward. Regulus lit up his horn with a bright glow, and Ancient Fairy Dragon made a ball of light and placed it on Yusei’s chest. A bright light was shone through the mourn and everyone, but Luna, covered their eyes to shield them from the light as bright as the sun. Less than two minutes later, Yusei’s Mark of the Dragon Head reappears on his arm and his face grew in color, once again. They sighed with relief as Yusei’s eyes opened and refocused. “W-what happened?” he asked. “Well, we have never been more glad to see you awake. I’ll give you that,” Jack said with relief clear on his face, “Luna, your power to speak with the spirits has really come in handy this time.” Crow checks Yusei over to see all of the cuts, scars, and sliced- up areas were gone, “Hey, guys, look. All of Yusei’s wounds are gone. Yusei sits up, “I’m starting to remember everything. Where did Chrysalis go?” “She gone, Yusei; gone for good,” Akiza said, she got a smile from Yusei. Yusei stands up with the help of his friends and they hurry to catch up with Celestia. Celestia sees them run up and asks them, “What happened? How is Yusei still alive?” "It was Ancient Fairy Dragon and Regulus. They brought Yusei back to life," Luna stated happily. They all smiled at that fact. "Well, it seems your time here is finished; due to you finishing your duty here. But, you are welcome here any time," Celestia says. "You're right, we should be getting back. Our friends at home will be worried," Yusei agrees. The Crimson Dragon appears to welcome them to leave. "Thank you for your help," Yusei thanks. "Your friends helped me, so it is the least I could do," Celestia says and with that they leave. “Goodbye!” Luna called. “Farewell!” Celestia called with a smile. They went their separate ways one going to the Canterlot Castle, five walking into the bubble the Crimson Dragon left for them and went to Earth. A bright bubble illuminates the entire garage and from it came Jack, Crow, Yusei, Akiza, and Luna. Jack says with a grin, "It's never felt so good to be back home," Yusei and the others nod in agreement, Yusei especially. The door suddenly burst open. From it come Leo and Dexter. Leo is Luna’s twin brother, and Dexter is Luna and Leo’s best friend. “What happened to you guys?” Dexter asks. “Yeah we’ve been looking for you for five days! I mean, you guys just fell off the face of the Earth!” Leo exclaimed. “That’s because we were,” Yusei stated nonchalant. “What? What happened? Where’d you go?” Leo babbled. They smiled. Yusei looked behind him and Jack, Luna, Akiza and Crow nodded. “Well, we sort of visited a planet called Equestria,” Yusei started. “What? Tell us more Yusei!” Dexter demanded. So Yusei did, he told them the story. And that story is being told around Equestria itself. But only the princesses know who the real heros are. For the story is that five ponies were the ones that helped Equestria, and only a select few know the truth. Chapter 1: Where are we?***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 1: Where are we?*** As every story has a beginning, they always have an end. Before we have a say in the ending shall we look at the beginning... ________________________________________________________________________________________ Five thousand years ago, there was a great battle between The Signers and Dark Signers. The Signers were the ones who protected life and the light of the Crimson Dragon. The Dark Signers were the ones who wanted destruction and protected the darkness. Now, five thousand years later, five new signers are chosen to battle the Dark Signers once again. These five signers are Yusei Fudo, Jack Atlas, Crow Hogan, Akiza Izinski, and Luna. They were amazing at the dueling game, Duel Monsters. But, they were also caring for friends and life. Yusei, Jack, and Crow were not only great Duelist on the ground, but also great duelist on the road. This was known as Turbo Dueling. Akiza and Luna have special abilities. Akiza can duel and make her duel monsters become real and create real damage if necessary. Luna can talk to the spirits of the duel monsters and enter their own world. You see, duel monsters aren't just cards, they have spirits as well. They battled all the Dark signers and eventually won. But, they had to stop the King of the Netherworld. The Netherworld is a place of negative energy and darkness. They defeated the King of the Netherworld after battling Director Goodwin, who wanted to destroy the world and rebuild it in his image. He failed obviously. Yusei in return for defeating Goodwin, got the Mark of the Crimson Dragon, which allowed him to summon the Crimson Dragon if needed. So, with it he began new adventures and got new enemies as well as new allies. With their might, they swore to protect life no matter in what form. So they did. And now a new adventure is awaiting the five signers. Shall we begin? "Ugh," Luna groans and struggles to sit up. Her eyes flash open. Where is she? She could see Akiza near her, her form rhythmically rising and falling as she began to awaken. “W-where am I? Akiza?” “Ugh,” Akiza started to wake up as well, “Luna? Where are we?” "I- I don't know. Maybe we're in the Spirit World. But then again, you wouldn't be here, would you?" Luna ponders, panic rising. “I don’t think I would be. Plus the fact that, wouldn't a bunch of Spirit World creatures come around you or something?” Akiza asked, trying to make sense of everything that has happened. “You’re right. They would be,” Luna started to look down sad and frightened. She heard a branch snap and they both went into alert. They crawled over behind a bush to see what the sound was. A purple unicorn, a pink pony, and a cyan pegasus were there. They seemed to be talking to each other. “I thought unicorns and pegasi were just a myth. Not including a pink pony!” Luna whispered into Akiza’s ear. “I thought so, too. Do you think this is a dream?” Akiza asked. “I don’t think so. It’s not even possible for us to have the same dream. Is it?” Luna said, but it was a bit loud. Akiza nodded, but out of the corner of her eye, she saw the three figures perk up and looked in their direction. They walked over slowly, while Luna and Akiza froze. “Tia!” Princess Luna looked up at her older sister. “Yes, Luna, I felt it as well,” Princess Celestia said in a alert but calm fashion; looking down at her sister. “What is it though?” Luna asked. “I am guessing, as impossible as it may be, something has just been transported from one dimension to another,” Princess Celestia says concerned, “We must find whatever it is, before it is found and taken into the wrong hands.” The two groups stare at each other having a hard time comprehending what is going on. The purple unicorn soon spoke up, “Who and what are you? Why are you here?” Akiza was the first to answer, “My name is Akiza. This is Luna,” she said, she put her hand out to show Luna, who was slightly cowering. “We are humans. You don’t know what a human is? Heck, why am I asking? It’s a unicorn!” “We don’t know what a human is because we never discovered it. What does that have to do with me being a unicorn?” the purple unicorn asked defensively. “Well, you see, where we come from unicorns and pegasi are nothing but a myth. As well as gods and other creatures; like colored ponies. As for why we are here, we don’t know. All we know is that we are here,” Luna said shyly. “Wh-who are you?” “My name is Twilight Sparkle,” Twilight said proudly. The pink pony was next to speak; who shockingly, spoke with enthusiasm and excitement, “Hi! I’m Pinkie Pie! I am so so so so so happy to meet you!” Pinkie Pie seemed like a pony that could defy anything; and annoy anything. The cyan pegasus was last to speak and she spoke with pride, “I’m Rainbow Dash. The fastest flyer in the land! But, how is it you don’t see us as real beings? I mean, where you come from anyways.” “I don’t know. We just never saw them so they just faded into myth, I guess,” Akiza said. A strong gust of wind blew, making Akiza’s red velvet hair blow from side to side, as well as, Luna’s bright, turquoise hair. When the wind stopped Twilight once again spoke, “Come on. We will go to my place. There we can talk some more. But for now, I will not tell you anything else other than you are in a place known as Equestria. A place of magic and peace. I can tell you more after I write the princess and find out what to do. So, come on.” So they followed Twilight, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie; their mane and tails flowing in the wind. Pinkie Pie was jumping up and down excitedly until they reached Twilight’s home. Author's NoteHey people, I know I haven't been on in forever and this will be only time on. I thought I would just say that I have read your comments and I am a bit sad as to how harsh you were to this writer. You have to understand, I wrote this when I was about nine or ten. So do you really expect a nine or ten year old girl to be able to write perfect grammar! Please stop being so harsh. I admit, you are entitled to your opinion and I also feel bad of how terrible my grammar was. But I can't fix the grammar now as I have other stories to work on in my fanfiction account. You are welcome to criticize me all you want but be a bit kinder about it. I was only a kid back then. And I'm only a teenager now. I'm not going to have professional level writing skills. So please be more considerate and kinder before making such harsh comments. Thanks for reading this and think about what I'm saying. -bricann
Chapter 2: Next Stop Canterlot***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 2: Next Stop Canterlot*** As they enter Twilight’s tree house, Akiza and Luna take a moment in awe. Twilight smiled, “This is my home. As well as my own library. Okay now, back to what we were planning to do; Write a note to the Princess. Spike!” “Yeah Twi- whoa! What- who, um... hi,” Spike jumbled words seemed to bounce around the room. “What new surprises will they have in store? First unicorns and pegasi, and now purple and green dragons! What’s next?” Akiza asked in a low whisper. “I don’t know. But we are on another planet, so I guess anything is possible,” Luna said. “I hope you’re right,” Akiza said. After that, they listened in on Twilight and Spike’s conversation. “Okay, Spike, listen, these are humans from another planet. Their names are Akiza and Luna. They were sent here for no reason by what they know of, but that is all I know. For now, I need you to take a note to the Princess,” Twilight explained. Spike pulled out a paper and a quill. “Tell me what to write,” he said proudly. “My dearest teacher, I hope you have felt the dimensional disturbance as you do, with you being immortal. I have two creatures here that come from another planet; in which I believe you might need to talk to. I have them right with me. I ask that you help me and tell me what to do. Your faithful student, Twilight Sparkle” and with that, Spike rolled up the paper and blew a green flame onto the paper in which it flew out the window as sparkling, green smoke. No later than 2 minutes, Spike did a loud burp and a roll of paper appeared from his mouth and landed on the floor. He handed it to Twilight's magic grip, “Here, Twilight.” Twilight grabbed the piece of paper with her magic and read it out loud: “Dear Twilight Sparkle, I appreciate you telling me of your discovery. As I felt the magical disturbance, I worried it would fall into the wrong hands. Now that I know that you have these creatures, you speak of, I might be able to get some more rest. But, I need you to bring these creatures and your friends so I can talk with them. Please come to Canterlot at your earliest convenience. Your loving mentor, Princess Celestia” “Who’s this ‘Princess Celestia?’” Luna asked. “She and her sister Princess Luna are the rulers of this land. They are immortal, as well as they are a rare type of pony, an Alicorn, a pony with both wings and a horn. Princess Celestia can raise the sun while Princess Luna can raise the moon. They are kind and wise, as well,” Twilight answered; proud with her answer and knowledge. “Oh! So it’s not bloodline that makes them a princess? It’s their power and type they are? And isn’t it strange that my name is the same as your Princess Luna? But, then again, where we come from, your parents name you and it is different on our world,” Luna said questioning her own thoughts. “Yep! That about sums it up. I have to admit, it is strange that your name is the same as our Princess,” Rainbow Dash says in another proud tone. But the proud tone, turned to concern at her last thought. Akiza looks down at her arm with her mark. At the corner of her eye she once again captures sight of something on her other arm. It was her duel disc! She looked at Luna’s arm and she also had her duel disc. Next thing she noticed was that they had their decks. “Luna! Look at your dueling arm,” So Luna did. Only to notice her duel disc and deck; as well as noticing Akiza’s deck and duel disc, as well. “Akiza, why do we have our duel disc? Why will we need them in a place with peace? As Twilight states,” Luna ask more frightened than ever before. ‘If we have their duel discs, that means that...’ she thought. In the badlands a creature with a coat as black as night, bug like wings, and holes in the crooked horn, mane, and hooves. It felt it. When it did, it calm eyes burst open and gave an evil grin. “Ha! Ha! We need to find that creature. The creature that slipped through the dimensional gate. So we can get our revenge and take over Canterlot once again!” the bug-like creature said to her subjects, “Send out a search party! Time to go hunting.” Back in Ponyville, as suddenly as it seems, Regulus and Ancient Fairy Dragon appear in front of Luna. “Regulus! Ancient Fairy Dragon!” Luna burst out. “Who and what are you talking to?” Rainbow Dash asked as if Luna had gone crazy. “You see this deck? It has creatures called duel monsters in it. Luna can talk to the spirits of the duel monsters. Her three main duel monster friends are: Kuribon, Regulus, and Ancient Fairy Dragon. Not only can she talk to them, she can enter their world. I wish I could see them though. It must be a well deserved pleasure to talk to creatures as friendly and nice as the duel monsters. Even though when they are in battle, they can be fierce; they are kind and loving to their duelist,” Akiza explained “Maybe I can help. I have a spell so you can talk and see any spirit. Luna, is that okay with you?” Luna nodded in return. Twilight started the spell and cast it upon the room. Less than a minute later, every pony and person in the room could see Regulus and Ancient Fairy Dragon. A blue dragon was the first to speak, “I’m Ancient Fairy Dragon.” A white lion with a gold mane was the next and last to speak, “I am Regulus.” “Now Regulus, Ancient Fairy Dragon, what is it that you wanted to tell me?” Luna asked. She had a look of concern. Regulus started off, “You have come here along with Akiza to help fight the evil that is heading this way.” “It comes to capture you and Akiza to use you for its own evil purposes. We don’t know its name nor what it is, but, what we do know is that it seeks revenge,” Ancient Fairy Dragon finished. “Do you know what this creature looks like?” Pinkie Pie asked. “I am afraid not. All we know is the motives and what it plans. As well as, why Akiza and Luna are here. But we must go for now. Just remember Luna, we will always be here to protect you,” and with that, Regulus and Ancient Fairy Dragon disappear, along with the spell on the library. “Any more surprises do you have in store for us?” Rainbow Dash asked with a little bitterness. “Well, I can make duel monsters become real with my psychic powers. Just don’t get me furious, or else I will lose control of my powers. I can also make my monsters create real damage,” Akiza said nonchalant like. While Luna took a look at Akiza and back to the three ponies, Twilight, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie all just stared as they tried to soak it in. Twilight was the first to break out of her trance, “Okay, Rainbow Dash, do you think you could go get Fluttershy and Applejack, while we go get Rarity?” “Totally! Where should we meet up?” Rainbow Dash answered; you could tell she was excited for an adventure. “Let’s meet at the train station. From there, we will get on the train and head to Canterlot,” Twilight Sparkle concluded. As soon as she finished Rainbow Dash burst out of the door. “Alright Akiza, Luna come with me and Pinkie Pie. Just as a fair warning, you may get a lot of stares from other ponies. Also you may need another way to get to Canterlot. The train is meant to fit us, ponies. Not so much of a bigger type of pony. How are you going to get there?” Twilight asked thinking. “I got that covered,” Akiza said winking at Luna. Luna understood what she meant and nodded in approval. “Okay,” Twilight stated confused; and with that, they left to get Rarity. As soon as they reached the train station, they watched as Akiza and Luna brought out Ancient Fairy Dragon and Black Rose Dragon. They watched as Akiza and Luna hopped onto their dragons as though as they were not just some spirit. “Twi, ya mind fillin' us in some more?” Applejack asked, completely confused. “I will on the train. For now, let’s get to Canterlot,” Twilight said. They boarded the train, while Akiza and Luna took off to the skies. Traveling close behind so they could stay with their new friends. Luna was slightly afraid but having far more fun. After all, who is able to do this when they're out of the Spirit World?
Chapter 3: A Royal Chat***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 3: A Royal Chat*** As they walked through the streets of Canterlot, Akiza and Luna looked in every direction. Different colors and types of ponies were everywhere. This was quite an amazement and shock to them. Not only were they in amazement and shock, but so were the citizens of Canterlot. Ponies stared as Akiza and Luna walked. They whispered and wondered about what they are and what they are doing in Canterlot. They soon walked up to the gate of the castle. The guards stopped them. “You are Twilight Sparkle, are you not?” “Yes,” Twilight said in a flat, even tone. “What is your business with these creatures you are bring?” one guard asked. “I found them in the Everfree forest while looking for a friend who lives there. I am taking them to Princess Celestia out of her directions,” Twilight said. “Very well, you may pass,” the other guard said. They let the group pass. Akiza and Luna ducking their heads a couple inches so they wouldn’t hit their heads. But, the guards never let them out of their range of sight. Once they were in the castle it was the other guards doing. They walk slowly through the halls. Akiza and Luna took in every detail; Every crack and molding, every design and shape. To them it was like something you would see in a fairytale. They soon enter the princess’ throne room. The two princesses sitting on top of their thrones. Twilight and her friends bowed. Seeing this, Akiza and Luna bowed as well. “You may rise,” Princess Celestia said. Akiza and Luna; Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. They stared at each other in disbelief. Both trying to soak in the fact that they are real beings. Princess Celestia was the one to break the silence, “Who and what are you? I can feel great power surging through you both.” Luna was the first to say her name, “My name is Luna.” Akiza was the second, “My name is Akiza. We are humans from the planet Earth. We are also signers and have abilities.” “What are signers? I suppose they are something that comes from your planet,” Princess Luna asks in confusion. “Every five thousand years, five signers are chosen to do battle against people called Dark Signers and their Earthbound Immortals. Me and Luna are two of the five signers. The other three are on Earth,” Akiza said, “But that is not all we have on Earth. Signers are also chosen due to their skill as a duelist.” “What do you mean by duelist?” Princess Celestia asks. She seemed like she thought it as killing someone else. Akiza and Luna, hold up their duel discs. Luna is the one to speak this time, “This is a duel disc. You can use this to battle each other for fun; and this is a deck with duel monsters in them.” “Luna can speak to the duel monsters’ spirits from the Spirit World. Even the duel monsters that are in the cards.” Akiza explained further. Princess Luna looked surprised and confused, “How is that possible?” Akiza answers the question in a calm and even voice, "It is like how I can make these cards become real and can create real damage if necessary. These cards have real beings inside them. Luna can talk and enter their world. I can make them become real. Not some holographic display. You can just ask them,” Akiza pointed to the six colorful ponies behind them, “They have seen it with their own eyes.” Princess Celestia smiles and says, “Well, you certainly have extraordinary abilities. I believe you should return home and say hello to your friends.” Luna spoke up shyly, “Your highness, we don’t know how to get back. Let alone the fact the reason we’re here... is to help you fight an evil who wants revenge.” “Where did you get this information?” Princess Celestia says concerned. “A couple spirit friends of mine. Their names are Regulus and Ancient Fairy Dragon. They told me that a danger is coming. A danger seeking revenge,” Luna answered. She was genuinely concerned and Princess Celestia could sense that. The princesses looked at each other and nodded in approval. “Thank you for this information,” Princess Luna said. Back on Earth, Yusei, Jack, and Crow are in the garage working on the new engine, “So, Yusei, have you seen the twins or Akiza lately?” Jack asked. “Afraid not; and I have a bad feeling about it,” Yusei said. Suddenly Yusei’s Mark of the Dragon lights up. He looks up to see that Jack and Crow’s is lighting up, too, “Hey guys, what’s up with our marks?” Yusei asks. “I don’t know, Yusei. What do you think?” Crow asked. “I don't know but, my mark is telling me something,” Yusei said, and he placed his hand on his mark. The others did the same. “Akiza!” Luna said as she fell down a cliff. She grabbed a small ledge. “Luna!” Akiza called from the top, “Grab my hand!” Luna reaches for Akiza’s hand and slips. She screams, “AKIZA! HELP!” Next thing you know she falls into the water. Yusei came back to reality, “Did you guys see that?” “Yeah, Yusei. We need to find Akiza and Luna; and fast,” Jack said in a determined voice. “My mark is telling me that they’re not here, Jack,” Yusei said. “Of course they’re not here!” Jack says as if Yusei was an idiot. “I mean not on this planet, Jack. They are not on this planet!” Yusei says as if it is a big deal. “But, Yusei, how is that even possible?” Crow asks. Yusei looked down, “I don’t know, Crow. But it's possible. Just like...” Yusei looked up and saw their duel runners. They had a red glow around them. As if, the power from their marks was surging through their duel runners. “You guys, let’s ride!” They got onto their duel runners and drove off onto the highway. Just as they entered the speedway, the Crimson Dragon appeared. “Hey, Yusei! Doesn’t all five signers have to be here in order to summon the Crimson Dragon?” Crow asked. “Yeah, but it obviously wants to do something with us; and it must have to do with our friends,” Yusei replied. “So then what are we waiting for?” Jack asked. “You heard him. If you have someway to help our friends, lead the way,” Yusei said to the Crimson Dragon. With that, the Crimson Dragon roared and soon they went faster than light and disappeared. To where they will be, they do not know.
Chapter 4: Trouble***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 4: Trouble*** “Ugh,” Yusei looks around to see his two friends laying next to him. They start to wake and stand, “Jack? Crow? Where are we?” “I don’t know Yusei. But I am guessing, since the Crimson Dragon brought us here, this is where Luna and Akiza will be,” Crow said. Buzzzzz... a quiet buzz sound came from around them. “Wait. Did you guys hear that?” Yusei asked. “Yeah, sounded like a bug,” Jack said. Suddenly a black figure with bug-like wings and a horn with holes appeared in front of them. It grabbed Yusei and pulled him into the shadows. “Yusei!” Crow asked and they ran after him. Only when they found him, they all got knocked out. In the Canterlot castle, Akiza and Luna are talking to the princesses. Akiza and Luna telling them about what has happened to them on Earth, while the Princesses tell of their experience and battles. Just as Luna is about to tell them how she saved her Ancient Fairy Dragon, their marks lit up. The marks felt like a small burning sensation on their arms. “What is happening? You never said your marks light up,” Princess Celestia demanded. “Well, we didn’t think they would, heck, they barely ever light up,” Akiza replied, “I think my friends, the rest of the signers, are here somehow. By what my mark is telling me, they are in some serious trouble.” “No kidding, my mark is telling me that... that they have been captured by something! In all honesty, I think it is the creature that wants revenge,” Luna looked up at Princess Celestia with sincere concern in her eyes. “In other words, we need to save them and fast. They are the best duelists I know. If they get them on their side... this is not going to end well.” Princess Luna face went into severe concern but says in a calm, cool voice, “I have an idea who it might be. I can feel it.” “Who do you-- Oh my! You don’t think it is, do you?” Celestia asked her face showing the terror she felt. “I do; and I fear it may be true,” Princess Luna says. “Who do you think it is?” Akiza asked she appeared with the deepest concern for her friends. In unison, the two princesses said together, “Queen Chrysalis of the Changelings.” “She is very dangerous and will do anything to get her way,” Princess Celestia said. “We must save them. I will go with Akiza, Luna, Twilight, and her friends on a rescue and peace mission. Where we will only save Akiza and Luna’s friends and try to negotiate peace between us and he changelings,” Luna suggested the plan. Everypony was ready to do anything to get somepony or someone out of Queen Chrysalis’s hooves. With reluctance, Princess Celestia concludes, “I will allow this but, be careful and do not attack unless necessary.” “Of course, sister. It is a peace mission after all. Come my friends, we have a long way to go,” Princess Luna agreed. Jack woke up, “Ugh, what happened?” Yusei woke up after right after he heard Jack’s voice, “I don’t know, Jack. But, where are we now?” Next one to wake up is Crow, “Yusei! Jack! What happened? Last thing I remember is chasing some bug-like thing that captured, Yusei.” Buzzz... a quiet buzzing sound filled the room. “Please don’t tell me those things that captured us are in the room,” Jack said. “Yep, Jack, they seem to be all over this room,” Yusei said. “They’ve completely surrounded us,” Crown says, his senses on alert. The door opens and some dim, green lights flicker on. A creature, about as tall as Jack with bug-like wings and a long, crooked horn with holes in it and also it had holes in the mane, tail, and hooves, strutted into the room. “I am Queen Chrysalis of the Changelings. I’m glad you’re awake. I almost thought the hunters had hit you too hard on the head,” Chrysalis said. “What do you want?” Yusei said. “I want you to help me get revenge. There is a land known as Equestria, that I have tried to take over and got pushed out all the way to the badlands and back to hive. I want revenge and with your help you can make that possible. I hear rumors saying that Equestria has a couple creatures like you three. They have abilities beyond anything we have,” Chrysalis says. “Are you talking about our friends? We will never come close to trying to destroy them or anywhere that houses them and keeps them safe,” Jack says determined. “You got that right, Jack. Plus, this isn’t our planet; this isn’t out fight! So you can count us out!” Yusei says, “We don’t fight fights that aren’t our own,” Jack and Crow nod in agreement with Yusei. “Well then, you leave me no choice,” she uses her magic grip and wraps it around Yusei. She lifts him up high into the air, almost hitting the ceiling. “Put... me... down!” he gasps out as the magic squeezes him to keep him from moving. “I think not,” Queen Chrysalis says with a wicked grin. She walks him out of the room and into the one next to their room.The door shuts behind them. One servants of the queen, as it seemed they were, laughed and said, “He is going to get it now.” Jack and Crow looked at each other in complete concern. Although there was a thick wall and a locked door between them and Yusei, the next thing they heard, they will probably never forget. They heard a scream. A scream of horrible, absolute pain. It was Yusei screaming. Crow was the only one to scream in concern, “YUSEI!” In the other room, Yusei could hear Crow’s yelling, his worry. As the queen’s sharp horn cut into his body, he gasped out each of his friends names, “Akiza, Luna, Crow, Jack... I’m sorry.”
Chapter 5: Should We Do It?***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 5: Should We Do it?*** “Jack, it has been at least thirty minutes since he started screaming and he is still screaming but it is more quiet. Like he is giving u,.” Crow panicked. “Crow, just calm down. Yusei is tough. He’ll pull through,” Jack said, he had been trying to calm him down since Crow started. The screaming of pain and suffering suddenly stopped. Jack and Crow just stare at each other; their concern worsening by every second. Jack started to feel as though Crow may have been right. ‘Did Yusei really give up?’ Jack thought. Then, the door burst open with a loud bang. Yusei was thrown in but he was unconscious. He barely made a movement or sound. His chest was barely moving. As though he was hanging on by a thread. But he wasn’t the only one who came through. Following behind him was Queen Chrysalis, “Ugh, your friend put up a good fight. But, they always break though. But I never expected him too faint. But now you may change your minds.” Jack and Crow ran over to their friend, who looked like he was about to plunder over the edge. They look at his body. His blood was spilling like a flood. It was disgusting but the lacerations were deep and close to fatal. In return, Crow yells in anger, "What? You think by hurting our friend to the point where he might die, you can get us on your side. Keep dreaming! You just made us want to stay out of this fight even more!" “You got that right, old pal, and if we did end up taking a side, you bet it would be with these Equestrians,” Jack was just as angry and willing to do anything to protect his friends. Chrysalis getting even more angry and desperate to get them on her side. So she says, "If you don't help me then you will never see the world again. And your friend will live but get a worse punishment than I already gave him." As Luna, Akiza, Princess Luna, Twilight, and the rest of her friends walk through the Everfree Forest, they talked between one another; but not loud enough to attract predatory creatures. Suddenly then burning sensation in Akiza’s and Luna’s arms grew even worse and their knees dropped to the ground. They were in deep pain; and they knew what was going on. The others soon looked back and saw their two companions on the ground in pain and rushed over to aid their friends. Princess Luna was the first to ask the question that everybody was thinking, “What’s going on? What’s wrong?” “It’s... it’s Yusei; he is majorly hurt,” Akiza said standing up. “We need to hurry, Princess,” Luna stated very concerned. She stood up as well. "Princess, how do ya know the way?" Applejack asked. "I used to have a changeling friend before I took the throne. But then, the time comes and I was no longer able to see her," Princess Luna replied sadly. "Alright then, Princess," Applejack said. Back at the Hive, Jack and Crow way their options; their pros and cons. “Jack, I don’t know. We shouldn’t leave our friend to be beaten and tortured; but then we end up having to destroy a a whole civilization and two of our friends.” Crow says unable to decide their fate. “I don’t know either, my friend.” Jack says. Yusei wakes up for a moment realizing what was happening he said, “Don’t do it!” Jack and Crow looked at their ill-shaped friend. “Just get out of here. I will be all right. Jack... Crow... Leave.” and with that he went under again barely able to live on. He was close to giving up his life for his friends. His last thought before going under was, ‘I will give anything as long as my friends get out of here safe.’ “Yusei!” Jack and Crow ran over to their dying friend, when the green magic grip engulfed Yusei once again. He floated up, to the ceiling; and then the magic grip let go, He plummeted all the way to the ground and there was no way to catch him in time. He landed with a thud and his moan showed he was still alive but barely. Crow and Jack look down upon their friend and saw his duel disc on his arm. “Crow do you have your duel disc and deck?” Jack asked his determined face confused Crow but he did as they were told. He had his as well. “Yeah so?” “So, time for some payback and some vengeance for our friend,” Jack said. This time Crow understood him; he grinned. They pulled the first cards on their decks. Their best cards appeared in their hand. Jack showed Queen Chrysalis his Red Dragon Archfiend card, “You’re going to be sorry you ever messed with us.” “Oh, a card. I’m terrified. Not!” Queen Chrysalis gave a laugh that only the wicked could pull off. “Well you should be! Because you might wanna watch this,” Crow and Jack activated their duel discs and summoned their dragons. While Jack summoned Red Dragon Archfiend, Crow summoned his dragon, known as, Black-Winged Dragon. They became real living creatures. “Now attack Red Dragon Archfiend!” Jack ordered. “You heard him, Black-Winged Dragon! Attack!” Crow yelled.
Chapter 6: Escape is Necessary (And Life)***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 6: Escape is Necessary (And Life)*** As Black-Winged Dragon attacked, over one hundred changeling servants blocked the path; But all of them got knocked out in the process. The leftover force rammed right into the queen. It slammed her against them wall. Before she could even get back up on her hooves. Red Dragon Archfiend hit her knocking her out. “Okay, let’s get Yusei and get out of here!” Crow exclaimed. “Right,” Jack agreed. They ran over to Yusei, who was still unconscious on the ground. Jack picked him up and put Yusei on his back. Yusei gave a small moan, showing he was on the brink. “Hang on, Yusei,” Jack said and secretly pleaded for his life and they ran. They ran through every tunnel and hall looking for the exit, looking for daylight. Once they found it a hoard of changelings covered the doorway hall. So Crow summoned Black-Winged Dragon once again and cleared a path. Not a moment too soon, as an angry Chrysalis was closing in. Her eyes blazing with fury. As the rescue group got closer to the hive, they saw a bunch of changelings supposed to be guarding the door run inside, looking angry and in a hurry. Then as fast as the group of changelings ran in, even more burst out with a high intensity force. Not only did a bunch of changeling burst out all fainted, but two figures burst out as well. As they ran and got closer, Akiza and Luna were able to recognize the two figures. So Akiza called out to them, “Jack! Crow!” She realized something, ‘Where is Yusei’ When they reached her she noticed Yusei on Jack’s back. “What happened to Yusei?” Luna asked. “Well, it is a long story. We don’t have that long. We need to get out of here,” Crow said and looked back to see Queen Chrysalis closing in. “I have a fabulous idea. Summon your dragons. Princess Luna, can you create a spell to make the others fly?” Akiza asked looking at Princess Luna. "Yes, why?" Princess Luna asked. "Because it's time to fly," Akiza said. With that, they got on top of their dragons. With Akiza's psychic help, they flew off towards Canterlot. Chrysalis growled and cursed under her breath due to another defeat. 'This is just the beginning,' She thought to herself. “Princess Luna? I didn’t expect you back so quickly. How did the peaceful negotiations go?” Princess Celestia asked her younger sister. “Well,” Princess Luna looked up at her elder sister, “We weren’t exactly able to negotiate. By the time we reached the hive, the three friends of Luna and Akiza were trying to escape. Well, two of the three were trying to escape; with an angry Chrysalis behind them.” “What do you mean by ‘two of the three?’” Celestia asked. “The third one was unconscious on one of the human’s back. He seemed in terrible condition,” Princess Luna said sadly, “I am sorry we could not negotiate.” Princess Celestia took a deep sigh, “Where are the humans now?” Princess Luna answered with deep concern, “In some living chamber. They took a lot of medical bandages with them. They said they were going to try to heal some of the hurt one’s wounds. I believe they said his name was, Yusei.” They stared at each other. Princess Luna’s eyes grew wide, as well as, Celestia. They gasped and started to run through the hall. As soon as they entered the living chambers where Akiza, Luna, Jack, and Crow were, they looked around for the bandaged Yusei. Jack sees Princess Celestia as she approaches Yusei, “Who are you?” he asks. “I’m Princess Celestia and I assume you have met my sister, Princess Luna.” Celestia said looking down upon her younger sibling. “Yeah, we've met,” Crow says, “ I’m Crow and this is Jack.” he said pointing over to his friend. “Very nice to meet you, now, may I take a look at your friend?” she asked her words calm and kind. Jack nodded and moved out of the way. They all watched as Princess Celestia’s horn glowed its golden aura. As she ended her scan of Yusei’s body, her eyes opened as though she was scared and shocked, “I need a medical table and equipment,” she told the guard; in turn he ran to go get the supplies. “What is it, sister?” Princess Luna looked at her elder with great concern. “It seems he has a powerful poison magic buried in her wounds. I know how to get the poison out; but, by the amount of blood loss and how much poison has been forced into his body, I am afraid I cannot guarantee he will make it. It is risky but I must try if he is to have a chance at life,” Princess Celestia says just as the medical table and tray of equipment roll in. “If it is okay with you, I will begin the procedure,” Her eyes we determined to save their friend’s life. They were hesitant but, allowed her to begin nonetheless. And she began; she undid the bandages already placed on Yusei. With that she saw how severe the cuts truly were. It pained her but she used her magic and surrounded him with it. He moaned but she kept the process going. As they watched from behind, they saw him getting worse by the minute. They felt his pain as though it was their own; but they stayed strong and held together, for Yusei. ‘Please, please let Yusei be okay,’ Akiza prayed, ‘It was Yusei who broke her out of her curse as the Black Rose. It was Yusei who brought them together. It was Yusei who wanted to be her first friend; and who saw her as a real person.’ Yusei moaned once again. “Yusei?” a man in the shadows asked concerned. Yusei looked at the mysterious figure. It was his father! A man who was sent to the Netherworld when the first Ener-D reactor malfunctioned. “Father? Where are we?” “We are in the Netherworld once again. I wonder why you are her,” Yusei’s father said. “I was being tortured by some creature. A very intelligent but sinister creature. That is not all before that we were sent to another world to help Luna and Akiza,” Yusei said, wincing at the painful memory. An hour had passed since Princess Celestia had begun the treatment. An hour of waiting and praying; worry and fear. “Alright, the treatment is done,” Celestia stated, “I have gotten out as much of the poison as possible. I don’t know precisely how much is left or if the amount can kill him. For now, he needs to rest, only time will tell if he will make it.” With the bleeding stopped and the bandages wrapped they place him on a bed set in the middle of the gold and white living chamber. Twilight and her friends left the room, with Twilight only looking back once. The princesses waited as the Akiza, Jack, Luna, and Crow gathered around Yusei. They were all praying for him to survive. “You may stay with Yusei for as long as you’d like. Just be careful of who ever enters the room,” Princess Celestia grants. After that, the two princesses leave the room, shutting the door behind them. They look up for only a second before looking back down toward their resting friend and prayed once more for their friend to live.
Chapter 7: A Troubling Revival***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 7: A Troubling Revival*** “You going to give in and help us?” Chrysalis asked. “We will never help anyone who wants revenge and seeks others’ pain,” Yusei fight against the magic grip was starting to seem futile. “Well if you insist,” Chrysalis laughed and used her sharp horn to slice deep into his skin. His blood was starting to flow out like a flood. “Yes, bleed! This can all be over if you just give in; join us! If not I will enjoy your screams and cries of pain." Yusei screamed louder and louder as the wounds grew deeper into his flesh. His back, legs, sides, and all of his body was getting sliced and cut deep by this Queen Chrysalis. He started to wonder if he would ever see his friends again. Terror began to fill inside of him. He may be hard to scare but, this shook him to the core. This pain was unlike anything he had ever felt. He kept screaming in terror and pain. Suddenly a loud burst of sound came through the door. He heard Crow! “YUSEI!” Crow kept screaming. “YUSEI!” He didn’t know what to do, so all he did was say the names of his friends, “Akiza, Luna, Jack, Crow... I’m sorry.” He cracks his eyes open, only to see a bright light fill the room before everything goes black. In reality the four signers and friends sit on Yusei’s bed and watch him as his eyes move from side to side and cringes. Akiza asks the big question on everybody’s mind, “What’s wrong with Yusei?” Yusei walks through a dark land. A land in which there is no light; most of the time. Suddenly a great light appears. But, as fast as it came, it left. Leaving the great Crimson Dragon in its place. The Crimson Dragon flew toward Yusei looking him straight in the eye. It grabs him and carries him as though it was carrying a small parcel. “Where are you taking me?” he asked the great dragon. All the dragon did was roar. The next thing Yusei saw, was a bright light in front of him. So bright he used his arms to shelter his eyes. Akiza, Jack, Luna, and Crow looked at Yusei with deep concern. His eye brows cringed as though he was trying to open them. And for once in two days, he finally opened his eyes. “Hey guys,” Yusei said as he looked at his friends. He looked around to see an unfamiliar area. “Where am I?” “Well Yusei, it’s a long story. But you're safe in the Canterlot Castle of Equestria, not only that but you need to recover. You have suffered majorly; been asleep for two days,” Crow informed Yusei. Yusei suddenly cringed as a massive headache overtook him. He started to remember everything. “I remember. The Changeling Empire must be stopped,” he tried to sit up only to be stopped by Jack. “You’re in no condition to fight. But we, however, are. We will protect this planet for you and all the creatures that helped you.” Jack said with a small smile to cheer up Yusei. Yusei gave a grin back to Jack and a look of relief to his friends. He soon closes his eyes. The four friends look at each other in concern. They turn back to Yusei to see he is passing into a deep sleep. They sigh to know he is only asleep and not something worse. Princess Celestia walks through the door, “It is nice to see Yusei has such caring and devoted friends. I am also glad to see you are willing to help us protect our land,” she smiled, “I was hoping to check up on Yusei’s condition, to make sure the poison is out of his system completely. May I?” Jack nods and the others follow. So she lets her gentle, magic aura encase Yusei for a full check of his body. She takes the magical aura around him fade. “When did Yusei wake up?” she asked Jack. Jack was confused, “He was awake about five minutes ago, why?” Princess Celestia replied in a sad tone, “We now have two problems on our hands. First of all, Queen Chrysalis is readying for an attack. Lastly, the poison in your friend seems to be growing again. In this case, there are two outcomes; death or everlasting sleep,” This shocked and scared everyone in the room, “There is only one cure, but I fear Yusei may not have enough time for you to find it, let alone get the antidote.” “We’ll do anything to make sure we get our friend back alive,” Jack says in determination. “The antidote is in the high mountains of a place called, Germaney. That is over three thousand miles away from here, a full five days flight,” Celestia responds. “By Yusei’s condition, he may not have that long.” “But we have to go!” Crow interjects, “He’s our friend!” They all nod in agreement. “Princess will you stay with Yusei and watch over him? Make sure nothing happens to him,” Akiza asks. “I will, now go now, and hurry back,” Princess Celestia agrees. Akiza, Jack, Crow, and Luna all leave to go get the antidote. 'Good Luck,' Celestia silently wishes them. She turns and looks towards Yusei. He cringes from the pain the poison gives him. Buzz... a buzz sound came from behind Celestia. She turns around to see nothing. “Who’s there?” right as she finishes she gets hit on the head and knocked out. She faints. A faint, creaky voice came from the shadows, “Target captured.” the creature picked up Yusei and drags him away.
Chapter 8: Meetings and Negotiations***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 8: Meeting and Negotiations*** Princess Luna suddenly hears the window, from the living chambers where Celestia is, slam shut. She breaks into a gallop. When she enters she gasps with shock. “Sister! Wake up!” Princess Luna nudges her sister to wake her. “Ugh,” Princess Celestia stirred trying to regain full consciousness. Starting to regain her memory of the night she shook her head to encourage her memory. “What happened?” Princess Luna asked. “I- I was attacked and knocked out before I could even figure out who was in the...” Celestia broke off and looked straight at the bed. Yusei was gone! She look down sad and guilty; guilty of breaking a promise. Back at the Hive, Yusei wakes up to the stone, cold room he remembers. The tortuous prison in which he was cut and sliced. Pain jolted back from the memory. The door burst open, and a creature came in. Yusei’s eyes opened in complete and utter fear. It was his torturer, the queen of this place, and one of his worst nightmares. Once again, Chrysalis picked him up using her magic. She laughed. “What do you want? Why did you bring me back when I won’t help you?” Yusei asked strongly, but he felt rather weak. “It’s simple, really, you’re my bargaining chip,” Chrysalis said. “Bargaining chip for what?” Yusei asked, feeling weaker every minute. “You see, I want to take over Equestria, if it wasn’t obvious. I will threaten them with just one thing.. you,” Chrysalis said shocking Yusei. “What do you mean, threaten them? How?” Yusei asked. Although he was getting weaker, he was growing stronger, too. “My threat is simple; if they don’t surrender, you die,” she said sinisterly. “Now don’t expect anything special. I will try to make sure your stay here as miserable as possible and watch you suffer. This is all because you attempted to get out of my grasp," she finished pretending to examine her hoof. “You’re sick!” Yusei yelled. He tried to squirm out of her magic grip, but had no such luck. Chrysalis got infuriated at that comment and took a good slice as his leg. With the grip so strong, Yusei could barely move. No way to avoid or move from every slice. They pain worsened as more slices were thrown. He screamed in pain. The door closed to have everything turn pitch black. Jack, Luna, Crow, and Akiza flew through the air. As though, the sky was the limit. As refreshing as it was to be in the air, they knew they had a task on their hands. Something appeared in front of Jack; it was a note. “Jack, what is it?” Akiza asked. “It’s a note from Princess Celestia; saying we need to come back,” Jack answered. “Like now?” Luna asked worried. “Yeah, it says here ‘that something horrible has happened and we need to return now’,” Jack read, “Is it just me, or is that a bit worrying?” “We need to get back, Jack. Can we go or what?” Akiza questioned. “Yeah, let’s go!” with that they turned around and headed back to the castle as fast as they could. When they reach the castle, they run as fast as they can to the Princess’ throne room. When they entered, they could feel the sadness in the air. “Hey! What’s going on?” Crow asked. “What could be more important than the antidote?” Jack asked. “I realize your confusion and concern; but, what can you do with the antidote,” Princess Celestia let it soak in for a moment before continuing, “if he is not here?” “What are you saying? That he suddenly walked off in the middle of the day without anyone seeing him,” Crow said. “I am saying he was taken, once again. We know it is by the Changelings and by Queen Chrysalis. But why she took him we do not know,” Celestia stated in a sorrowful tone. “What happened? How could you have not saved him?” Akiza asked absolutely concerned. “I was watching him, when I felt a movement behind me. I looked behind me to see nothing there. Last thing I remember is waking up to Luna’s nudge,” Celestia stated, “I was knocked out before I could do a thing. I am terribly sorry.” They didn’t seemed pleased but Luna spoke up, “Is there anything we can do to get him back?” Before Celestia could say a single word a wrinkled, old piece of paper appeared in front of her. She started to read it and her mouth dropped. “Well, what does it say?” Jack asked. Celestia cleared her throat, "It says: 'Dear Princess Celestia and Other Humans, If you want to see your friend Yusei again, come to the Sheerful Cliff in one hour, to negotiate the ruling of Equestria. Signed, Queen Chrysalis of the Changelings.' Celestia read aloud as she wrote at the bottom, ‘We will be there in one hour. -Princess Celestia’ “You do know this is most likely a trap, right Princess?” Crow asked. “I know, Crow,” Celestia said. “In that case, there is no doubt we are all coming with you! No matter what you say,” Jack said determined. “Of course. I am certain I will need your help to rescue Yusei. Chrysalis will most likely not give up Yusei without a fight,” Celestia said. With that in play, they leave to go to Sheerful Cliff and stop Chrysalis in her tracks. After an hour long flight to Sheerful Cliff, they reach it to a not so pretty sight. Chrysalis was standing before a large pole. But it was no ordinary pole, it had a rope tied to the top; and hanging from that rope was a torn up, unconscious Yusei. “What did you do to our friend?” Jack yelled angrily. “He put up a good fight but, not as much as last time. He will surely be in deep trouble if negotiations do not go as planned,” Chrysalis simply stated as though it was nothing unusual. “What do you want, Chrysalis?” Celestia asked getting straight to the point. “Isn’t it obvious? I want to rule Equestria, as I have already tried as you already know,” Queen Chrysalis said nonchalant. Celestia answered, “I will not allow that to happen.” With anger, Chrysalis lights up her horn and Yusei starts to scream and moan in deep and undesirable pain. “What are you doing to Yusei? Why are you?” Akiza asked confused and furious. Chrysalis grinned, “I’m giving Yusei a little ‘push’. The longer I do it, the fast the poison moves about and kills him. Then again, if it doesn’t kill him, I don’t know what it will do. After all, they die usually.” “That’s why I won’t let you take over Equestria. You kill for pleasure,” Celestia snapped. Chrysalis’ horn grew brighter and brighter; Yusei’s screams and moans of pain intensified. Jack was getting infuriated, “Don't make this any worse for anyone, just give up and hand over our friend!” This angered Chrysalis even more. To the point where Yusei’s pain grew even worse and he couldn’t even scream as much anymore. It was Luna’s turn to get mad and yell, "What are you doing?! He's not some creature you can torture to get what you want!" “That’s exactly what he is and if he doesn’t behave he’ll fade away!” Chrysalis snapped back. Celestia calmed down but was still sturn, “You have one last chance, Chrysalis. You will give up Yusei and leave us.” “Never!” Chrysalis refuses. She was treated horribly by ponies in the past but not anymore. Celestia gathers around the four signers and whispers to them. “Get ready to go save Yusei.”
Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth*** In a sudden instant, Princess Celestia raised into the air and used her horn to attack the queen. With the sudden stream of light heading her way, Chrysalis defended herself by attacking the Princess with her own magical power. With the distraction in place, Yusei’s friends sneak past Chrysalis to go untie Yusei. But in their haste, Chrysalis saw them in the very back corner of her eye. Chrysalis yelled, “Get them!” Then, before anyone knew it, a hundred or so changelings appeared out of thin air and attacked the four signers. In return to the attack, Jack and Crow brought out their duel discs and summon their best beasts; Red Dragon Archfiend and Black-Winged Dragon. Jack yelled back to Luna and Akiza, “Go! We’ll hold them off! Get Yusei to safety!” Akiza and Luna nodded and started to run to Yusei who was on the edge of the cliff. As they were getting closer to Yusei, a Changeling drone approached Luna and pushed her off the edge. Akiza reached for her but got cut short. Luckily, Luna was able to grab a small ledge before anything bad could happen. “Luna! Grab my hand!” Akiza called. With a struggle, Luna reached for Akiza’s hand. When she couldn’t reach, the small ledge holding her broke. “Akiza! Help!” Luna cried as she fell. Jack and Crow watched the horrible situation, feeling helpless and useless. But, something caught Crow and Jack’s eye. It was Yusei’s mark and it was glowing bright. Then as sudden as Yusei’s mark glowed, the Crimson Dragon appeared. It sent a glowing bubble that encircled Luna. And floated her upward and out of the ravine. Luna stood on the ledge of the cliff next to Akiza, who sighed with relief along with Jack and Crow. With a realization of the situation at hand, they ran towards Yusei. They untied Yusei in a rush but careful not to injure him more than he already was. Akiza looks for a pulse and finds a very, very faint one. Luna saw that she could barely see Yusei’s chest moving up and down in a steady breath pattern. “Akiza, I think he is already fading away. Look he is barely even breathing,” Luna said in an overwhelming jolt of concern. Her eyes starting to fill with tears. “We got to stay positive, Luna,” Akiza said trying to cheer up Luna, as well as herself. Her eyes were also starting to well up in tears. They look down at Yusei, “I’m... sorry...” he said and with that his mark disappeared along with his breath. Akiza and Luna started to cry and sob at Yusei’s side. Jack and Crow looked back to see Akiza and Luna sobbing at Yusei’s side with their tears dropping onto him. They watch in shock but their anger grows in numbers. Jack says, "You'll be avenged old friend," and he orders his dragon to attack. Crow's dragon follows and Crow says, "No one ever takes a life without paying for it." Their dragons take out every changeling battle drone, and ram right into Queen Chrysalis. In the hit, Princess Celestia’s attack hit the Queen as well, as the energy of the light hits her, she says one thing, “I will be back! And when I do, you will all pay!” With that the queen screams and disappears. They all run over to Yusei in a desperate attempt to see if it was true; If he was dead. By the time they reach him, his face and body are already losing color. Celestia's ears fold back and she says, "I'm sorry I was not able to save him," and walks away in a sad and discomforting mood. As they all mourn the death of their best friend, Ancient Fairy Dragon and Regulus appear. Luna feels their presence and looks up to see them. “What are you doing here?” she asked. “We are here to help Yusei,” Ancient Fairy Dragon states. “Help him? How can you help him if he’s...” Luna broke off, unable to say the word. “We will show you,” and they did. They leaned forward. Regulus lit up his horn with a bright glow, and Ancient Fairy Dragon made a ball of light and placed it on Yusei’s chest. A bright light was shone through the mourn and everyone, but Luna, covered their eyes to shield them from the light as bright as the sun. Less than two minutes later, Yusei’s Mark of the Dragon Head reappears on his arm and his face grew in color, once again. They sighed with relief as Yusei’s eyes opened and refocused. “W-what happened?” he asked. “Well, we have never been more glad to see you awake. I’ll give you that,” Jack said with relief clear on his face, “Luna, your power to speak with the spirits has really come in handy this time.” Crow checks Yusei over to see all of the cuts, scars, and sliced- up areas were gone, “Hey, guys, look. All of Yusei’s wounds are gone. Yusei sits up, “I’m starting to remember everything. Where did Chrysalis go?” “She gone, Yusei; gone for good,” Akiza said, she got a smile from Yusei. Yusei stands up with the help of his friends and they hurry to catch up with Celestia. Celestia sees them run up and asks them, “What happened? How is Yusei still alive?” "It was Ancient Fairy Dragon and Regulus. They brought Yusei back to life," Luna stated happily. They all smiled at that fact. "Well, it seems your time here is finished; due to you finishing your duty here. But, you are welcome here any time," Celestia says. "You're right, we should be getting back. Our friends at home will be worried," Yusei agrees. The Crimson Dragon appears to welcome them to leave. "Thank you for your help," Yusei thanks. "Your friends helped me, so it is the least I could do," Celestia says and with that they leave. “Goodbye!” Luna called. “Farewell!” Celestia called with a smile. They went their separate ways one going to the Canterlot Castle, five walking into the bubble the Crimson Dragon left for them and went to Earth. A bright bubble illuminates the entire garage and from it came Jack, Crow, Yusei, Akiza, and Luna. Jack says with a grin, "It's never felt so good to be back home," Yusei and the others nod in agreement, Yusei especially. The door suddenly burst open. From it come Leo and Dexter. Leo is Luna’s twin brother, and Dexter is Luna and Leo’s best friend. “What happened to you guys?” Dexter asks. “Yeah we’ve been looking for you for five days! I mean, you guys just fell off the face of the Earth!” Leo exclaimed. “That’s because we were,” Yusei stated nonchalant. “What? What happened? Where’d you go?” Leo babbled. They smiled. Yusei looked behind him and Jack, Luna, Akiza and Crow nodded. “Well, we sort of visited a planet called Equestria,” Yusei started. “What? Tell us more Yusei!” Dexter demanded. So Yusei did, he told them the story. And that story is being told around Equestria itself. But only the princesses know who the real heros are. For the story is that five ponies were the ones that helped Equestria, and only a select few know the truth.
Chapter 1: Where are we?***Yu Gi Oh 5Ds Meets Equestria Chapter 1: Where are we?*** As every story has a beginning, they always have an end. Before we have a say in the ending shall we look at the beginning... ________________________________________________________________________________________ Five thousand years ago, there was a great battle between The Signers and Dark Signers. The Signers were the ones who protected life and the light of the Crimson Dragon. The Dark Signers were the ones who wanted destruction and protected the darkness. Now, five thousand years later, five new signers are chosen to battle the Dark Signers once again. These five signers are Yusei Fudo, Jack Atlas, Crow Hogan, Akiza Izinski, and Luna. They were amazing at the dueling game, Duel Monsters. But, they were also caring for friends and life. Yusei, Jack, and Crow were not only great Duelist on the ground, but also great duelist on the road. This was known as Turbo Dueling. Akiza and Luna have special abilities. Akiza can duel and make her duel monsters become real and create real damage if necessary. Luna can talk to the spirits of the duel monsters and enter their own world. You see, duel monsters aren't just cards, they have spirits as well. They battled all the Dark signers and eventually won. But, they had to stop the King of the Netherworld. The Netherworld is a place of negative energy and darkness. They defeated the King of the Netherworld after battling Director Goodwin, who wanted to destroy the world and rebuild it in his image. He failed obviously. Yusei in return for defeating Goodwin, got the Mark of the Crimson Dragon, which allowed him to summon the Crimson Dragon if needed. So, with it he began new adventures and got new enemies as well as new allies. With their might, they swore to protect life no matter in what form. So they did. And now a new adventure is awaiting the five signers. Shall we begin? "Ugh," Luna groans and struggles to sit up. Her eyes flash open. Where is she? She could see Akiza near her, her form rhythmically rising and falling as she began to awaken. “W-where am I? Akiza?” “Ugh,” Akiza started to wake up as well, “Luna? Where are we?” "I- I don't know. Maybe we're in the Spirit World. But then again, you wouldn't be here, would you?" Luna ponders, panic rising. “I don’t think I would be. Plus the fact that, wouldn't a bunch of Spirit World creatures come around you or something?” Akiza asked, trying to make sense of everything that has happened. “You’re right. They would be,” Luna started to look down sad and frightened. She heard a branch snap and they both went into alert. They crawled over behind a bush to see what the sound was. A purple unicorn, a pink pony, and a cyan pegasus were there. They seemed to be talking to each other. “I thought unicorns and pegasi were just a myth. Not including a pink pony!” Luna whispered into Akiza’s ear. “I thought so, too. Do you think this is a dream?” Akiza asked. “I don’t think so. It’s not even possible for us to have the same dream. Is it?” Luna said, but it was a bit loud. Akiza nodded, but out of the corner of her eye, she saw the three figures perk up and looked in their direction. They walked over slowly, while Luna and Akiza froze. “Tia!” Princess Luna looked up at her older sister. “Yes, Luna, I felt it as well,” Princess Celestia said in a alert but calm fashion; looking down at her sister. “What is it though?” Luna asked. “I am guessing, as impossible as it may be, something has just been transported from one dimension to another,” Princess Celestia says concerned, “We must find whatever it is, before it is found and taken into the wrong hands.” The two groups stare at each other having a hard time comprehending what is going on. The purple unicorn soon spoke up, “Who and what are you? Why are you here?” Akiza was the first to answer, “My name is Akiza. This is Luna,” she said, she put her hand out to show Luna, who was slightly cowering. “We are humans. You don’t know what a human is? Heck, why am I asking? It’s a unicorn!” “We don’t know what a human is because we never discovered it. What does that have to do with me being a unicorn?” the purple unicorn asked defensively. “Well, you see, where we come from unicorns and pegasi are nothing but a myth. As well as gods and other creatures; like colored ponies. As for why we are here, we don’t know. All we know is that we are here,” Luna said shyly. “Wh-who are you?” “My name is Twilight Sparkle,” Twilight said proudly. The pink pony was next to speak; who shockingly, spoke with enthusiasm and excitement, “Hi! I’m Pinkie Pie! I am so so so so so happy to meet you!” Pinkie Pie seemed like a pony that could defy anything; and annoy anything. The cyan pegasus was last to speak and she spoke with pride, “I’m Rainbow Dash. The fastest flyer in the land! But, how is it you don’t see us as real beings? I mean, where you come from anyways.” “I don’t know. We just never saw them so they just faded into myth, I guess,” Akiza said. A strong gust of wind blew, making Akiza’s red velvet hair blow from side to side, as well as, Luna’s bright, turquoise hair. When the wind stopped Twilight once again spoke, “Come on. We will go to my place. There we can talk some more. But for now, I will not tell you anything else other than you are in a place known as Equestria. A place of magic and peace. I can tell you more after I write the princess and find out what to do. So, come on.” So they followed Twilight, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie; their mane and tails flowing in the wind. Pinkie Pie was jumping up and down excitedly until they reached Twilight’s home.
Author's NoteHey people, I know I haven't been on in forever and this will be only time on. I thought I would just say that I have read your comments and I am a bit sad as to how harsh you were to this writer. You have to understand, I wrote this when I was about nine or ten. So do you really expect a nine or ten year old girl to be able to write perfect grammar! Please stop being so harsh. I admit, you are entitled to your opinion and I also feel bad of how terrible my grammar was. But I can't fix the grammar now as I have other stories to work on in my fanfiction account. You are welcome to criticize me all you want but be a bit kinder about it. I was only a kid back then. And I'm only a teenager now. I'm not going to have professional level writing skills. So please be more considerate and kinder before making such harsh comments. Thanks for reading this and think about what I'm saying. -bricann