This Mare I Love.

by Overwhelming Light

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Fluttershy, Sex, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Rarity
Length: 2775

Created by a friend of mine for the purpose of 'What If?' Midnight Dash has had feelings for this certain mare before she even knew who he was. He succumbs to his wandering mind and finally confronts his love.

Created by MidnightDash Joe.
Midnight wants to finally confess to his true love about how he feels and he is very uncertain how to approach it, but he has to try.
Yes clop does happen and yes this was a first try. So please be nice.
Cover Art is just adorable... so yeah.

Published 2013-01-30 03:40:01 UTC
Last updated 2013-06-23 23:42:14 UTC

This Mare I Love.

This Mare I Love...

Ever since I could remember, there was always this mare who I could do nothing but think about. Her name is Fluttershy. She is shy, cute, and beautiful. She’s more than I could ever imagine. She makes me heart pound every time I see her beautiful face, she always shows so much kindness toward everypony it warms my heart. I would give anything to be with her. She has shown kindness to all, she has shown kindness to the god of chaos. Why not me? Then I subdue the thought and focus on her perfect personality. Her adorable shyness, her beautiful voice. She is perfect in every way. I’d never make it with her though…she’s way to good for me…but I at least want to try with her.

“Hey? Midnight buddy you okay?” asked my friend Overwhelming Light.

“Uhh yeah” I replied uncertain what was going on outside my mind.

“You sure? You look like your real anxious about something.” He replied.

“Uhh yeah. I’ll catch you later. I got to go uh do something…” I said quickly and ran off before he could ask why. My mind was some where else as I walked, for I went somewhere I felt I would never go. I instantly recognized the home I was steadily approaching. The beautiful tree home that belonged to the mare who owned my heart. I stood at Fluttershy’s doorstep unsure of myself. I gently raised a quivering hoof and knocked on the door lightly. She answered the door in the very soft magical sounding voice that she only could make. She creaked the door opened only a little.

“W-Who is it?” Fluttershy asked timidly.

“I-Its Midnight Dash…I was wondering if…we could possibly uhh...” I didn’t get to speak. I ended up passing out on her doorstep, hitting the ground with a dull 'thud'. The last thing I saw were those beautiful teal eyes looking down upon me in concern and worry.

I awoke inside of a home, very comfortably. I felt a very loving warmth on my side. I glanced over wearily and noticed Fluttershy up against me, nuzzling my chest. She opened one eye slowly and stared into my eyes. I blushed, I was not used to the attention of such a mare. She slowly noticed that she was laying beside and her cheeks flushed red and awkwardly got up.

“Oh! I’m sorry!” She said while blushing.

“It’s okay.” I said but at the same time I wondered what made her do it.

“May I ask you something?” I asked.

“Um y-yeah s-sure.” She replied shyly.

“I think your…cute…amazing…and-and beautiful...” I stated my voice going to a whisper. “I really want to be more than just this…Fluttershy…would you be kind enough to be my m-marefriend?” I asked making my heart beat rapidly. I hoped with every existence of me that she'd say yes.

Her whole face turned into a very very dark blush, she had hid behind her mane as I had complemented her, but now she was staring deep into my eyes. Her gaze was unwavering and I swore I saw a spark in her eye when she spoke.

“Yes…yes I will be your marefriend.” She said in the softest voice she could ever have.
I hugged her in excitement. She giggled lovingly at me and I smiled at her. I finally did it. She was mine and mine only. But one thing… I never have kissed anyone before…this was about to get awkward until she nervously asked me...

“So…have you ever um you know…kissed before?”

I put my head down and replied with honesty. “No…I haven’t…”

She came closer to me putting her hooves together with mine and moved her head towards mine closing her eyes slowly. She pressed her lips against mine. My heart began beating out of my chest. She moved so she was on top of me, and at the same time able to hug me. She then began to make the kissing become more intimate. I couldn’t think straight. How could I go from never having anypony to this? She then pulled away from me. She looked deep into me. Her beautiful orbs of teal glistened from the light shining from the candles. She then took my hoof and pulled it towards her body. She was warm, sweaty, and quivering. I felt a bead of sweat roll down my neck. I started to feel light-headed and a little shaky.

She took my hoof from her neck, slowly sliding it down her soft sweat moistened skin to her marehood. I didn’t know how to do any of this. I’m a complete novice of everything in a relationship! I went along with her, she was wet, very very wet. My hoof entered her body as she guided it. I began to move slowly in her. Her slick juices now covered my hoof. She began to breathe heavily. I continued, she then grabbed me tight.

She whispered out softly 'Faster…' so I went faster. Instead of heavy breathing she let out a few moans and grunts in her cute little voice of hers. Her face was blush red with her eyes almost shut with tears forming in each and her mouth open. She this time was shouting 'Yes! Faster!' So I went as fast as I could. She was overall yelling now. Saying my name here and there between breaths. Then she grabbed me as tight as possible and let out a loud moan. Her eyes rolled into the back of her head as euphoria overcame all of her senses. She came.

Her hot sweaty body then collapsed on top of me. She quivered slightly, her body pulsating from her intense orgasm. I couldn't believe any of this. I was waiting to awake from my bed but it never happened. This was real for once…

Yay! I'm helping!

I awoke to just me spread eagle on the floor. She was somewhere else. Where? Hell I don’t know. I rolled over and wiped the drool off my face. I decided to take a look around. It looked like a great place to live to me. I lived in an apartment so anything is going to be nicer. I looked out a window to see Fluttershy with Twilight. Me? Heh. Decided to go out to see them. Walking closer, my heart started to begin to beat faster. The pounding grew louder into my ears. I was a few steps from them when Fluttershy turned around to greet me.

“Good morning Nighty.” she said. My face turning red as I smiled and looked away.

“Nighty?” I asked quietly.

“Um yeah, I made you a nickname.” she said as she smiled at me.

“So you gonna introduce me to your friend Fluttershy?” Twilight asked.

“Oh um, yes. Twilight, this is Midnight Dash.”said Fluttershy.

“Nice to meet you there Midnight Dash.” Said Twilight.

“N-Nice to meet you too.” I stuttered out.

They both smiled at me, and of course my face got red like a balloon. They both giggled and laughed at my embarrassment. Then a shot of rainbow came down from the sky. It had to be Rainbow Dash.

“Who’s this Fluttershy? Your coltfriend?” She asked while getting up into my face.

“Well I um… Not exactly… um yeah…” Fluttershy said.

Twilight pushed Rainbow Dash back so I wasn’t uncomfortable anymore.

“So um… What are you guys doing?” I asked.

Twilight replied, “Well I was talking to Fluttershy about some personal matters, and Rainbow Dash was supposed to be clearing the skies.”

“Well excuse me princess!” yelled Rainbow Dash as she took off.

“Watch this.” said Twilight.

In 10 seconds flat the sky was clear. My jaw dropped. I’ve never seen this before. It was amazing.

“How did ya like that?” Rainbow Dash exclaimed.

“That’s great. Thanks Dash!” replied Twilight.

“So while you’re here Nighty, why don’t you meet the rest of us?” She asked.

“Oh um… Sure.” I replied unsure of what I was in for.

We walked a while. Fluttershy with her wing around me while leaning against me. We were outside Rarity's. I usually did not dare to go near her. I was always afraid of what she might say about me.

Twilight knocked on the door “Rarity! We have someone for you to meet!”

The door opened to see a white pony with purple hair with red glasses on. She looked stressed.

“Hello darlings. Please come in.” Rarity said as she continued to work on a fashion style.

Me? I could really care less about what anypony wears, but to her. Everything must be perfect.

“Whatcha working on?” Twilight asked.

“Oh its nothing just a new fashion for the stallions of Ponyville.” Rarity said with a smile. “ This would be easier if I had a stallion here to try them on though.” She said as she looked towards me with a sneaky smile.

“Me?’’ I asked.

“Yes, Yes dear. Come here this instant!” She said. She put the suit on me which was really tight.

“Suck it in!” Rarity said as she tried to button the front of the dress shirt.

“I am!” I yelled as the shirt buttons flew off.

“Oh darn it!” Rarity said. “That took me all night to prepare!” She said sadly as she gathered up the remains.

I felt bad. So I decided to ask if I could help.

“Would you possibly want an actual stallion to use as a manikin?” I asked unsure what I was in for.

“If you’re up for it, then yes.” She said.

“Um sorry Shy. I guess Ill see you tomorrow I guess.” I told her as Rarity pulled me away.

“Yeah um see you tomorrow.” She said as Twilight walked her out of the house.

It was getting late. The sun was starting to set and the moon started to rise.

“Now stand here with your chin up… Um I'm sorry I don’t think I got your name darling?” Rarity stated.

“Oh it's um… Midnight Dash.” I replied back.

“Okay then Midnight Dash. Stand here while I measure you.” She said.

It was a little awkward having her with a measuring tape going around my neck. I felt like I was gonna be choked. She continued measuring until she got to my body(waist?) She bent down under me to retrieve the other end of the measuring tape. She brushed against me in a spot where um… yeah…

Happy time down south.

“20 inches!” She said while she was still under me. At first I thought she was talking about my body(waist) size. Then I realized. There was no measuring tape around my middle. I felt her move out from underneath me. She starred into my eyes. She put her glasses and tools down and pushed me over so I was on my back on her bed. She leaned over me while stroking my cock.

“Now, now. What do we have here?” She asked as she looked at me with a smirk.

I said nothing. I couldn’t. I was in shock.

“Whats the matter darling? Opal got you tongue?” She asked as she moved closer to me. She kissed me while stroking my cock. Then she pulled away and moved her mane away from her eyes while moving her face closer to my cock. She licked it from top to bottom before she opened her mouth and gave it a tentative lick. Next thing I knew she took me in her mouth. I cringed in pleasure but she moved my legs apart again. I heard a laugh. She arose once again to put me inside of her. The look on her face was a face a mare gets only while in heat. Lucky me right? I felt the inside of her. It was warm and wet. Abnormally tight. She let out a slight moan when I felt myself hit the end of her vagina.

“Looks like I got myself a big boy” She said staring at me with the bedroom eyes. She started to ride me. Moving slowly up and down on my cock for her own pleasure. She then moved off me. She knelt down on her front hooves. Her luscious flank was in the air, it was irresistible.

“What are you waiting for?” She said as she looked back with lust filled eyes and sweat running down her face smearing her makeup making her even more sexy.

I mounted her as I shoved myself deep inside her. I moved slowly until she spoke.

“Ride me like a naughty pony!”

I was amazed at what she said and I followed her command. I went as fast as I could.

“Pound me harder!” She moaned out.

She was not exactly quiet. She was quite loud with all her groans and moans. I continued anyways until I felt a tight feeling in my cock. I slowed down and she removed herself from underneath me. She began to suck me again. With each time the feeling growing harder as if my cock was going to explode. Then It happened. I let out a deep breath followed by a slight moan. I shot cum from her face clear to her cunt. She scooped it up with her hoof bringing it into her mouth.

She looked like a hot mess. Hair messed up. Make up smeared. And cum all over.

“Can't just waste it can we?” She said as she licked the rest of the cum up.

I blushed and turned away. I felt her wrap herself around me. I was tired. I almost fell asleep in her arms until she made me wake back up.

“Now now. No sleeping yet! We have got work to do!” she said while patting my stomach. I stood up and let her measure my middle again. This time without an interruption.

After she had measured me, I quickly passed out on a nearby couch. When I awoke Rarity was smiling. I groggily got up.

“Ready to be a manikin?” Rarity smiled.

I nodded.

She put a dark red fabric over me to make the dress shirt. I kind of liked it. She then began to add anything she thought went well with it. I ended up with a dark red shirt. A white bow tie. A black pin-stripped suit with a matching hat. She backed away to look at me. She studied me for a moment then smiled. She put a white flower onto my shirt, and then put a monocle on my left eye. She laughed.

“What?” I said.

“You look like a handsome stallion is all.” She replied still trying not to giggle at me. “Now if you’ll excuse me I have to fix myself up real quick. Don’t touch anything! Got it?” she said.

“Yes ma'am!” I said jokingly while saluting her as if she were my commanding officer.

She left the room. I had the urge to look around but I was afraid of me doing something wrong so I stayed put. I started to think. What if Fluttershy finds out?! I mean… I think she is overall my marefriend right? I started to panic inside my mind. I think I fucked up, but at the same time maybe I didn’t.

“Fluttershy! Come in dear! Come see your little Nighty.” Rarity said. I started to shake as I heard them getting closer to the room I was in. Maybe if I act like nothing happened she wont notice. I closed my eyes until I opened them to see the adorable face of Fluttershy. She smiled at me, then kissed me, making me blush.

“He looks great Rarity.” She said happily.

“Of course he does darling. I made it myself.” Rarity replied proudly.

I couldn’t really see out my left eye, because of the great hug Fluttershy was giving me, but I saw something outside the window fly past. It was a black blur. Did I know what it was? Eeeyu…. No. I had no Idea. Most likely a bird. Rarity undressed me and told me I was free to go with Fluttershy.

We said goodbye to Rarity, but as I looked back she winked at me. I began to walk faster with Fluttershy until we ran into Twilight again.

“So Nighty, how did it go with Rarity?” She asked as she approached me.

“Fine I guess.” I replied while thinking of the night I had with her.

“That’s good. Well hey Fluttershy I was just going to AJ’s. You wanna come along?” Twilight asked.

“I'd love to.” Fluttershy said as she pulled me along with her wing around me.