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When I Cry

by Brony Hectic
When a new colt moves to Ponyville in the beginning of summer he quickly finds trouble with some delinquents and quickly finds what he might call love.

As of February 14th, 2018 this project is canceled. It is unlikely I will pick this up again however it isn't impossible.
Dim Shadow, a new colt moves into Ponyville during the beginning summer. Dim will do his best to stand up for anypony and he loves doing it, it's even his cutie mark. Dim isn't the strongest but he won't hesitate to fight to prove his point, however he won't try to start a fight. After a small quarrel at a park he precedes to the school park to be alone, hoping that there won't be anypony there, he was wrong. He hears crying and quickly rushes to source of it. Before his eyes, he see's three ponies huddled around and verbally abusing a filly; at that point he doesn't waste another second and immediately runs to assist the filly. That day will start something new for Dim.

Major thanks to BluRoseFriendship for making the cover art.

Teen
Cancelled
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Sad
Romance
Slice of Life
 
SSOCD

63204 words: Estimated about 5 hours to read
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41 Chapters:

  1. First Impressions 2013-02-07 01:16:33 UTC
    795
  2. One vs Three 2013-02-07 01:17:02 UTC
    1115
  3. Making Friends 2013-02-08 03:57:01 UTC
    1612
  4. Vengeance is in Order 2013-02-09 05:00:15 UTC
    1089
  5. Truth Be Told 2013-02-10 02:52:11 UTC
    993
  6. Just One Page 2013-02-12 20:42:24 UTC
    2306
  7. Writing on the Page 2013-02-15 06:35:05 UTC
    2914
  8. Call it a Date 2013-02-20 01:53:08 UTC
    1511
  9. By the Entrance at 9:56 2013-03-21 01:32:42 UTC
    2097
  10. The Journal 2013-04-02 03:23:33 UTC
    1394
  11. face stomach 2013-04-13 01:08:27 UTC
    1395
  12. Fear Facing 2013-04-19 22:53:29 UTC
    811
  13. Sweet, Sweet, Vengeance 2013-04-21 23:48:56 UTC
    1459
  14. Oh No... 2013-05-20 02:18:54 UTC
    1300
  15. Dim Shadow does not negotiate with terrorists. 2013-05-25 02:30:49 UTC
    1204
  16. Observations 2013-05-27 01:05:09 UTC
    385
  17. Reinforcements 2013-06-01 13:04:29 UTC
    1431
  18. There's no such thing as monsters 2013-06-11 02:02:43 UTC
    1219
  19. I'm Just Saying 2013-06-22 15:12:41 UTC
    1484
  20. Reactions and Reasons 2013-07-04 12:53:46 UTC
    1089
  21. Planning 2013-07-13 02:56:12 UTC
    1020
  22. Right about now 2013-07-31 22:12:07 UTC
    1532
  23. Mental Assault 2013-08-13 12:51:09 UTC
    1314
  24. Getting to Know You Better 2013-08-23 01:21:06 UTC
    2005
  25. Adventure! 2013-09-08 16:28:44 UTC
    2155
  26. And Here We go 2013-09-19 00:48:35 UTC
    2566
  27. Reassurance 2013-09-26 19:34:24 UTC
    1938
  28. Filler 2013-10-09 21:12:57 UTC
    1565
  29. By a River 2013-10-18 20:11:18 UTC
    955
  30. A Couple Questions 2013-11-05 02:35:12 UTC
    1242
  31. Hired Gun 2013-11-18 21:30:20 UTC
    1533
  32. A Friendly Letter 2013-12-03 21:25:48 UTC
    979
  33. Dancing With the Devil 2013-12-16 22:12:31 UTC
    1239
  34. Hate to Bloodshed 2014-01-02 21:33:27 UTC
    2292
  35. Two Sides to Every Story 2014-01-26 03:07:06 UTC
    1228
  36. Revelations 2014-02-24 11:34:47 UTC
    1852
  37. Liquid Emotion 2014-04-13 10:33:14 UTC
    2441
  38. A Little Honesty 2014-05-22 21:23:26 UTC
    1014
  39. True Colors 2014-07-16 03:07:26 UTC
    1510
  40. Broken Frame 2014-09-14 21:15:41 UTC
    1450
  41. Shadows in the Moonlight 2015-06-06 23:33:30 UTC
    3771