Twilit Butterfly

by Jumpitydude
A staight Twilight has to deal with a love struck Fluttershy

When Twilight turns down Fluttershy's advances, she learns that a few small assumptions can go a long way.

Although I don't have any prereaders for this, and it's my first story published here, it is not my first story, and I do have a good bit of writing experience. Don't go easy on me. Or, as we say on the internet, come at me bro!

EDIT: Okay, due to some comments, a rewrite is in progress, with some plot holes covered, and with some scenes rewritten entirely. As such, the first chapter is now the "rush" version, and a "full" version is in progress. Thank you for your opinions.

Everyone
Complete
Romance
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
MS

6246 words: Estimated 31 minutes to read

4 Chapters:

  1. "Rush" version 2012-01-24 15:19:11 UTC
    1294
  2. "Full" Version, part one 2012-05-27 20:40:15 UTC
    1956
  3. "Full" Version, part two 2013-06-26 14:07:47 UTC
    1932
  4. "Full" Version, part three, FINALLY! 2014-03-05 00:28:06 UTC
    1064