The Vengeful New Comer

by shadowmane229

Rating: everyone
Tags: Original Character, Queen Chrysalis, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Nightmare Moon
Length: 965

A new comer named Shadow Mane travels to Ponyville to make some friends, he meets a mare named Violet Luminescence, He thinks she has no interest in him, or does she...?

A new comer named Shadow Mane, goes to ponyville, Meanwhile, Twilight Sparkle reads a prophecy that makes her suspicious of the new pegisus, so she tries driving him away, Shadow Mane meets a mare named Violet Luminesce, he thinks no pony likes him, or maybe just one likes him...lets see

Published 2013-02-02 21:10:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-02-02 21:10:02 UTC

Chapter 2: The Evil Colt

Fluttershy was caring for her animals as usual, but then she saw the chicken coop and the forest near is on fire! but it wasn't yellow, orange, nor green, it was shadow BLACK! no matter how much water she puts on it it still spreads, her chicken coop and the forest near it was no more, Rainbow Dash's cloud was onfire, Rainbow Dash took immediate action, she made it rain in her cloud, but it just made the fire worse, "WHAT IS GOING ON!?" Rainbow Dash shouted.

she flew over to Fluttershy's house, she saw Fluttershy crying. "it got to you too, huh?" Rainbow Dash asked. Fluttershy nodded. they heard an evil laughter. "Fluttershy...Rainbow Dash..." Shadow Mane called out. Rainbow Dash became as scared and angry as Fluttershy. "WHERE ARE YOU, YOU...YOU COWARD!?" Rainbow Dash shouted. "yeah...!" Fluttershy added. "Oh...silly mares,,,i'm...EVERYWHERE..." Shadow Mane said evilly.

he chuckled, they both flew away to Twilight's house. "What happened!? you act like you saw a ghost!" Pinkie said. "Sh-Sh-SHADOW MANE!" Rainbow Dash shouted. "OK, this has gone far enough! we are going to find this Shadow Mane and defeat him with the Elements of Harmony!"

Chapter 3: the Final Battle

Shadow Mane created the armor to engulf Ponyville in shadows for centuries, The Shadow Knight Armor. "Every things according to plan..." Shadow was taught to randomly sing if he feels victorious "I am the master...of everything evil...nothing can get in my way, for i will destroy the day...i am the villainous villain...who says "villains can't ever win"? because with this armor, every pony will see...the world...BELONGS TO ME!" Shadow sang.

The six ponies made it to the tower of Shadow, the first floor had Tsu-Kan, Shadows best fighters, he knows pony-jitsu, karat-hay, and Buck-Boxing. "Let meh hayndle this" Apple Jack said. she kicked the fighters butt, they went to the second floor, they saw 5 manticores, "i can handle this..." Fluttershy said. She walked up to the manticores and tamed them, they went to the final floor.

"oh...hello girls..." Shadow Mane said. He had his armor on. "Oh? you have the Elements of Stupidity?" Shadow Mane taunted. "Its 'Elements of Harmony'!" Twilight shouted. "right...anyways, fire away, lets see what happens..." Shadow teased, he got fired at but the beam turned to pure hatred and went into his gem. he laughed evilly, he shot all of them to the ground. "Bye, bye ponies..." Shadow said maliciously, he saw Violet.

"Hello!" Violet said. "My names Violet, whats yours?" Violet asked. "My-My name is Shadow..." Shadow studdered. they had a conversation "well if you wanna hang out some more, meet me at the arcade." Violet said, and Shadow could've sworn she kissed him on the cheek. "Heh, sorry about that chaos..." Shadow apologized. " 'SORRY'!? WHAT DO YOU MEAN, 'SORRY'!?" Queen Chrysalis shouted, the Elements of Harmony were used on her, and she was sent to the moon for all eternity. Princess Luna and Princess Celestia showed up. "good work you six, you have shown pure evil the light, the light of friendship" Princess Celestia congratulated, she turned to Shadow. "will you except our friendship?" Princess celestia offered. Shadow nodded vigorously and is now the captian of the royal army

END

Prologue

Twilight was reading a book of prophecies, seeing if shining armor or if they had anything to protect, they've already beaten Queen Chrysalis, Discord, and Nightmare Moon. Then she saw something in the book, the ponies started to get impatient. "Can we go now? I'll miss my chance of being one of the Wonderbolts!" Rainbow Dash complained,

"Don't worry, hey...whats this?" Twilight wondered,
"Equestia gulfed in shadahs? weyl not on mah watch!" Apple Jack declared. "Don't worry, Apple Jack, this is stuff we handled before! and this ruffian shall not get us alive!" Rarity Declared. "I don't know this colt or mare sounds...dangerous..." Fluttershy said worriful. "Hey, fluttershy, its fine, plus you stood up to a dragon, and a cocatrice!" Twilight said. "True...now...LETS GET OUT THERE AND SHOW HIM...or her...WE MEAN BUSINESS!" fluttershy shouted bravely.

Chapter 1: The Arrival

"Hm...this place does seem...happy..." the mysterious colt said, he had black fur, a black mane, a black tail, and bat-like wings, Pinkie Pie was strolling along when she saw him. "EEP!" Pinkie Pie shrieked. "Hi, my name is---" Pinkie Pie zipped off. "...Shadow Mane..." Shadow Mane said sorrowfully, he strolled around, every pony was staring at him, or was too scared to stare at him, he met twilight, he walked over to introduce himself. "Hello, my name's Shadow Mane." Shadow Mane introduced, she was glaring at him, "Hello...my name is TWILIGHT SPARKLE" twilight said angrily, Shadow cocked his head in confusion, he walked off, he saw a mare, a mare with charm if you may, her name was Violet Luminescence, Shadow blushed and his gem attached to his chest turned pink.

but it wasn't long after she blushed at a pony zombie slayer, she just had a minor crush on the slayer but HE didn't know that, Shadow walked off sadly, Violet saw Shadow and blushed like crazy. Shadow bought a house but sat on the couch. "So much for a first day..." Shadow said sadly, he heard evil female laughter, he turned around.

IT CAN'T BE! Shadow mentally exclaimed, it was none other than Queen Chrysalis! she was presumed vanquished, but no, they only THOUGHT that. "why the long scared face?" Queen Chrysalis asked. "the sad or scared facial expression?" Shadow asked. "the sad expression" Queen Chrysalis confirmed. "well, so far no one likes me...at ALL" Shadow answered. "join me then...i say if they don't like you MAKE them like you" Queen Chrysalis persuaded. "Hm...i guess it wouldn't hurt" Shadow said. he chuckled evilly, which turned into an evil laughter...