Scootaloo admired Rainbow Dash since the day they met, but can Scootaloo achieve her dream of being a flyer and a younger sister of Rainbow Dash?


I was assign to write a trilogy for English, at the same time… I wanted to write a Scootadash fanfic… what better than to combine them together? Read description further!

*The story is written on EARTH
*The ponies are humanized
*The characters have different names, but is introduced
*Flying has been replaced with Racing

I uploaded the unfinished edition, maybe for some help out, I was having trouble making them stay in characters, it's one of the hardest thing to do honestly.

Some grammar correction would be greatly appreciated :) (English wasn't my first language)

Also it would be great if you knew the characters as I introduced them, I wanted someone reading it through a different perspective.

Also some ideas to change the characters, however still keeping them in character?
I've changed Pinkie Pie into a hyperactive black teenage girl, Rarity to a snobbish French lady.

Any other ideas?