A Hoof in Adventure

by PoniesLoveMe
Eclipse and some of her friends go into uncharted land on Princess Celestia's orders. But they quickly find it's not going to be as easy as they thought......

For you have a power, a power far stronger than any unicorn, it just needs to be unlocked. The fate of Equestria lies in your hooves.

Eclipse is ordered, by Princess Celestia, to travel into uncharted territory, find, and take control of a powerful weapon that is said only to be unlocked by a powerful unicorn. Along the way she falls in love with one of Celestia's royal guards, meets new ponies, and more or less gets stuck with an obnoxious draccanequis: things she'd never expect to come into her life. But can this group of misfits really save Equestria? Or will Equestria crumble when they fail?

((This story is still in progress, feedback and advice on the first chapters would be helpful! :D ))

Everyone
Incomplete
Romance
Adventure
 

4589 words: Estimated 23 minutes to read

4 Chapters:

  1. Prologue: The Letter 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    552
  2. Chapter One: Do You Believe? 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1213
  3. Chapter Two: Come With Me 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1172
  4. Chapter Three: Fighting for Life 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1652