the haunted house

by mermaidshadow11

Rating: everyone
Tags: Dark
Length: 824

twilight was minding her buisness but then she noticed a dismal looking house

twilight was minding her buisness but then she noticed a dismal looking house . twilight went back to ponyville to tell her friends but rainbow dash suggested they should go there after sundown…

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-02-07 23:29:27 UTC

minding buisness

twilight was reading a book just minding her own buisness . when she lifted her head she spotted a dark house on top a hill ."i should go home and tell my friends about this"said twilight , so she ran back to ponyville,her legs hurt but twilight didnt stop to rest . as twilight ran home she began to to wonder...what is it about that house that made me so curious?

bad idea...

"and that is why i called you all here" said twilight . the purple pony's friends were a bit puzzled "what is so great about a random house?" said pinkie pie "i agree with pinkie i mean, what is so grand about a dark and dismal house? its probably filthy!" said the white-coated pony,rarity "i think it sounds cool . lets go after sundown" said rainbow "um...im not so sure about this" said fluttershy

"oh come on fluttershy man up!"

"hey! dont yell at fluttershy! she is sensitave!" said applejack firmly.

"it does sound fun and adventoures" said rarity "it does sound fun.we could paint the rooms and have a party!" said the pink pony "well allright" said twilight

the six ponies left at sunset but little did they know what was in store for them...

on our way

it was a long and tireng walk so they stopped to rest . "um twilight?" asked fluttershy "yeah fluttershy?"

"where did you find this house?"

"i'm not sure" said twilight . they brought some food and water so they got it out . applejack had of course...apples

rainbow dash drank some water then said "how much longer now?" "probably not far" said twilight before she bit into a sandwich . "oh no! i forgot my manebrush!" shreiked rarity "rarity you are such a drama queen" said pinkie pie . when they finished they continiued their journey . they went into the everfree forest and eventually they found the house

the six ponies heard a sort of sound "OHHHHHHHHHH"...

plesant screams...

"im scared" said fluttershy "its ok fluttershy . i'll keep you safe" said the honest pony . RD broke the door down and pushed everypony inside . "OW!" said everypony in unison . the ponies got up and walked further into the house "my mane is a mess!" shouted rarity "SHHHHHH!!!!!" said everypony in unison as they walked they heard that noise again OHHHHHHHHHH...."there is that noise again" said applejack "now IM scared" said pinkie . just then a wolf jumped out! fluttershy screamed then fainted . when the ponies turned around the wolf was gone . "oh my celestia its a GHOST WOLF!!!!" said pinkie pie "we should be more casios" said twilight . when they looked at fluttershy her eyes opened and they were red and her teeth were very sharp . fluttershy flew away "well what now?" said rainbow "lets keep going . we might find her" said twilight...

escape plan

the five ponies looked far and wide for fluttershy but they couldnt find her . "i cant take this messy mane! lets leave" said rarity "no" said applejack "we are not leaving without fluttershy" "im with you AJ" said RD . the five ponies decided to split up then meet in the lounge later . "hmmmmm where could fluttershy be?" said pinkie . some sort of mist came out "huh?" said pinkie pie . it brought back the memories of when her friends didnt want to be her friends . her hair flopped down and she had lost it...

HELP!!! (final chapter)

twilight and AJ ran into each other "TWILIGHT!" shouted applejack "woah applejack calm down" said twilight

"HOW CAN I CALM DOWN WHEN WE HAVE LOST PINKIE TOO!" "what?!" "THAT RIGHT! PINKIE PIE IS GONE!"

"oh my" said twilight "lets try to find fluttershy AND pinkie"

just then something fell from the ceiling and knocked AJ out . when she woke up twilight found out that rarity and rainbow dash were gone as well . then applejack ran off "applejack wait!" said twilight

then the thing that knocked out AJ knocked out twilight. when twilight woke up she was tied up then he friends came out but they were discorded "you guys , let me go!" said twilight "ha ha ha...no" said RD . twilights own friends turned on her . after a while twilight had an idea "everypony" began twilight "this isnt you . rainbow you are the loyal one , pinkie you are the fun one , rarity you are the glamorous one , applejack you are the honest one , fluttershy you are the kind one" after twilight was done talking the grey coluer drained away from the ponies . they untied her and they went home

twilight was in the hospital "how is she doc?" said RD . the docter said "its nothing serious just a broken hindleg"

well THAT nightmare was over...or was it?!