Apple Bloom's cutiemark

by nikky0825

Rating: everyone
Tags: Adventure
Length: 564

a fun and happy story

hello,
i would like this story a little more bigger chapters so pls read this vote this because my other story wasen't being submited so i will make this 1000 persent longer so pls help me if your my friend ;).
from,nikky0825

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-01-24 08:43:44 UTC

Chapter 1 (applelistic adventure)

once a opon a time,

2 little girls were always ignoring apple bloom and thats diomond tiara and silver spoon apple bloom even needs a cutiemark to improve them but she haven't get any but she saw a wishing star and then she said "oh wishing star will you pls help me diomond tiara and silver spoon are really bad they maked me cried and then i have't got a cutiemark so will you help me find my perfect cutiemark? pls" then the wishing star was gone and apple bloom was still sad and then applejack came in and said "whats wrong apple bloom?" and apple bloom says "i haven't got a cutiemark because diomond tiara and silver spoon are really not nice" and then applejack says "oh my,i will find your perfect cutiemark ok" and apple bloom says "ok sis." and then another day came and no classes for every pony in ponyville's school and then apple bloom walk down the stairs and saw a lot of messy things and she said "what happend in here?" she walked closer and she found a note it says "dear apple bloom

we have bad news were kidnap! So we need your help find footprints and then the next note is there" and then apple bloom followed the trail of footprints and then sweetie belle camed and sayed "apple bloom why are you getting closer to everfree forset?" then apple bloom says "i'm following this to lead to the next note" then apple bloom and sweetie belle rush and scootaloo even joined and then they found the second note and it says "hello applebloom i think we need your help again were at canterlot so pls go there inside the cave and then you'll find us" and then they rushed they saw the lake and then they swimmed  they got to canterlot quickly and they saw the cave it says "there don't go inside" but they tiptoed then they saw applejack and apple bloom's family and gramy smith says "go away apple bloom there's somebody going to kidnap you" and then apple bloom hid and scootaloo and sweetie belle were kidnap too. And then they all sayed "help!" and then applejack's friends were even kidnap and they are all kidnap but apple bloom isn't then apple bloom jumped out and sayed "who are you!?" then she saw the other ponies from ponyville and then she remvoed the mask and that was... Diomond tiara and silver spoon! they all say "why did you do this to us!" And then they exipaned "we just wanted to make apple bloom afrid to get her scared cutiemark" but apple bloom says "why did you you even traped your teacher! But i'm not scared because of applejack's notes i saved the day" and then diomond tiara and silver spoon was hapy because a flashing light appeard and then apple bloom's cutie mark was here and then they all looked at apple bloom's cutie mark the adventure cutie mark! And then twilight send a report for princess celestia "dear:princess celestia    saving other's means you get a cutiemark but others can be things you can do on your own but not one kind of all togheter" and then princess celsetia was really happy but... Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle listend and then they know how to get there cutiemarks.