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Don't Take My Mommy!

by dragonpony111
Derpy is forced to make a very tough choice to not lose her little muffin Dinky for good.

This will be a short story, around the 2000-3000 word range (edit: I lied, this will hit the 10k word mark and possibly on up to 15k as I didn't expect to do this much writing for the amount of plot I had planned in my head).

Derpy has been deemed an unfit mother, due to her mental condition, and has a real chance of losing custody of her only foal. Before that day comes though Derpy remembers how Dinky came to be, how her only source of pride and joy is tied to such a painful memory, and all of the time spent raising Dinky.

I'm writing this story in honor of a friend of mine who went through a very similar situation.

Teen
Complete
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Sad
 
ORDD

12941 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

9 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: Ignorance is Bliss 2013-02-06 05:59:51 UTC
    1206
  2. Chapter 2: A Mother's Pride and Joy 2013-02-06 23:00:33 UTC
    1590
  3. Chapter 3: Derpy's Last Hope 2013-02-07 11:27:50 UTC
    3245
  4. Chapter 4: My Little Dinky: Memories Are Magic (part 1) 2013-02-10 09:52:16 UTC
    2267
  5. Chapter 4: My Little Dinky: Memories Are Magic (part 2) 2013-02-11 03:48:26 UTC
    1451
  6. Chapter 5: Broken Hearts and Hooves Day 2013-02-12 08:29:46 UTC
    1632
  7. Chapter 6: Together Forever! 2013-03-13 06:03:02 UTC
    1535
  8. Epilogue: What A Wonderfoal World 2018-09-20 06:25:06 UTC
    15
  9. Link to Sequel 2013-04-15 04:25:35 UTC