Discovered Feelings

by Shadowphoenix34

Rating: mature
Tags: Adventure, Sex, Spitfire, Tragedy, Twilight Sparkle, Big Macintosh, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Sad, Romance, Applejack, Apple Bloom, Soarin, Rainbow Dash, Gilda, Rarity
Length: 1636

Two couples come of this Appledash and Macinsparkle so if you want to know the plot read it no hints

Ok so basically Applejack and Twilight realize their feelings for ponies who have had feelings for them and you'll never guess what will happen later in the story. Applebloom is important later so don't expect a lot of her till later and Scott i know you will read this and you know what I'm talking about.

Published 2012-01-25 23:09:40 UTC
Last updated 2012-02-02 00:13:44 UTC

A beautiful revalation

Opening note:

Hey guys you are now reading my first fan fiction and I would also like to add that i do not own anything related to My little Pony Friendship is magic.

One day at Sweet Apple Acres Rainbow Dash was just finishing up her daily duties of clearing the clouds and she made sure to do an extra good job here for one pony and one pony alone. That pony that she had recently started to think of her as more than a friend. The only pony that could cheer her up when she was down for whatever reason. The one and only Applejack had taken Rainbow Dash’s heart and she now wanted to be by her side forever.

On the ground Apple jack was also finishing her daily apple bucking work since Rainbow Dash had told her that she needed to tell her something important around noon and it was 11:45. As she filled her last bucket with the apples from the last tree she let out a sigh of relief seeing how she had spent the past two days doing this.

Rainbow Dash saw this as an opportunity to butter her up by offering to help her carry the bucket for her. She sped towards her crush she longed to be with but suddenly everything went black around her. Rainbow had fainted due to fatigue since she had been up since one in the morning working so she could talk to apple jack.

Applejack heard something falling towards her so she ducked and Rainbow Dash landed right in front of her out cold.

“What in tarnation, oh god I have to help her fast” Applejack said while approaching her unconscious friend.

She immediately threw Rainbow on her back and rushed her into her room so she could rest on the bed till she was awake.

About two hours later Rainbow woke up to the sight of Applejack but something was off about her and she felt like she had been hit by a train in the head. Applejack’s face lit up and turned a slight tinge of red (but she didn’t know why) when she saw that Rainbow was awake and said “Well hello sleepy head”.

The next words Rainbow said however nearly crushed Applejacks heart, she said “who are you, where am I, and how did I get here?”

“Applejack knew immediately that Rainbow had amnesia and that she had to help her get through it so she could have her best friend back.”

“What do you remember about yourself I need to know that so I can help you out and I am your best friend Applejack?”

“All I remember is my name is Rainbow Dash and that I was supposed to do something big today but I just can’t seem to remember what it was.”

“Well sugar cube maybe if I tell you the stories about the adventures we had you will go back to normal.”

‘I’m willing to try if it means remembering everything about me.”

Applejack then proceeded to recount their adventures they had like how they defeated nightmare moon and Discord and how they always had fun everyday with their friends. She also recounted the tale of Rainbow Dash's Sonic Rainboom and then it hit her. She realized that she loved Rainbow Dash more than anything in the world and was even more compelled to help her regain her memory so she could tell her how she felt.

“Nothing is working I can’t remember anything” Said Rainbow as she began to cry thinking that all hope for her was lost.

Applejack then pulled her into a hug and then as they started to separate they locked eyes and applejack realized that she had to still try one thing for her new crush to go back to normal so she just went for it and started kissing her.

However during the middle of the kiss that both ponies seemed to be enjoying Rainbow suddenly pulled away making AJ think she did something wrong and that this may cause Rainbow to hate her now, but she soon realized that Rainbows memories were coming back and this was extremely painful for Rainbow so she pulled away because of the pain.

Rainbow slowly got back up rubbing her head due to the pain she had just went through. Then she suddenly realized what Applejack had just done to make her remember everything again was very confused. She thought it might have been just to get me to remember not anything more and then she put on a sorrowful expression that replaced her previously shocked yet happy one.

“Applejack did you just ki…” she was cut off by another passionate kiss from her new lover and they didn't separate for a long time thus proving that Rainbows first idea was correct and she couldn't have been happier about it.

“I love you!” said Applejack

Rainbow had heard the words she was looking for and put on the biggest smile anypony had ever seen and said “I love you too Applejack.” After that they fell asleep in each other’s arms feeling like nothing could tear them apart.

Authors note:
I know i said i like to upload the whole thing at once but since I'm planning to make this very long ill try to update one chapter every one or two weeks at the latest but don't be mad if they are late because shit happens and we all know it does all too well.

The sparkle in his eyes

Hey guys hows it going. Just wanted to say thanks for reading and don't forget to review and comment.

Disclaimer: I don't own MLP FIM or anything that is Hasbro or Hub related.

Twilight had just stepped outside of her house to go get some dinner for spike at sweet apple acres. It was an absolutely perfect day that couldn't be matched in beauty. Unfortunately once pony didn't even notice this because she had her face stuffed in a book as usual while she was walking.

"So if i use that spell i might be able to fly like a pega OUCH! Oh my gosh I'm so sorry for bumping into you it was all my fault i wasn't paying attention since i was reading my book and please forgive me!"

She couldn't tell who the pony she ran into was at first because the sun was making the figure nothing but a shadow, but soon enough she knew who it was with one word.

"Eeyup."

"Oh my gosh Big Macintosh I'm so sorry... again."

"It's ok Twilight where were you headin' in such a hurry anyway?"

"I was actually on my way to Sweet Apple Acres to pick up some dinner for spike, why do you ask?"

"I was just wonderin' if you wanted some company since I'm headin' home anyway."

"I wouldn't mind a little company actually, it'll keep me from reading while walking again."

They both laughed a little and once again started walking to Sweet Apple Acres. As they approached the house Twilight shouted for Applejack to come down, however she was still asleep in the arms of her new lover.

"I guess shes asleep from a hard days work." she said with some disappointment.

"Eeyup, but i can get your food for ya just come inside and wait while i get em."

He returned with a basket that was filled to the brim with apples which confused her a lot.

"I don't need that many apples Macintosh and besides i don't have the money to pay for them right now anyway."

"They're on the house since you've been such a good friend to ma sister lately i thought this should express my gratitude for that."

As he handed her the basket an apple fell onto the floor and instinctively they both tried to pick it up and with that they met face to face. Twilight's face became redder than the apple on the floor and although you couldn't tell Macintosh's cheeks became hot rather quickly as well.

Finally there eyes met and they couldn't help it anymore, they began to kiss for what seemed like forever. The kiss was so passionate that neither Twilight or Macintosh noticed two ponies, one orange and the other cyan, come down the stairs to see what all the commotion was about.

"Well I'll be it finally happened." Applejack said in a very surprised tone.

With that one phrase in a split second the two ponies were at opposite ends of the room both embarrassed to no end.

"How much did you see Applejack?" Twilight asked in a very cautious and shy manner

"Enough to see that you to like each other more than just friends and I'm just fine with that if it makes you two happy."

"Really your not mad that i kissed your brother."

"Of course not, why would you think that?"

"I don't know but what were you two doing up there?"

The only words that came out of Applejack's mouth were "Ummm... Uh... well you see we uh."

Then Rainbow Dash decided she needed to step in and say "We also found love today so now AJ and I are marefriends."

No one was surprised at this since they had been closer to each other than with any other pony in their group of friends. They then decided that tomorrow they would tell Pinkie that they had an announcement to make so she could have an excuse to have a party and so they could tell the whole town at once while having fun too.

End note: Once again thanks again for reading and also thanks to my co-writer lubu602 for helping me make such a great story.