The Fire in Her Eyes

by TheCamel

Chapter 2

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You open your eyes after finally recovering from the sheer exhaustion from the previous day. Rainbow Dash is still asleep, her body still pressed against you. Your cock still remains semi-hard against her pussy, still slick with a mixture of both your semen and her love juice. Carefully getting up as to not wake up Dash, you see that the weather that almost killed both of you has cleared. A few clouds remain, and the air still remains noticeably cold, but the conditions should allow you to reach the Griffon Kingdom in an hour or so.

You look back at Rainbow, realizing that you have to wake her up soon. The memories of last night come back to you, and you hope that she doesn’t decide to immediately abandon you or kill you after what you did. Taking a deep breath, you face your fate and gently nudge her. “Hey, Rainbow Dash. We gotta go. Rainbow?”

She groggily opens her eyes, looking around her surroundings with an unfocused look in them. Until she sees you. Her eyes go wide, and that fire in her eyes you glimpsed at before became an inferno as she too began to remember what you did.

Standing in front of her, you try to apologize, but before you can you feel like you’ve just been hit by a speeding train. One moment, you’re standing in front of Rainbow Dash, and before you know it you’re on your back, fighting for breath as she stands over you, a hoof pressing down on your throat.

“You! What the hay did you do to me! I can’t believe that you would… Gah! I should kill you right now!” she yells at you. Even with tears of rage forming, you can still see that fire burning strongly deep in her eyes. Eyes that hold nothing but hatred for you right now.

“R-Rainbow Dash, please! L-l-let me explain!” you gasp. She presses harder on your throat, causing you to choke and unable to continue speaking.

“Explain what? How you… you did THAT to me? While I was helpless and unable to defend myself? You’re nothing but a coward!”

“I co- *cough* couldn’t help it! I’m sorry!”

“Sorry? Sorry doesn’t fix anything! Tell me one reason I shouldn’t just leave you here to die!”

Her hoof is beginning to cut off oxygen, and you struggle to reply. “B-be-because we s-still have our mi-m-mission to complete. A-and I did s-save you-your life!”

Looking down at you with that hatred filled stare, she jabs her hoof into your throat before letting up and removing herself from you. You gasp for air as she walks over to her now dry flight suit and pack. “Fine! So you saved my life. But that doesn’t mean I forgive you for what you did. Once we get back from this stupid mission, you’re dead meat!”

Picking yourself up, you too gather your things and prepare for the short flight left. Once you both are set, you try talking to Dash again, but she ignores you and takes off in silence. Taking off after her, you struggle just to keep up with her. Not even once does she look back to make sure you are keeping up with her, let alone even there at all. But you manage to keep up, and the flight to your destination lasts just over an hour.

As you enter the Griffon Kingdom, 5 armored griffons fly out of the clouds and flank you and Rainbow Dash. The lead griffon, an officer, gestures you to follow him. You nod, and you all fly towards the King’s castle. But instead of being flown to the main entrance like you have before, you are brought to a smaller side entrance. Your danger sense heightens, but Rainbow Dash doesn’t seem worried at all. 'Of course! She’s never been here before.' you think. “Rainbow…” you try to warn her.

“Let’s just hurry up and do this.” she snaps and walks through the door. You hesitate, sensing something is wrong, but one of the Griffons pushes you in.

You stumble in, finding yourself in a relatively dark room, the only light coming from the open door behind you. You can barely make out Rainbow Dash in front of you.

“Follow me. Leave your bags here.” one of the Griffons commands. Dropping them, you and Rainbow follow the griffon down a hallway barely lit by the occasional torch. For a griffon’s eyes it was probably more than enough light, but your pony eyes can barely see and you stumble into Dash’s rear again. Her head snaps around, her eyes glaring at you in pure hatred, and her haunches begin to tense as if to kick you, but she restrains herself and continues walking.

You’re eventually led to a small dark room. “Wait in here.” the griffon orders. As soon as you both enter the room, the door slams shut and locks with a loud click.

Dash sits on the floor in the far corner, keeping her eyes glaring in your direction. “Don’t even THINK of coming near me, perv!” she hisses.

Before you can try to defend yourself, the door opens slightly and a clay pot is thrown onto the floor before the door shuts again. The pot shatters, a strange liquid spreading around the broken pieces. You both stare at it in confusion, a sweet aromatic smell reaching your noses. Within seconds you start feeling dizzy and lightheaded, your muscles starting to give out and you collapse onto the floor. Rainbow Dash seems to be suffering the same symptoms as she also involuntarily lays down on the stone floor. The smell becomes stronger and your head spins faster, causing you and Dash to both black out.


Your head throbs in pain as you regain consciousness. You try opening your eyes, but the amount of light in the room quickly causes you to shut your eyes quickly. Unlike the room you were in before, this room is lit by an abundance of torches on the walls. You can’t move your hooves or wings either, as they are tightly tied up.

Slowly opening your eyes little by little, they finally adjust to the light and you can finally take in your surroundings. You recognize the room you’re in as one of the prison cells under the castle. The last time you were here, you were delegating the release of a pegasus who had gotten lost and accidentally flew into griffon airspace without permission. Now, it seemed that you yourself needed help in getting out.

Across the cell you see Rainbow Dash also tied up. She too begins to stir, her eyes adjusting to the light and finally taking in the situation. She looks around slightly panicked, trying to move her legs and spread her wings, but to no avail. She finally turns her gaze to you, that all too familiar fire once again blazing in her beautiful eyes.

“You! What did you do to me this time?” she yells.

“I didn’t do anything!” you protest.

“Yeah right, pal. This is probably another sick plan of yours.”

“Then why would I be tied up as well?”

Rainbow pauses, not able to answer you. She never gets a chance to as the three of the griffons walk up to your cell. You recognize them as the officer and two guards that escorted you to the castle earlier.

“Well, well. Looks like you two are finally awake.” the officer says.

“Who are you? Why have you imprisoned us?” you demand.

“I am Captain Ray of the Griffon Guard, and you are in no position to be demanding anything.” he replies with a sneer.

“What’s your problem, feather neck?” Dash spits out. “You got some nerve tying me up! Do you know who I am? I’m Rainbow Dash of the Wonderbolts!”

“Well Rainbow Dash, I’m afraid you’re not in Equestria anymore. You’re in the Griffon Kingdom. So you can be Princess Celestia herself. We don’t care. You’re just another weak little pony to me.” he replies. All three griffons enter the cell, the captain turning to you. “Now, would you mind telling us WHY you are here in our territory?”

“Sir, I am the courier of Princess Cel-” you begin

“Yes, yes, I KNOW who you are, pony. I’ve seen you here before. What are you doing here?” he snaps.

“We’re here to deliver a message of peace to your king to continue the strong alliance between your kingdom and Equestria.” you say. The answer is met by laughter from all three griffons.

“Ha! Us, need allies like you pitiful ponies?” Ray laughs. “More like you needing us to survive. We could easily crush anyone who dares stand up to us.”

He looks at one of the other griffons. “Show them how much we ‘need’ these flying fools.”

The griffon walks over to Rainbow Dash and grabs her by the throat with his sharp talons. Standing on his hind legs, he picks up her small body and slams her into the cold stone wall. She gasps at the pain, and then feels his talons cutting into her throat. She starts chocking, gasping for air and trying to kick out and hit her assailant. Her hooves just hit air, and soon she begins to lose energy, her gasping becoming shallower and limbs starting to go limp.

The captain steps in finally. “Enough.” he commands, and the other griffon lets go of Dash. She crumples onto the ground, gasping for air and coughing. “You see? We can crush you with ease. We can crush Saddle Arabia. And we can certainly crush any little alliance your two nations may try to secretly forge behind our backs.”

“Now wait a minute!” Rainbow snaps, trying to prop herself up with her bound hooves. “We aren’t planning anything against you! Princess Celestia would never break the trust of anypony!”

Captain Ray sighed. “Would someone please shut her up?” The same griffon soldier kicked Dash over onto her back, and once again grasped her throat with his talons, applying just enough force to stop her from talking. Turning his attention back to you, he continues. “Now, why don’t you be a good little pony and tell us why you’re really here. Are you here to spy on us? Gather intel? Maybe assassinate our king.”

“We are here to deliver a message of peace to your king!” you repeat. “We would never imagine of turning against our strongest ally!”

Looking at you and then Dash, he nods. “Hmph. Yeah, you two are definitely not assassins, much too poor for the job. Maybe you are here for why you say you are.” He walks up to you, his face inches away from yours. “But if you are here on a peace delegation, surely you must have brought some sort of offering of good faith for us.”

“We have a letter from Princess Celestia herself.” you say. “I can tell you wh-“

“What good does a letter do for us?” Ray bellows. “No, we demand something more useful. More practical.”

“I can arrange for another messenger to bring you anything you wish.” you plea.

“Oh, that won’t be necessary.” the captain says, walking over to Dash. “I see you already brought us a nice little present already.” He nods for the other griffon to back off, and then licks the base of Dash’s neck, her eyes growing wide with surprise and fear.

“Get away from her!” you shout, trying to stand up on your bound legs. Before you know it, the third griffon knocks you back down, a sharp set of talons at your throat this time, pinning you to the floor.

“Turn his head this way. I want him to see this.” Ray commands. Your head is roughly held to the side, giving you a somewhat awkward angle at the tragedy that was about to unfold.

Captain Ray towered over Rainbow Dash, who was still splayed out on her back. He stared at her with lustful eyes and licked his beak. “It’s been quite some time since I had a pony.” he cuckled.

Dash’s eyes no longer betrayed any fear. Instead, she glared back at the griffon, that intense fire back in her eyes now aimed at somepony besides you. “Try it pal, and you’ll regret the day you were hatched!”

He placed one of his massive claws by her neck, catching her mane below it and holding her head down. “My little pony, I’m sure once you try a griffon, no stallion will ever satisfy you again.” With his other claw he grasped at her groin, a sharp talon finding its target.

Dash yelped in pain as she felt his talon penetrate her dry pussy. Her eyes began to tear, but she maintained glare of hatred straight at her rapist. Ray saw the hate and defiance in her eyes and grinned. “You’re a strong one. It will be fun breaking you in.” He dug his talon into the walls of her hole, causing her to yell in pain again. The griffon captain was obviously a sadist, because before too long his cock began growing to full size. While you yourself was considered a well-endowed stallion by pony standards, his griffon cock surpassed yours in length and girth. With a sharp point at the tip and two large knots at the base, the griffon would probably have no problem splitting Dash’s small frame in two.

Ray withdrew his talon and inspected it. His foreplay short and abrasive, there was only a hint of wetness from Dash’s body. But he didn’t care. He was ready, whether she was or wasn’t. He lowered his haunches and lined up his sharp cock with her hole. Dash felt his member poking at her entrance and tried to wriggle backwards. She didn’t get far with her mane being held down, and her assailant began to slowly sink his shaft into her body.

“Ooooh… aren’t you the tight little one?” he remarked. She began to cry out in pain as her body was stretched farther than it ever had before. Inch by inch he penetrated her body until the first knot had reached her entrance. She tensed up in anticipation of it being shoved into her, but it never came. “Don’t worry, that will come soon enough.” Ray said.

Without warning, the griffon began fucking Rainbow as hard as he could. Dash opened her mouth to scream, but no scream came, instead just grunts and gasps coming as his huge cock was slammed into her body again and again. You try to turn your head away but you can’t, and you’re forced to watch her being violated as she is forced to endure. Soon a subtle but noticeable squelching noise can be heard, and you realize that Dash’s body is beginning to respond naturally. She notices it too, and becomes deep red in the face, either from embarrassment or anger that she may be starting to enjoy this.

Ray begins to slow his assault, and Dash’s body begins to relax, expecting his assault to be done soon. “Oh no, not yet. Here’s the best part.” Ray says as if reading her mind. He suddenly slams his cock into her body again, but this time both of his knots penetrate her now slick pussy. She finds her voice again and screams in pain as her pussy is stretched to its absolute limits. The onslaught continues, the knots now moving inside of her and the tip of his sharp cock now piercing straight into her womb.

“Don’t worry, I’m getting close. You won’t have to wait long for me to grace you with my cum.” he whispers to her. Her eyes grow wide with fear as she remembers that ponies have been impregnated by griffons before.

“No! Not inside me!” she pleas.

“Don’t worry, you’ll have more than enough by the time we’re done here.” he replies. His movements become more urgent as he feels himself getting closer to climax. Rainbow tries one last time to escape but it’s fruitless.

With one final thrust, the griffon thrusts his member as deep into her as he can and releases a torrent of his seed. She gasps in shock as she feels his cock throb and his hot seed fill her. It seems like an eternity, but one last final spurt of cum comes before Ray removes his cock from her, painfully pulling out his knots from her sore pussy.

“Well now, that was quite the treat.” Ray says, watching as his fresh cum seeps out of Dash’s pussy. “But look what you’ve done to my comrades.” She glances at the two remaining griffons and gasps as she sees that both are sporting large erections of their own. He nods at the unoccupied griffon. “Why don’t you take her next.”

The griffon jumps at the chance, quickly mounting Dash and before she can protest, shoves his cock into her cum soaked pussy. She grunts as she feels the knot slide effortlessly into her, the sperm already in her acting as a lubricant. She can’t help but groan as she feels her new lover immediately start pounding her with as much vigor as the last griffon. The sheer size and shape of the object violating her still brought pain, but she began to enjoy it more and more, every last inch of her pussy being stroked and rubbed by the spear-shaped cock.

Watching Dash being violated and fucked so roughly, as well as the smell of sex beginning to saturate the room, begin to turn you on. While you try to fight it, you lose the battle as your cock begins to harden. You see the captain glance in your direction and slyly grin before his attention is turned back to the main show.

The griffon attacking Rainbow Dash continues to pump away with vigor, enjoying the tight flesh wrapped around his member. It’s not long before he too thrusts one last time deep into her body, releasing another generous amount of semen. Dash cries out as the familiar hot liquid is emptied into her depths and causes her to cum as well. The griffon groans as his cock is squeezed by her climax, milking his cock for every last drop in his balls. They both soon finish, and her assailant unceremoniously removes his cock from her body with a wet squelch, her used pussy now overflowing with griffon sperm.

Dash groans, her body sore from the rough treatment. The griffon captain walks over to the soldier holding you back and whispers something to him. Switching places, the soldier drags Dash to where you are held and forces her onto her stomach with her head by your semi-erect member. She stares in shock at it, then up at you. “How… how could you?” she manages to ask angrily. “You sick monster, how could you like seeing me like this?”

“Go easy on him, he’s in pain also. Just look at him, being forced to watch and not able to join in.” Ray teased her.

The last griffon took his position behind Dash and mounted her, his cock sliding effortlessly into her. Even with this being the third griffon cock, she was still stretched to her limit, and she couldn’t help but cry out as she was stuffed yet again. “Ahhh! It’s too big! Gah!” she yelped.

The griffon slowly sank his cock in, and then thrust the last 2 inches in forcefully. Dash’s body was jolted forward, and her muzzle bumps straight into your cock. Feeling her lips brush against your erection like that is all it takes to make you completely hard. Dash gasps in shock and embarrassment and tries backing away, but Ray catches her head and forces her right back up against your rock-hard penis.

“Oh no, you can’t leave your companion all pent up like that, can you?” he mocks. Grabbing her jaw, he squeezes hard, forcing her mouth open. He places her head so her mouth is hovering just over the tip of your throbbing member, and nods at his companion.

The griffon behind Dash begins his turn at her, fucking her with vigor. With each thrust, her mouth bobbed onto the tip of your cock, the warm but brief sensation not helping your erection to go down anytime soon. Dash tries her hardest to resist having to give you an involuntary blowjob, anticipating each thrust from the griffon behind her and pulling back as much as possible.

“Tsk tsk, that’s not how to do it.” Ray says. On the next thrust, he forces Dash’s head down, her mouth engulfing almost half of your cock. “Oh, and don’t think about trying anything funny, unless you want your throat slit.” he threatens as he removes his claw from around her mouth, a sharp talon scraping her throat. She looks up and glares at you. You pray she doesn’t bite down on your vulnerable member, and thankfully she doesn’t. The griffon resumes his hard pounding, and you feel Dash’s throat envelope your cock with each thrust. She gags every now and then, having no control over how deep your cock goes down her throat, and while she is no longer resisting, she doesn’t do anything to help her blowjob either.

Being the last one to go, the final griffon didn’t last as long as the first two, and soon let out a triumphant screech as he came inside of Dash. She moans as she is yet again filled with the hot seed, the vibrations sending a wave of pleasure through your cock. However, once the griffon stops thrusting and pulls his softening cock out of her, so does her blowjob, and she quickly removes her mouth from around your still rock hard member.

“Ha! These puny ponies say they wish to remain our allies, yet this blue one can’t even help relieve her own partner.” Ray says. “How pathetic. Maybe we should just get rid of them now.”

“Hey wait a second!” Dash snaps back. “Giving him a blowjob against my will has nothing to do with that!”

“Oh? Well, how about we change that and make a bet.” Ray says to her. “I’m going to fuck you again. You’re going to give your friend here another blowjob. If you can make him cum before I do, I will release you both and we shall renew our alliance with your Princess. But if I cum first, you will remain our prisoners for however long we see fit.”

“Dash! You don’t have to agree to that.” you start to protest.

“S-shut up! she says. “Fine! I’ll agree to your stupid bet! You better let us go as soon as you lose!”

He chuckles. “Of course, you have my word. I’ll even let you start first.”

She turns to you, her eyes appearing softer, filled with less hatred. “You better not hold back.” she says. “And remember, this is for everypony in Equestria. Not because I want to.”

Before you can reply, she shoves her mouth down onto your cock again. She tries her best to take the entire length this time, but chokes and is forced to just take half of your cock again. She bobs her head up and down in quick motions, trying to get you off as quickly as possible, and it seems to be working, as an immense amount of pleasure now courses through you.

Captain Ray slowly takes his position behind Dash, seeming more amused than worried. You see his claw move down by Rainbow’s pussy, spreading around the mixture of griffon cum and her now-flowing juices around her pussy lips and anus. “Looks like you’re starting to enjoy this.” he mutters. She flinches as he claws her ass, but continues her blowjob, slowly taking more of you into her mouth. He grasps her by her cutie mark and lines up his cock with her body. “3, 2, 1…”

He pushes forward unmercifully, sinking his cock into Rainbow in one go. However, he did not enter her pussy this time. Instead, he had taken her last untouched hole, taking her ass as hard as he could.

Dash quickly removed your cock from her mouth and screamed in agony. “Oh Celestia! It-it hurts! Agggh!” Tears fall from her eyes, her head bowed as she gasps for breath in between screams. The captain ignores her cries, instead beginning to fuck her in the ass at a steady yet effective pace.

“Mmm, this is quite the tight hole.” he says. “I don’t think I’ll last too long with this tight of an ass.”

Somehow the words reach Dash’s ears, and despite the burning pain from her broken sphincter, she bravely sucks at your cock again. She glances up at you with watery, pleading eyes before turning her attention back to your member. She even starts to use her tongue, rubbing it across the bottom of your member as she bobs her head back and forth faster.

Captain Ray soon picks up the pace of his thrusting, matching Rainbow Dash’s speed. She moans in pain and pleasure as his cock penetrates deep into her bowels. She slows down her head, distracted by the new-found pleasure her ass was beginning to experience. Ray doesn’t slow down though, instead quickening his pace. “Such a tight, sweet ass. I’m almost ready to fill you again with my cum.” he warns.

Dash quickly perks up and tries to quicken her pace. Your balls begin to tighten as you also feel yourself finally getting close to climax. “Rainbow…” you say.

She understands, and goes all out sucking your dick. Ray begins to pound Rainbow’s ass harder, getting closer also. Suppressing her gag reflex, she forces your entire cock down her throat in one last desperate attempt to get you to climax. Her throat gripping your entire length is heaven, and you’re just a few seconds away from cumming.

But it’s too late. Dash’s eyes go wide as she screams, though it is muffled by your cock. Looking up in horror, Ray is no longer moving, his cock deeply embedded in Dash’s ass. A look of pure ecstasy is on his face. He looks at you with cold eyes. “I win.”

Dash’s scream sends you over the edge, and you finally cum straight into Dash’s throat. She chokes as you shoot your sperm straight into her throat, and as she tries to quickly remove your cock so she can breathe, the final shots of your cum go into her mouth. To your slight disappointment she spits out the cum in her mouth, but she has no choice but to swallow the majority of cum that you shot into her throat. You and her pant for breath, and your cock finally softens. Dash lays coughing on the ground in front of you. “No… no…” she says softly. “We… I failed everyone…”

Ray, having finally been satisfied for now, walks up to her. “You were so close, but a deals a deal.” He motions for his two subordinates to come forward, and they force you to your hooves and untie them, leaving your wings bound.

“Per our agreement, you are both now prisoners of the Griffon Kingdom.” Ray says. “You will be kept prisoner until further notice.” Looking at you, he continues, “You have been considered a diplomat before, and will be treated as such again. You will be housed in a secure room in the castle, but will not have the freedom to leave unless escorted by one of my griffons.”

Turning to Dash, an evil glint comes to his eyes. “But you, you admitted to being a Wonderbolt, and thus are now considered a prisoner of war. You shall be interrogated by myself and my soldiers, and your fate decided later. Much later.”

The griffons haul you out of the cell, locking Rainbow Dash in the cell alone. Looking back, you see her still lying on the cold floor, cum still dripping out of her and pooling around her. “Rainbow Dash!” you call out before you are taken away. But she doesn’t respond, or even look your way. She just continues to stare blankly at the wall, having not only been used but also failing her mission, and all of Equestria.


It’s been weeks since that fateful day. Or maybe months. You don’t know, since your room had no windows to tell day from night. But finally, a guard comes and informs you that you are being moved to a different room while negotiations for your release are underway. Even better news reaches you; Rainbow Dash is also going to be freed, and is waiting for you in the room you’re headed to. As you near your destination, your escort starts telling you in great detail what treatment she received while she was in captivity. You stop in shock as his words sink in…

…daily rapes by her guards…

…gangbanged by the entire Griffon Guard barracks…

…every meal soaked in griffon cum…

…forced to service visiting dragons…

…countless jewels stuffed into her pussy and ass…

…fucked by captive Timberwolves…

You can’t take hearing anymore, and run to where she’s waiting. You burst into the room and find her sitting on a bed, huddled in a corner against a wall.

You slowly walk up to her, her form remaining motionless, not responding to your presence. “Rainbow Dash?” you softly say. She finally turns to you, her normally piercingly bright eyes now dull and sad. You hug her small, slender frame, holding her gently. She doesn’t say a word, but doesn’t retreat from you.

You spend a few more days there before you are both freed and fly back to Canterlot. By the time you return home, Rainbow Dash has recovered slightly from her ordeal. She stays close to you as much as she can, refusing to return home and instead opts to stay with you. Before long, she seems like she’s her normal self, and her friends were finally convinced that she’s all right… that nothing has changed in her.

But one thing has changed. Forever.

That look she used to have, her determination and confidence, that fire in her eyes.

It was gone.

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