TWISTed Revenge

by AngelShy24

Breaking Tiara

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Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon were very close friends and always loved to hang out with each other. Plus they liked to pick on other foals that don’t have cutiemarks and crush their hopes of ever gaining one. Unfortunately for them, a filly in the background named Twist has had enough of them; especially after the uncalled prank they did against her certain friends, the Cutiemark Crusaders. She finally feels that Ponyville would be best off without them and plans to erase them both from existence.

Twist’s goal was now halfway completed; she successfully tortured and finally killed off Silver Spoon, and Diamond Tiara was forced to watch. She became devastated and totally heartbroken; Silver Spoon was her best friend in all of Equestria, and now she was dead; gone from this world… and she was next.

Twist went to a nearby pull line, and she started to use it to lower Diamond Tiara down to where her back hooves almost touched the ground and started to slowly approach her with a sinister smirk on her face. She truly had no regrets of killing Silver Spoon nor did she care about Tiara’s emotional feelings as the trapped filly was constantly shedding tears in sorrow; and Twist was enjoying every bit of it.

“Aww; what’th the matter, Tiara; are you dreadfully upthet that Thilver Thpoon ith gone? Upthet that you loth your beth friend and you won’t be able to do your little routine? ‘Bump, bump, sugar lump, rump!’ Heh, man that geth more irritating every time I hear it.”

Tiara lifted her head up to glare at Twist with her eyes still leaking. She thought that she hated Twist before; but now she was despising her even more than ever now.

“Don’t be tho thurprithed,” said Twist as she came close into Tiara’s face, “you two athked for thith. Your obnoxiouth attitude got on everpony’th nerveth and it theemth that your family doethn’t theem to care about it thince they’re obviouthly failing to do thomething about it; but no more. Now I’m about end all thith nonthenth mythelf by ending your pathetic life, just like I did to your unfortunate little follower, Thilver Thp…”

Diamond Tiara had enough; in risking making the psychotic little filly angrier, she released her all-out hatred against Twist all while still struggling against her restraints.

“SHUT UP!!! For the love of celestia… just shut up you psychotic, four-eyed freak!”

Twist just looked at her kinda solemnly with an arched eye brow, “Excuthe me?”

“You have no idea what you’ve done; you don’t know who you’re dealing with!”

Her hatred against Twist just grew bigger than it ever was now; she wanted to make her pay for her crime and she wanted it to do it herself.

“Silver Spoon and I come from powerful rich families that can squash your little family’s business flat! You killed Silver Spoon, my best friend, and you think that you’re going to get away with it?! They’ll have you locked in an asylum in no time and your parents will hate you and blame you for their sudden misfortune! When I get out of here, I’m going to take you down myself!”

As Tiara went on with her ranting, Twist was just calmly walking towards the enraged filly while not saying a word.

“I’ll slam the giant hammer of justice on your sorry flank and make you pay! Ponyville is in no need of a sick, twisted, psychotic, deranged loser freak like…”

But once Twist got to Tiara, she gave her a strong punch against the right side of her cheek that silenced her enraged ranting. And then she punched her again against on the left side, but this time her cheek got bruised as a couple drops of blood and a tooth flew out of her mouth as a result. Tiara whimpered as she held her head down in slight pain with her cheeks slightly bruised and some blood dripping from her lip; but then Twist turned around and gave Tiara a hind leg buck right into chest. Her eyes went wide as she squeaked in pain, and the impact caused her to puke up some blood. Afterwards when Tiara finished her puking moment, Twist jacked her up from her coat around her neck and stared into her beaten face.

“Do you really think I care about any of your thupid threatening crap? What good uthe are your threath when you’re going to die anyway? Ponyville ith better off without the two of you.”

Twist then released her and walked behind her wearing an amusing smile.

“Oh yeah, and I almost forgot.”

She took a bucket of icy cold water that she had prepared and poured the entire bucket over Tiara. The captured filly’s body jolted with shock and she gave off a high pitched scream that no pony still couldn’t hear. She hung there shaking and feeling like her beauty was disappearing; but then Twist held the bucket over her head and let it drop straight down on top.

“Ow,” Tiara sobbed, “wh-wh-wh-wh-wh-what in the h-h-h-heck was th-that f-f-for?!”

“Juth a little revenge requeth from Thcootaloo; she wanted what you and your friend did to her happen to you; I wath happy to fulfill her wish.”

“What, that Pegasus knows about this?!” shouted Tiara.

“Nope, only me; no pony needs to know about this… no pony.”

Now Tiara was sore, tired, cold and soaking wet; this day was possibly her last day in life as it was for her friend. But Tiara suddenly looked down and noticed that the rope around her hind hooves was slightly becoming loose; it was due to the water making her coat slippery. Fortunately for her, Twist didn’t notice.

“Now… let’th get thomething out of the way, okay?” said Twist as she was pacing back and forth in front of her captive giving her an evil-like glare, “I dethpithe you Diamond Tiara, I hated you and your friend with every thingle thell in my body; but I hate you mosth of all.”

The tone in Twist voice was changing again sounding rather disturbing in her speech as she was getting lost in her own psychotic world.

“*sigh* I had fun getting rid of Thilver Thpoon… and theeing her blood thpill. But now… heh, I’m going to enjoy getting rid of you. But firtht, I’m gonna break you; break you… hard.”

Tiara was panting and gasping from Twist’s actions earlier, but she gave Twist a little smirk while the rope around her hind hooves was getting looser.

“I-I-I… like to s-see you tr-try.”

Twist was quite surprised seeing Tiara being so brave in her current situation; she thought it was actually quite cute. She walk right up to her and looked at her amusingly.

“Oh do you now? What exactly do you wish to thee?”

Suddenly, the rope finally came loose and at the last minute, Tiara swung her wet legs forward and wrapped them around Twist’s neck while she was off guard. Twist eyes went wide feeling Tiara’s wet coat as she glared at Tiara; and Tiara answered Twist’s question, “THIS!”

With a swift movement, Tiara swung her legs and threw Twist to the side as she tumbled against the ground. As Twist groaned and was getting up, Tiara quickly pulled the chains off her and stood on all four of her hooves. After shaking herself dry she glared over at Twist with a stuck-up smirk.

“You just signed your death warrant, freak!”

She then started to make a beeline towards the exit door despite her injuries. This was bad for Twist; if Tiara got away everypony would know about this incident. Plus, Tiara’s injuries would be a dead giveaway and her plans would be ruined. Twist was not about to let that happen.

“Ugh… oh no you don’t!”

Twist suddenly got up and grabbed a hold of the chain that once held Tiara in the air in her mouth. She got a good grip and swung the chain’s long length forward, and it actually made it mark as it successfully wrapped around Tiara’s hind legs. Tiara yelped as she froze in her tracks and fell flat on her face. She looked behind her and saw her hind legs binded again.

Her eyes were filled with fear as she saw Twist looking at her with a malice stare and grinning in a crazed manner, “I’m afraid that you’re not going anywhere… idiot.”

Tiara panicked and was trying to grab on to ground as Twist was pulling her back closer and closer to her. With tears in her eyes and sweat dripping down, she feared that Twist was going to do something dreadful to her since she tried to escape.

“N-n-no way; how on Equestria did you do that?!” she shouted in fear.

“Juth a little thomething that Apple Bloom taught me for fun,” said Twist with a mischievous smile, “Not too bad if I do thay tho mythelf; she thayth I’m a natural.”

No matter how hard Tiara tried, she couldn’t escape from Twist’s grasp; and the more she tried to resist, the more ecstatic Twist got. Once she was close enough, Twist placed her hoof on top of Tiara as she was feeling a certain spot on her back.

“Ah, there we go,” Twist said with a devilish grin as she pressed against Tiara harder, “thith thould hold you well.”

She held up the steak knife that she had in her other hoof over Tiara’s body, and even though Tiara couldn’t see, she became suddenly frantic feeling that something bad was about to happen.

“What’s going on…” she wondered.

But before she knew it, she suddenly felt Twist strike the steak knife straight into her back and into the wooden floor below. Tiara shrieked in terrorizing pain from being impaled so suddenly and Twist could see some blood was leaking out from under her victim. Twist then used a stone to hammer the knife deeper into the ground thus deeper through Tiara’s body.

Tiara just laid there in agony; she didn’t dare to move because of the long blade that was pinning her to the ground; that was exactly what Twist was counting on.

“Y-y-y-y-you’ve gone absol-lutely insane!” Tiara sobbed dreadfully, “You’re a complete loser but… this isn’t like you! What happened to the lame, boring, sugary sweet nerd that never dares to hurt anypony; the one who is friends with those crusaders; the one who would obviously never do anything as crazy as this!?”

Tiara may have been crying from her constant pain and may have wanted Twist to be as she once was, but Twist knew that it didn’t change a thing about the situation. She gathered a skinny rope and got behind Tiara as she started to tie up her forehooves behind her back.

“I’m afraid that the Twith you know ith not prethent at thith moment. The Twith who was afraid to protect her friendth and do thomething about you and the one who wath your friend; that Twith ith taking a backtheat for now.”

After tying Tiara’s forehooves, she got in front of Tiara’s terrified face and leered at her to make sure she got the message.

“For now… thith Twith is gonna make thure that you never bother anypony ever again.”

As Twist went off to the side, Tiara slowly tilted her head in Twist’s direction to see what she was doing now. But then she realized that Twist was retrieving a familiar item; it was the electrical hand saw that Twist used to amputate her now dead friend. She watched in mortal terror as Twist trotted behind her with the tool completely scared of what she was going to use it for.

“W-w-wait… wh-what are doing!?”

Twist suddenly smiled cynically as she held down and slightly rubbed Tiara’s plot with her hoof responding, “Making thure that you don’t try to ethcape again.”

“N-n-no, DON’T YOU DARE!!!”

Her demand was denied as Twist switched the saw on; and then she proceeded to run it through Tiara’s hind legs. Tiara finally understood how her friend felt when she had her hooves and legs sliced off; it was unbearably painful. She couldn’t move around much because of her position, but that didn’t stop her from screaming out loud from her agony.

Twist was enjoying herself; smiling brightly as she watched the saw blade perfectly slice into Tiara’s flesh and the blood and tissue that was splattering around them and onto her. This along with Tiara’s screams was pure music to her ears.

Once she was done, she chuckled to herself as she pranced off to place the saw away again to where it was. Tiara just laid there sobbing constantly just letting her painful emotions out.

“I… I-I-I-I hate you; I h-hate you s-s-so much! Y-you’re so m-messed up!”

“Yeah, well the feeling ith mutual,” Twist responded in an uncaring manner.

Twist came back over to Tiara smirking again and she held her hoof down on the her victim as she used her mouth to slowly wiggle and pull the steak knife away from the floor and out of Tiara’s punctured body. The movement caused Tiara to whimper in discomfort, but it was a slight relief to her that it was out. However, it’s not that she could go anywhere now; with her forehooves tied behind her back and her hind legs sliced off, she had no means to escape again. There was no hope for her now; she was going to suffer the same fate as Silver Spoon.

“You know Tiara,” said Twist in a normal cheery manner, “the only reason that you’re not dead from your impalement ith becauthe I made thure not to hit your heart, thomach, or any other eternal organth that you might need to thay alive. Fathcinating, ithn’t?”

Tiara couldn’t understand how Twist could sound so sweet and cheery one minute, and then psychotic and creepy the next. While trying to hang on to her life she was trying to figure out Twist’s plan.

“Y-y-you know… I don’t g-get it; even if y-you kill m-m-me now, what makes you think that you’re g-g-going to get away with it?”

Suddenly, the tone in Twist’s voice changed as she leered back over at Tiara, “I’m a nerd, remember? Once thith ith all over, nopony is going to find out the truth; I’ll thee perthonally to that.”

“Oh don’t be so full of yourself!” Tiara shouted with tears in her eyes, “Somepony is going to find out sooner or later! You’re stupid to even think such a thing!”

Suddenly, Twist kicked Tiara on the side of her flank where some of the skin was sliced off and it caused a great surge of pain to shoot throughout her body. She let out a blood-curdling scream again feeling the painful sensation and more tears flowed out of her eyes mixing into the released blood in around her.

Twist then slammed her hoof down against Tiara’s head pressing it against the floor; she was huffing and puffing with aggravated anger; feeling the need to end her right there and now.

“Call me thupid one more time… and I’ll drive this knife right through your thkull.”

“Wh-wh-why n-not, you’re going to kill me anyway. So go ahead… do it.”

Tiara closed her eyes expecting Twist to do just that; but for some reason, she didn’t do it.

“Oh I’m going to kill you alright,” said Twist sounding a bit deranged as she stepped off of Tiara, “but not juth yet; I want to prolong your thuffering.”

Tiara realized what Twist was doing; she knew that she was in great, unbearable pain with the punctured wound in her body, her sore, swelled up face and her wide open wound where her hind legs used to be; so Twist was going to just let her lay there for a few so she can suffer from her pain that was slowly killing her.

“Just do it already!” she demanded, “I can’t bare this anymore; just kill me now!”

“You know…” said Twist suddenly with a mischievous smile, “that path that wath blocked by that tree and other debris; I’m the one who did that.”

“Wh-wh-wh-what!” said Tiara with wide eyes.

“Altho, I knew all about the little thhortcut to your houthe and the alternate route. That’th how I wath able to capture you and Thilver Thpoon tho easily. However, how I knew all of that ith none of your buthineth.”

Tiara growled underneath her breath despite her pain, “Wh-why… y-y-you…”

“And the beth thing about thith plan… ith that nopony ith going to thuthpect me of anything. I’m too nithe, too thweet and gentle, and too innothent to ever do thuch a thing. And tho what if your parentth cry and mith you; oh well, it’th their fault for thpoiling you tho badly. It therveth them right ath long ath I’m contherned.”

Tiara was in so much pain that she could do was just lay there on the ground and cry. She wanted to do something for having her parents insulted, but at that moment she didn’t care; all she wanted was to be released of her pain.

Suddenly, Tiara felt Twist’s forearm go around her neck and then she was slowly pulled up against Twist who was vibrating with pure excitement. She was gasping and sobbing as more blood was leaving her and she was feeling quite dizzy and lightheaded; like she was slowly slipping away from this world.

“There was one thing I alwayth liked about you and Thilver Thpoon though,” said Twist as she was staring into Tiara’s eyes from her shoulders, “You two were alwayth tho gullible and naïve; that alone alwayth amuthed me when thothe athpectth of you two backfired. The rethulth are alwayth funny and make me laugh inthide; I’ll mith that about you two moth of all.”

Twist then looked up on top of Tiara’s head and noticed her little tiara crown; and it was very beautiful up close. She helped herself and took it off of Tiara’s head and placed it on hers as she smiled proudly.

“M-m-my… *cough* m-my cr-r-rown; g-g-give me back my crown,” Tiara said in a dry, horse-like voice (excuse the pun); she was getting weaker and weaker by the minute.

“I don’t think tho,” said Twist, “I think it lookth way better on me.”

Suddenly, Tiara started to lightly whimper again as she felt the tip of the knife Twist had being trailed up and down her back. Her body was shaking just waiting for her death to be done. Twist was smiling a bit crazed-like enjoying the sight of Tiara’s fear.

“Bethideth, you’re not going to need thith for where you’re going.”

She then started to push the knife against Tiara’s body and it was slowly puncturing the skin. Once it was in enough, Twist suddenly thrust the rest of the knife all the way in so that the head of the blade was poking out from her belly. This quick action caused Tiara to start convulsing and she strongly threw up in front of herself; it was also mixed in with some internal blood as well. Twist was a little grossed out by it but she didn’t mind it much.
Tiara was still hanging to her life…barely; but it seemed that she would give out any minute now. She was so far gone that all she could do was hang her head down with half-lidded eyes as she was choking and wheezing from the damage done to her. Twist pulled the knife back out and the movement cause Tiara to hurl again; but that time Twist was just laughing at how pitiful she looked.

“Aw, poor you, but look on the bright thide; onthe you die, you’ll be able to thee your dear friend again. You two can then laugh, giggle, converthate, and be obnoxiouth all you want then. Oh, and don’t worry, I’ll make thure to be there for your parenth when they mourn for your death.”

Tiara still couldn’t respond, but if she could she would do anything right now for Twist to regret her words.

“Tho… thill think I’m a looother?” asked Twist as she held Tiara’s head closer; but Tiara didn’t answer, “Hey, I juth athked you a quethion you ungrateful bitch!”

Twist’s sanity was on edge and didn’t care if Tiara was too damaged to answer, but she soon realized that it didn’t really matter in the end.

“Oh well… who careth anyway; thay hi to Thilver Thpoon for me.”

While wearing an expression of pure insanity, Twist held onto Tiara’s neck as she jammed the steak knife into her again, but this time right through her heart’s location. Blood squirted out of Tiara’s back and onto the floor and the tormented filly convulsed once more before becoming permanently still. Twist knew that Tiara was finally dead, but she decided to take out some more of her frustration on her body by slamming it down on the ground and she started to repeatedly stab into Tiara’s corpse wildly. She never knew that doing this sorta of thing made her feel better.

Once she was done, she was just sitting there panting and catching her breath while looking upon the mutilated dead body of Tiara. She looked at it, and then looked back at the severed body of Silver Spoon, and then suddenly, she felt a huge feeling of relief being lifted from burdens. She realized that she did it; she had finally rid herself, and her friends and all of Ponyville from those two. She almost feared of what would happen if those two fillies grew up to be mares and ran this town under their rule.

“Oh man, that felt great!” she shouted in happiness, “I’ve never felt tho proud of mythelf!”

She was glad that it all seemed to go well and that she never has to worry about those stuck-up rich fillies anymore. But… now what; she had 2 dead fillies in her parent’s basement and their blood all over the place; not to mention that she was covered in it as well. It was rather obvious to Twist that it would be a bit of a problem if someone saw her like this and then realized the disappearance of her victims. How could she do this without Diamond Tiara’s threat becoming true?

But… just then, Twist had an idea; a brilliant idea. Twist had a brilliant, wonderful, horrible idea; one that would take care of all her problems. Twist just sat there chuckling to herself in a menacing tone while rubbing her hooves together thinking of her sick, Twisted idea. Everything was going to be alright for her after all.

“Heh, heh; oh Twith, you really are a geniuth.”


Author's Note

Will Twist get away with it? See how it ends soon.

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