From the Big Apple: A Tale of Misadventure and Affection
Ponies never really change, do they? Then why does her smile seem so much brighter now? And since when did you start feeling this way?
A short trip to Ponyville has left your friend Babs Seed a rather different filly. Sure, the cape was strange, but not as much as her going on and on about how you and her could help other ponies get their cutie marks.
This place she went to... This "Ponyville"... it looks like it could deserve some sleuthing. Besides, you could use some space, considering how frequently you're starting to blush and stammer around her...
[2nd person fic]
First attempt at writing fiction. Please rate, comment, and criticize!
34951 words: Estimated about 3 hours to read
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11 Chapters:
- Technology and its inadequacies 2013-02-11 18:10:20 UTC1184
- Handling things 2013-02-16 10:05:14 UTC1379
- Three days or four? 2013-02-25 14:36:21 UTC2354
- Carrot, Pound, and Pumpkin 2013-03-04 14:16:35 UTC2912
- The junior librarian and the fashionista 2013-03-22 13:44:54 UTC3179
- A promise and a treat 2013-03-26 16:54:32 UTC2348
- An apple a day keeps the Crusaders at play 2013-06-24 15:47:28 UTC7335
- Halfway to the truth 2013-08-03 06:01:21 UTC1969
- Pink noir 2014-01-10 12:03:24 UTC4594
- All things come to a loose end 2014-04-28 13:10:57 UTC4061
- Cutie Mark Crusaders 2014-07-13 04:57:40 UTC3636