It Came From Before Time!

by StormyStrife

Rating: everyone
Tags: Princess Celestia, Crossover, Dark, Princess Luna, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Adventure
Length: 4042

An Ancient Beast in The Inner Everfree Forest, deep in marshland Waits for his freedom. A Stallion of pure darkness has been living in Equestria for 5 months and finally shows his face in the dead of night at a quiet Ponyville

A new stallion, who breathes pure darkness, coated in black steel and with a somewhat bad attitude arrived in Equestria three months ago, but The Princesses only learn of his presence now as he purposely shows himself for once.

Stormy, a pegasus new to Ponyville sports an unusual set of abilites explores deeper than anypony had gone in the Everfree Forest, but finds a horrible nightmare waiting to be set free.

Published 2013-02-13 03:30:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-02-14 04:24:57 UTC

Isolation and Terror - Chapter I

As the night air started to fill the quiet town of Ponyville and the pleasant country of Equestria, Grim Weave arose from a pool of smoky darkness and slowly walked out of the metallic cave he had been living in 24/7 for the last few years. His completely purple pupils stared out along the clearing. His cave, located at the base of the mountain Canterlot stood upon, but on an almost completely different side.
He always hated the light of day, the only thing he hated with all of his soul, that is if he has one. Save for his eyes, he was black as night from head to hoof, wearing nothing but black platemail armor all over every inch of his body. nopony could touch his coat if they tried, and even his eyes were armored, but with simple goggles built to color everything behind them purple.

He didn't see in purple shade of color, but neither was he color blind. He flared out his somewhat mis-shapen wings and crouched down, few moments later he took off into the air, jumping with great force. He stuck his wings out as he aimed for Ponyville. Nighttime was one of the few times he could come out and see something other than a purplish brown cave. You could say he had an allergy to sunlight similar to vampires, only he simply found he could hardly see in the light.
Darkness was his element and he saw everything easily at Night, allowing him to glide down to Sugar Cube Corner and land atop it's roof. He surveyed the area but unlike the other many nights to the town, he felt off, as if he were being watched. He knew of the one known as "Pinkie Pie" and her rumored ability to defy reality in small ways, but this feeling of being watched was far off, as if something in the sky was looking at him. He shrugged it off and ignored the feeling, sitting down on the roof's tiles.

Taking in a deep breath, he felt as close to relaxed as somepony like him could feel, but it was actually more of anxiety he felt. He huffed out the deep inhale slowly as as he did so, a black fume spewed out his nostrils and mouth, it was identical to the smoke in his cave in that it didn't vanish like his normal breaths did, taking a lengthier time of half a minute to disappear fully. To the corner of his vision something quickly flew down to a building and it made him stand defensively and look in its direction immediately. Across the street to his slight right was a taller body, colored to stay hidden in the night, but last he checked dark blue never went with red.
He sat down, seeing this body as none other than "Princess Luna" or the Princess of The Night that they called her. He huffed in slight irritation as it was plainly obvious she was looking at him, but he ignored the staring.

About ten minutes later he eventually got annoyed enough and looked to Luna calling to her "What do you want?" almost spitting his question that felt more or less rhetorical than something to be answered. She leapt off the building she stood upon suddenly and landed next to him. He studied the difference in their height and came to the conclusion she only had two inches on him, and she would notice that he had a very similar body build to a stallion like Big Macintosh. Despite what most other ponies did, he simply sat there looking dead center into her eyes, not flinching or looking as if he were about to bow or anything. She asked him a simple question "Who art thou?" and she simply got snapped at "What do you care? Few are worthy of knowing my name". She looks a bit saddenned by his rude answer, but then asks "What dost thou mean by 'worthy'?".
He replied simply, in a more irritated tone, "Worth my time" And as he thought she asked yet another question "Why hasn't our sister detected you? She can sense all living things in Equestria"
This made him grin, something that was rare but it wasn't a happy grin either "Unlike everything else, I'm the exception to the rule that you're either alive or dead, nothing inbetween" He looked at her with the grin and suddenly leapt off the building, having had enough to do with talking for years. He went to the Everfree forest, well again, he more or less glided there. His wings were large and bulky and made more for catching air and gliding that flying. As such they were also wide, the bones attaching him to them were largely wider than most pegasi.
He also didn't like ponies who asked questions, Questions always got him into trouble.

Luna watched him as the black armored stallion flew, or more accurately, glided to the Everfree Forest. She considered in following him, but decided against it. It wasn't the questions she had about him, but more that the Everfree Forest was a place of very bad memories. She swore everytime she looked at it she could hear Nightmare Moon's evil laugh. She looked to Canterlot, remembering she couldn't be here long either. Not for the same reason as his, which she suspected, but because by the time she got there, it would be nearly time to lower the moon for her sister to raise the sun.
Flapping her wings, she took off into the air to Canterlot, much less dramatically than Grim had. She had much time to think to herself, but she herself had a couple of new questions.

Questions like "What is He?", "Should I tell our sister?" and even the usual "Why does he breathe out smoke like that?" She'd ask her sister or atleast let her know of his presence in Equestria. When she was near other ponies, she could usually feel something about them, like any would, she could feel an air of happiness, sometimes sadness with others, but with Grim...
Nothing. She didn't sense anything from him, it was like he was simply a void; nonexistent, yet still there. Ofcourse Luna wasn't in any way demented, she didn't have a single clue why he didn't seem to have some sort of aura. We'll just have to ask Celly when we see her She thought, Canterlot coming closer and closer.
Knowing about Grim wasn't the top priority, but it was one of the most interesting things to happen in a while.

They Say Something unlike anything else lies in the deepest regions of the Everfree Forest. Whether this 'something' is dangerous, is what Stormy Facade is here for. Trudging through the marshes of the Inner Everfree, the pegasus' hooves and legs were more than soaked and caked in muddy water. She jumped out of the thick mess and hovered in the air, shaking her legs in a slightly futile attempt to shake them clean and surveyed her surroundings. She could hardly see a thing, but could make out only shapes and flew further into the forest until she was stopped at a cliff. This cliff went down into an abyss whose bottom could very well be non-existent.
She lands at the edge and peers over the edge. The cliff seems to slope outwards starting from the rim of the pit, hinting there might very well be something down there. She yells down into the pit "Hello!" and sits down. The moon shone above a tad brighter than it usually did but the light only went into the pit about a few meters before turning into a purplish fog.

She closed her eyes and suddenly threw herself sideways against the grassy dirt, using the contact to split into two parts. Both parts were identical, however both had dirt and mud on their hooves, and were about half the size of how Stormy was normally. Stormy was considered short even for a mare, compared to Lyra Heartstrings, she was about 5 feet tall, making the two copies 2 and a half feet tall.
One of the copies smiled at the other, both hugged, and the one who'd smiled originally, jumped into the chasm, freefalling for a complete minute before hitting the ground with a splat, turning her into a thin sheet on the surprisingly soft ground. Of course it hurt hitting the ground like that, but pain was something she rarely felt in all of her stupid ideas. The copy reformed from the puddle as if by magic, or simply by design and looked around. The purplish fog was gone but the area had a purplish glow, looking up she realized the fog was actually black, the strange flesh on the ground was magenta and shined the glow.

"Whoooo Darrrrrrres... To enter my domaaaain" a chilling voice said from beyond her eye sight. A massive paw, or hand hit the ground in the lit up area, and in a dramatic way something large and truly horrifying came into view.
It was 20 feet tall and was similar to a fantastically large and anorexic hamster. It's fur was colored a greyish white and had a head with antennae that looked opposable with thick blades on the ends of them, located above it's eyes. it's legs were large and powerful with spikes dotting its paws. The worst part was the blades jutting out of it's sides and back, bent around its own body like a protective, yet offensive shield.
This monster's jaw was either non-existent or hidden by its massive teeth. If Stormy knew of Orcs, she'd see the teeth were like an orc's teeth, but on steroids, each bone jutted past its own chin. For a giant, skinny hamster it stood tall and proud, somewhat like a certain three-headed dog she knew in her homeworld.

Stormy's copy was shaking in place, huddled close to the ground as she was too paralyzed to move out of utter terror. Talking was out of the question, and even the monster knew this as it raised a paw and brought it's claws to bear. They resembled those of a cat, and they were fantastic in size, a bit of a contrast to it's teeth somehow. It brought it's massive clawed paw down upon the copy, but all it did was squish the copy to it's paw, snapping it out of it's frozen state of terror.
The monster brought it's paw up to look at the blob of red and blue on its paw and seemed either amused or annoyed as the blob shaped itself back into the copy of Stormy and took off immediately.

Suddenly before she touched the fog, the copy was smacked by a very hard tail, it felt more like a mace than a thin tail, and it shot the normally sticky mare, far into the sky. The copy would be flying for a day or two it felt like. The Sun was coming up, and as the Real stormy kept staring into the pit, This Monster suddenly burst from below the fog layer and made a valiant effort to get out of the pit, but came up short as it almost reached a paw up to Stormy, who jumped back and ran the other direction, despite the almost-blinding darkness of the Everfree Marshes.

-A Few hours Later-

As Princess Luna lowered the sun and her sister raised the sun, the land was filled with a warming glow of day once again. however, Grim saw this as the only entrance of the Everfree Forest lit up and shined a bit inside. He groaned as he looked deeper into the forest, not actually having anything more to do than torment timber wolves for an hour or two, or until he got bored with it. He turned to the light and walked into it, exiting the forest, of course he'd just simply explored the place for a couple of hours, and even slept in for a couple more, but one can only do so much in a dark forest.
Stunned by the daylight, he hardly saw anything and wandered in a direction he hoped his cave was in. He wasn't sure how the townsfolk of Ponyville would react to him, but he'd figure that out soon enough.

Crouching down low he lifted off and glided as far as the wind would take him, but that only landed him in Ponyville as he flew directly into the town hall, falling to the ground with a very heavy thud. He rubbed his armored head, feeling a bit dazed as he huffed out black smoke. Behind him and almost all around, he heard ponies asking "What is that?", "Is that really a pony?", "Who is he?", or even one he heard quite a bit whenever he was outside like this "Why is it here?". He stood up and shook himself up and blinked his eyes, but no good. The light stung his eyes whenever it was open, although the purple goggles helped, and once more he jumped high into the air and glided to the mountain, hoping to get to his cave, but he wasn't the best at luck and it proved just that as something hit him mid-flight, giving him a jolt.
He hit the ground and who or whatever hit him did their best to hold him down "Gotcha" The voice seemed strange, he hadn't heard it before, and he'd snooped on conversations of everypony from Ponyville to Manehattan.
Grim pushed the assailant off him with a single forehoof and got up, blinking "Who in all of the blinding void is there!" He exclaimed.
"Oh Nopony special, just a big ol' bag of bones" The assailant quipped in a rather amused tone. Grim looked at the source of the voice and walked towards it, but didn't find a single thing and was tackled from behind, and pinned into the ground. He who had attacked him attached something to all his hooves, it felt like metal; Metal he couldn't break. That was new for him at least. He felt humiliated. Whatever position he was in, it felt like he was some new prize some hunter caught, he was hogtied by a mortal! He narrowed his eyes and was able to get only a flash of a glimpse at him as he was laid onto his side but that didn't help one bit. With a huff, he asked his new captor, being drug upon the ground by what didn't look like a normal earth pony "Seriously... Who are you?"

"Just call me Bones"

Author's Note

Decided to draw a little inspiration from another fanfic to be Grim's Captor. Don't Judge Me ^_^, Also I'm most likely going to be drawing more inspiration from the Whole Skin's Story thing that's in that fanfic i linked. But not sure

Let me know what you think, and if you see any plot holes, let me know so i can patch 'em up!

Also The Title and Descriptions are most likely due to change, but I honestly don't know.

In Trouble and Still Kicking - Chapter ][

"So what will you do sister?" Princess Celestia kept quiet despite her sister's question. She was doing two things.
One, she was doing her very best to actually detect Grim, the one her sister spoke of. And Two, she was thinking of what to do about him. Of course She had no doubt many other groups would do their best to contain him, or do their best to. Especially the one she'd just sensed only a few moments ago as if they'd been somehow hiding from her omniscience with life energy. However much thinking that had to be done, She knew she couldn't give an actual answer yet. "Nothing. I know we must do something about him, and we will" Luna looked only a bit worried as her sister walked out to the balcony and looked over the kingdom, or what was half of it if not a bit more. Luna yawned loudly and nodded "Okay, well we will retreat to our chambers for a few." Celestia nodded to her tired sister, who now walked to her room, presumably to get some sleep, but she knew her sister more than she let on, despite their thousand year separation.

The ground behind him wasn't really disturbed, but he wondered if his armor would get ruined from being drug against it for so long. "Why are you so heavy?" Grim chuckled loudly and replied to the pony's rhetorical-sounding question "Why do you think, last I checked armor wasn't something that was dragged on the ground easily" his captor stopped in what looked to be a slightly shaded area and he heard what sounded like the dropping of chains. Grim could still hardly see anything in front of his face but at least his eyes weren't hurting anymore and that made him sigh with relief.
His legs were still bound together at the hooves by the same set of shackles, but he shook them anyways, which got a response from his captor who he heard directly in front of him "Don't worry, you'll be out of those in no time"
Grim let out a smoggy huff again and simply laid there. Eventually Bones picked the chains u again and resumed the process of dragging him.

Eventually a familiar sound reached their ears, that's if Bones had any ears. The sound of a portal, and again the light hit his eyes, forcing him to close them shut. Soon he felt an ambient energy nearby and huffed a breath as he did his best to break the shackles, but to no effect he did so. With what felt like a sudden tug Bones entered the portal, and the chains were pulled in with a jerk, almost throwing Grim in.
Portals were much less painful than warp points or teleports, in that they didn't require any disassembling of the cargo, in this case it was Bones and Grim. Grim was thankful for almost nothing, save for the fact portals existed.
As he was thrown from the portal into the other side, he hit the ground with a loud thud he hardly felt. He opened his eyes and sighed with relief yet again as there was no sunlight anywhere to be seen.

He used an armored wing to prop himself onto his hooves, allowing him to look around. The sound of crumbling rock and burning lava came from nearby pools of lava. The entire place was mostly just rock, not much to see, save for a few spikes jutting from the ground. Bones picked the chain up and for once Grim got a decent view at him. Bones was a decent-sized Earth Pony stallion that looked as if he'd absolutely no flesh, skin or blood of any kind "I see why you're called Bones" Grim pointed out with a blank face. Bones nodded and tugged on the chains, seemingly impatient to get what he called home. The path before them was not a long way away, but at he pace they'd been going it was going to take about a half hour to reach the gates. Grim was actually hopping on what was effectively a single hoof, until he feigned fatige and fell over onto the ground, with which Bones complained "Oh Come on, we're almost there!".
Grim knew himself to be mean-spirited at heart and grinned at the bone pony's apparent despair and faked a complaint "But I'm so tired, hopping on all fours while being hogtied is so difficult!" He more or less whined on that one as he refused to get back up.

Bones pulled against the chains giving a groan before gaining some momentum. After a few minutes of dragging Grim past the gates of Tartarus, Bones put down the chains and went away for a few moments, later somepony else, a pony that was almost twice as high as Celestia, and most likely scarier than anything as he himself had a fair number of chains attached to his coat and weights tied to his wings with a large wheel around his neck. He came instead of Bones to get the black armored stallion and carried him to his cell, giving idle chi-chat on the way there as Grim sighed "Don't worry lil' guy, you'll enjoy your life here, or the rest of it that is"

Grim only smirked and replied "That's a cute thing to say" But the moment the mountain of a pegasus questioned his words, Grim replied rather smugly "I didn't say anything, you must be hearing things". The chit-chat was over as fast as it started and a few moments later he was held in the pegasus's mouth and dropped into his cell, the door closing soon after.
He sat up after his shackles were then removed by a slightly stained, purple energy and called out "It's alright, I could use a vacation!"
Though nopony answered, he felt he was being watched and huffed out his usual black smoke he always exhaled out.

During the entire time Grim was dragged into Tartarus and into his cell, Stormy was still running. She suddenly tripped on a small basket and tumbled into a shop stall. She hit the stall hard, however it barely moved an inch.
Panting, Stormy laid on the ground, looking around, still a bit panicked as she slowly came to, and realized she sat in Ponyville.
"Thank Celestia I'm out of that forest..." She said to herself, sighing with overwhelming relief as she felt her fear turn into cautious optimism. Soon somepony walked up to her and asked with concern "Are you okay?" Stormy looked and saw it was none other than Twilight Sparkle. "Oh, hey Twilight. Yeah I'm... I'm okay, Thanks" She said as she got up onto her hooves, still a bit shaky and pale however.

"Are you sure? You look like you've seen a ghost" Twilight asked once more, it was clear she was concerned for one of her friends, but Stormy shook her head "I'm... not sure. I gotta go think for a while" And then gve Twilight a gentle hug in appreciation "But thanks for the offer" and after walked to her favorite spot in the whole town, Sugar Cube Corner.
As she stepped into the shop, images of the monster she'd seen through the copy and of it trying to jump out of the hole, up at her flashed in her mind. She shook her head furiously as she bumped into somepony in the line.
When it was eventually her turn to order something she asked for "Just some water" and took the glass she was quickly given to a table in the shop, sitting on a chair. As she looked into the window across the room from her table, she stuck a hoof into the glass and zoned out.

She couldn't stop thinking about that... thing in the pit. She'd never known something that huge and terrifying ever existed, well she knew of something else that big and almost as scary in her childhood. But something like that wasn't natural, obviously.
As she thought and dwelled on that one terrifying experience, her hoof absorbed the water like a plant and dirt would with water. It was how she usually drank any sort of liquid after all. She stayed there until the moon rose and she was told to leave, since the shop was closing, and usually did when it was about 10ish at night.
But since it was night, she headed home, climbing into a nearby barrel and curling up on the surface of the coffee-like powder like a cat normally would and fell asleep.

She hoped she wouldn't find the monster in her dreams, that notion almost made sleep feel too risky. As what normally happened, her body slowly started to lose cohesion and density as she slowly melted into sleep, both metaphorically and literally.

Author's Note

Thoughts?

This was pretty fun to write, Next Chapter is going to be a bit longer.