A dream come true

by Will Atkinson

Rating: teen
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Other, Romance, Queen Chrysalis, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Human, Sad, Main 6, Princess Luna, Gore
Length: 31715

Two kids wish on a full moon to be in the world of Equestria then after the wish a visitor comes and takes them to the world of Equestria.

Two kids Chris and Mark always dream to be in the world of Equestria. One night they make a wish during a Full moon. Suddenly after they make their wish princess Luna comes to visit them and aked them if they want to come to Equestria? Without another word they set off to the world of Equestria where soon they will be tested on courege, and the power of love.

Published 2013-03-03 20:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2013-09-22 02:33:07 UTC

Chapter 3

A dream come true
By Will Atkinson

Chapter 3

Sweet Apple Acres Farm House
The Next Day

Chris and Mark were just getting up for another great day when Applejack came in the room.

"Oh I was just coming to wake you two up." She said.

Chris and Mark looked at Applejack and smiled at her.

"Well I hope you're not to disapointed of us waking up instead of you waking us up." Said Mark with a wink.

Applejack then went into a very deep shade of red.

"I uh well, oh it's time for breakfast so when you two are ready just come on downstirs."

"Ok thanks Applejack." Said Chris.

As soon as Applejack left the room Mark looked at Chris with a worried look on his face.

"What is it Mark?" Asked Chris.

"You look worried for some reason."

"Well Chris I think it's time to tell the ponies about us, about who we truly are, and where we truly come from." Said Mark.

Chris then jumped at what his brother just said.

"Are you nuts Mark?" Asked Chris.

"Don't you know what will happen if we tell them about us?"

"Well yes but Chris."

"But nothing Mark." Chris interrupted.

"We promised Luna and ourselves, and we're gonna keep it that way."

*Sigh* "Alright Chris you win." Said Mark

"Alright now enough talking about this and let's go have ourselves a nice breakfast." Said Chris running toward the door.

"Hey Chris that's not fair." Said Mark running after his brother at the door and down the stairs.

"Man I tell ya Big Mac you sure are a good cook." Said Chris.

"Why thank you Chris." Said Big Mac with a smile on his face.

Then Applejack got up from the table.

"Hey Applejack where are you going?" Asked Mark.

Applejack turned to Mark.

"Oh me well, me and the other ponies are going to see Twilight for something important." She said.

"I think it would be best if we come along too Applejack. we don't want those two ponies to get you." Said Chris worringly.

"Oh don't worry about me Chris if I see those two ponies i'll just buck them into next year. She said with a smile on her face.

And then they all just laughed.

"Ok Applejack but please be careful." Said Mark.

Applejack noded and left the house, then just as soon as Applejack left the house Big Mac turned to the two alicorns.

"I think you two should follow her just in case if those two ponies see her."

"I was thinking the same thing Big Mac." Said Mark.

"Well what are we waiting for Mark? Let's go." Said Chris.

Without waisting another second Chris and Mark secretly followed Applejack to Twilight's house.

Ponyville Library
10 minutes later

As Applejack came to the door of Twilight's house Chris and Mark hid behind a tree.

"Ok Chris we followed Applejack now let's go back to the farm." Said Mark.

"No Mark." He said.

"What why?"

"I want to see what's so important that we can't be told about."

As soon as he said that the door opened and Chris and Mark saw Twilight at the door. Also in the house they saw Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Spike, Princess Celestia, and to their shock they also saw Princess Luna there as well.

"Why is Luna there?" Asked Mark.

"I don't know Mark." Said Chris.

"Do you think they know about us and that's why Luna's there?"

"I don't know Chris." Said Mark.

"Well I'm going to find out." Said Chris.

As soon as the door of the library closed Chris came up to the door and put his ear on it so he could hear what they were saying.

"I think we should go back to the farm Chris." Said Mark.

But Chris just put his hoof on Mark's lips.

"Shh quiet Mark their talking."

"Everypony my sister has somethng to tell us." Said Celestia.

"Well come on Luna what is it?" Asked Fluttershy.

"Well it's about Chris and Mark." Said Luna.

"Ha I knew it. They are here to cause harm to us and all of Ponyville." Said Rainbow Dash.

"Settle down surgarcube." Said Applejack.

"Is this true Princess?" She asked.

"No Applejack the're not here to cause us harm or anyone else." Said Luna.

"To tell you ponies the truth the're not alicorns at all, the're actually humans."

"The're humans?" Asked Pinkie Pie.

"Yes." Said Luna.

"Why couldn't they just tell us?" Asked Twilight.

"Cause they wanted to fit in and...."

"What about their parents? Did they lie about that too?" Asked Rainbow Dash interuppting Luna.

"Rainbow Dash that's not a nice thing to say." Said Fluttershy.

"Well I'm sorry but how do we know that they...."

Just then they heard the door swing open and the ponies, Spike, and the princesses turned around and there stood Chris and Mark.

"Uh oh this is not good." Said Rarity quietly.

As the ponies, Spike, and the princesses looked at the two alicorns Mark looked at them with a sad look on his face while Chris' face was the look of anger and betrayl. Then Chris turned to the princess of the night.

"How could you Luna? How could you brake our promise?"

"Please Chris try to undersand." Said Luna.

"Oh I undersand perfectly and I think I know why you had to tell them." Said Chris as he pointed at Twilight as his eyes filled with rage and sadness.

"Twilight asked Spike to write a letter to Princess Celestia about us and after she read that letter she asked you about us and then you broke down and told her."

"HAVE I LEFT ANYTHING OUT?!" Shouted Chris.

"Brother please calme down." Said Mark.

"No Mark I won't calme down. Now we have to leave and I just can't go back to our foster perents, I just can't."

"Chris listen your not...."

"No you listen Luna, all of you listen." Said Chris with tears flowing freely out of his eyes.

"Ever since me and my brother were 10 years old we have been tortured by our foster perents and now when we finaly get a chance to escape the tortures of them by coming here we were happy that our dream of seeing you ponies had come true. But now, but now your telling us to leave? Well that's fine and you know what Twilight?" Chris asked looking at the purple unicorn with rage in his eyes.

"I thought we could've had something Twilight. You know ever since I bumped into you that evening and after we kissed that night I started to love you more and today I was going to ask you to be my girlfriend or in this case my marefriend. But i guess it's not gonna happen because I'm done with you, I'm done with all of you.

And with that Chris turned around and ran off towards the everfree forest.

"Well that could've gone better." Said Spike.

"Oh Spikey Wikey!!" Said Rarity puting a hoof on her face.

Mark looked at Spike and Rarity then he looked back at where Chris ran off to.

"Chris wait!!" Said Mark as he was turning around getting ready to go after his brother.

Just then Twilight stopped him.

"Hold on there Mark." She said putting a hoof on Mark's shoulder.

"Let me go after him please."

Mark turned to Twilight.

"But he hates you now. Do you know what will happen if you..."

Before he could finish Twilight put a hoof on his lips.

"I know Mark what will happen." Said Twilight.

"But I love him and I think I can make him come back. So please Mark let me do it."

Mark looked at the direction that Chris went and then he looked back to Twilight then he noded in agreement. With that Twilight galloped towards the everfree forest after Chris. After Twilight left Applejack walked up right next to Mark.

"Come on surgarcube I think the time has come for you to tell us the truth about your parents."

*Sigh* "Ok Applejack." Said Mark then he looked at Celestia.

"Are you really going to take us back to our foster parents Princess Celestia?"

Celestia looked at Mark and smiled.

"No Mark we are not going to take you two back to your foster parents."

Mark smiled and began telling everypony the truth about their foster parents.

Everfree forest
30 minutes Later

Twilight found Chris standing at the edge of the everfree forest with his hooves on his face.

"Um Chris are you ok?" She asked as she came up to him putting a hoof on his shoulder.

"What are you doing here? Have you caused enough pain in my heart already?" Asked Chris.

Twilight sat right beside Chris.

"Chris please let me at least speak. You don't have to talk to me but just please hear me out ok?"

Chris looked at Twilight.

*Sigh* "Alright Twilight I'm listening." He said wiping a tear from his eye.

"The Princess was not gonna take you and Mark back home to your foster parents we just wanted you two to tell us the truth. So please Chris tell me all about your parents and what really happened to them please?"

Chris looked down on the ground.

*Sigh* "Twilight?" He began.

"The story that me and Mark told you and the others two days ago was the truth except how our parents died. You see me and Mark were at a babysitter's house while our parents were coming back from a high school reunion to get us until a drunk driver hit their car. After that we were sent to a foster care center and I saw the accident on the news our dad went through the cars windsheild while our mother got impaled by a two by four which the truck was carrying and then well you know the rest."

After that Chris started to cry. Twilight then came up to him and gave him a hug and she suddenly started to cry as well.

"Oh Chris I'm so sorry that happened to you and Mark, I'm so very sorry. Said Twilight with tears flowing freely out of her eyes.

"It...it's alright don't be sorry for me Twilight you probably hate me for what I said back at the library anyway."

Twilight looked at Chris in disbelief like it was some kind of sick joke.

"What do you mean Chris? I don't hate you."

Chris' eyes shot wide opened and looked up at Twilight.

"You....you don't?" He asked.

"No Chris you were just upset that's all and I know you didn't really mean all of that stuff you said."

"R....really?"

"Really, I love you Chris Thunder and I will always be with you no matter what."

(I WILL ALWAYS BE WITH YOU FROM ALL DOGS GO TO HEAVEN 2 STARTS TO PLAY)

TWILIGHT:
I will always be with you
Makes no difference where your road takes you to
Even if we're apart
Now we're joined at the heart
Though our moment may be gone
You and I will still live on

CHRIS:
I will always be with you
I'll be by your side whatever you do
Other memories may fade
But the ones that we made
Are eternal as a star
Now I'm part of who you are

BOTH:
And I'll be there with you in the sound of your laughter
I'll be in the tears you cry

CHRIS:
'Cause the way you and I have touched one and other

BOTH:
Doesn't end with goodbye

CHRIS:
I will always be with you

BOTH:
Like a guardian angel constant and true

TWILIGHT:
When you're lost in the night

CHRIS:
(Lost in the night)

TWILIGHT:
And you can't see the light

BOTH:
My love will see you through

CHRIS:
I will always be there

TWILIGHT:
You'll have me there

BOTH:
I will always be with you

CHRIS:
I will always be with you

TWILIGHT:
I will always be with you

BOTH:
Like a guardian angel constant and true

TWILIGHT:
When you're lost in the night

CHRIS:
(Lost in the night)

TWILIGHT:
And you can't see the light

CHRIS:
(Can't see the light)

BOTH:
My love will see you through

CHRIS:
I will always be there

TWILIGHT:
You'll have me there

BOTH:
I will always be with you

Twilight took Chris by the hoof then said.

"Come on Chris let's go back to the others."

"Ok let's go Twilight." said Chris With a smile on his face.

Just as soon as they turned around and about to head back to the library a beam of green energy struck Twilight in the back.

"AHHHHHHHHH!!!!" Cried Twilight in pain."

*Gasp* "Twilight are you alright?!" Asked Chris running up to her.

"Y...yes I'll be fine Chris." Said Twilight as she struggled to her hooves.

"Alright come on out you coward you hurt Twilight now you have to face me!!!" Said Chris looking around the everfree forest.

Then a strange pony with green hair, green eyes, and black fur stepped out of the shadows.

*Gasp* "You, your the queen of the changelings, Queen Chrysalis."

Chrysalis was surprised that Chris knew her name.

"Hmm well I'm surprised that you know who I am you silly alicorn." She hissed.

"So tell me young alicorn how did you know my name?"

"It doesn't matter how I know your name you witch."

"A witch am I now? HA i've got to hand it to you young one you've got spunk."

Look I'm just gonna say this just once leave me and Twilight alone and you won't get hurt." Said Chris.

"HAHAHAHAHAHA that's a good one young alicorn!!!!" Laughed Chrysalis.

"But I'm not here for you I'm just here for that fool right behind you Twilight Sparkle."

Twilight looked at Chrysalis.

"Me what do you want with me?" she asked

"I want revenge you fool, revenge for what you did to me.

Chris stood as tall as ever infront of Twilight and glared at Chrysalis.

"Well if you want Twilight you'll have to go through me to do so." Said Chris.

"Hmmm very well you fool feel my fury." Said Chrysalis.

With that Chrysalis then raised up her horn and fired a beam of green energy towards Chris.

"Chris watch it!!" Said Twilight.

Chris saw the beam coming and quickly moved out of the way before the beam could hit him. Chrysalis continued to fire the beam of energy out of her horn but Chris kept on dodging them."

"GRRRRR. Hold still so I can hit you, you worm." snarled Chrysalis.

"HA HA yeah right your just too slow!" Said Chris laughing.

"Alright Chris take her out!" cheered Twilight.

"SILENCE YOU FOOL!!!!" Shouted Chrysalis as she fired the beam of green energy towards Twilight."

"TWILIGHT LOOK OUT!!!!" yelled Chris.

Chris pushed Twilight out of the way in time but couldn't move away from the beam of green energy in tme as it hit him on the right side of his body.

*Gasp* "CHRIS NO!!!!" Shouted Twilight as she ran to his side.

"Oh Chris are you alright?"

Chris opened his eyes and looked at Twilight.

"T....Twilight....r....run Twilight." Said Chris weakly.

Twilight looked up and saw Chrysalis hovering above her and Chris.

"I wouldn't advise that you fool. But if you come with me I promise to spare his life." Said Chrysalis.

Twilight looked at Chris then she looked back at Chrysalis.

"You promise to spare his life if I come with you?"

"Yes I promise." Said Chrysalis.

*Sigh* "Alright Chrysalis I'll go with you just please don't hurt him anymore." Said Twilight with her head hung low.

Chrysalis came up to Twilight, then she put a hoof on her mane and rubbed it.

"HA that's a good girl!" She said with an evil grin on her face.

Just then Chrysalis lowerd her horn towards Twilight's front hooves. As she did so shackles appeard and bound themselves onto Twilight's front hooves. Then Chrysalis went to Twilight's back hooves and lowerd her horn as she did so another pair of shackles appeard and bound her back hooves.

"And to make sure you don't use magic on me." She said as she put a dark spell on Twilight's horn.

"Now the only way that the spell can be broken is if somepony destroys me or if I take it off myself HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!" Said Chrysalis with an evil chuckle.

"Now come my slave it's time to leave."

"Wait can I at leaste say goodbye to Chris first?" Asked Twilight.

*Sigh* "Fine but be quick girl." Chrysalis huffed.

Twilight walk towards Chris as her shackles were clinking and clanking on the ground.

"I'm so sorry Chris, I love you." Said Twilight sadly

With that she kissed him on the lips then she looked back up at Chrysalis.

"Ok I'm ready to go mistress." Said Twilight with a tear in her eye.

"Hmmmm Mistress? I like the sound of that." Said Chrysalis with a evil smile on her face.

Just then Chris slowly got up and watch as Twilight went into a carriage with Chrysalis by her side. Then Chris saw Chrysalis turning to him and give him some kind of map to a castle.

"Now listen here boy if you want to see your marefriend again come to the Starlight Castle alone. If you don't she dies." She said.

And with that the carriage lifted off the ground and took off. As soon as they flew off to the castle Chris picked up the map and then he spread his wings and started to fly off after them.

("Hold on Twilight I'm coming.") He said to himself.

Just then he felt the pain where the green energy beam had hit him started to flair up again. Then he started to fall out of the sky. The last thing he saw before he passed out was somepony coming towards him.

Starlight Castle
One hour Later

As the Starlight Castle came into view Chrysalis looked down at Twilight.

"Now slave when we land you follow me to my throne room and we will get started on your punishment for what you have done to me."

Twilight then looked up and glared at Chrysalis.

"When Chris comes to get me he's going to....."

Just then Chrysalis raised her hoof and slapped Twilight knocking her over almost out of the carriage.

"Now you listen here fool you will talk when I say you can talk and as for your alicorn boyfriend if he dose come I'm going to kill him and i'll have you as my slave forever HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!" She Laughed.

Twilight lowered her head looking at nothing except for the shackies on the front and the back of her hooves. As the carriage landed at the Starlight Castle Chrysalis got out then she looked at Twilight.

"Come slave it's time."

Twilight got up with the sound of her restraints clanging on the floor.

"Yes mistress." She said sadly.

As they were walking Chrysalis looked at Twilight once more.

"Ever since your brother and Princess Cadence banished me I came across this abandoned castle. Then It occured to me if I want a castle of my own then why not this one? So me and my changelings fixed it up and it's pretty nice if I do say so myself. Don't you think so slave?"

Twilight looked up at Chryalis.

"Yes mistress it is nice." Said Twilight still sad and hoping Chris was alright.

Just then Twilight was snaped out of her thoughts when they got to Chrysalis' room. When Chrysalis and Twilight went into the room Chrysalis levitated Twilight towards the middle of the room. Just then chains came out from the ground and lashed on to the shackies on Twilight's back hooves. Then more chains came down from the ceiling and lashed on to the sackles on Twilight's front hooves.

"There now." Said Chrysalis."

"Are you ready for your treatment slave?" She Asked as she levitated a whip from behind her throne and was ready to put it across Twilight's back.

Twilight struggled to get free but to no of avail.

"P....please don't do this to me mistress please I beg you!" Twilight said with fear in her eyes.

"SILENCE FOOL!!!!" Shouted Chrysails as she put the whip onto Twilight's back.

*HATSCH﻿*

"AHHHHHH!!!!" Twilight screamed in agony.

The force of the whip was so strong that it broke Twilight's skin and blood started to fall from the open wound onto the cold hard floor. Twilight was breathing heavily and her heart was racing.

"YOU TOOK AWAY MY LIFE YOU NO GOOD MISS GOODY TWO SHOES!!!!" Said Chrysails as she continue to whip Twilight.

*HATSCH﻿*

"AHHHHHH!!!!" She screamed.

Twilight looked at Chrysails with forgivness in her eyes.

"P....please n....no more." Twilight said trying not to loose consciousness.

"I TOLD YOU NOT TO SPEACK UNLESS SPOKEN TO!!!! Shouted Chrysails.

Then Twilight felt the whip hit her back once again.

*HATSCH﻿*

"AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!"

"YOUR NOTHING BUT A WORM!!!"

*HATSCH﻿*

"AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!"

"A BRAT!!!!"

*HATSCH*﻿

"AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!"

"OH CURSE YOU TWILIGHT SPARKLE YOU NO GOOD LITTLE WRETCH!!!!"

*HATSCH﻿*

"AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!"

Again and again Chrysails continued to whip Twilight until she saw that Twilight suddenly lost consciousness by the amount of slashes by the whip that Chrysails slashed on her back made and by the amount of blood that was dripping down from her back to the cold hard floor.

"Humph weak fool." Said Chrysails as she put the whip away and then she went to fetch a maid to clean up Twilight's blood from the floor and to bandage her up.

Everfree forest
one hour later

Chris woke up with a start and looked around.

"Hey where am I?"

"You're in my hut young alicorn." Said a voice.

Chris turned around and saw a zebra like medicine women right next to him.

"My name is Zecora." She said.

"What's yours young one?"

"It's Chris."

Just then there was a knock at the door.

"I'll be right back Chris you just stay here." Said Zecora as she went and opened the door.

At the doors entrance there standing there was Applejack and Chris' brother Mark.

"Well hi Applejack. What brings you and your new friend here?"

"We are looking for Twilight and my brother Chris." Said Mark.

"Have you seen them?"

"Well I haven't seen Twilight but Chris is here laying on my bed he got hit by some kind of energy beam by the mark on his side."

"WHAT?!" Asked Applejack and Mark together.

Zecora showed the wounded alicorn laying on her bed.

"Oh hay you two." Said Chris.

"Chris are you ok? What in tarnations happen to you?" Asked Applejack.

"I...it was, it was Queen Chrysails." He said weakly

"QUEEN CHRYSAILS?!" Asked Applejack, Mark, and Zecora together.

"You mean the Queen of the changelings?" Asked Applejack.

"Yes she was the one who did this to me." Said Chris.

"Please tell us brother. What happen to Twilight?" Asked Mark.

"Well we were at the entrance to the everfree forest talking and when we were getting ready to come back to the library She struck Twilight with her magic, I tried my best to stop her from taking Twilight but to no avail. As she aimed another beam towards her, I knocked Twilight out of the way and well thats when the beam hit me on my side. Instead of killing me Chrysails had left Twilight with a decision if she went with her she would spare my life. So she went with Chrysails, I tried to go after them but well the pain from my injury was too great and then I past out and then I woke up here."

Chris put his head under Zecora's pillow.

"I'm so sorry guys I don't deserve a mare like her, I just don't."

"Now that is just ridiculous brother." Said Mark.

"You are the best pony that Twilight could ever ask for."

"Mark is right and with our help we can get twilight back." Said Applejack.

Chris then looked up at them and just shook his head.

"I'm sorry guys but if you go with me she will kill Twilight."

"What are you serious brother?" Asked Mark.

"Yes Mark it's true."

"Well I think I can help out with that problem." Said Zecora.

"Really how Zecora?" Asked Applejack.

"Well I just finished an invisability potion just yesterday and if you and Mark drink it you can follow Chris without raising alarm to the changelings and the queen."

"That's a good idea Zecora." Said Mark.

"Alright then tomorrow we all will go to the castle and save Twilight from the queen." Said Chris as he laid back down and slep back to sleep.

Starlight Castle
Later that night

Twilight awoken by a sharp pain on her back and she started to look around and saw that she was still chained up.

"Oh I'm sorry did I hurt you?" Asked a vioce.

Twilight looked down and saw a pale yellow pony with a curly mane staring right back at her. Twilight knew exactly who the pale yellow pony was.

"C....Carrot T....Top i....is that, is that y....you?" She asked still weak from the beating she received from Queen Chrysails.

"Yes it's me Twilight." Said Carrot Top.

Twilight then noticed a collar on Carrot Top's neck.

"Carrot Top what's that thing on your neck?"

"Oh this coller is, well if I disapoint Queen Chrysails then she can shock me with it by using her magic." Said Carrot Top sadly.

"Thats terrible Carrot Top. How could she do such a thing to you?" Twilight asked.

"I don't know Twilight, I just don't know."

Carrot Top started to cry.

"Oh don't cry Carrot Top." Said Tiwlight.

"Everything will be fine I promise you."

Carrot Top looked up at Twilight with a smile on her face.

"Thanks Twilight that means a lot to me." She said wiping a tear from her eye.

"So Carrot Top why exactly are you here?" Twilight asked

"I was sent here by the queen to patch you up." She said as she put the last bit of bandages on Twilight's wounds.

"Well that's not what I meant Carrot Top."

"Oh then what did you mean Twilight?" She asked.

"I was wondering how you got to be in this castle?"

"Oh I rather not talk about it Twilight." said Carrot Top.

"It's ok Carrot Top I understand." said Twilight.

"What about you how did you get here Twilight?" Carrot Top asked.

"Oh well I was talking to my special somepony at the entrance to the everfree forest until Queen Chrysails came. He tried to stop her but he got hurt from rescuing me from Chrysails energy beam and she said if I didn't come with her she would have killed him. I guess you can see what choice I made." Said Twilight with tears flowing down her cheek.

Carrot Top then came up to Twilight and hugged her.

"I'm so sorry Twilight that this had to happed to you."

"It's ok Carrot Top I know in my heart that he will come for me I just know he will." She said with a smile on her face.

Then Twilight felt the last bandage being put on her back and she sighed with relife.

"Oh man I feel much better now." She said.

"How did you learn first aid anyway Carrot Top?"

"Oh I learnd first aid when I was just a little filly Twilight." Carrot Top explained.

As Carrot Top finished patching up Twilight's scarred back and cleaned up the blood on the floor she got up and was ready to leave.

"Well I best be going now before Queen Chrysails gets angry at me."

"Alright Carrot Top please take good care of yourself. Said Twilight.

"Don't worry I will Twilight, I will." Said Carrot Top and with that she left leaving Twilight alone in the throne room.

After Carrot Top left the room Twilight then went happly to sleep still chained up as she thought of Chris, Mark, and her friends.

Chapter 4

A dream come true
By Will Atkinson

Chapter 4

Starlight Castle
The Next Day

Chrysalis was sleeping soundly until she heard a knock at her door.

*Knock* *Knock* *Knock* *Knock*

"UGH WHO DARES DISTURB MY SLEEP!!" Shouted Chrysalis as she opened the door with her magic.

"Um I'm sorry to disturb you, your majasty." Said one of the guards that was in the doorway.

"But we got word from our spies that, that alicorn you had a fight with yesterday is coming our way."

After hearing that Chrysalis' ears purked up.

"What? Are you sure it's him captain?" Asked Chrysalis.

"Yes your majesty I am sure it's him."

"Good, good." Said Chrysalis.

"Now let's see how our prisoner is doing shall we?" Chrysalis asked as she got up and head towards the throne room where Twilight was still chained up."

Everfree forest
one hour ago

"Ok guys you ready to go and get Twilight out of that castle?" Asked Chris.

"Yes we are Surgarcube." Said Applejack.

"Ok Applejack and Mark here is the posion to make you two invisable for two hours." Said Zecora.

Chris looked at Zecora in shock.

"What two hours? We would not even make it to the throne room in two hours."

"It's ok bro." Said Mark.

"I think two hours is plenty of time for us to get to the castle."

"Well ok then Mark I trust you." Said Chris.

After that Mark and Applejack took the invisibility poison and soon they set off to Starlight Castle.

"Now remember guys you need to not talk. Because who knows Chrysalis might have spies all over the place." Said Chris.

"Don't you worry now Chris we know the plan." Said Applejack.

"Yeah when you go in and face Chrysalis we will secretly get Twilight out of the castle. Said Mark.

"Ok then let's do it." Said Chris, as they set off towards Starlight Castle.

Starlight Castle
present time

Chrysalis approached the throne room and opened the door with her magic. As she did so she could see Twilight all bandaged up and sleeping soundly. As Chrysalis approached her she raised her hoof and slapped her awake.

"UH!!" She cried out.

"It's time to get up slave, you don't want that alicorn you love so mutch to see you asleep now do you?" Chrysalis asked.

"What, what do you mean?" Asked Twilight still a little weak from the beating that she got from the whip last nght.

"I mean slave that he's coming for you right now thanks to my spies in the everfree forest he should be here in about an hour." Said Chrysalis.

Twilight struggled against her bounds and then she looked back at Chrysalis.

"Chris is going to kill you for this."

"OH SHUT UP!!" Said Chrysalis, giving Twilight another hard smack.

"I'm hoping he will come you fool so I can take your place as you."

" HA Chris will never fall for that trick Chrysalis when he gets me out you'll be nothing."

"I said to SHUT UP!!" Said Chrysalis, as she gave Twilight another hard smack.

"You don't know what it's like to be alone for so long without love, or without friends. Look at you Twilight you have friends that care about you, and somepony that loves you, while I have nopony."

Twilight looked at Chrysalis.

"Well the reason that I have such good friends and a lover is because I never try to destroy otherponys love for one another or try to take over Equestria."

Then Chrysalis looked at Twilight with a glare in her eyes.

"HA just save your pity for somepony else slave for once I have Chris' love for myself I will rule all of Ponyville, and then after I do that I will rule all of Equestria you little POOR UNFORTUNATE SOUL HAHAHAHAHA!!!!" Laghed Chrysalis.

(POOR UNFORTUNATE SOULS FROM THE LITTLE MERMAID STARTS TO PLAY)

I admit that in the past I've been a nasty
They weren't kidding when they called me, well, a witch
But you'll find that nowadays
I've mended all my ways
Repented, seen the light, and made a switch
To this
And I fortunately know a little magic
It's a talent that I always have possessed
And dear lady, please don't laugh
I use it on behalf
Of the miserable, the lonely, and depressed (pathetic)

Poor unfortunate souls
In pain, in need
This one longing to be thinner
That one wants to get the girl
And do I help them?
Yes, indeed
Those poor unfortunate souls
So sad, so true
They come flocking to my cauldron
Crying, "Spells, Chrysalis, please!"
And I help them!
Yes I do

Now it's happened once or twice
Somepony couldn't pay the price
And I'm afraid I had to rake 'em 'cross the coals
Yes I've had the odd complaint
But on the whole I've been a saint
To those poor unfortunate souls

Twilight strugled with her chains again.

"Your, your insaine." She said to Chrysalis. .

"I might be insane but I'm gonna make sure I win this time my salve." Said Chrysalis with a smile on her face.

"Oh guards?"

"Yes your highness what is it?"

"Please take my slave to the dungeon with my other slave could you?"

"Yes your highness of course."

So the guards unchained Twilght and dragged her out of the throne room to the dungeon.

"Now for my plan." Said Chrysalis, as soon as she said that she transformed into Twilight and chained herself up to the chains on the floor and on the ceiling.

Everfree forest
fifty minutes later

"Uh oh." wispered Applejack.

"What is it, what's wrong Applejack?" Asked Chris.

"We have only ten minutes until the poison wears off surgarcube ."

"Shoot." Said Chris.

Then off in the distance they saw the castle.

"ALRIGHT WE MADE IT!!!!" Shouted Mark.

"Shhh Mark." Said Chris.

"Ooops sorry."

"Alright guys let me go in and you guys stay here." Said Chris.

"But why Chris?" Asked Applejack.

"Because you guys have less then ten minutes left until you two become visible again."

*Sigh* "He's right Applejack we don't have a choice." Said Mark.

"Alright but you be careful now ya hear Chris."

"Don't worry Applejack I'll be careful."

After that Chris spread his wigs and flew off to the castle.

("Good luck brother and may Celestia be with you.") Mark said to himself as he watched Chris heading towards the castle.

Starlight Castle
ten minutes later

"Um excuse me your highness."

"Yes what is it?" Said Chrysalis.

"Um that alicorn is here."

"Good you can send him in now."

"Yes your majesty."

Just then the door of the throne room opened and there stood Chris. As Chris looked around the throne room he saw Chrysalis disguised as Twilight all chained up and covered in bandages.

"TWILIGHT!!!!" Chris shouted.

The fake Twilight opened her eyes and as she did she saw Chris looking right at her.

"Chris is that you?"

"Yes Twilight it's me." Said Chris.

Then he ran right up to the fake Twilight and hugging her tightly.

"Oh Twilight your alright I thought I was not going to see you again."

"Um Chris?"

"Yes Twilight?"

"I can't breathe."

"Oh sorry Twilight."

"It's ok Chris."

"Now could you please unchain me so we can leave before Chrysalis comes back?" Asked the fake Twilight.

"Ok no problem." Said Chris.

But just as he was about to set the fake Twilight free he noticed her horn was not surounded by the dark magic that Chrysalis put on her anymore.

"Um Twilight what happen to the dark spell that Chrysalis put on your horn?"

"Oh...that...w...well it...it wore off." The fake Twilight lied.

Just as the fake Twilight said that Chris backed away from her.

"But I thought that the dark spell was not suppose to wear off unless Chrysalis does it or if she is destroyed and I highly doubt that she would take that spell off. Especially if she did then you could simply just get off of those chains yourself right?"

"Oh....uh....well....I."

"Further more how come the guards allowed me into the throne room so easily? If I know Chrysalis she would make it difficult for me to get in here to get you but they just let me in here unless this is a trap. Right Twilight or should I say Queen Chrysalis?" Chris Asked, glaring at the fake Twilight.

Just as soon as he said that the fake Twilight started to laugh in Chrysalis' voice.

"HAHAHAHAHAHA very clever young alicorn, your not as dumb as I thought you were."

As Chris watched the fake Twilight's form change into Queen Chrysalis.

"I knew it, I knew it was you the whole time." Said Chris.

"Well I'm here now young one and I would like to welcome you to my castle." Said Chrysalis.

"JUST SHUT UP AND TELL ME WHERE TWILIGHT IS NOW!!!!"

"Very well Chris." Said Chrysalis.

"Guards bring forth my slave and her friends."

Chris looked at Chrysalis puzzled.

"Uh friends?" He asked.

"Why yes Chris look at the door behind you and you'll see what I mean."

As Chris turned around he saw the door open and there was Twilight, Carrot Top, and to his shock there also right next to Twilight was Applejack, and Mark.

"Applejack, Mark." Said Chris.

The guards then pushed Twilight, Carrot Top, Mark, and Applejack into the throne room.

"Did you really think that I would fall for a that kind of trick Chris?" Asked Chrysalis.

Chris looked at Chrysalis then he looked back at Applejack and Mark.

"Were sorry Chris they were waiting for us when you left." Said Applejack.

"Yes that's true and it's all thanks to my spies." Said Chrysalis

Everfree Forest
Fifteen minutes ago

("Good luck brother and may Celestia be with you.") Mark said to himself as he watched Chris heading towards the castle.

Just then he felt Appejack's hoof on his shoulder.

"Don't worry surgar he'll be ok." She said.

"I hope so Applejack, I hope so.

Just then Mark and Applejack saw that the potion was starting to ware off.

"Oh no Mark what are we going to do?" Asked Applejack.

Mark looked around the forest to find a place to hide. Then he saw a cave right at the end of the forest.

"There, that cave." He said.

Just as soon as they got into the cave the potion wore off.

"Are you sure we'll be alright in here?" Applejack asked Mark.

"Yes I'm sure Applejack.

But just as he said that they heared a voice saying.

"Don't move."

Applejack and Mark turned around and saw an army of changelings as guards.

"Oh great." Said Applejack.

"Chrysalis will be happy to see you two, now move it." Said one of the changeling guards.

Starlight Castle.
present time.

"See I knew you pobably have some help on getting your precious Twilight back so I decided to see what would happen and just like that when you left them alone to come to the castle my spies found your friends hiding in that cave when that stupid so called invisibility potion wore off of them and they brought them here."

Chrysalis then looked at her guards.

"Excellent work now you may leave us."

"Yes your highness." They said closing the door behind them.

Chris glared at Chrysalis.

"CHRYSALIS YOU LET MY BROTHER, TWILIGHT, APPLEJACK, AND THAT OTHER PONY GO RIGHT NOW."

"No they will be our audience while I kill you."

Then suddenly Chrysalis charged right at him at full gallop.

"CHRIS LOOK OUT!!!!" Twilight shouted.

Chris looked at Chrysalis and jumped out of the way just in time with Chrysalis' horn just missing him by inches.

"Oh man that was close." Said Mark.

"Yeah too close." Said Applejack.

"Chris be careful she's coming back." Said Twilight.

Sure enough he saw Chrysalis coming back at him but this time he charged right at her. Just then the two locked horns with each other and stared each other down.

"Give it up boy you can't win." Said Chrysalis.

"No I won't give up until your dead." Said Chris.

"Ok you fool but I'm not the one who is going to die." Said Chrysalis as she jumped into the air.

"YOU ARE THE ONE WHO IS GOING TO DIE!!!!" She said as her horn began to glow.

"Hey what is this? I can't move." Said Chris.

"Aw what's wrong Chrisy you can't move?" Asked Chrysalis with a smirk on her face.

"I have to give you credit young alicorn your strong but now it's time to end this once and for all. Goodbye Chris Thunder."

With that she charged again and lowered her horn aiming it right towards Chris' neck. Chris shut his eyes and prepared himself to be impaled by Chrysalis' horn, suddenly he heard a loud scream.

"AHHHHHHHHH!!!!"

After that he heard Applejack, Carrot Top, and Mark behind him scream in fear.

"TWILIGHT!!!!"

After hearing Applejack, Carrot Top, and Mark screaming out Twilight's name Chris' heart suddenly sank. He slowly opened his eyes hoping it wasn't Twilight who got hit with Chrysalis's horn. As he opened his eyes he saw the purple unicorn looking down at him, with Chrysalis' horn sticking right out of her right flank, with blood dripping down off of the tip of Chrysalis' horn.

"TWILIGHT NO!!!!" Chris screamed as he got out of the barrier that Chrysalis had him trapped in and went to Twilight's side.

Chrysalis pulled her horn out of Twilight's side and then she collapsed on the floor just as Chris got to her, as Twilight was bleeding badly on the both sides of her flank, Chris knew that Twilght was going to die but he didn't want to believe it.

"TWILIGHT WHY, WHY YOU DO IT, WHY COULDN"T YOU JUST STAY AWAY?!!!!" Shouted Chris.

Twilight looked at Chris with tears flowing down her face.

"Chris why would you say that? You should know why I did it."

"What, what do you mean?"

"Y....you s....saved me from getting hurt y....yesterday r....remember s....so I though th....that I re....return the f....faver."

Twilight groaned in pain.

"Twilight please just hang on your gonna be alright you hear, your gonna be alright."

Twilight smiled at Chris.

"I....it's ok C....Chris it dosen't hurt anymore. T....the p....pain is g....gone now."

("Oh no she's hurt so bad she dosen't even feel the pain.") Chris said to himself.

Suddenly he saw Twililght was coughing up blood.

"Twilight come on you've got to stay awake, please Twilight hang in there."

"HAHA it won't be long now!" laughed Chrysalis.

Chris looked up at Chrysalis and glared at her.

"SHUT UP!" He said.

Then he looked back down at Twilight as he stroked her mane.

"C....Chris I....I know, I know th....that I'm g....going t....to die." Twilight said, her breathing slowly getting weaker.

Chris looked at the mare in shock.

"W....what? No Twilight don't say that. You're not gonna die, you hear me? You're not gonna die."

"Y....you know w....what Chris?"

"What Twilight?"

"I....I love you, I...I love you s....so much."

Chris then started to cry.

"I....L l....love you so much too Twilight." He said, holding Twilight tight in his hooves.

Twilight then looked at Applejack, Mark, and Carrot Top.

"Hey guys?" She asked.

"Yes what is it Surgarcube?" Asked Applejack with tears in her eyes.

"Apple....Applejack p....please t....take good c....care of S....Spike f....for me o....ok?"

"I....I will Sugar, I will." She said as her eyes began to tear up.

Then Carrot Top walked over to Twilight looked down at her.

"Twilight please don't d....die just try, just try to stay with us please Twilight, you've gotta try."

"I'm, I'm so sorry Carrot Top b....but I....I just, I just can't s....so p....please t....take g....good care of y....yourself."

"I....I will." said Carrot Top, as tears flowed from her eyes.

"Hey Mark?" Asked Twilight.

"Yes what is it Twilight?"

"Take g....good care o....of A....Applejack o....ok?"

Applejack nuzzled up close to Mark.

"Don't worry Twilight I will take good care of Applejack don't you worry about that." He said, putting his hoof around Applejack.

Then Twilight looked back at Chris.

"C....Chris?"

"Yes Twilight I'm right here."

"Chris I....I think th....that i....it's about t....time for us t....to say good....goodbye." Said Twilight, as her eyes closed.

Chris' eyes opened wide as he realized what Twilight just said.

"What? No Twilight don't say that."

"Twilight?" He asked, as he tried to shake her awake but to no avail.

"No, no, no, no, no. TWILIGHT!!!!"

As Chris wept on Twilight's shoulder Chrysalis stepped forward.

"Oh stop your crying you fool and go back to your old life before you ever meet that wretch." She said, as she began to turn and walk away.

As soon as she said that, Chris thought of his old life before he met Twilight. He thought of his parents' death, his evil foster parents, and his and Mark's thoughts of committing suicide. Chris' eyes then truned from sadness to rage then he got up and turned to Chrysalis as she was walking towards her throne.

"Twilight was my old life Chrysalis." He said.

Chrysalis stopped and turned to Chris as he continued to talk.

"And anypony who tries to take that away from me. IS MY ENEMEY!!!!"

"Oh please you still want to fight me after what happened yesterday?" Asked Chrysalis.

"Yes I do, but first." Said Chris, as he looked down at Twilight's motionless body he noticed that Twilight was still breathing, a smile slowly appeared on his muzzle.

"Twilight? I know that you can still hear me so listen up. I'm going to take care of Chrysalis for you, and then I'll do everything in my power to bring you back to me, I promise."

Chris kissed Twilight on her lips, then he looked up at Chrysalis.

"Now Chrysalis let's finish this once and for all." He said as he got up and charged right at Chrysalis.

"YOU HURT TWILIGHT, YOU MONSTER AND NOW I"M GOING TO HURT YOU!!!!" Said Chris as he clashed his horn with Chrysalis'.

"Ugh can you get it through your thick head you young fool? Your precious Twilight is gone, and you should just except it." Chrysalis said with annoying look on her face.

"No I won't except it, she isn't dead, she's not." said Chris.

"Very well fool, I gave you a chance to leave but now you leave me no choice but to kill you." Said Chrysalis.

As Applejack, Mark, and Carrot Top looked on they saw a part of Chris they had never seen before.

"Wow Mark look at your brother go." Said Applejack.

"Yeah I have never seen my brother like this before, he could win."

"You think he has a chance against Chrysalis?" Asked Carrot Top.

"Yes I think he does Carrot Top." Said Applejack.

"So do I." Said Mark.

Chris kept on attacking Chrysalis with all of his might.

"You're a strong boy, I'm impressed."

"Well get use to it Chrysalis cause I'm not gonna give up until your gone."

"No Chris this fight is mine." Said Chrysalis as her horn started to glow again.

Chris then backed away from Chrysalis.

"Oh man not this again." He said.

"Now you little fool take this." Said Chrysalis as she fired a green energy beam from her horn.

Chris moved out of the way just in time.

"HA you still missed me." He said.

But then he saw her laughing.

"Hey what's so funny?"

"HA I wasn't aiming for you fool, just look behind you and you'll see what I mean."

Chris turned around and saw that the beam was heading right at Mark.

"Uh no hey Mark watch it!"

Mark looked and saw that the beam was heading right for him.

"Whoa!!" Said Mark as he quickly moved out of the way before the beam hit him.

"Drats it looks like your as fast as your brother here I see as well." said Chrysalis.

"But no matter I'll
destroy you and your brother eventually."

"You will never defeat my brother." Said Mark.

"Oh really you fool." Asked Chrysalis.

"Yeah really you wicked old witch."

Chrysalis eyes then changed from green to red.

"Well I guess I have to kill somepony else now." She cackled.

With that she left Mark and Chris up in the air. Then suddenly she through them across the room right onto her throne.

"Chris, Mark are you two alright?" Asked Applejack.

"Oh they're just fine but I can't say the same thing about you, you little fool." Said Chrysalis, as she was walking towards Applejack.

Just then Carrot Top stepped right between Applejack and Chrysalis.

"STOP!! I won't let you hurt Applejack.

Chrysalis looked at Carrot Top with her eyes burning with rage.

"Get out of the way right now you little fool before I kill you too." She said, looking down at Carrot Top..

"No I won't, so it looks like you'll have to kill me too anyway." Said Carrot Top.

"Very well, then prepare to die too." Said Chrysalis, as her horn started to glow green once more.

Applejack knew she had to do something and fast or Carrot Top would get hurt or worse. So she grabbed Carrot Top and threw her out of the way of Chrysalis' beam of green energy. Then the next thing she knew the beam hit her head on and she went flying right into a statue of a alicorn.

*Gasp* APPLEJACK!!!!" Screamed Mark, as he ran towards her passing Chrysalis as he did.

"Oh Applejack, are you ok?"

"Yeah, I think so Surgarcube." Said Applejack as she struggled to get up.

Mark looked at Chrysalis.

"Why are you doing this?"

Chrysalis looked at Mark.

"Why am I doing this? I'll tell you why I'm doing this. For too long I've seen ponies happy, and too long I've seen ponies in love. Why do they get to be in love while I don't?"

As soon as she said that Chris got up from where he was thrown to as well and looked at Chrysalis.

"That's because you don't know what love is Chrysalis."

Chrysalis turned around and stared at the alicorn.

"Oh really? Well then tell me what love is to you Chris."

"Alright I'll tell you. Love is something that you feel for somepony, like me and Twilight, or like my brother Mark and Applejack. But the way you do it that is not love, it's evil."

Chrysalis just smiled at Chris.

"Ha you think what I do is evil? Well then your right. She said as she lifted Chris off the ground and thew him right at Applejack and Mark.

"Are you three alright?" Asked Carrot Top as she came up to them.

"Yeah we're fine, thanks." Said Mark.

Then they looked up and saw Chrysalis walking towards them with her horn glowing green.

"Goodbye you four, say hi to Twilight for me, in the after life."

But just as she was about to kill them a voice rang out.

"STOP!!!! Don't you dare hurt them."

"Whoa! Who in the world of Equestria said that?" Asked Applejack.

"Uh guys?"

"What, what is it Chris." Asked Mark.

"That statue is moving."

As the ponies looked on the statue of the alicorn started to shake and then suddenly it split open. A big bright light shot forth from the opening of the crack in the statue, and there in the statues place was a white alicorn with blue eyes, and a black mane with bright stars in it. To the ponies she looked like Princess Luna but it wasn't, the alicorn looked at Chrysalis and said.

"So we meet again after all these years uh Chrysalis?"

Chrysalis looked at the alicorn in disbelief.

"You again but how? Oh well it dosen't matter you know I turned you into stone once I'll turn you into stone again."

"Well that's not gonna happen this time, I was off guard the last time we met. But I know now I'm ready for you Chrysalis."

Just then Mark went up to the alicorn and said.

"Um excuse me miss but who are you?"

Just as Mark said that the alicorn looked down at him.

"My name is Princess Starlight, and this may come as a shock to you ponies but I am Princess Celestia's daughter.

Chapter 5

A dream come true
By Will Atkinson

Chapter 5

"Celestia's daughter?" Asked Carrot Top, Applejack, Chris, and Mark together.

The ponies couldn't believe it, that this alicorn was Princess Celestia's daughter. Starlight then turned back at the four ponies.

"It's true my little ponies." She said, "I am Celestia's daughter."

"But, but Celestia never told us that she had a daughter." Said Applejack.

Starlight looked at the farm pony, her eye's filled up with tears.

"Well that's because she thinks that I am dead and if she said anything to you ponies she would be in bad shape." She said.

Mark looked at the princess in disbelief.

"Why, why would Celestia think that you are dead princess?" He asked.

Starlight looked at Mark then she turned around and looked straight at Chrysalis and said to Mark.

"It was her and her changelings that made my mother think that I was dead and I still remember it like it was yesterday.

"So then when did this happen anyway Starlight?" Asked Chris.

Starlight sighed and then she looked at the alicorn.

"It was on the day after my mother banished my aunt Luna to the moon." She said sadly.

Starlight Castle
The day after Luna's banishment to the moon.

"Your majesty?" Asked one of the Starlight guards.

Starlight was looking at a picture of her, her mother Celestia, and her aunt Luna, with tears in her eyes she looked up at her royal guard and said.

"Y....yes what is it?"

"Um there is a visitor here that wants to see you princess." Said the guard.

"O....ok." She said wipping away a tear from her eye.

The guard moved to the side of the door to reveal a strange pony with green eyes, green mane, and black fur with the way she looked she didn't even looked like a pony.

"Oh hello there." Said Starlight

"What's your name?"

The pony looked at the princess as she bowed low to her she replied.

"My name is Chrysalis your highness and I must say I'm very pleased to meet you."

"I see, and what do you want here Chrysalis?" Starlight asked.

"Oh nothing much. All I want is to take over this castle as my own. It's perfect for me and my subjects." Chrysalis said with an evil smile on her face.

Hearing this Starlight got out of her throne.

"You shall not take over this castle Chrysalis." She said.

"Oh yeah? Well princess, what are you going to do about it?"

"I'll tell you what I'm going to do about it." Starlight said.

"Guards cease this despicable creature.

But the guards never took a single step towards Chrysalis, instead they turned around and grabbed her instead.

"Hay what is this? You dare betray your princess?" Starlight asked her guards.

Chrysalis laughed and then said.

"Those aren't your guards, they're my guards."

As Starlight watched the guards transformed into the same kind of creatures as Chrysalis was.

"What, what are you ponies?" Asked Starlight.

"Well you see princess me and my subjects aren't ponies at all, we are changelings." Explained Chrysalis.

Suddenly Starlight's eyes opened wide.

"Wait a minute now I know who you are." Said Starlight.

"Your the Queen of these changeling things, but that's not all I know that you guys take the form of somepony and make some other pony fall in love with you and then you feed off of their love."

After Starlight finished Chrysalis laughed.

"HAHAHA so now you know me, well good for you." She said.

Starlight tried her best to get free but the changelings where too strong.

"I don't care what happens to me Chrysalis but you are not going to take over this castle."

Chrysalis walked towards Strarlight and left her head up with her hoof.

"Oh my dear precious Starlight I will take over this castle but first I think you will look much better as a statue for my new castle."

With that chrysalis kissed Starlight then with her magic she turned her into a stone statue.

"Ah good now the castle is ours, all ours." Chrysalis said to her changelings.

"But your highness you know that is Princess Celestia's daughter right?" One of the changelings asked.

"Yea so."

"So what if she comes here looking for her?"

Chrysalis chuckled.

"Oh don't worry I know just what to do."

"Really? And what is that your majesty?" Asked the captain of the changeling's.

"You will go disguised as a Starlight guard and tell the princess that the castle was under attack and also tell her that Princess Starlight was killed."

The captain nodded, then he transformed into a Starlight guard, and finally he set off to Princess Celestia's castle to tell Celestia that her daughter had died during an attack on Starlight Castle.

Princess Celestia's Castle
Two hours later.

Celestia was just finishing up cleaning the library until she heard a knock at the door.

"Yes? Who is it?" She asked.

Just then the door opened and there to Celestia it was the captain of Starlight Castle. But in reality it was the captain of the changeling's disguised as the captain of Starlight Castle.

"Oh captain it's nice to see you here on this fine day."

"Yes it's nice to see you too Celestia." The fake captain said.

Celestia looked at the fake captain's face and saw that he was sad.

"Captain what's worng?"

The fake captain looked up at Celestia and said.

"It's your daughter Starlight your highness."

As soon as he said that Celestia's ears perked up, and she had the look of fear in her eyes.

"What? What happend to her? Please tell me.

The fake captain cleared his throat and then he began his lie.

"Well you see princess we where attacked by some kind of monster, Starlight tried to stop it but it was too strong, and well I'm afraid that she's gone your highness."

As Celestia heard this she fell to her knees and began to cry.

"No I can't believe it my poor daughter. Why does this keep happening to me? First my sister Luna and now my daughter Starlight."

"I am sorry your highness I'll be leaving now." The fake captain said as he turned around and left the throne room leaving the princess alone still crying believing her daughter was dead.

Starlight Castle
Two hours later

Chrysalis was on Starlight's throne until she heard a knock at the door.

"Yes? come in." She said.
The door opened up and there stood the captain of the changeling's.

"Your highness mission complete." He said.

"Excellent now Starlight Castle is mine, all mine HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

Starlight Castle
Present time

As Starlight finished her story Chris glared at Chrysalis with fire in his eyes.

"You, you are more then just a wicked old witch, your a heartless wicked old witch."

"How dare you call me a heartless wicked old witch." She snapped.

"You don't know how much I wanted friends, and after I tried and tried to be friends with somepony when I was just a little changeling no pony would except my friendship." She said with tears in her eyes.

When Chris saw the tears in Chrysalis' eyes he started to think back to when he and his brother were all alone before coming to Equestria.

("Oh man poor Chrysalis, I must do something to make her happy, and I think I know just how to do it.") He said to himself.

Then he started to walk towards Chrysalis.

"Hey Chris what are you doing?" Mark asked.

Chris didn't say anything he just kept on walking towards Chrysalis.

"Hey what are you doing?" Chrysalis asked backing away a little.

"I understand how you feel Chrysalis and I can help you to relieve you of the pain of not having friends if you let me."

Chrysalis eyes opened wide then she glared at Chris.

"HOW CAN YOU UNDERSTAND HOW I FEEL HUH?!" She shouted.

"Because me and my brother had the same problem before we came here. So Chrysalis please let me help you." Chris said as he continued to walk towards Chrysalis.

Chrysalis kept on moving back with tears streaming down her face.

"Please stop looking at me with those eyes and please don't come any closer to me." She pleaded.

Chris stopped right in front of Chrysalis and then he placed his hoof on her shoulder. Chrysalis looked into the eyes of Chris and saw that his eyes were filled with sorrow and sadness.

"Why are you looking at me like that young one?" She asked.

"Because I can make you better and we can be friends if you let me help you."

"What do you mean you can make me better and we can be friends?"

"Like this." Chris said.

As Mark, Applejack, and Carrot Top watched Chris' horn started to glow.

"CHRIS STOP YOU DON'T KNOW HOW TO USE YOUR POWERS YET!!!! Applejack shouted.

"SHE'S RIGHT BRO PLEASE DON'T DO IT. WE DON'T KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO YOU IF YOU DO THIS!!!!" Mark said.

"CHRIS I DON"T KNOW WHAT THIS IS ALL ABOUT BUT I THINK THEY'RE RIGHT YOU SHOULD STOP BEFORE SOMETHING BAD HAPPENS TO YOU!!!!" Said Carrot Top.

Chris just turned to face them and just smiled at them.

"Don't worry you guys I'll be fine." He said.

After that Chris turned to Chrysalis and continued with his magic. As the ponies watched they saw that Chrysalis was changing.

("What's, what's happening to me? I feel so, I feel so warm inside, different and calm.) Chrysalis said to herself.

Suddenly a big burst of light shot forth from Chris's horn and blinded the ponies.

"Oh man where did Chris get this kind of power?" Asked Mark.

"I don't know, but I would like to know what he's doing to Chrysalis." Applejack said.

In no time at all the light from Chris' horn deemed revealing him and Chrysalis. All though to the ponies it didn't look like Chrysalis.

"Hey what happened to Chrysalis?" Carrot Top asked.

What the ponies saw was that Chrysalis was different, instead of black fur she now had gold fur, her wings were now white instead of green, and her eyes were blue instead of green, Chrysalis' horn though still stayed the same.

"There you go Chrysalis now you're more like us now." Chris said.

Chrysalis went to the mirror. As she looked at herself in the mirror she smiled.

"So how do you feel Chrysalis?" Chris asked.

"For the very first time in my life I feel so, so, so happy and alive." She said.

Chrysalis turned to Chris and hugged him.

"Thank you, thank you so much for everything my friend."

Chris looked at Chrysalis smiled at her.

"Yes my friend."

As they parted Chrysalis started towards Twilight's motionless body but then Applejack stopped her.

"That's far enough Chrysalis I will not let you go anywhere near Twi-."

"Applejack." Chris interrupted, "Please let her go."

"W....what?"

When Mark heard what his brother just said he was shocked.

"Brother what, what are you saying?"

"Just trust me ok please guys."

Applejack looked at Chris then looked back at Chrysalis.

*Sigh* "Ok Chris I trust you but if Chrysalis tries to do anything to Twilight I'll buck her so hard that she will never get up again.

As Applejack moved aside Chrysalis started to walk towards Twilight again. When Chrysalis got to the motionless Twilight she kneeled down and whispered into her ear.

"Twilight Sparkle please forgive me for all the wrong doings I've done to you and your brother Shining Armor and I will love it if you except me as a friend instead of an enemy someday."

Then she kissed Twilight on the cheek and got up and turned to Chris.

"You better get her to the hospital right away she's running out of time."

Then she turned and walked away out of the castle. As Chrysalis left Mark turned to his brother.

"Chris? If what she said was true we should get going and take Twilight to Ponyville Urgent Care right now."

"Your right bro come on let's get going."

Starlight looked at the two alicorns.

"I can take you there come on every pony let's get Twilight to the Urgent Care Center before it's too late."

As the four ponies picked up Twilight's body and placed her on to Starlight's back she closed her eyes and teleported all of them to Ponyville Urgent Care.

Outside of Ponyville Urgent Care.
2 minutes later.

Starlight, Carrot Top, Applejack, Chris, and Mark made it to Ponyville Urgent Care just as soon as Twilight's breathing started to soften even more.

"Applejack go get Celestia and the others and tell them what happen and we will take care of Twilight." Said Chris.

"Ok Surgarcube I'm on it."

And Applejack set off to the Ponyville library.

"Ok let's hurry Twilight's running out of time." Said Starlight.

Nurse Redheart was cleaning her office when she heard the door burst open and somepony crying.

"Please somepony, anypony please help."

The voice was unfamiliar to her but it didn't matter to her somepony was in trouble. So she ran to the entrance to the Care Center screaming.

"WE NEED THE GURNEY NOW!!!!"

Doctor Redhorn was finishing up some paper work but when he heard Nurse Redheart scream he immediately rushed out of his office with two orderlies right behind him with a gurney. As they got to the entrance of the Care Center they saw three alicorns, one earth pony and finally one severely injured unicorn, Nurse Redheart knew who the unicorn was.

"Oh my dear Celestia TWILIGHT!!!!" She screamed.

Then a second later the two orderlies along with Doctor Redhorn came out with the gurney and saw the seriousness of the situation. .

"Oh my quick put this unicorn on the gurney now." He said.

Starlight put the severely injured Twilight on the gurney and then the two orderlies quickly rushed her to the O.R. with Doctor Redhorn right behind them. As soon as they left Redheart looked at the ponies with a look of concern on their faces.

"Now don't you ponies worry, we have the best surgeons here so Twilight will be just fine. She comforted them

Then Chris came up to Redheart and said to her.

"Um excuse me ma'am my name is Chris Thunder and Twilight is my marefriend and I was wondering if I can go to the O.R. with her.

Redheart looked at Chris with a sad look on her face.

"I'm very sorry but you can't go to see her while they're working on her."

Then Redheart noticed tears streaming down Chris' face.

"Hey it's ok as soon as the doctor says it's ok then you can go in and see her ok?"

"Ok." He said with a little smile on his face.

Then suddenly they heard Doctor Redhorn on the intercom.

"CODE BLUE, CODE BLUE NURSE READHEART WE NEED THE CRASH CART NOW!!!!"

After hearing the call Redhorn quickly got the crash cart and hurried to the O.R. Chris just stood there with his eyes wide open.

"Oh no TWILIGHT!!" He screamed.

Mark came up to his brother and hugged him.

"Don't worry bro she will be ok."

"NO SHE WON'T SHE'S DYEING MARK WE WERE TOO LATE!!!!"

"Chris please calm down." Said Starlight.

Chris glared at Starlight.

"CALM DOWN?! CALM DOWN?! TWILIGHT MIGHT DIE, I MAY NOT SEE HER AGAIN, AND YOU'RE TELLING ME TO CALM DOWN?!"

Just then Carrot Top came up to Chris and slapped him.

"Now that is enough Chris, you should have faith in her, but instead you are just gonna give up on her just like that?"

Chris rubbed his cheek then he looked at Carrot Top.

"Oh you're right Carrot Top I don't know what came over me but I just don't want to loose her like I lost my parents."

Then Chris started to cry.

"I can't, I just can't, I can't loose her not like this.

Then he felt Mark, Carrot Top, and Princess Starlight embrace him in a hug. Just then they heard the door open and as they turned around they saw Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Princess Celestia, and Princess Luna.

"How's Twi? Is she alright?" Asked Applejack.

"We, we don't know Nurse Redheart went with a crash cart when code blue was given and that was five minutes ago." Said Mark.

After hearing that the five ponies and the two alicorns eyes opened wide. Just as Celestia was about to speak Nurse Redheart and Doctor Redhorn came out of the emergency room. There was along silence until Celestia broke the silence.

"How, how is she?"

Redhorn took a deep breath and said.

"Twilight is in stable condition right now princess but I got to say it was a close call for her."

O.R. room seven
Ten minutes ago.

Doctor Redhorn and the two orderlies rushed though the O.R. and stopped at room seven.

"Ok what have we got here?" Doctor Redhorn asked.

"Unicorns name is Twilight Sparkle and she is the student of Princess Celestia." Said one of the two orderlies.

"Ok then lets get her wired up." Redhorn said.

The two orderlies quickly got the heart monitor wires attached to her chest, and got the wires on her forehead to a brainwave monitor, and got an oxygen mask over her muzzle. Turning the monitors on, Redhorn's eyes filled with determination.

"Oh man her blood pressure and her heart rate is dangerously low we need to get some fluids into her right now." He said.

But just before they could get some fluids into Twilight, she started to seize.

"Oh no she's having a seizure, we need the crash cart."

Doctor Redhorn then turned and went to the intercom.

"CODE BLUE, CODE BLUE NURES REDHEART WE NEED THE CASH CART NOW!!!!"

Then he turned back to the orderlies.

"Come on we've got to try to stable her."

Just then Nurse Redheart came in with the crash cart, just as the heart monitor went flatline.

"Flatline, we're loosing her Doctor Redhorn." Said one of the two orderlies.

"No we're not, PADDLES NOW NURSE REDHEART!!!!" Redhorn screamed.

Nurse Redheart took the paddles and prepped them to try to restart Twilight's heart.

"Paddles charged at 1,000 Doctor."

"Ok ready? And hit her."

"CLEAR!!" Shouted Redheart.

The electric current passed through the defibrillator into Twilight, and her body jolted, and the heart rate hiccupped, only to flatline again.

“Again Nurse Redheart."

"Ok charging to 2,000 and CLEAR!!!!"

Again the same result.

"Nurse Redheart increased the output to 3,000." Said Doctor Redhorn.

"Paddles charged at 3,000 Doctor." She said.

"Ok and hit her."

"CLEAR!!!!"

Twilight's body jolted with another shock. Another hiccup, another flatline tone.

"Redheart charge the paddles to 4,000."

Then Redhorn turned to one of the two orderlies.

"And you prep the Intracardiac now."

"Paddles ready doctor." She said.

"Ok and, hit her."

"CLEAR!!!!"

Again nothing.

"Damn it. Intracardiac NOW!!!!

As one of the orderlies came with the last resort drug to try to restart Twilight's heart Nurse Redheart stopped him.

"NO WAIT WE GOT SOMETHING!!!!"

Sure enough the heart rate monitor's steady flat tone gave way to a slowly increasing beeping pattern. Doctor Redhorn gave out an exasperated sigh of relief.

“Brain waves are steady. She's stable.” Redheart said eyes studying the monitors.

"Yes but she has lost so much blood that she will need a blood transfusion as soon as possible or she won't make it through a second time." Doctor Redhorn said with a worry look on his face.

Then Doctor Redhorn came right up to Twilight's body with a needle in his left hoof.

"Let's just hope she doesn't have a supper rare blood type." He said as he took a blood sample from Twilight.

Chapter 6

A dream come true
By Will Atkinson

Chapter 6

Ponyville Urgent Care Waiting Room.
Present time.

"So your saying that Twilight may need a blood transfusion?" Asked Rainbow Dash.

"Yes we think so." Doctor Redhorn said.

Just then a stallion with a red mane, brown eyes, and brown fur came in.

"Hello everypony." He said.

"I'm Doctor Willstorm and I've got the blood test back for the one called Twilight Sparkle."

All of the ponies listened and waited for Willstorm to continue to talk about Twilight's blood test. But they knew just by looking in his eyes that it wasn't going to be good.

"I'm afraid that it's not good." Doctor Willstorm said with sorrow in his eyes.

As soon as he said that it wasn't looking good for Twilight everypony including the princesses stood there in shock.

"Why what's wrong with her?" Asked Fluttershy.

"She has a rare blood type called OD negative, and if she doesn't get this blood type I'm afraid that she won't make it." He said.

"So what your saying is that if she doesn't get this rare blood type she will die?" Asked Rarity.

"Yes I'm sorry."

He was about to leave when Chris stopped him.

"Wait Doctor."

"Yes?"

"My name is Chris Thunder and well I have a blood type of OD negative."

Just as Chris said that he had a blood type of OD negative everypony in the room just looked at him in amazement.

"Well if that's true can I take a blood sample from you Chris?" Asked Willstorm.

"Yes you may."

"Ok then follow me."

Chris got up and followed Doctor Willstorm with Doctor Redhorn and Nurse Redheart right behind him, after they left everypony looked at Chris' brother.

"Is it true that he has a blood type of OD negative Mark? Asked Luna.

Mark took a deep breath then said.

"Yes he does and I know this because I have the same blood type."

"WHAT?!" They all said together.

"But how?" Asked Rainbow Dash.

Mark chuckled.

"Don't you remember me and my brother are twins so we share the same blood type."

"Hmmm I see." Celestia said.

Then Celestia saw Starlight sitting in the corner of the room. Her eyes opened wide and said to Luna.

"Hey sister do you see who I see?"

Luna looked at where Celestia was looking at.

"What you mean that alicorn sitting right-."

She stopped at mid sentence and looked at the alicorn again.

"Sister could that be Starlight your daughter and my niece?" She asked.

All the ponies except for Applejack, Mark, and Carrot Top looked at the princesses in shock.

"DAUGHTER AND NIECE?!" They all said together.

But before they could say anything else they saw Celestia slowly started to walk towards Starlight.

"St....Star....light is....is that you?" Celestia asked.

Starlight turned and looked at her mother with a single tear in her eye running down her cheek.

"H....hi m....mom." She said softly.

"I, I can't believe it." Celestia said in disbelief.

"It is really me mom and I can prove it from the song that you used to sing to me when I was just a little filly." Starlight said as she began to sing the song that Celestia used to sing to her.

(Right Here In My Arms (REUNION) from Barbie as The Island Princess starts to play)

STARLIGHT
Sun goes down and we are here together

Suddenly Celestia's eyes opened wider then ever, this was her daughter Starlight.

STARLIGHT
Fireflies glow like a thousand charms

Then Celestia started to sing.

CELESTIA
Stay with me and you can dream forever
Right here in my arms tonight

The ponies and Princess Luna watched Celestia and her daughter with tears in their eyes as the two alicorns continued to sing.

CELESTIA
Sounds of day fade away

STARLIGHT
Stars begin to climb

BOTH
Melodies fill the breeze
Sweeter all the time

CELESTIA
My love...

STARLIGHT
(Sun goes down and we are here together)

CELESTIA
Is always with you, whether near or far

STARLIGHT
(Fireflies glow like a thousand charms)

CELESTIA
How sweet to hold you

STARLIGHT
(Stay with me and you can dream forever)

BOTH
Right here in my arms tonight

"Oh Starlight. My little Starlight." Celestia said as the two alicorns hugged one another then Luna slowly came up towards them and started to hug Starlight as well proud to see her niece again after so many years.

Just then they heard the door open and there stood Chris with a bandage on his left hoof.

"Well how did it go?" Asked Pinkie Pie.

Chris looked at the Pink earth pony.

"Well Pinkie it went great and they will be back with the test results soon."

"That's great news darling, let's just hope it's the right blood type." Rarity said.

"I'm sure it is Rarity, you got to believe in Chris like I believe in him." Fluttershy said giving Rarity a hug.

Then Chris looked at Luna and Celestia as they were hugging Starlight.

"I see their happy to see Starlight again."

"They sure are sugar, they sure are." Applejack said with a tear in her eye.

"Um excuse me?" Asked a voice behind them.

the ponies and the princesses looked to see Doctor Willstorm standing there with a clipboard in hand.

"Uh Celestia can I have a word with you and Luna please?" He asked.

"Sure doctor we will be right there." Said Celestia.

They parted their hug with Starlight and followed Willstorm outside of the waiting room out of earshot of the other ponies and Starlight.

"So what is it doctor?" Asked the princess of the night.

Doctor Willstorm handed them the clipboard.

"Here take a look at Chris' blood test."

As Princess Celestia and Princess Luna looked at the clipboard their eyes opened as wide as ever.

"What the? This blood, it is different then any kind blood type that I have ever seen before in my life." said Celestia.

"I know and that's not all, with this kind of blood we could save everypony from deadly diseases." Said Doctor Willstorm.

Celestia and Luna could hardly believe what Willstorm just said, Chris' blood hold the key on saving many ponies lives.

"I see, thank you Doctor, now we will go and ask Chris about this blood of his, you may go now." Said Luna.

"Thank you Princess Luna."

And with that Doctor Willstorm left and went back to check up on Twilight.

"So what did the doctor want?" Asked Rainbow Dash as the princesses returned to the waiting room.

"Well he wants us to speak to Chris about his blood test." Celestia said.

Chris looked at the princesses puzzled. Like why they wanted to talk to him about his blood test? Was it the wrong blood type. But it was impossible his blood type is OD negative, still he looked at the princesses and with a bow.

"Of, of course Princesses." Said Chris.

So as they went out of the room and out of earshot from the ponies and Starlight again Celestia and Luna began to talk to Chris.

"So what's going on?" He asked.

The ponies were waiting for Chris and the princesses until they heard.

"WHAT?!" It was Chris shouting after hearing what the princesses said about his blood test making everypony stop what they were doing. Even Mark and the others stopped what they where doing to see what the commotion was all about.

"SO YOUR SAYING THAT MY BLOOD AND MY BROTHERS BOOLD COULD SAVE MANY PONIES LIVES FROM DISEASES?!" He continued.

Celestia looked at her sister and then they turned their gaze to Chris.

"Yes that's right Chris not even Celestia, Starlight, or I have a blood type like this." Luna said.

"Wow I can't believe it." He said still in shock.

"Well I know that this is shocking for you Chris but don't you worry about anything." Luna said.

Then the door of the O.R. room opened.

"Oh hi Nurse Redheart." Celestia said with a smile on her face.

"Good evening princesses." She said with her head bowed low.

"So how is Twilight?" Luna asked.

"Oh, yes, well, I'm happy to say that Twilight is awake but I'm afraid that only one of you may go and see her now, she's in room seven."

"Thank you Nurse Redheart." Celestia said with a smile on her face.

As Redheart left Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Mark, and the others came out of the waiting room.

"So we can see Twilight now Celestia?" Asked Mark.

"Yes but I'm afraid that only one of you can go in and see her."

"Then let Chris go in and see Twi." Said Applejack.

Chris looked at his friends and at the O.R. doors.

"It's ok darling go and see her, I know she will be happy to see you." Said Rarity nudging him a little.

Chris turned and gave a gentle nod to Rarity and then he went and opened the door to the O.R. As he walked down the halls of the O.R. his heart was pounding in his chest.

("I hope she's ok.") He said to himself.

At no time at all he reached room seven of the O.R. where Willstorm was waiting for him.

"Ah Chris I'm glad you came."

"Thanks doc, so how is she doing."

"Oh she's doing ok, but tomorrow we are going to start the blood transfusion ok."

Chris looked at Willstorm and gave him a nod.

"Ok then you may now go and see her but be quick cause she needs her rest."

"Ok doc and thanks."

"My pleasure Mr. Thunder."

And with that Doctor Willstorm left leaving Chris alone outside of Twilight's room. Chris took a deep breath and slowly opened the door to Twilight's room where he saw the purple unicorn with wires and IV'S on her front hooves and chest.

"Twi....Twilight." He said softly.

Hearing Chris' voice Twilight opened her eyes and turned her head to the right to see her lover standing there at the doors entrance.

"Hey Chris come on in." She said her voice still weak from the lack of blood that she lost in her battle with Chrysalis.

"How, how you feeling?"

"Oh I've been better."

Chris looked at Twilight's bandage flanks.

"So did they tell you about your injuries?" He asked Twilight.

Twilight looked at Chris seeing the concern in his eyes.

"Well yes and they also told me that I was lucky, and that Chrysalis' horn just missed my spine by about six inches."

He looked at his lovers eyes and then he started to cry and hug her.

"Oh Twilight I'm so happy that your alright, I was so afraid that I had lost you."

Twilight patted Chris on his back.

"Oh Chris it's ok, everything will be just fine I promise."

Chris stopped crying and looked at the purple unicorn's eyes.

"Hey uh Twilight?"

"Yes Chris?"

"Would you like me to sing you to sleep?"

Twilight looked at Chris with a twinkle in her eyes.

"Of course you can." She said with a smile on her face.

"Ok what about I sing you one of my mother's favorite songs?"

Twilight smiled at Chis and then said.

"Chris I would love to hear it."

So Chris then held Twilight's hoof with his own and then he started to sing.

(RICHERD MARX RIGHT HERE WAITING FOR YOU STARTS TO PLAY)

CHRIS
Oceans apart day after day
And I slowly go insane
I hear your voice on the line
But it doesn't stop the pain

If I see you next to never
How can we say forever

Wherever you go
Whatever you do
I will be right here waiting for you
Whatever it takes
Or how my heart breaks
I will be right here waiting for you

I took for granted, all the times
That I thought would last somehow
I hear the laughter, I taste the tears
But I can't get near you now

Oh, can't you see it baby
You've got me going crazy

Wherever you go
Whatever you do
I will be right here waiting for you
Whatever it takes
Or how my heart breaks
I will be right here waiting for you

I wonder how we can survive
This romance
But in the end if I'm with you
I'll take the chance

Oh, can't you see it baby
You've got me going crazy

Wherever you go
Whatever you do
I will be right here waiting for you
Whatever it takes
Or how my heart breaks
I will be right here waiting for you
Waiting for you.

As soon Chris was done singing he heard a soft sound. He looked down and it was Twilight laying down and sleeping soundly.

"Sleep well Twilight I'll see you in the morning for the blood transfusion." He said with a soft smile on his face.

Just as he left the room he heard cheers and hooves hitting the floor. Chris spun around to see the doctors, the nurses, some of the patients. the princesses, Twilight's friends, and even his brother all looking at him.

"What, what is this?" He asked with a grin on his face.

And all at once everypony except the princesses and Mark rushed at Chris all of them talking at once like.

"When did you learn to sing like that?"

"Are you a famous singer or something?"

And on and on it went until Celestia put one of her hooves down so hard that it made a loud bang so everypony stopped to look at her.

"Alright now everypony." She said.

"That's enough now go back what you were doing before this so the patient in the room behind Chris can sleep."

After everypony went back to what they were doing Celestia turned to Chris with a smile on her face.

"You really do love her don't you?" She asked.

Chris looked at the princess of the sun with a smile on his face.

"Yes I do Celestia more then anything in the world."

Just then Celestia saw a flash of light coming from both of Chris' flanks.

"And I see something that you will be happy to see as well. Celestia said pointing at one of Chris' flanks.

As he turned around to his flank he saw a microphone on it, his eyes went wide opened like never before.

"I can't believe it I got my cutie mark."

"It looks like your special talent is singing congratulations Chris Thunder." Celestia said hugging him.

As Celestia broke the hug and beginning to leave she turned back to Chris.

"Now go and get some sleep you will need it for tomorrow." she said.

"Thanks Celestia but first I'm going to get something to eat."

With that Chris left the O.R. and walked towards the mess hall were some of the patients, doctors and the nurses were. As Chris looked at the hospital food there were plastic bowls with apple sauce, some sandwiches, grapes, some juice and many other things.

("It looks good.") He said to himself. ("I'd would need a good meal tonight cause of the blood transfusion that I'll be given to Twilight tomorrow.")

As he was sitting down to eat he saw Princess Starlight coming in the room and sat down right across from Chris.

"Oh hello Starlight."

"Hello Chris, how are you?"

"Oh I'm doing ok I guess."

But Starlight could see that there was something bothering Chris.

"What's wrong Chris? Remember you can tell me anything."

Chris took a deep breath and looked at the princess in the eye and he knew that he couldn't lie to her.

"Oh, oh ok princess you win you see it's, 'it's like this. I'm afraid about this blood transfusion thing I mean I have not done this before and I'm afraid that either me or Twilight will die because of this transfusion." Chris said looking away from Starlight with tears rolling down his cheeks.

Starlight looked at Chris with sorrowful eyes.

"I see but Chris you don't have to be afraid and do you know why?"

Chris wiped the tears from his eyes and looked at Starlight.

"Why?"

"Because I'm sure that no pony has ever died during a blood transfusion before. So you can be sure that nothing will happen to you or to Twilight."

Chris smiled at the alicorn princess, then he got up from the table and hugged her..

"Thanks princess that's all I wanted to hear."

Starlight smiled at the young alicorn.

"Your very welcome Chris Thunder now go and get some sleep you'll need it for tomorrow."

Chris smiled and broke the hug and then he went back to the waiting room and in no time at all he fell asleep.

Ponyville Urgent Care
The Next Day

Chris was sleeping soundly on the couch until he felt a hoof nudging him awake.

"Chris Thunder?" Asked a mare's voice.

"Yes? What is it?" He asked sleepily.

"I'm Doctor Skylight and I'm here to say that it's time to get you ready for the blood transfusion."

"R....really it's time for the blood transfusion?"

"Yes it is Chris." She said with a smile on her face.

"Now come with me and we will get you ready."

Chris followed Skylight to room seven of the O.R. where Twilight was waiting for him with Doctor Redhorn and Doctor Willstorm.

"Hey Chris." Twilight said with a smile.

"Hey Twilight, how you feeling?"

"Oh I'm ok just a little nervous."

"Well don't worry Twilight after this everything will be ok and we will go out on another date how about that?" He asked.

After hearing what Chris just said Twilight grinned from ear to ear.

"I would love that very much Chris."

Then Skylight tapped Chris on his side.

"Ok Chris would you now please lay on the operating table."

Chris nodded and laid down on the operating table that was prepared for him.

"Now if you two want for us to put you two to sleep for this we can." Skylight said.

Chris looked at Twilight.

"Well Twilight what do you say? We can stay awake for this or they can put us to sleep? It's your choice and what ever your choice is I'm fine with it.

Twilight looked at Chris and smiled.

"I don't care if we do this while we are sleeping or if we're awake."

Chris looked at Skylight.

"Well do it if we are asleep." Chris said.

Skylight nodded at Chris and looked at Doctor Redhorn and Doctor Willstorm. In no time Redhorn and Willstorm were holding masks connected to a tube of sorts and placed them over Twilight and Chris' muzzles and snouts. They closed their eyes as they felt the masks being put on them. Already from the first breath that they took, they felt the effects of the anesthesia. Their senses became dull, and their vision became blurred. As they felt their body's giving in to the effects of the anesthesia they tilted their heads, and looked at one another. The only thought running through their heads were concerned for one another.’ Even then they could feel the anesthesia overcoming them completely. Then as they were about to fall into a deep sleep the last thing they whispered together was.

“I love you with all my heart”. With that the unicorn and the alicorn closed her eyelids, and fell into a deep sleep.

Ponyville Urgent Care
Two Days Later

Chris slowly opened his eyes to see all of his friends and his brother all around him.

"How are you feeling sugar?" Asked Applejack.

"A....a little dizzy but I'm ok."

Then he looked around and realized that Twilight wasn't in the room.

"Wh....where's Twilight?"

Mark held Chris' hoof.

"She's ok brother, she's right outside she decided that we see you first, you see you were out for two days and she was out for one." He said.

After Mark said that Chris was fully awake now.

"T....two days?"

"Yep you were soooooo peaceful like a little filly." Pinkie said with a huge smile on her muzzle.

"But now since you're awake now Twilight is going to be happy now." Fluttershy softly said.

"Ok guys lets go and get Twilight so they can have some alone time." Rainbow chimed in.

"Rainbow's right lets go and get Twilight." Rarity said when she was pushing everypony out the door.

Twilight and the princesses were waiting in the waiting room when her friends followed by Mark came into the room.

"Well is he awake yet?" Asked Twilight.

Rarity came up to her friend and put a hoof on her shoulder.

"Sweetie he's awake now and is waiting for you."

"Well I'm glad to hear that Chris is awake now and he is going to be alright." Celestia said.

"Yeah and so are we." Said Luna and Starlight together.

Twilight got to her hooves and started out the room, but before she got to the door of the waiting room she stopped.

"Twilight what ever is the matter sugar?" Asked Applejack.

"What if he blames himself for my change?"

"Oh come on Twilight I'm sure you have nothing to worry about." Said Rainbow.

"Dashie is right Twi I'm sure that Chris is going to love you even more now." Pinkie Pie said with a big smile on her face.

Twilight then looked at Mark who nodded in agreement.

"Ok then here I go." Twilight said nervously as she went to see Chris.

Chris was being looked at by Nurse Redheart when a knock came at the door.

"Hold on I'm coming." Redheart said.

As she opened the door Twilight was there sitting down at the doors entrance.

"Oh Twilight you're here. Hey Chris Twilight's here to see you."

"Oh good send her in."

"Ok Twilight you may go see him now and we will be going now." Redheart said looking at Doctor Willstorm and Doctor Redhorn.

Just as Redheart and the Doctors left the room Twilight walked toward Chris' bed.

"Hey Chris, how are you feeling?" She asked.

"Oh I'm starting to get my strength back which is a good thing and...."

Chris stopped and gasped of what he saw.

"T....Twilight y....you have w....wings!!!!"

sure enough on each side of Twilight were two purple wings with a little bit of brown on the tips of each feather.

"How, how did this happen?" He asked Twilight.

Twilight looked at Chris and said.

"It, it was your blood Chris. You see according to Doctor Willstorm as soon as they were done with the transfusion I started to change."

Chris looked at Twilight in amazement to think that his blood would make her into an alicorn just like him.

"So they're not going to use my blood to save anypony else's lives?" He asked Twilight.

"No they are going to still use your blood but they're going to try to take the alicorn DNA out of the blood so no pony else gets the power of an alicorn like I did."

Chris nodded and then hugged his lover.

"I love you Twilight Sparkle, I will love you forever.

Twilight now had tears running down her cheeks.

"And I will always love you Chris thunder."

As Chris and Twilight broke there hug together Chris looked into those beautiful eyes of Twilight's.

"Hey what would you say about another double date with Applejack and Mark?" He asked.

Twilight looked into Chris's eyes and smiled.

"I would love that very much Chris Thunder my very special somepony." She said with a loving smile on her muzzle.

Then she leaned forward and kissed him.

Chapter 7

A dream come true
By Will Atkinson

Chapter 7

Canterlot Castle
Two Years Later.

Shining Armor and Big Macintosh were putting tuxes on Chris and Mark for their big day.

"Oh Celestia I can't believe that you and Mark are going to get married to our sisters." Said Sining Armor putting the final touches on Chris' tux.

“Eeeyup.” Said Big Mac who just finished putting a rose on the left side of Mark's tux.

After Shining and Big Mac were done fixing up Chris and Mark they looked at the two alicorns.

"Now remember take good care of my little sis Twily.

“Eeeyup and also take care of my little sis as well."

"Don't worry Shining Armor and Big Mac." Said Mark.

"Yeah your sisters are in good hooves." Said Chris.

"Well ok we will be at the alter waiting for you two ok." Big Mac said.

"Ok and don't worry." Said Chris.

As soon as Shining Armor and Big Macintosh left Chris looked at his brother.

"Well this is it bro."

"Yeah I can't believe it's been a year since we proposed to Twilight and Applejack."

Canterlot
One Year ago.

Chris, Mark, Twilight, and Applejack arrived at Canterlot where their friends were waiting.

"Lookie, lookie they're here." Said Pinkie jumping up and down.

She was about to run towards the train when Rainbow stopped her.

"Whoa there Pinkie the last thing we need is you getting hit by the train and having us scraping you off the tracks with a shovel."

Just then the train came to a complete stop and Twilight, Chris, Applejack, and Mark stepped out.

"Well we're here." Said Chris.

"Now are you sure you're ready for this? Cause this is your first time singing." Said Twilight.

"I'm sure that I am ready for this Twilight."

"You know you worry too much Twi Chris knows what he's doing I mean if he didn't he wouldn't have a microphone for a cutie mark." Explained Applejack.

Everypony laughed until Fluttershy chimed in.

"Ok guys um let's go so Chris can get to the concert on time."

"Yeah let's go." Pinkie said happily.

As they were walking on the streets of Canterlot a white unicorn with a blue mane and tail came towards them with a pink alicorn with a violet, pink, and tan mane and tail by his side.

"Hey Cadence." Twilight said running towards the pink alicorn.

"Ha there is my little sister in law." Cadence said.

When Twilight stopped in front of Cadence as they sang their song when they were just little fillies.

"Sunshine, sunshine ladybugs awake clap your hooves and do a little shake."

"Oh I missed you Cadence."

"And I missed you too Twilight."

Just then the white unicorn stopped right beside of Cadence and gave Twilight a big hug.

"How's my little Twily?" he asked as he was rubbing his hoof on top of her head.

"I'm fine Shining." Twilight said pushing Shining Armor away.

Just then Shining Armor and Cadence looked up and saw Chris coming towards them, Twilight looked at them and said.

"Um Shining, Cadence this is my coltfriend I told you about in my letters."

"Um hello my name is Chris, Twilight has told me so much about you two a....and it i....is a pleasure to meet t....the ca....captain of the royal guard and t....the princess o....of l....love." Said Chris nervously putting his hoof to his head.

Cadence and Shining Armor looked at one another and chuckled a little.

"Ok Chris you can put your hoof down now." Cadence said.

"Oh uh right sorry." Said Chris putting his hoof down.

Just then Pinkie Pie jumped in right between Chris, Cadence, and Shining Armor.

"Ok enough of the introductions come on Chris if you keep on standing here you will miss your first gig." She said as she was pushing him away from Cadence and Shining Armor.

"Ok Pinkie stop pushing me." said Chris.

"Oh so sorry Chrisy." Said Pinkie and then everypony laughed.

They soon arrived at the Canterlot theater.

"Well we're here." Said Applejack.

"Yep and this is going to be fun to see my brother singing in front of so many ponies." said Mark.

But just as soon as they were about to head in a voice rang out behind them.

"Well, well, well look what we have here."

Everypony turned around and saw a white unicorn with a red and green mane and tail with a dollar sign as a cutie mark.

"Oh great." said Twilight quietly as the mare strolled right up to her.

"Well hi Twilight long time no see huh?"

"Hugh hi Candy." She said with a annoying look on her face.

"Uh Twilight who is this mare? Asked Fluttershy.

"Everypony this is Candy Storm she and I used to be classmates in Celestia's class of gifted unicorns."

"Yes and now I see that you're an alicorn now because of this alicorns blood am I right?"

"Yes that's right."

Candy then looked at Chris and smiled at him.

"I hope after your singing you and me could get a bite to eat or something." She said fluttering her eyelashes and then she walked in the theater before Chris could protest.

As she left Chris looked at Twilight.

"Ok does she do that to every stallion?" He asked.

"Yes she does and also thanks to her I lost my first coltfriend."

"What? That's terrible Twi." Said Applejack.

"Yeah how could she do such a thing?" Asked Rarity.

Twilight just shook her head.

"That's just how she is."

"Well if she tries to ruin this night for you and for Chris I'll give her a piece of my mind." Rainbow Dash said pounding her hooves together.

Just then a blue stallion with silver mane and tail came up.

"Excuse me but which one of you is Chris Thunder?" He asked

"Why I am sir." said Chris

"Oh good I'm the manager of this place Golden Hoof now if you follow me we can get you ready for the concert tonight."

Chris turned to his friends and then started to follow Golden Hoof.

"Well come on everypony lets get in there before the show starts." Said Cadence.

As soon as they got into the theater the place was almost packed the only seats that were left were eight seats in front of the stage.

"Man I'm so glad that my brother got us those free tickets to the front of the stage." Said Mark.

"I agree when Twilight told me and Cadence about your brother I had my suspicions about him but when he sent us those tickets I decided to give him a chance and now he has my full support of being my little Twily's coltfriend." Said Shining Armor.

"Oh brother." Twilight said face hoofing.

Just then the light's dimed.

"Oh come on everypony the shows about to start." Pinkie Pie said jumping up and down to her seat.

Just as soon as they sat down the curtain parted and Golden Hoof came out.

"Hello everypony and welcome to the Canterlot theater. Tonight will be a great night for you all, so now without further a due lets get started, fillies and gentle colts I give you Chris Thunder!!!!"

As soon as Golden Hoof finished the crowd stood up and cheered as Chris came out. Then the crowd went silent as Chris tapped the mic with his hoof.

"Hello everypony are you ready to rock?!

The crowd went into a big cheer and said.

"YES!!!!"

"Well then let's get this place rocking."

As soon as he said that the band started to play.

(First Date by Blink 182 starts to play)

(CHRIS)
In the car I just can't wait,
to pick you up on our very first date
Is it cool if I hold your hand?
Is it wrong if I think it's lame to dance?
Do you like my stupid hair?
Would you guess that I didn't know what to wear?
I'm too scared of what you think
You make me nervous so I really can't eat

(CHORUS)
Let's go, don't wait, this night's almost over
Honest, let's make this night last forever
Forever and ever, let's make this last forever
Forever and ever, let's make this last forever

(CHRIS)
When you smile, I melt inside
I'm not worthy for a minute of your time
I really wish it was only me and you
I'm jealous of everybody in the room
Please don't look at me with those eyes
Please don't hint that you're capable of lies
I dread the thought of our very first kiss
A target that I'm probably gonna miss

(CHORUS)
Let's go, don't wait, this night's almost over
Honest, let's make this night last forever
Forever and ever, let's make this last forever
Forever and ever, let's make this last forever

Let's go, don't wait, this night's almost over
Honest, let's make, this night last forever
Forever and ever, let's make this last forever
Forever and ever, let's make this last forever
Forever and ever, let's make this last forever
Forever and ever, let's make this last forever

(Song ends)

As he finished the crowd went into a big roar and from then on every time he did a song and finished they did the exact same thing it made the former human and now alicorn the happiest he had ever been and he also knew that the concert was almost over.

"Alright everypony we have enough time for two more songs, but before I do this first of the last two songs I would like to say thank you all for being here tonight and this song I'll be doing this for my special somepony."

As he finished everypony cheered with Twilight blushing a little but unknown to her Candy was also blushing because she thought that Chris meant her also unknown to Candy when he said that the song was for his special somepony he was looking at Twilight.

(Because you live by Jesse McCartney starts to play.)

(CHRIS)
Staring out at the rain with a heavy heart
It's the end of the world in my mind
Then your voice pulls me back like a wake-up call
I've been looking for the answer somewhere
I couldn't see that it was right there
But now I know what I didn't know

(CHORUS)
Because you live and breathe
Because you make me believe in myself
When nobody else can help
Because you live, girl, my world
Has twice as many stars in the sky

(CHRIS)
It's all right, I survived, I'm alive again
'Cause of you, made it through every storm
What is life, what's the use if you're killing time
I'm so glad I've found an angel
Someone who was there when all my hopes fell
I wanna fly looking in your eyes

(CHORUS)
Because you live and breathe
Because you make me believe in myself
When nobody else can help
Because you live, girl, my world
Has twice as many stars in the sky

(CHRIS)
Because you live, I live
Because you live, there's a reason why
I carry on when I lose the fight
I want to give what you've given me
Always

(CHORUS)
Because you live and breathe
Because you make me believe in myself
When nobody else can help
Because you live, girl, my world
Has twice as many stars in the sky

Because you live and breathe
Because you make me believe in myself
When nobody else can help
Because you live, girl, my world
Has everything I need to survive

(CHRIS)
Because you live
I live I live

(Song ends)

As finished once again everypony in the theater cheered louder then ever.

"Thank you, thank you everypony now this last song I'm going to do is by me and my very special somepony."

When he said that everypony mumbled and Candy gasped. As for Twilight and the others they were excited for they knew what Chris was getting ready to say.

"So fillies and gentle colts I give you my very special somepony Ms. Twilight Sparkle!!"

As Chris said her name Twilight smiled and then she rose up and started to walk up to the stage to him. While she was walking towards the stage everypony all except for Candy looked at her and cheered.

("How could he love her instead of me? I'm more popular and more attractive then she is.") Candy said to herself as her bright red blush when Chris came out to the stage became green with envy.

Before Candy could think of anything else Twilight was right beside Chris then he started to talk again.

"Ok everypony me and my marefriend Twilight Sparkle have a special song for you all so here it is."

(A Whole New World from Aladdin starts to play.)

(CHRIS)
I can show you the world
Shining, shimmering, splendid
Tell me, princess, now when did
You last let your heart decide?

I can open your eyes
Take you wonder by wonder
Over, sideways and under
On a magic carpet ride

A whole new world
A new fantastic point of view
No one to tell us no
Or where to go
Or say we're only dreaming

(TWILIGHT)
A whole new world
A dazzling place I never knew
But when I'm way up here
It's crystal clear
that now I'm in a whole new world with you

(CHRIS)
Now I'm in a whole new world with you

(TWILIGHT)
Unbelievable sights
Indescribable feeling
Soaring, tumbling, freewheeling
Through an endless diamond sky

(TWILIGHT)
A whole new world

(CHRIS)
Don't you dare close your eyes

(TWILIGHT)
A hundred thousand things to see

(CHRIS)
Hold your breath - it gets better

(TWILIGHT)
I'm like a shooting star
I've come so far
I can't go back to where I used to be

(CHRIS)
A whole new world

(TWILIGHT)
Every turn a surprise

(CHRIS)
With new horizons to pursue

(TWILIGHT)
Every moment gets better

(BOTH)
I'll chase them anywhere
There's time to spare
Let me share this whole new world with you

(CHRIS)
A whole new world

(TWILIGHT)
A whole new world

(CHRIS)
That's where we'll be

(TWILIGHT
That's where we'll be

(CHRIS)
A thrilling chase

(TWILIGHT)
A wondrous place

(BOTH)
For you and me

(Song ends)

As they finished their lips met with each other and the crowd went wild even their friends along with Shining Armor, Cadence, and Mark went crazy. As for Candy she was so upset that she picked up her glass filled with red liquid.

(HAHAHAHA this will teach Twilight to not to make a fool out of me.") She said to herself as she was headed to the stage with the glass in hoof.

"HEY TWILIGHT!!" She shouted.

As Twilight and Chris broke their kiss and looked at Candy she threw the contents in the glass onto Twilight's good dress that Rarity had made for her for this special night with Chris. Everypony in the theater gasped including Twilight and Chris, Twilight looked at her dress and then at Chris her eyes started to fill up with tears as Chris put a hoof out to her Twilight ran out of the Theater.

"Twilight wait." Chris said as he ran after her.

Candy just laughed when she saw Twilight run out of the theater.

"HA what a little filly!!!!"

Just then she felt her mane being pulled back, as she turned her head around to see who pulled her mane there stood Rainbow Dash with a look of rage on her face.

"THIS IS FOR HURTING MY FRIEND'S FEELINGS AND RUINING HER SPECIAL MOMENT WITH HER COLTFIREND YOU LITTLE BITCH!!" She shouted as she punched Candy right in the face and then suddenly a fight broke out between the two mares.

Meanwhile outside of the Theater Chris was looking for Twilight just then he found her sitting on the fountain right by the Theater.

"Hey Twilight are you ok?"

Twilight looked and saw Chris sitting right next to her.

"No Chris I'm not ok I mean look at my dress it's ruined, and not only that your concert was ruined as well and it's all because of Candy."

And then with a shutter she began to quietly cry.

"Oh Chris why did she do that to me, why?"

Chris didn't say anything for a minute then he gently put a hoof over on Twilight's shoulder and said.

"It's ok Twilight just forget about that little no good excuse for a mare because your more beautiful then she will ever be."

Twilight suddenly stopped crying and then looked at Chris.

"R....really?"

Chris smiled at his marefriend.

"Really and just to prove it."

Just then he stood up bent down on one hoof and showed Twilight a black squared box. Twilight gasped as Chris opened it to reveal a ring inside.

"Twilight I love you with all my heart and I want to be with you forever and always so what I'm trying to say is that."

Chris took a deep breath then said.

"Twilight Sparkle will you marry me?"

Twilight looked at the ring then at Chris

"Oh Chris." She said hugging him.

"Well is that a yes or a no?" He asked.

Twilight broke the hug and looked at Chris.

"It's a Yes a big fat yes."

As soon as she said that Chris' eyes and mouth opened wide.

"Alright!!"

Then suddenly they heard cheering from behind them, they turned around and saw every single pony from the theater was cheering and banging their hooves on the ground. Just then Shinning Armor and Cadence stepped out of the crowd.

"I can't believe it my little sister is finally getting married." Said Sining Armor.

"We're so happy for you two." Said Cadence.

"Way to go bro." Said Mark running and knocking down Chris giving him a hard nuggy.

Chris and Twilight went into a very deep shade of red, just then the rest of their friends came out all but one.

"Hey guys where's Rainbow Dash?" asked Chris.

"Well she and Candy got in trouble for fighting in the theater." Said Fluttershy.

"Man you should've heard what she called Candy." Said Applejack.

"And what did she call Candy." Asked Twilight.

"She called her a bitch and then they started fighting." Explained Pinkie Pie.

Twilight and Chris' mouths went wide opened they just couldn't believe that Rainbow Dash did such a thing. Finally Chris broke the silence.

"Wow I can't believe she did that." Said Chris.

Then a voice rang out from behind them.

"Hey guys."

They all turned around and saw Dash standing their with a big smile on her face.

"Rainbow Dash darling what happen? And why do you have a smile on your face?" Asked Rarity.

"Well you see after we were broken up by the security they took us to Golden Hoof's room."

"And then what happen?" Asked Pinkie Pie.

"Well he had a few choice words for us but he let me off with a warning and for Candy well she had to clean the whole theater for what she did."

"Good she deserved it for what she did to Twilight." Said Chris.

"Hey Chris." Said a voice.

The ponies looked and saw Golden Hoof coming towards them.

"Uh yes?"

"You were great out there despite the fact of what happened to your marefriend out there."

"Um thanks."

"Also I think next time I see you we can discuss for you to have a singing career here at my theater."

And with that Golden Hoof smiled then left. After Golden Hoof left Chris looked at the others.

"So lets say we go and get something to eat and celebrate for my first concert performance?" Asked Chris.

"Yeah Let's." Everypony said together.

As they were eating Chris and Twilight told Dash what happened after the incident with Candy as they did Dash spit out her water and her eyes went as wide as they ever did.

"WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT you two are getting married?"

"Yes Dash we are." said Twilight holding Chris' hoof.

"So Dash what do you think?" Asked Chris.

"I think that it's awesome!!" She said hugging the two love birds.

"Hey where's Mark?" Asked Applejack looking around the restaurant.

"Well he did say he had to go to the bathroom." Said Fluttershy.

"Yeah but it's been ten minutes." Said Cadence.

"Hey is that him out there?" Asked Rarity.

Everypony looked out the window and sure enough there was Mark gazing up at the stars.

"Hm I wonder what he is doing out there?" Asked Shining.

"I don't know but I'm going to find out." Said Applejack getting up from the table and headed off to where Mark was.

Mark was peering out at the starry sky lost in his own thoughts.

("Man Chris finally did it he asked Twilight to marry him but me I don't know if Applejack will say yes to me.")

He kept on thinking about Applejack and what she would say if he asked her to marry him when he felt a hoof on his shoulder. Mark turned around and saw Applejack smiling at him.

"Oh hi Applejack." He said.

"Hey Mark why are you sitting here alone?" She asked.

"Well to tell you the truth I have had something on my mind."

"R....really about what?"

"Well about you Applejack."

"Oh about what?"

"Well I was thinking that if you and I could take our relationship to the next level."

"Uh the next level you mean?"

"Yes Applejack what I'm trying to say is that."

Mark took Applejack's hoof and said.

"Applejack will you marry me?"

Just as soon as he said those words Applejack's eyes opened wide.

"Oh Mark yes of course I will marry you." She said with her eyes filling up with tears.

"So what do you say we go and tell the others?" He asked.

"Yeah lets tell them I can't wait to see the look on their faces."

"Tell us what?" said a voice.

Mark and Applejack spun around to see their friends standing at the doorway of the restaurant. But before they could explain themselves Pinkie Pie popped up from out of nowhere right beside them.

"Yeah come on you guys tell us, tell us."

Both Mark and Applejack sighed then with a deep breath Applejack broke the silence.

"Mark and I are getting married."

just as soon as she said that every ponies mouths dropped and then they all screamed and then ran up to them.

"Congratulations you two!!!!" said Chris.

"I can't believe it, first my sister and now one of her friends, man this is some night." Said Shining.

"Yeah what else could happen tonight?" asked Cadence.

Just as she said that a voice rang out of the darkness that made Applejack, Mark, Twilight, and Chris scowl.

"Well, well, well if it isn't our two alicorn friends."

"Yeah and with our marefriends no less." Said another voice that made Applejack, Mark, Twilight, and Chris even more furious.

"Oh no not them again." Said Chris gritting his teeth.

The others where confused until two ponies came out of the darkness it was Rollin and Pete the same trouble makers that ruined Chris and Mark's first date with Applejack and Twilight.

"What are you two doing here?" Asked Applejack with an angry look on her face.

"Why we're here to get you and Twilight away from these two posers." Said Rollin with a evil grin on his face as he and his brother walked towards them.

Just then Shining Armor block the two stallions way from Applejack and his sister.

"No, you two are not going anywhere near my sister or her friend."

"And who are you to make us?" Pete sneered at Shining Armor.

"I'm Shining Armor the captain of the royal guards."

"Oh yeah? Well if it's a fight you want, it's a fight your gonna get. Said Rollin.

And with that Rollin and Pete charged at Shining Armor. But before they could get a hoof on him he turned around and bucked them so hard that they flew across the street and hit one of the shop ten feet away. Seeing this Chris, Mark, and the other ponies stood their with their mouths agape.

"Wow now that's what I call a buck!" Said Applejack.

"Yeah brother you really buck those guys into next week." said Twilight coming up to her brother and hugging him.

"Don't mention it Twily it was nothing." He said with a smile.

Just then they saw Pete and Rollin recover from their ordeal and started to charge towards Shining Armor.

"Your, your going to pay for that." Said Rollin catching his breath.

"Yeah we tried to be nice now we are going to take those two mares by force." Said Pete.

As they moved closer to Shining Armor Chris and Mark stepped forward and stopped right beside him.

"Hey you guys should guard Applejack and my sister." He said.

Chris and Mark just looked at him.

"No Shining these guys have threatened Twilight and Applejack long enough." Said Chris.

"Yeah so we're going to help you to teach them a lesson." Said Mark

"Ha well then let's get it on." Said Rollin.

But just as Rollin and Pete were about to attack Chris, Mark, and Shining a whistle blew from a distance. Just then two police ponies showed up.

"Alright no pony move." Said the police pony with a gray mustache.

Just then Mark, Chris, and the others looked up to see Princess Starlight land right next to the police pony with the long golden mane.

"Princess witch of these ponies was it?" Asked the golden mane police pony.

Starlight looked at Pete and Rollin and pointed a hoof at them.

"It was those two right there I was coming to see my friends here until I heard them threatening them and that's when I came to get you two."

"I see well thank you princess for telling us about these two for we had trouble with them before when they molested two mares about two months ago." Said the police pony with the gray mustache.

When Chris and the other ponies heard this they were shocked. As the police ponies cuffed Pete and Rollin Chris and Mark stopped them before they headed to the station.

"So you two were going to molest Twilight and Applejack huh?" Said Chris.

Pete and Rollin just laughed.

"Yeah we were and there was nothing that you two were going to do about it." Said Rollin.

"And we would've gotten away with it to if it wasn't for Shining Armor and the princess and you two alicorn brats." Said Pete.

"That is enough!! Princess Cadence, Shining Armor would you be so kind to give a statement for us?" asked the golden mane police pony.

"Of course we can." They said together.

"Wait just a minute." Said Chris and Mark together.

Then they walked right in front of Pete and Rollin, then they raised their right hooves and then hit Pete and Rollin right in there faces.

"That's for my fiancé." They said.

After that the police ponies took Pete and Rollin away with Shining Armor and Cadence right behind them.

"Thanks again for your help princess." said Rarity.

"Oh it was nothing really, I'm just glad I got here in time."

"Well I think it's time for us to go." Said Applejack.

"She's right it's time for us to head back to Ponyville." Said Rainbow Dash.

"Ok I'll see you ponies later ok." Said Starlight.

"Ok Starlight see you later." Said Pinkie Pie.

And after everypony said goodbye to Starlight she flew away to Canterlot Castle.

"Well I guess we should get going as well." Said Fluttershy looking at the other ponies.

Everypony looked at the timid Pegasus and nodded and went to the train station thinking of the night they had.

Canterlot Castle
Present day.

As Chris and Mark started to make their way to the alter where Shining Armor and Big Mac was at they were stopped by Granny Smith and Twilight's parents.

"Oh Granny Smith it's good to see you again." Said Mark.

"And it's good to see you two again as well." Granny Smith said with a smile on her face.

Then Chris and Mark looked at Mr. and Mrs. Sparkle.

"And it's also nice to finally meet you Mr. and Mrs. Sparkle." Said Chris putting his hoof out to the two unicorns in front of him.

Mr. Sparkle looked at Chris' hoof and looked at Chris right in the eyes and said.

"Hmmm, and it's nice to meet you and your brother two Chris." Then he walked off.

As Mr. Sparkle left Chris turned to his brother.

"Well that could've gone better." He said.

Just then Mrs. Sparkle came up to Chris.

"Don't worry about my husband Chris he's just over protective of his daughter."

Chris looked at Mrs. Sparkle and smiled.

"Thanks Mrs. Sparkle and don't worry I'll take great care of Twilight."

Mrs. Sparkle smiled at Chris and then left to catch up with her husband. Just then Mark came up to his brother.

"Well you ready bro?" He asked.

"Eyup let's do it."

Then they set off to the alter to wait for Applejack and Twilight. When they got there they saw Shining Armor waiting for them.

"Hey you guys made it. Said Shining.

"Yeah we were just talking to yours and Twilight's parents and Granny Smith." Said Mark.

"Hey where's Macintosh?" Asked Chris.

"Oh he's going to walk his sister down the aisle." Said Shining.

Just then the Bridal Chorus started to play as everypony started to stand the doors opened and there was Twilight with her father and Applejack with her brother. As the four ponies began to come closer and closer to the alter Mark and Chris' hearts began to beat faster and faster.

"Oh I feel faint." Mark whispered to his brother.

Chris just smiled at him and then he looked back to Twilight and his face became redder each time Twilight came closer to him. When Twilight and Applejack were at the alter Mr. Sparkle and Big Macintosh gave them to Chris and Mark and went to sit down with the other ponies, as the song ended Princess Celestia stepped forward and started to speak.

"Mares and gentle colts we gather here today to wed these four ponies in holly matrimony Chris Thunder, Twilight Sparkle, Mark Thunder, and Applejack.

Celestia then turned to Chris and Twilight and said.

"Now will Chris and Twilight read their vows first."

When Celestia finished Chris opened a piece of paper and read it.

"Twilight Sparkle when I first came to Equestria I never knew you and me would be here today. When you found out about me I thought that you would never love me but you never left me and when Chrysalis stole you from me I was afraid that I might not see you again but thanks to me, my brother, and Applejack we saved you and I renewed Chrysalis life. Twilight I love you with all of my heart and I hope you love me forever and always."

As Chris finished Twilight and everypony else including the princesses started to softly cry.

"Ok now Twilight will read her vows now." Said Celestia wiping away a tear from her eye.

Twilight opened up her vows and with tears still streaming down her face she started to read her vows.

"Chris Thunder when you bumped into me from the first time you and I met my heart skipped a beat, you and your brother helped me and Applejack out when those two evil ponies tried to have there way with us, saved me from Chrysalis, and comfort me when Candy ruined are special night together one year ago. You are and always will be my knight and shining armor and Chris I will love you forever and always."

As Twilight finished Celestia smiled at her student.

"That was beautiful Twilight." she said and then she turned to Mark and Applejack.

"Now Mark and Applejack it's time to hear your vows."

Mark decided to read his vows first.

"Applejack form the day that I met you, you were just somepony that I just met but in my eyes you were the only pony for this alicorn, like the night when you kissed me when me and Chris spent the night with you at your house at Sweet Apple Acers farm house. And finally my love for you burns like a thousands stars and your eyes are like sapphires that sparkle in the new day sun and in the moonlight."

As Mark finished with his vows Applejack smiled and hugged her husband to be and then she began to read her vows to him.

"Mark Thunder I can't say I could ever be happier than I am now, with you by my side, ready to start our life together. We've had our rough edges throughout our relationship, but keep on grindin’ them rough spots together, and they'll grow smoother than silk. Also you stood by me, through everything that life could throw at us. Mark Thunder I can honestly say that I love you and I'll keep on loving you, as long as the wind keeps blowing, and life keeps blooming. I stand here today, ready, to start my life with you."

As Applejack finished with her vows Celestia turned to Chris and Twilight.

"Do you Chris Thunder take Twilight Sparkle to be you wife through sickness and in heath, for richer and poor, until death do you part?"

Chris took a deep breath but before he could say yes the door of the palace flew opened and there stood a pony with gold fur, white wings, blue eyes, and a curvy green horn. Everypony looked at the pony until Chris broke the silence.

"Chrysalis."

As soon as he said that everypony gasped and Shining Armor stood up and was getting ready to attack her until Chris stopped him.

"Shining no wait." he said blocking Shining's way.

"Chris what are you doing? She's evil."

"Not anymore."

Chris then turned and walked towards Chrysalis.

"Hello Chris."

"Hello Chrysalis. I'm glad you came."

"Yeah I'm glad I came too."

Chris then smiled at Chrysalis and hugged her. Everypony in the room looked at each other in disbelief that Chris and Chrysalis were hugging one another. Chris and Chrysalis then broke the hug and then Chris returned to the alter where Twilight was waiting. As he returned to the alter twilight smiled at him and he smiled back at her as he saw her eyes sparkling in the lights of the palace.

"Ok now as I was saying." Celestia continued.

Do you Chris Thunder take Twilight Sparkle to be you wife through sickness and in heath, for richer and poorer, until death do you part?"

"I do."

And do you Twilight Sparkle take Chris Thunder to be you husband through sickness and in heath, for richer and poor, until death do you part?"

Twilight looked deep into Chris' eyes and said with a big smile on her face.

"I do."

Celestia turned to Mark and said.

"Mark Thunder do you take Applejack to be your wife through sickness and in heath, for richer and poorer, until death do you part?"

Mark took a deep breath and said.

"I do."

Celestia then looked at Applejack.

"And do you Applejack take Mark Thunder to be your husband through sickness and in heath, for richer and poorer, until death do you part?"

Applejack smiled the biggest smile she had ever made and said.

"I do."

Then Celestia turned and looked at Spike and Carrot Top and said.

"Spike and Carrot Top the rings and necklace if you please."

Spike came up to Chris, Twilight, and Carrot Top came up to Mark and Applejack and presented them their rings and necklace. Then Chris put his ring on Twilight's horn then Twilight put her ring on Chris' horn. Just as soon as Chris and Twilight got done putting on the rings on their lovers horn it was Mark and Applejack's turn. Mark put his necklace on Applejack's neck while she put her ring on Mark's horn then Celestia spoke up one final time.

"Now by the power invested in me I now pronounce you four Husband's and wife's you four may now kiss."

As Chris, Twilight, Mark, and Applejack lock lips the crowd cheered and Shining Armor, Big Mac along with Chris, Mark, Twilight, and Applejack's friends started to cry. Before running off down the aisle, Twilight and Applejack tossed their bouquets in the air causing their friends and other mares to scramble for it. One of the bouquets was caught by Fluttershy while the other one was caught by Chrysalis the two looked at one another and smiled. As the castle bells clanged loudly, the happy couples galloped outside toward their waiting carriage, with the crowd cheering behind them and throwing rice.

"You guys take care ok." said Rarity.

"Yeah and when you guys come back from your honeymoon we're going to have an after wedding dance it's going to be so much fun!!" Said Pinkie.

Then Shining Armor and Big Mac went to their sisters and hugged them.

"Good luck Twily I hope you have a great honeymoon with Chris." Said Shining.

Then Big Mac hugged his sister and looked at her with a big smile on his face.

"Well big sis this is it I hope you have a great time with Mark."

Twilight and Applejack smiled at their brothers and said together.

"Don't worry I will have a great honeymoon with my husband."

Then Chris, Twilight, Mark, and Applejack got into the carriage but before they droved off they saw Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy waving goodbye and saying good luck. Then as Chris, Twilight, Mark, and Applejack were waving goodbye to Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy the coach man hit the horses with his whip and the carriage set off with Chris, Twilight, Mark, and Applejack and in no time they started to sing to each other.

(A whole new world from the ending scene from Aladdin starts to play)

(Chris/Mark)
A whole new world.

(Twilight/Applejack)
A whole new life.

(All)
For you and me.

As Chris, Twilight, Mark, and Applejack kissed they all knew in their hearts that this was a dream come true.

The End.

Chapter 1

A dream come true

By Will Atkinson

Chapter 1

It was a sleepless night for two young boys Chris age 14 along with his twin brother Mark.

"Man I tell ya Mark I just can't sleep." Said Chris.

"Nor can I bro." Said Mark.

"So what can we do to help us get to sleep?" Asked Chris.

"I know bro." Said Mark.

"Hey what about we make a wish on the moon?" He asked.

"Yeah that's a great idea who knows maybe something wonderful may happen to us." Said Chris

"Like Princess Luna coming out of the moon and sending us to Equestria?" Asked Mark.

"Yes I like the way you think bro." Said Chris.

Ever since they were young kids they enjoyed watching My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic tv show all the time. People kept telling them that it was not real. But for Chris and Mark it was real and every time the show came on they acted like they were in the show. Now this could be their chance to see the ponies they love to watch for real. But that wasn't all they were also orphans because their real parents died in a car crash four years ago and were placed in foster care and they wanted to get out because of their foster parents. After moving in with their new parents thats where all the trouble started for the boys. Their foster father would wip them on the back with a belt, their foster mother would punch them, and every time the boys pretended to be in the My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic tv show their foster parents would make them lay on hot coals and step on broken glass with their bare feet. Also when they were taking a bath their foster parents tried to drown them. It was so terrible that the boys thought of suicide. But thanks to their brotherly love for each other they decided aganst it. Now they had a chance to escape this horrible life style and begin a new one in Equestria. So they knelt down and began to wish on the moon or in this case Luna's moon.

"Luna?" They began.

"If your listening up their in the moon we would like to come to Equestria."

"We would like to see everypony there and we would like to learn the true meaning of friendship."

"Also if you can please make us into ponies as well so we can fit in thank you."

Then just as soon as they finished a bright light shot out of the moon blinding the two boys.

"I think she heard our wishes." said Chris.

"Yeah no kidding." Said Mark.

Just then as the light dimmed Chris and Mark slowly opened their eyes and there satnding right infront of the boys was Princess Luna.

"Oh man I can't believe it Princess Luna is here at our house." Said Chris.

"Pinch me Chris I must be dreaming." Said Mark.

"I assure you boys that this isn't a dream I'm here cause you wished me here." Said Luna.

"So you two want to visit Equestria and become ponies?" Asked Luna.

"Yes please Luna." Said Chris and Mark together.

"And why do you want to come to Equestria?" Asked Luna

"Because our foster parents are mean to us." Said Chris.

"Yeah they always hit us, always abused us, and one time it was so bad that we were thinking of killing ourselves." Said Mark.

"I see well don't worry because you two are coming to Equsetria with me so you can learn the true meaning of the power of love and the meaning of the power of friendship." Said Luna.

"Really?" Asked Chris.

"Yes." said Luna

"Alright!!" Said Mark.

"Now then what form of pony would you two like to be?" Asked Luna.

"Well we both like to be alicorns." Said Chris.

"Yes please Luna make us into alicorns.

"Very well alicorns it is." Said Luna

As Chris and Mark watched Luna's horn begain to glow.

"Now this is what you really want right? Asked Luna.

"Because if I do this there is no turning back."

"Yes Princess Luna this is what we want." Said Mark.

"Ok then you two here it goes." Said Luna.

Then a burst of energy shot out of her horn and hit the two boys. Their bodies began to shutter and shake suddenly they looked at each other and they saw that, they began to change into alicorns. In no time at all Luna finished pulling her head back and the orb around her horn vanished and then said.

"All done you two, you are now alicorns."

"Chris and Mark looked at themselves and with their mouths gaped open they had wings, horns, and they had red and white manes. WOW look at us Mark we are now ponies or should i say alicorns!!!!" Said Chris.

"Now I know that this is a dream Chris." Said Mark.

"Ok Mark let me check to see if this is a dream or not." Said Chris.

"How are you gonna check to see if this is a dream or not? Asked Mark.

"Like this Mark." Said Chris.

"OW!" "Why did you pinch me Chris?" Asked Mark.

"Just to check to see if we were dreaming or not and we are not." Said Chris.

"Oh and one more thing before I forget I also put the strength of an earth pony in you two as well." Said Luna.

"Cool." Said Mark.

"Now we need a name for ourselves." Said Chris.

"Yeah your right Chris." Said Mark.

"I got it." Said Chris.

"What if we called ourselves the thunder brothers?"

"And why should we be called the thunder borthers?" Asked Mark.

"Simple like this." Said Chris.

As Mark watched Chris lift his front hooves up and then he slammed them into the ground so hard that it caused the whole ground and the whole room to shake and rumble like thunder.

"Oh I see now." Said Mark still shaken up a bit.

"Ok are you two ready to come with me to Equestria?" Asked Luna.

:"Yes we are princess Luna." Chris and Mark said together.

"Alright then follow me then you two." Said Luna making her horn glow again.

"Oh boy I can't wait!! Said Chris.

"Now remember Chris." Said Mark.

"We can't let them know who we are, where we come from, or how we know their names so we need to pretend that we don't know them."

"Alright I understand Mark." Said Chris.

"Ok you two here we go." Said Luna as a big blast of energy surrounded them and in a flash they disappeared into the land of Equestria.

PONYVILLE OUTSKIRTS

Chris, Mark, and Luna appeared at the outskirts of Ponyville. The two alicorns looked at Ponyville in awe.

"WOW look at this place Mark it's even better in real life then it is on TV!!!!" Said Chris.

"Yeah you got that right Chris." Said Mark.

"Hey wait a minute." Said Chris.

"What's up Chris?" Asked Mark.

"It's still day light here. How can that be?" Asked Chris.

"Well the reason for that is that our time is different than your time so when it's evening here its night time at your world." Explain Luna

"Well since it still day light here let's go and enjoy ourselves Chris." Said Mark.

"I'm right behind you bro." Said Chris.

And with that they started to run off toward Ponyville. But just as they got near to Ponyville Luna stopped them right next to the welcome to Ponyville sign.

"Hold it right there you two." She said.

"What's wrong Luna?" Asked Chris

"I wanted to tell you two to be careful and remember what you two agreed on." She said.

"You mean not to tell anyone or in this case anypony about where we come from?" Asked Mark.

"Yes that's right Mark." Said Luna.

"Don't worry Luna we won't tell anypony about where we came from." Said Chris.

"Ok then you two go and have fun and start your new lives here in Equestria and remember about friendship." Said Luna.

"You got it Luna see ya soon." Said Chris and Mark together as they set off towards Ponyville.

As they walked into Ponyville Luna watch them and thought to herself.

("You two take care because you are not just here to just enjoy yourselves and start a new life in Ponyville and learn the true meaning of friendship. You are also here for something even more.")

PONYVILLE

"So Mark where do you want to go first?" Asked Chris.

"I don't know let's just explore the town." Said Mark.

"Hm that's a good idea Mark come on." Said Chris.

Just then Mark saw that Chris was heading right towards a purple unicorn that was carrying some books with her magic.

"Chris Look out!!" Said Mark.

But it was too late Chris ran right into the purple unicorn and books that she was carrying flew everywhere.

"Oh dear I'm so sorry miss. Are you alright?" Asked Chris.

The purple unicorn got up slowly.

"Yeah I'm alright." She said.

Then she looked at Chris and then she bowed low much to Chris's surprise.

"Uh what are you doing?" Asked Chris.

"Oh aren't you a prince alicorn?" Asked the purple unicorn.

"Well yes and no I am a alicorn but me and my brother are not royalty." Said Chris.

"Wait a minute you have a brother? She Asked.

"Yes he does." Said Mark as he was walking towards them.

"Oh well it's nice to meet you two alicorns." She said.

"And it's nice to meet you miss. Said Mark

"So what are your names?" Asked the purple unicorn.

"My name is Chris Thunder. Said Chris.

"And my name is Mark Thunder." Said Mark.

"And together we are. THE THUNDER BROTHERS!!" Said Chris and Mark together.

"Uh why do you call yourselves the Thunder brothers? Asked the purple unicorn.

"Well when we hit are hooves on the ground that creates a loud thunder like roar, and that is why we are called the thunder brothers." Said Chris.

"Wow that's amazing!!!!" Said the purple unicorn.

"So what's your name by the way miss?" Asked Mark.

"Oh I'm sorry my name is Twilight Sparkle but please just call me Twilight." She said.

But secretly Chris and Mark knew that the purple unicorns name was Twilight Sparkle. But they remembered what they promised each other and the promise they gave princess Luna.

"Twilight Sparkle thats a very nice name." Said Chris.

"Why thank you Chris." Said Twilight blushing a bit.

"Say I'm going to visit my friends at Sweet Apple Acers. Would you two like to come along?" She asked.

"We would be honored to come Twilight." Said Mark.

"Ok then Lets go my new friends to Sweet Apple Acers." Said Twilight as they left for Sweet Apple Acres.

But then Twilight noticed her books still on the ground.

"Oh wait hold on a second you two." She said.

"What? What's wrong Twilight?" Asked Chris.

"I need to get my books off the ground before we go to Sweet Apple Acres." She said.

"Ok don't worry Twilight we will help you. Said Mark.

"Oh thank you, you two that's very nice of you. Said Twilight.

"Don't worry about it Twilight we are happy to help." Said Chris

Before long they got all the books up off the ground. "Man you sure have a lot of books." Said Mark.

"Yeah why do you have these many books Twilight?" Asked Chris.

"Well you see it's not just a picnic that me and my friends are having. You see we are also having a sleep over." Explained Twilight.

"Oh cool we love sleep overs!!!!" Said Chris and Mark together.

"Cool then come on you two let's get to Sweet Apple Acres before it gets too late." Said Twilight.

Without another word Twilight, Chris, and Mark headed off towards Sweet Apple Acres.

Sweet Apple Acres

Later that evening

Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie were waiting for Twilight for there special picnic party together.

"Hey where is Twilight?" Asked Applejack.

"I don't know but I'm sure she'll be here soon darling." Said Rarity.

"Hey everypony I think I see her coming now and she's not alone." Said Fluttershy.

As the ponies looked they saw Twilight coming towards them with two alicorns by her side. Pinkie Pie was the first to greet them.

"Hey Twilight." Said Pinkie hopping over to her and her new friends.

"Oh hay there Pinkie." Said Twilight.

"Hay Twilight who are your new friends here?" Asked Pinkie.

"Yeah Twilight just who are these two alicorns anyway?" Asked Rainbow Dash.

"Are they friends or foes?" Asked Applejack.

"Whoa, whoa, whoa girls calm down ok this is Chris Thunder and Mark Thunder they are the Thunder brothers and they are friends not foes." Said Twilight.

"Thunder Brothers? I've never heard of these alicorns or seen them before." Said Rainbow Dash.

"Well you see we just got here. Said Chris.

"Well it's nice to meet you two alicorns." said Applejack.

"Thanks and it's nice to meet the friends of Twilight Sparkle as well." Said Mark.

"So what are your names by the way?" Asked Chris.

"I'm Rarity." Said the white unicorn.

"I'm Fluttershy." Said the yellow Pegasus.

"I'm Rainbow Dash." Said the rainbow colored Pegasus.

"I'm Applejack." Said the orange farm earth pony.

"And I'm Pinkie Pie. Said the pink earth pony.

"So where do you youngens come from?" Asked Applejack.

"Well to make a long story short we're from Canterlot and the students of princess Luna herself." Said Mark.

"YOU TWO ARE WHAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!" Asked Rarity, Twilight, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie together.

"Y....You two are from Canterlot?" Asked Rarity

"And are also being taught under by princess Luna herself?" Asked Twilight.

"Yes that's right." Said Mark.

Just then he felt Chris tug on his horn.

"Um could you girls excuse us for a minute?" Asked Chris as he pulled Mark by his horn away from the main six.

"Uh sure." Said the ponies together.

Once they were out of ear shot from the ponies Chris spoke to Mark.

"What are you doing Mark?" He asked.

"I was trying to make us fit in with them." Said Mark.

"I mean do you know what would happen if they knew the truth about us?" He asked.

Chris thought about it for a moment and he knew that his brother was right.

*Sigh* "Your right Mark." He said.

"Alright now just like we promised ourselves and the promise we made to Luna we don't tell them where we come from." Mark reminded Chris.

"Yes Mark I know what we promised ourselves and to Luna." Said Chris.

"Ok now we got that straightened out let's join the ponies that we enjoy watching on tv for this picnic and sleep over party of theirs." Said Mark.

Chris smiled at his brother and agreed. But he actually wanted to tell the ponies the truth about him and Mark. But he knew about the promise and what if he did tell them the truth about him and Mark? That they where from another Universe and where actually humans and not alicorns then would they have to leave Equestria and go back to their normal and horrible lives with their foster parents? Or to make things worse what if they didn't tell them would they still be their friends if they found out for themselves?

Meanwhile Twilight, Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Pinkie Pie watched Chris and Mark talking to one another.

"Hm I wonder what they are talking about over there?" Asked Applejack.

"They probably are talking about how to destroy us and take over all of Equestria." Said Rainbow Dash.

"Now darling that's not a nice thing to say about those two alicorns." Said Rarity.

"Yeah Dashie they look like nice alicorns to me." Said Pinkie Pie.

"Well you may be right Pinkie. But I still don't trust them." Said Rainbow.

Twilight looked at Rainbow.

"Ok if it will make you feel better Rainbow let them stay with us for our party. Then after that when they are asleep I will go to the library and ask Spike to send a message to princess Celestia about them and see what happens then." Said Twilight.

"Alright that will work for me." Said Rainbow.

"Hey um girls here they come." said Fluttershy.

Sure enough they saw Chris and Mark coming back with smiles on their faces.

"Well what are you girls standing around for?" Asked Mark.

"Yeah let's have this party of yours." Said Chris.

As soon as Chris said that the ponies smiled.

YEAH LET'S PARTY!!!! Said Pinkie Pie excitingly.

"Follow us new friends the picnic stuff is right inside my barn." Said Applejack.

Sweet Apple Acres Barn

Two minutes later

Chris and Mark followed Applejack and the others inside the barn and what they saw made their eyes opened wide as they looked at the great food on the red and white cloth on the ground.

"Wow look at all this great food here Chris!!!!" Said Mark.

"Yeah no kidding it's making my mouth water." Said Chris.

"Why thanks you two I made sure that their was enough food to go around." Said Applejack.

Applejack showed all of the food that she had for the picnic. She had apple pie, apple cider, apple cobbler, some fresh hay, and some good old apples from her apple trees from her apple bucking earlier that day.

"Wow you really out done yourself this time darling!!!!" Said Rarity.

"Um if I may I uh also brought something for the picnic too." Said Fluttershy.

"You did? Well then what did you bring Fluttershy?" Asked Rainbow.

"Um well I brought some salads, some pasta, and some soup." Said Fluttershy as she opened her saddlebags and revealed the food that was in them.

"Oh wow Fluttershy that looks good as well!!!! Said Pinkie Pie.

"Oh um thanks Pinkie." Said Fluttershy.

"Well come on everypony let's eat." Said Twilight.

"Alright I'm starving!!" Said Chris.

*Sigh* "Chris your always hungry." Said Mark putting a hoof on his head.

All of the ponies laughed at what Mark said about his brother.

*Sigh* "Thanks a lot brother." Said Chris with an embarrassing look on his face.

So without another word the ponies with Chris and Mark sat down and began the party.

"Oh man Fluttershy this is the best salad that I ever had!" Said Chris.

"Oh um thanks I'm glad you like it Chris." Said Fluttershy blushing a bit.

"Yeah and Applejack I don't think I had apples as good as this before!" Said Mark.

"Well shoot thanks partner after all our apples are the best in all of Equestria." Said Applejack.

"So Chris and Mark tell us about yourselves like your family." Said Twilight.

Upon hearing what Twilight just said Chris and Mark stopped eating and looked down at the cloth with tears in their eyes.

"Why what is wrong darlings?" Asked Rarity.

"Yeah did I say something wrong?" Asked Twilight.

"Well no but." Said Chris.

"But we don't like to talk about our family very much." Finished Mark.

"Why what happened?" Asked Fluttershy.

Chris took a deep breath and looked at Mark. Mark gave him a slight nod that told him that he should tell the ponies about their parents and about their horrid foster parents.

"Well it's like this." Chris began.

"You see our parents were the greatest in the whole wide world of Equestria. Our father worked on the farm while our mother worked in the house. We were so happy back then until on that one faithful night when our parent were beaten to death."

Upon hearing this the ponies were shocked.

"Oh.....Oh my t.....that's just terrible." Said Fluttershy.

"You poor darlings." Said Rarity.

"We are so sorry that happened to your parents." Said Twilight.

"Well it gets worse." Said Chris.

"How can it get worse then that?" Asked Rainbow.

"Well." Said Chris as he continued with his story about him and Mark.

"After our parents died we were sent to a foster home and I tell ya it wasn't a good place at all.

"Why what did they do to you two?" Asked Pinkie.

"Shhh Pinkie." Said Twilight.

"Please continue Chris." Said Applejack.

"Anyway." Said Chris.

"It started ok for about a week or so and then that's when all the trouble started for us. They started to hit us when we did something wrong, they started to punch us, made us lay on hot coals, and to make matters worse they even tried to drown us in the bath tub one time."

Chris and Mark began to tear up again as the ponies walked over to them and gave them a hug.

"Oh that's just terrible." Said Twilight.

"Yeah how can they get away with something like that?" Asked Applejack.

"We don't know. Said Mark.

"Well don't you worry darlings we are here when ever you want to talk to anyone of us." Said Rarity.

"Thanks Rarity we really appreciate it." Said Mark.

Just then when they were done eating Applejack looked at the clock.

"Oh man look at the time." She said.

"Oh dear it's getting late." Said Rainbow.

"Come on you two I will show you where you can sleep tonight." Said Twilight.

"Thanks Twilight." Said Chris.

Twilight took Chris and Mark up to the guest room that Applejack made for anypony that wanted to spend the night at her place.

"Here we are you two I hope you will be alright in here." Said Twilight.

"Thanks Twilight I'm sure we will be alright in here." Said Mark.

Then Twilight shut the door and started to leave. But before she got to the door she heard Chris right behind her.

"Um Twilight?" He asked.

"Yes what is it Chris?" Asked Twilight.

"Um I just wanted to say thank you for inviting us to this party." He said.

"Oh well your welcome." Said Twilight.

As she was heading off again Chris stopped her.

"Um Twilight." He said putting his hoof on her shoulder.

"Yes Chris?" she said.,

"Would you mind if I asked you something?" He asked.

"No not at all Chris." Said Twilight,

"What is it that you want to ask me?" She asked

"Well would it be ok if, if I could, if I could, well kiss you?" He asked.

At that moment Twilight's face began to turn to a deep shade of red.

"Y....you want to k.....kiss me?" She asked.

"Yes I do Twilight I know it's a bit sudden but I decided that this would be the perfect time to tell you. Ever since I saw you this evening I thought to myself that you were the most wonderful mare I have ever seen." Said Chris.

Twilight's face got even more red when Chris said those words.

"Chris I."

But before Twilight could say anything else Chris pressed his lips to Twilight's. Chris closed his eyes but Twilight's eyes were opened wide. To Chris the kiss seemed to last forever but it lasted only for two seconds. As their lips parted Chris saw the look on Twilight's face.

"Oh dear I'm so sorry Twilight I didn't mean to."

Before Chris could finish Twilight put a hoof over his mouth.

"Chris it is ok." Said Twilight.

And with that Twilight removed her hoof from Chris' lips and returned the kiss. This time it was Chris' eyes that opened wide, and Twilight's eyes that were closed. After they kissed again they smiled at each other.

"Well goodnight Chris." Said Twilight

"Yes g.....goodnight Twilight." Said Chris.

And then when Chris went back up to the guest room Twilight shut the door outside of the house. Then she suddenly remembered what she promised Rainbow dash.

"Oh dear I almost forgot." She said.

But before she ran off to the library she put her hoof on her lips where Chris kissed her.

*Sigh* ("I'm sorry Chris but I must find out if you and your brother are here to hurt us or not. And see if you are really from Equestria or if your from another world I just hope you will forgive me and if I find out that you and your bother were lying to us you will have a lot of explaining to do.") Twilight thought to herself with tears and anger in her eyes.

With that she started to gallop towards the library at full speed to ask Spike to send a letter to princess Celestia and tell her about Chris and Mark.

Chapter 2

A dream come true
By Will Atkinson

Chapter 2

Sweet Apple Acres farm house
That night

"Well goodnight you two." said Twilight.

"Goodnight Twilight." Said Chris and Mark together.

As Twilight left Mark looked at his brother who was still looking at the door.

"Hey what's up Chris?" He Asked.

"Oh it's nothing Mark." Said Chris turning away from the door.

"Yeah right nothing my hooves." Said Mark.

"I saw the look that you gave Twilight as she left." He smirked

"Oh that, well." Chris didn't know what to say to his brother.

"You should go and tell her how you really feel about her." Mark said to his brother.

"But It's so sudden I mean we just met what do I say and what if she dosen't feel the same way about me as I do about her?" Asked Chris with a nervus look on his face.

"Well if she dosen't then she dosen't." Mark said.

"Now go and tell her before she leaves the house."

Chris smiled and then he went back to the door and opened it, but before he left he turned back to his brother.

"Ok then wish me luck Mark." He said

"Ok good luck bro and go get her tiger." Said Mark.

Chris smiled and left the room. As soon as Chris left the room Mark started to make the beds for him and Chris. Just then he heard a knock at the door.

"Come in." Said Mark.

The door opened and Mark saw Applejack was standing at the doors entrance.

"Oh hey Applejack." Said Mark.

"Hey Mark. Uh where is Chris?

"Oh he went to talk to Twilight about something." He said.

"Oh, oh ok." said Applejack.

"Why did you want him for something?" Asked Mark.

"No I just came in here to say goodnight to you two." Said Applejake.

"Well actually thats a lie I really came to see you Mark." She said.

"Y...you really came to see me why?" Asked Mark.

"Well it's just, it's just."

Then Applejack came up to Mark and kissed him on the lips. Applejack's eyes closed while Mark's eyes went wide open. As soon as Applejack ended the kiss she turned and started back to her room.

"Well goodnight Mark." Said Applejack with a smile on her face.

As Applejack turned to leave Mark turned her back around and returned the kiss that she gave him. This time Applejack's eyes went wide open while Mark shut his eyes. In four seconds Mark ended the kiss.

"Yes goodnight Applejack." He said with a smile.

Applejack smiled at him and left the room leaving Mark to countinue to get the beds ready for him and his brother. Just then the door opened and Chris walked in.

"Oh hi Chris. Said Mark.

"Hey bro." Said Chris.

"So how did it go with you and Twilight?" Asked Mark.

"Oh well I couldn't tell her at least not yet." Said Chris.

"What how come man?" Asked Mark.

"I just felt like that it wasn't the right time yet but I did kiss her though." Said Chris.

"You kissed her?" Said Mark.

"Yep I sure did." Said Chris.

"Alright bro good for you!" Said Mark.

"Yeah and after I kissed her she kissed me back." Said Chris with a smile on his face.

"Alright and soon maybe you can ask her to be your girlfriend or in this case your marefriend." Said Mark with a smirk on his face.

"Yeah maybe someday." Said Chris blushing a bit.

"But enough about me Mark. What about you and Applejack?" He asked with a smirk on his face.

Mark suddenly went red in the face when he heard what his brother just said.

"W....what do you mean bro?" Asked Mark nervously.

"Well after me and Twilight kissed I came back up here and I saw Applejack come out of our room." Said Chris.

"So come on tell me what happened between the two of you when I was gone?" He asked.

"Uh well we talked and she, she k...kissed me." Mark said.

"She kissed you?" Chris asked.

"Yes she did." Said Mark.

"Thats great it seems you found a special someone or in this case somepony now just like me." Said Chris.

"You really think so Chris? Asked Mark.

"Of course I do man." Said Chris.

"Look you're my brother alright and I'm gonna be honest with you." He Said.

"About what Chris?" Mark asked.

"Well if you like Applejack back then go get her before somebody or somepony else gets her." Chris said.

Mark thought about it for a minute.

"Ok Chris tomorrow night I'll ask Applejack on a date. How is that?"

"Now that's the spirit bro." Said Chris.

"But on one condition." Said Mark.

"Yeah what is it Mark?" Asked Chris.

"You have to ask Twilight on a date tomorrow night as well." Said Mark.

"What, but I thought that this was about you not about me?" Asked Chris.

"Well if I have to go on a date with Applejack you have to go on a date with Twilight." Said Mark.

Chris looked at his brother and knew he was beaten no matter what he said.

*Sigh* "Ok Mark you win." He said.

"Are we going to go on a single date with them or on a double date with them?" He asked

Mark thought about it for a minute and answered.

"I think we ask them out on a double date first and if they say no then we ask them to go on a single date with us." He said.

How does that sound? He asked.

"Good enough Mark." Said Chris.

After that they went to bed and fell fast asleep thinking about the two mares that they loved.

PONYVILLE LIBRARY
TEN MINUTES LATER

Spike a young purple dragon was asleep until he woke up with the sound of the door slamming open.

"YEAIKS!!!!" He said almost hitting his head on the cieling.

"Spike can you come down here please?" asked the voice.

"Twilight is that you?" Said Spike sleepily.

"Yes it's me ." Said Twilight.

"Do you know how late it is?" He asked coming down the stairs and rubbing his eyes.

"Sorry Spike but we need to send Princess Celestia a letter ASAP." She said.

"Why is there something wrong?" Asked the little dragon.

"Well no it's just that we have new alicorns in town." She explaned.

"What new alicorns?" He said.

"Yes and Rainbow Dash thinks that their trouble." Said Twilight.

"Don't say anymore Twilight I'm on it." Said Spike getting a piece of paper and a pencil.

Dear Princess Celestia.

There are new alicorns here in Ponyville and they claim to be the students of your sister Luna.

Just then Spike droped the pencil after he heard what Twilight just said and he also had a funny look on his face.

"THEY ARE WHAAAAAAAT?!" He asked.

"That's what they said Spike." Said Twilight

"Wow they must be royalty if they are students of Princess Luna." Said Spike.

"They are not royalty Spike." Said Twilight.

"Uh how do you know?" He asked.

"They told me when I bumped into them earlier this eveing literally." Said Twilight.

"Hmmm well I can see why Rainbow Dash would have her suspicions." Said Spike.

"Ok now please Sipke pick up the pencil and continue with the letter." Said Twilight.

So Spike picked up the pencil and continued the letter for Celestia.

Rainbow Dash thinks they are trouble so can you come by the library tomorrow so you can see for yourself if they are a threat to us or not? Thanks.

Your faithful student,

Twilight Sparkle.

After the note was done Spike then used his magical flame to send the letter to the princess.

"So what do we do now?" He asked.

"We wait until we hear from the princess." Said Twilight.

CELESTIA'S CASTLE
TWO MINUTES LATER

Celestia was in her quarters sleeping when she heard a kocking at her door.

*Yawn* "Who is it?" She asked .

"I'm Sorry to wake you your magesty but you have an urgent letter from Twilight." Said one of the royal guards holding the letter in his hooves.

"Thank you." Said Celestia.

The guard bowed low and left the room.

"Hmmm." ("I wonder what Twilight wrote that is so urgent?") Celestia Asked herself.

Just then Princess Luna came in the room.

"Oh hello dear sisster." Said Celestia.

"What are you doing here?"

"Well I was down stairs when I heard the guard coming. I ask him what he was doing and he said that Twilight had an urgent letter for you so I thought that I would see what this urgent letter was." Luna explaind.

"Well ok." Said Celestia as she opened up the letter.

After she read the letter Celestia looked at her sister. Luna looked at Celestia with a worried look on her face.

"Oh dear sister what is the meaning of this?" Celestia said with anger in her eyes.

"I...I can explain sister." Luna said.

"Well then explain yourself then." Said Celestia.

"They are not alicorns they are humans." Said Luna.

"So you turned these humans into alicorns?" Celestia asked.

*Sigh* "Yes I did but they wanted to be alicorns and I brought them here for a good reason." Luna said.

"Well then tell me the whole story then dear sister." Celestia said.

"Well ok if I must but I know that Chris and Mark are not gonna like this." Luna said with a worried look on her face.

So Luna told Celestia all about Chris, Mark, their parents, their foster parents, and their attempts of almost committing suicide. After she finished Celestia look at her sister.

"Hmmm I see." She said.

"I'm so sorry dear sister please forgive me." Said Luna with tears in her eyes.

Celestia came up and huged her sister.

"It's ok dear sister I forgive you. She said.

"So what are we going to do now sister?" Luna asked.

"Well I think the day after tomorrow we go to the library and see the ponies and tell them about Chris and Mark." She said.

"But what about Chris and Mark are you gonna take them back to their horried foster parents?" Luna asked.

"No of coruse not Luna but they do have much explaining to do though." Said Celestia.

After that Celestia wrote a letter back to Twilight.

Dear Twilight.

Keep a close eye on the alicorns and me and Luna will have a meeting with you and the other ponies the day after tomorrow. Good luck my fathful student and becareful

Your mentor,

Princess Celestia.

After Celestia wrote the letter she used her magic to telaport it to Twilight and Spike who were waiting for the princess' response.

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Spike suddenly coughed up the response letter from the princess and he gave it to Twilight.

"Thanks Spike." She said as she began to read the note.

As soon as she was finished reading the note she looked at Spike.

"Well what did she say Twilight?" He asked.

"She said to keep a close eye on them for now and she with Princess Luna will be here to talk to me and the others the day after tomorrow." Twilight replied.

"Ok then well I'm off to bed." Said Spike with a yawn.

"Yeah me too." Said Twilight.

As they went up stairs and went to bed Spike looked up at Twilight's bed.

"Um Twilight?" He asked.

"Yes Spike?" She asked.

"Do you think that these alicorns are here to hurt us?"

Twilight put a hoove on here lips and remembered the kiss that she and Chris shared earlier that night at the farm house."

"No Spike I don't think they are here to hurt us." She replied.

And with that Twilight and Spike fell fast asleep.

Sweet Apple Acres farm house
The next day

Applejack opened the door to the guest room and saw the two alicorns still asleep.

"Rise and shine you two." She said.

Chris and Mark woke up yawning and rubbing their eyes.

"Who gets up this early?" Asked Chris.

"I'm sorry Chris I thought that you two could help me and Big Mac with the chores outside. She said.

"Um Big Mac?" Mark lied for he knew what she meant..

"My big brother Big Macintosh." Applejack said.

"Ah you didn't tell us you had a brother." Said Chris.

"I also have a little sister her name is Applebloom." Said Applejack.

"We would like to meet them." Said Mark.

"Well they are down stars if you like to meet them." She said.

So without another word Chris and Mark got out of bed and headed down stairs to meet Applebloom and Big Macintosh.

"Hey Big Mac, little sis, here are the two alicorns i told you about." Said Applejack.

The big red stallion came over and looked at the two alicorns and then he raised his hoof in front of them.

"Howdy there you two, my name is Big Macintosh but you can call me Big Mac for short." He said.

Then a little yellow filly came up to them and also raised a hoove to them.

"And my name is Applebloom." She said.

"It's nice to meet you both, my name is Chris and this is my brother Mark." Said Chris.

"It's a pleasure to meet you both as well." Mark said.

Just then an old mare came down the stairs.

"Oh I didn't know we had guest." She said.

"Oh Granny Smith these are my new friends Chris and Mark." Said Applejack.

"Oh wow deary I didn't know you where dating two alicorns at the same time." Said Granny Smith with a smile on her face.

As soon as she said that Applejack, Chris, and Mark blushed bright red.

"Granny Smith!!" Said Applejack.

"Awww I'm just kidding Applejack honey." Said Ganny Smith.

"Well come on everypony Breakfast is ready." Said Big Mac.

"Oh boy!!" Said Applebloom.

"So is it true that you two are from Canterlot and are students of Princess Luna?" Big Mac asked.

"Yep that's right Big Mac." Said Mark.

"And is it true that your parents died by somepony's hoof and you two had to live with bad foster parents and you two almost killed yourselves?" Asked Applebloom.

*Sigh* "I'm afraid so Applebloom." Said Chris.

"Oh you poor dears." Said Granny Smith.

"And if it wasn't for Luna taking us under her wings we mite have killed ourselfs." Said Mark.

"Well thank Celestia for Luna." Said Applejack.

Just then Chris got up from the table and started to leave.

"Hay Chris where are you going?" Applejack asked.

"Oh I'm just going to see Twilight." He said.

"Do you need any help to find her place? Asked Applebloom.

"No I think I can find it myself." Chris said.

"Ok becareful you hear." Said Big Mac.

"You got it Big Mac." Said Chris as he left for Twilight's tree house.

After he left Applejack turned to Mark.

"So Mark would you like to help us with the farm work?" Asked Applejack.

"Yes of coures I will." He said with a smile on his face.

"Ok then follow us Mark." Said Big Mac.

So Big Mac took Mark to the apple trees where there where still apples on them.

"Here Mark you can help my sister to buck the rest of the apples out of these apple trees." Said Big Mac.

"Ok no problem Big Mac I can do this." He said.

Then as Big Mac left Applejack looked at Mark.

"Well come on Mark let's get started. She said.

"Um before we do can I ask you something Applejack?" He asked.

"Uh yeah sure Mark." Said Applejack.

"What is it?"

"Well would you mind if you be so kind to go on a date with me tonight?" Mark asked.

As soon as he said that Applejack went into a deep shade of red.

"Uh on a date with you Mark?" Asked Applejack.

"Yes well a double date with me, Chris and Twilight." Mark asked.

"So that's why Chris went to see Twilight, to see if she would come on a date with him so we could go out together." Applejack said.

"Yep that's it." Said Mark.

"So how about it, would you like to?" He asked.

Applejack looked at Mark and smiled.

"Yes Mark I would love to go on a date with you." She said.

"Yes wahoo!” Said Mark.

"Haha ok Mark now let's go and get this work done or no date." Said Applejack with a teasing grin.

"Ok Applejack let's get to Apple buking." Said Mark.

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TEN MINUTES LATER

Twilight and Spike just finished their breakfast when they heard a knock on the door.

"I'll get it Spike." Said Twilight.

"Ok then i'll just clean up here." He said.

Twilight approached the door and opened it and there was Chris standing in front of her.

"Oh it's you Chris." She said.

"Um Twilight are you busy tonght?" He asked.

"No why?" She asked.

"Well I was wondering if you and I could go on a date?" Chris said nervously.

Just then Twilight's face went into a deep shade of red. But before she could anwser Spike interrupted.

"Hey Twilight who is at the door?" He asked.

"It's that alicorn I told you about." Said Twilight.

As Chris looked a purple dragon came into view.

"Hi there you must be Chris, my name is Spike." He said.

"It's nice to meet you Spike." Chris said.

"Hey uh Spike?" Asked Twilight.

"Yes Twilight?" Asked Spike.

"Do you have something to do today?" She asked.

"Oh yeah I'm suppose to help Rarity today, thanks Twilight." Spike said.

And just like that Spike dashed off as fast as you could say sweet Celestia.

"So um where were we?" Twilight asked.

"You were about to answer my question if you want to go on a date with me or not." Said Chris.

"Oh right well ok a date sounds like fun." Said Twilight.

"Yes Wahoo!” Said Chris happily.

"Oh I almost forgot." Said Chris.

"What is it Chris?" Asked Twilight.

"Uh well would you mind if it was a double date?" He Asked.

"No not at all." Said Twilight.

"Who are the other two ponies that are coming with us?" She asked.

"Uh Mark and Applejack. He said.

"Mark And Applejack?" She asked.

"Yeah Mark probably already asked Applejack out." He said.

"But what if she said no?" Twilight asked.

"Well then I guess it will be just you and me." Chris said.

"Well ok." She said.

"What time are we going?" Twilight asked.

"How does ten sound?" Chris said.

Twilight looked at him as her face turned as red as an apple.

"It's a date Chris Thunder.

Chris then said goodbye to Twilight and turned to go back to the farm to help out Applejack and Mark.

PONYVILLE LIBRARY
THAT NIGHT

Twilight was waiting for Chris, Mark and Applejack to come so they could go on their double date.

"Twilight would you stop pacing back and forth like that your making me dizzy." Spike said as his eyes were spinning around.

"I'm sorry Spike I have not been on a date before." Said Twilight.

"Are you sure this is a good idea Twilight?" He asked.

"A good idea of what?" Twilight asked.

"Well going on a date with that alicorn." Spike said.

"Why your not jealous are you Spike?" Asked Twilight with a smirk on her face.

"What? No way." He said.

"Hahaha I'm just kidding Spike!!" Twilight laughed.

Spike growled at Twilight.

"That was not funny Twi." He said.

Then Twilight heard a knock at the door. As she opened it there were Chris, Mark, and Applejack.

"Hey there surgarcube." Said Applejack.

"Are you ready to go?" Asked Chris.

Twilight looked at Chris and smiled.

"Yes I'm ready." She said.

As they were walking Twilight spoke up.

"So where are we going on our date?" She asked.

"Oh we are going to that new bar that just opened yesterday." Said Chris.

"And what bar is that?" She asked.

"It's called the PONYVILLE Five Star Bar." Said Applejack.

"Ah I've heard of that place it's suppose to be the best." Said Twilight.

It wasn't long until they reached the bar. It was a red and blue building with gold letters on it.

"Well here we are." Said Chris.

As Chris and Mark opend the doors for their dates Applejack, and Twilight were impressed.

"Why thank you, you two sure know how to treat mares." Said Applejack.

"I have to agree with Applejack." Said Twilight.

"Why thanks girls." Said Mark.

As they made there way to the foot of the bar a mare greated them.

"Hi my name is Raindrops." She said.

"Can I help you four with anything?"

"Um I would like an apple cocktail." Said Applejack.

"Make that two." Said Twilight.

Then Raindrops looked at Chris and Mark.

"And what would you two like to have?" She asked.

Chris and Mark looked at the menu on top of the bar.

"Uh well I guess we will have two sodas." Said Chris.

"Ok coming right up." Raindrops said.

Applejack and Twilight looked at Chris and Mark with a weird look on there faces.

"Sodas?" They Asked together.

"Yeah we're not big fans on drinking alcohol." Said Mark.

"That's not a problem is it girls?" Asked Chris.

"Oh no not at all we understand." They said together.

Then Raindrops came by with their drinks.

"Ok here you four go, two apple cocktails, and two sodas." She said.

"Thank you very much." Said Mark.

"Yes thank you." Said Chris.

As they where drinking their drinks they listen to the music that was playing it was nice, loud and very catchy then a few minutes later a slow song started to play. Just then Chris saw Twilight close her eyes listening to the sweet soft song.

"Oh I love this song." She said.

After she said that Chris got done with his drink, then he got up, and looked at Twilight.

"Say Twilight what would you say if I ask you to dance with me?" He asked.

Twilight smiled at him.

"I'd say promise not to step on my back hooves and you got a deal."

"Ok deal." Said Chris as he took Twilight by her hoof and they stared to walk towards the dance floor.

Mark and Applejack looked at Chris and Twilight dancing on the dance floor. As Mark finished up his drink he got up and looked at Applejack.

"Would you like to dance too Applejack?" He asked.

"Sure Mark I would love to." She said.

The two couples were having a great time dancing when suddenly two stallions came into the bar. One was all black with a red mane. As for the other stallion he was green with a blue mane. They looked around the bar and suddenly noticed Applejack and Twilight dancing with Chris and Mark.

"Well, well, well Pete look at those mares." Said the black stallion.

"Yeah Rollin what about them." Said Pete.

"Let's take them out of those alicorns hooves and show them a real good time." Said Rollin.

"Yeah let's do it Rollin." Said Pete with an evil smirk on his face.

Pete and Rollin came up to Chris, Mark, Applejack, and Twilight.

"Excuse me you four." Said Rollin.

Chris, Mark, Twilight, and Applejack stoped dacing and turn to face the two stallions.

"Oh hello there." Said Mark.

"I'm sorry we'ev startled you four." Said Pete.

"Oh no it's alright." Said Chris.

"Allow me to introduce ourselves, my name is Pete and this is my brother Rollin." He said.

And who are you four young ponies?" Asked Rollin.

"Oh yes, well my name is Mark and this is my brother Chris."

"And these are our dates Applejack and Twilight." Said Chris.

"Well it's nice to meet you four." Said Pete.

"Yeah hey can we ask you marefriends to dance with us? Rollin asked looking at Applejack, and Twilight.

When Rollin said this Chris and Mark stepped in front of Twilight and Applejack.

"I'm sorry you two but we already told you that they are with us so no." Said Mark.

"Oh we're not asking them to dance with us." Said Pete.

"Yeah we're telling them to dance with us so you two get out of the way." Said Rollin looking at Chris and Mark.

With that they pushed Chris and Mark away And looked at the two mares face to face.

"Now how about it girls would you like to dance with us? Asked Pete.

Applejack and Twilight both glared at Pete and Rollin.

"Now look here you two our dates already told you that we are with them so sorry but no." Said Applejack.

"That's right so if you excuse us we have our real dates to dance with." Said Twilight as she and Applejack started to walk past Pete and Rollin.

Then suddenly Pete grabbed Applejack by the hoof while Rollin grabbed Twilight's hoof.

"You're gonna dance with us even if you want to or not." Said Rollin.

"Yeah and after that you Two are coming to our place for some real fun." Said Pete with a evil grin on his face.

"Hay back off of them!" Said Chris as he and Mark pulled them off of the two mares.

"Well look what we got here bro." Said Pete.

"Yeah Pete it looks like we got ourselves a couple of knights in shining armors here." Said Rollin.

All of the ponies that were dancing stopped and were watching the argument going on between Mark, Chris, Pete, and Rollin.

"We are not gonna ask you two again leave us and our dates alone or else." Said Mark.

"Or else what huh?" Said Pete.

"Or else we will show you why they call us the Thunder brothers." Said Chris.

"Oh we are so scared." Said Pete.

"Bring it on then you two we're right here." Said Rollin.

Just then a stallion with a security jacket on stepped in between Chris, Mark, Pete, and Rollin.

"Alright that is enough you two. You leave these two alicorns and their dates alone and get out of here before I call the police and have you two arrested!!" He said to Rollin and Pete.

Pete and Rollin started to back away and headed towards the door.

"Fine we'll leave but we will be back to see you four again." Said Rollin with a smirk on his face.

Twilight and Applejack held on to Mark and Chris until they left. After the incident the party continued in the bar.

"Aw man that was scary." Said Twilight.

"Yeah it was but it's over now surgarcube." said Applejack.

"Come on girls we better get you two home before something else happens." Said Mark.

"Thats a good idea Mark." Said Chris.

So they put a few bits onto the table of the bar and headed out.

*Sigh* "We're so sorry that our first date didn't go very well for you girls." Said Mark.

"It wasn't your fault Mark." Said Applejack.

"Yeah I mean how would you two know that those two idiots would come into the bar and try to hit on us?" Twilight asked.

"Oh so we are idiots now are we." Said a voice from behind them.

Twilight, Chris, Mark, and Applejack turned around and saw Pete and Rollin standing there right behind them.

"Oh not you clowns again." Said Chris.

"Yeah haven't you two ruind our night already?" Asked Twilight.

"HA you four thought it was over?" Asked Rollin.

"Yeah right." Said Pete.

"Alright I had enough of you two come on Chris let's show these two that you can't mess with the Thunder brothers." Said Mark.

"Yeah Let's do this." Said Chris.

Then they turned to Applejack and Twilight.

"You girls better hang on to something." They said together.

"Uh right." Said Applejack and Twilight together.

"Oh we're so scared." Said Rollin.

"Hm you two should be." Said Chris and Mark together.

"What?" Said Pete and Rollin together.

Just then Chris and Mark put their front hooves up and then put them on the ground with all their mite. Suddenly the whole ground started to shake.

"Hey what is this?" Asked Pete.

"Hey you two stop that." Said Rollin

But Chris and Mark continued to stomp their hooves on the ground as hard as they could.

"Whoa!!!" Said Applejack.

"I guess this is why they call themselves the Thunder brothers?!"

"Yeah you ain't kidding Applejack!!!!" Said Twilight.

Chris and Mark never stopped they just continued to stomp their hooves on the ground.

"Come on Pete let's get out of here." Said Rollin

"Alight you two you can keep your girlfriends but mark my words you two we will be back one day." Said Pete.

And so Pete and Rollin left stumbling on each other as the left. Chris and Mark never stopped until they were out of sight.

"Oh yeah we sure showed them didn't we Mark!!" Said Chris.

"Your darn right Chris that will show them not to mess with the Thunder brothers and our girls." Said Mark.

Just then Applejack and Twilight came right next to their dates.

"Wow that was amazing you two!!" Said twilight.

"Your darn tooten it was surgarcub." Said Applejack.

Chris and Mark both blushed bright red.

"Aw shucks it was nothing really." Said Chris.

"Yeah you mess with our dates you mess with us." Said Mark.

Then they all laughed and then Chris and Mark looked at their dates.

"Come on girls we'll take you home." They said together.

When they arrived to Twilight's tree house Chris kissed her.

"Well goodnight Twilight." Said Chris.

"Goodnight Chris." Said Twilight.

And with that Chris set off back with AppleJack and Mark to the farm. As they were out of sight Twilight sighed and opened the door. As she closed the door She heard a vioce Behind her.

"So how was your date with Chris?"

"Yikes!!!!" Twilight said as she turned around and saw Spike standing there right in front of her.

"Jeez Spike don't scare me like that." She said.

"Sorry Twilight." He said.

"Now as I was saying, how was your date with Chris?"

"Oh It was great except two stallions were trying to hit on me and Applejack." She said.

Spike looked at her.

"Well tell me what happend next?" He asked.

"Well Chris and Mark pounded their hooves on the ground and made the whole ground shake like an earthquake." Said Twilight.

"Oh man I bet that made them run away in fear." Said Spike.

"Yeah it did." Said Twilight chuckling a little.

"Well it's time that we get to bed Spike for we have a big day tomorrow." Said Twilight.

"Oh yeah the princesses are coming." Said Spike.

So without another word Spike and Twilight went up to bed.

"Well goodnight Twilight." Said Spike.

"Yeah goodnight Spike." She said.

But deep inside she wished that tomorrow didn't come. Twilight put a hoof on her lips again and sighed.

*Sigh* "I'm so sorry Chris, I'm so very, very sorry." She whispered as she drifted off to a dreamless sleep hoping that everything will be alright and nothing bad would happen to Mark and the alicorn she loved so much.