Awoken

by ZillaBrony13

Rating: teen
Tags: Scootaloo, Adventure, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Rainbow Dash, Original Character
Length: 2402

Rainbow, Scootaloo and a worker must fight to escape the Rainbow Factory

Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo are trapped in a place where your fears and horrors come true, The Rainbow Factory. It is a place that comes as close to a Hell on Earth as anything. Now they must escape with a little help from an unexpected source. (My own Alternate ending to the Rainbow Factory. If you don't like, don't read! Cover art isn't mine. Rated teen for blood, cursing and ponies getting crushed into rainbows.)

Published 2013-02-14 13:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2013-03-26 20:04:14 UTC

Breaking the Shackles

“You have beautiful eyes.” Scootaloo hung, secured by chains above The Pegasus Device, a device that ground ponies into spectra. Some ponies might say that was the worst part of her current situation but to her, the worst part was not her imprisonment nor her imminent death but the fact that her idol, her big sister, her mentor was responsible for this. Rainbow Dash hovered in front of the broken filly. Her coat was soaked with blood, her body littered with wounds, her hair tangled and disheveled, and rage in her eyes.

“WHAT!!” The once azure mare yelled.

“You have beautiful eyes Rainbow. Ever since I first saw you, I wanted to be just like you. I followed in your footsteps, started a fan-club about you, and took flying lessons from you, even when you told me I’d never make it and in the end, I failed you. I’m so sorry Rainbow. I’m so sorry.” Tears ran down her face and fell into the evil machine below her. She waited for Rainbow to give the command that would end her life, but it never came. She looked up into her mentors eyes.

They had changed! Gone were the dilated pupils of rage and insanity, now replaced with the wide pupils of shock and concern. Rainbow now wore an expression of confusion. “Scootaloo…what…where?” Her expression changed to one of realization. She turned to the guards behind her, murder in her eyes.

“You monsters,” She whispered, “You BASTARDS! YOU NEARLY MURDERED MY LITTLE SISTER! I’LL KILL YOU ALL!” With that statement, she charged. Rainbow had a guard on the ground before the others could recover from the shock of their own leader attacking them. One of them recovered first. But instead of attacking Rainbow, she began to shock her own companions with her taizer. The guard under Rainbow struggled as she threw punch after punch to his face. The guard struggled once more time, and then was still evermore. She turned to the other guards. She didn’t even notice the two that were ganging up against the rouge one, while the rest, about five, converged on her. She smiled grimly. “Now things finally get interesting.” She charged again.

Two charged, trying to pin her to the ground like she had done to the previous guard. She ducked and the two sailed into the wall behind her and fell to the ground, stunned. She landed a flying kick to ones face. His skull was crushed and blood splattered everywhere. She turned to the other one. He was still trying to shake himself out of his stupor. She landed a huge hook to his cheek. With a sickening ‘crack’ his neck snapped. Two guards suddenly grabbed her hooves and pinned her to the wall. The third and final guard walked up to her, a demented smile on his face.

“How ironic, the manager of the Pegasus Device becomes its next victim!” He lowered the taizer towards her chest.

Rainbow grinned back. “Not today sir!” She thrust out her wings, sending the two guards by her sides flying. She then kicked the taizer out of the final guard’s hooves. He growled and swung a hoof towards her stomach. She rolled to the side and ended up punching the wall. He yelled in pain and clutched his hoof. Rainbow took this opportunity to kick him right between the legs. He screamed again and doubled over. She then slammed her back hooves into the back of his head in a powerful buck, ending his misery. The other two advanced toward her. She grinned again and flew toward them. They ducked under her and punched her in the stomach. She flipped through the air and landed on her back, groaning. The guards laughed as they advanced. Then, out of nowhere, the rouge guard slammed into the guards with such force that their ribs cracked. They tumbled to the floor. The rouge hit them with her taizer for good measure. By then Rainbow was on her feet. She charged toward the guard. “STOP, STOP! I’m on your side!”

Rainbow halted and looked at her with suspicion. “Prove it.” The guard threw her taizer across the room and put her hooves up in a gesture of surrender. Rainbow nodded in acknowledgment. She then flew back to Scootaloo and undid her chains. She lowered the her to the ground and walked over to the worker. “Now who are you?”

“The name’s Glaze.” Glaze took of her mask. She had combination green and neon green mane and a cream colored coat. She smiled. “It’s good to be back again.”

“What do you mean?” Scootaloo spoke up. She still had a freaked out look on her face from the ferocity Rainbow had displayed.

“Rainbow’s not the only one you brought back to sanity kid. I’ve worked at this factory for a long time. I was driven insane long ago. Then I saw Rainbow return. It reminded me of what I had been before I came to this place. I am eternally grateful to you for that.”

Scootaloo grinned. She then turned back to Rainbow. “What are we going to do now, destroy the machine?”

“No.”

“NO?” Scootaloo was stunned. “Why not? Do you want this to-”

“OF COURSE NOT!” Rainbow looked furious. “DO YOU THINK I WANT TO SEE MORE INNOCENT FILLIES MURDERED? DO YOU THINK I WANT TO PUT OTHERS THROUGH WHAT I NEARLY PUT MYSELF THROUGH?” Scootaloo shrunk back from Rainbow, fearing her rage. Rainbow calmed down and continued, “If we destroyed the machine, we would have nothing to show the authorities but the spectra, and I doubt the workers will talk.”

“She’s right.” Glaze spoke up. “If we keep the machine intact, we will have proof of what happened here and this factory is as good as gone. Now we need to get out of here before Doctor Atmosphere shows up.”

Scootaloo nodded. She, Rainbow and Glaze quickly flew out the door and into the heart of the Factory.

Author's Note

Hello everypony! Happy Hearts and Hooves Day! I hope the fight scene was good, I've never written one before. Glaze is not mine. She is Woodentoaster's OC.

Taking Back Control

Rainbow and Scootaloo flew down the hallways of the evil factory, trying to find a place to hide. Glaze had gone somewhere else to gather information of how to get out of the factory. They took turn after turn and yet never ran into any guards which confused Scootaloo. Surely Dr. Atmosphere would have searched for them right? Her theory was proved right as several guards came around the corner. “There they are! Get them!” All three mares charged into battle. The guards, about three also charged. Two guards took Rainbow and the third one went for Scootaloo.

“So you are the one who managed to escape Rainbow and bring her back.” He threw punches at her face, body and wings to try and cripple her. She quickly backed up and dodged the blows and threw her own, which he also dodged. “But it was all for not little failure.” He spat failure like an insult. “Soon you and your companions will be thrown into the machine and your remains will grace the skies with color for years to come.” Images flashed through her mind. The face of Dr. Atmosphere, the bloody machine, her friends faces as they died by Rainbow’s hooves, Rainbow’s face as she chased Scootaloo down, intent on killing her.

“NEVER AGAIN!!!!” She shouted. She swung her back hoof in a roundhouse kick and with a sickening crack; it connected with his skull and sent him flying into the wall. Blood splattered the chrome wall as his body hit the wall and he slumped over, dead. Scootaloo calmed down and looked in horror at what she had done. She had killed another pony. She had killed another pony! She had sworn to herself she would never kill anyone long ago and now she had broken her promise. She looked at the wall and thought she would see herself in the steel, but didn’t. She saw a blood splattered filly with cuts all over her body and it had eyes of cornered prey, prey that would do anything to escape its fate, yet knew it never could. The eyes scared her, more than the factory or the fact that they might not live to see sunlight. “What have I become?” She asked herself.

Her thoughts were interrupted as Rainbow dragged her onto her back and flying down the hall. They eventually came to an old storage room and Glaze, who they had met up with along the way, ushered them inside. “Stay hidden, I will stand guard.” She said. With a muffled boom the steel door shut. Scootaloo sat down and shook with fear and confusion.

“What’s wrong?” Rainbow asked.

“Nothing.”

“Squirt I know when you’re lying and you are right now. Nopony will find us with Glaze standing guard. Now tell me, what gotten you so shaken up.”

She took a shuddering breath. “Fine I’ll tell you. I killed one of the guards. I-I’ve never killed anypony before. I never thought I would have to. He wasn’t here of his own free will right?”

“The…the one you killed was named Cold Front. He was brought here after he failed his flight test. He had a lot of fight in him so we…um I decided to have him work here. He was driven insane just like the rest of us.”

“Oh.” Scootaloo’s ears drooped at the thought of killing an innocent soul. He was brought here against his will, and forced to work in this hell hole after watching his companions die at the hands of the machine. Scootaloo couldn’t help but sympathize with him.

“There was nothing you could have done.”

“Yes there was! I could’ve reasoned with him. I could’ve brought him back like I did you. I could’ve…I could’ve.” She then began to cry. She sobbed into her mentors shoulder as the bloodstained mare rubbed her back and soothed her.

“We’ll get out.” Scootaloo looked up at Rainbow and saw her smiling reassuringly at the distraught crusader. “We’ll escape and avenge all of their deaths. Cold Front, Aurora, Orion, we’ll make sure that their deaths were not for nothing. We’ll bring this factory down or my name isn’t Rainbow Dash!”

“GLAZE! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?” The two mares froze as they heard another voice outside the door.

“Shhhh!” They heard Glaze shush the other pony. “What if the failure and traitor hear you? Then we’ll never find them!”

The other pony’s voice then dropped to a whisper. “Fine. What are you doing anyway?”

“Well I was hidden and waiting for the two escapees to passs by. When they did I would have captured them and brought them to the Doctor.”

“Sorry for disturbing you then. Oh and by the way…The next shipment of failures is coming in half an hour. The doctor told me to tell you to prepare.”

Rainbow paled as the hoofsteps receded down the hall. Glaze came inside and looked frantic and was pale as Rainbow. “We’ve got a problem.”

“Yeah. The next shipment.”

“What are we going to do?” Scootaloo asked.

“Rescue them of course.” Rainbow confidently said.

“Whoa, whoa, whoa! Don’t you think we’re getting in a little in over our heads here? We would need a lot more than three ponys to storm the machine room.”

“And I know just where to get some assistance.” She tapped her right front hoof and a circlet of gold appeared. It was nothing special except for the ruby shaped like a lightning bolt embedded in its center.

“Is that your Element of Harmony?” Scotaloo asked.

“No. This serves a different purpose.”

“Sorry to interrupt but how is a piece of jewelry going to help us get out of here?” Glaze nearly shouted in frustration.

“This ‘piece of jewelry’ as you call it is a magical device that allows me or any of my friends to contact each other at a moment’s notice.”

“How is that possible?” Scootaloo was mesmerized by the fact that something so simple could do so much.

“Princess Celestia worked for several weeks devising the spell and spent an entire day casting it.” Rainbow then tapped the ruby which began to glow. The glow intensified until it formed six squares with a real time picture of one of the Elements of Harmony in each.

“Hello Rainbow. What’s u-OH MY LUNA!!!!!!” Princess Twilight along with the rest of her friends look stunned at Rainbow’s appearance. Rainbow then proceeded to look over herself for the first time.

She was covered in blood from head to tail, her mane was frayed and tattered, her face had numerous cuts and burns, and her coat had several places where you could see the skin. “Ehhehe.” She laughed nervously. “Hi girls.”

“What happened t’ y’all sugarcube?” Applejack asked.

“It’s a long story. I need some help.”

“With what, darling?” Rarity looked genuinely appalled at the blood that covered Rainbow, but contained her composure.

“Escape. I need some help getting me and some others out of this hellhole.”

“Where are you?” Twilight asked.

“I’m… I’m in the Rainbow Factory.”

Everyone else gasped aloud. “T-t-t-t-t-t-the R-r-r-r-r-r-rainbow F-f-f-f-f-f-factory?” Fluttershy stuttered. “W-w-what a-a-are y-y-you d-doing there?”

“I’ll explain later. Right now I need your help.”

“She’s not lying Twilight.” Applejack said at Twilight’s skeptical expression.

“Alright.” Twilight said. “I’ll teleport straight to you Rainbow. Rarity, can you perform the cloud walking spell on the others?”

“Of course darling. We’ll be there in 20 minutes at the most.”

“I’ll see you then.” Rainbow said. “And girls, be ready for a fight. The guards won’t take kindly to intruders.”

The glow died and the circlet on Rainbow’s foreleg turned invisible once more. Almost immediately afterward a flash of light signaled the princess’s arrival.

“Twilight!” Scootaloo tackle hugged the alicorn.

“Scootaloo? What are you doing here?”

Rainbow sighed. “I’ll explain everything later. Right now we’ve gotta go.”

Glaze looked at Twilight with confusion. “Who is this?”

“Glaze, meet Twilight Sparkle. She is Element of Magic and princess of the stars.”

Glaze started to bow but Twilight stopped her. “Please there is no need to bow.”

“Shall we get going?” Rainbow asked.

Twilight nodded and the four ponies went into the depths of the factory once more.