I thought I was dead.

The year is 4950 and the war is coming to an end, after 100 years, its finally over but at what cost. Not the millions of lives that had been lost on both sides, or the billions of dollars that fueled the war in the first place. No, the loss was the young 23 year old D.R.A.X-1 who in himself, was worth in total, from the augmentation of his arms and legs, Injections to make him unable to die, strength enhancers, training and more, was worth over 4.9 trillion dollars to the government and was now gone, he sacrificed himself to bring the war to an end. His last thought's were "Goodbye world, and goodbye life".

The gala was going beautifully this time. Every single guest was having fun, even Luna was walking about talking to the other pony's there. "Ah Twilight, my faithful student, how are you and your friends doing?" asked Celestia. "Princes, its an honor to be here again, and we are having a great time, Its so much better than last years gala." Celestia smiled and said "good, I hope that it will go this smoothly the rest of the night, knowing these pony's and how stuck up they can be, one wrong word and things can get pretty messy". The two pony's eventually went along their ways. Rainbow was talking to the wonderbolts, AJ was having a much better time selling her apples, Rarity had finally found a Colt that was nice and handsome. Pinkie was still shaking with excitement but she was managing and Fluttershy had found that all the animals needed to warm up to her was a simple treat. Everything was going perfectly which lasted for about another hour. Twilight had wandered over to AJ's stand and was talking to the orange mare. "Wow, I cant believe how smoothly everything is going" she said "Ah can't believe it either, compared to last year's gala, this is just amazin'." As if on cue, a black ball of light appeared directly over the VIP section and from it fell something that made Celestia and Luna's stop with mouth's agape while everyone else just stared at it. "GUARDS, SURROUND IT" shouted Celestia, and within 5 seconds, 10 of Celestia's personal guards had surrounded the new creature holding spears. One of the guards tapped it with his hoof and said "I have never seen anything like this before" The new creature was wearing some type of armor, it was a pure black with red and gold accents on the chest, arms, and legs. On its head, it wore a helmet that covered its entire face (the best way to describe what he looked like is to combined a juggnaught from MW2 and a Spartan from HALO)  It looked like it was around 7.5 feet long, lying out on the floor. "Oooo what does this do?" said pinky who had broken the 4'th wall to get in the circle, and pushed a button that was on the helmet. A mechanical whirring sound was heard, and then the armor started to compact and in the end it had gone back into a jumpsuit that the creature was wearing. Pinky then poked it in the stomach "hehehe, its squishy" as she continued to poke at the creature. "Pinky Pie stop that right now, you don't know how dirty that thing could be" said Rarity. "Aw come on its not that bad' said Pinky as she poked it again, but this time a bit harder than before.

Drax's started to wake, his Black red and golden hair, which was genetically modified via injection, was covering his metallic gold eyes. He heard voices, stop...now...don't...where...been which was followed by another but this time there was a sharp pain in his abdominal where he has been previously wounded. His head twiched, which everyone else ignored except for Rarity. "PINKY PIE WHAT ARE YOU DOING??" Said Rainbow Dash, Pinky had started to take off the Jumpsuit, revealing that the new creature was wearing a T-shirt and shorts. "What, it must be super dooper hot in this suit" Pinky said. "OOO whats this" Pinky said, as a red dot was spreading from where she had poked the new creature earlier. She lifted up its shirt and gasped at what she saw. Underneath the shirt, there was an open wound which was recently stitched together but had broken. There were many other scars on its body along with a few more open cuts near the chest. Pinky's hair had gone from hot pink to a dulled pink/grey and her curled hair fell straight. "ANYPONY GET A MEDIC ITS HURT" screamed pinky. The guards who were still stunend at how the hot pink pony had been able to get past them, sprang into action, ripping on its shirt, revealing the wounds. "Holy shit, what the fuck has this guy been doing" said one of the guards. (Drax's point of view). He heard commotion, around him, and felt his reopened wound being tended to.  He was finally starting to be able to comprehend what they were saying. "Come on, where is that medic, ah to the moon with him". Then another voice was heard above all the commotion "EVERYPONY SETTLE DOWN" said the new voice, it sounded like his drill sergeant's voice but amplified by 10 and more feminine. " I'm not going to be able to stay awake much longer, not in this state, I need rest" as he Drax drifted off to sleep. the last words he heard was "AFTER YOU HEAL HIM, BRING HIM TO THE DUNGEON"

Ok, please tell me how I can do better, Its my first story Im giving my 100% to. All constructive criticism is encouraged. Pleas rate, and tell me how I did. Thanks to everyone who reads :D