The Monster

by Bell the evil

The Begining

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"Good-bye mom!"

"Have fun at school today sweetie! I love you!"

Hannah was walking to school. Little did she know, she wouldn't get there. It was a normal day in Ponyville, the birds were singing, the sun was shining, perfect. Hannah was about half way to school when she saw some flowers. She picked them for her teacher. A dark shadow flew over her head. She looked up to see a pair or griffen claws coming right for her. She opened her mouth to scream, but it was too late.


"I have her for you my princess." The black griffen said.

"Good, set her there."

The griffen set the dead little fillie by the others.

"Do you need anymore my princess?"

"No. We have enough souls now to power the machine. Your work is done, thank you."

"It's my pleasure princess, if you ever need help, you know where to find me."

The black griffen walked out.


No one knew where Hannah went. They figured she had been pony-napped. But there were no sighs any other pony was there, but they did find a black feather. Life in Ponyville was never the same.

"Thats ten pony-nappings in one week!" Twilight yelled

"I just don't get it," said Spike "What would anybody want with the fillies?"

"I'm not sure Spike, but one thing is certain. It needs to stop."

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