true love

by mermaidshadow11

Rating: everyone
Tags: Romance
Length: 857

a new colt in town named darkness rise moves to ponyville

a new colt in town named darkness rise moves to ponyville . he meets a pony called applejack who introdeuces him to her friends . when he meets rarity the white pony and the dark pony instantly fall in love but when rarity dissapers darkness rise goes out to find her…

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-03-12 15:48:47 UTC

meeting new friends

i met a pony called applejack who introdeuced me to her friends twilight,fluttershy,pinkie pie and rainbow dash! but she said there is one more pony left "she is a little bit of a prima donna but she is great once you get to know her" said AJ so we went to her boutiuqe and when we got there a white pony was sowing a dress with a sowing machine "hey rarity"

"oh hello applejack,darling!" said rarity . oh my celestia, she is beautiful . i was frozen on the spot . i saw sparks flying, i... i think i'm in love with this white mare . she smiled at me,sighed then fainted . i wasnt moving , i didnt even blink let alone move . i was too hypnotiesed by the beautey of rarity (AJ told me her name) i think rarity loves me too but i'm not sure...

finding out

"hey darkness! yoohoo! is anypony in there?!"

i snapped back to reality, i was moving again,the sparks stopped flying and all i saw was applejack and rarity lying on the floor

rarity woke up when we left and i dont know what she did but i did see her running to twilight's library so i listened through the door . this is what i heard:

"twilight!"

"rarity?"

"you have got to help me!"

"what's the problem?"

"I'm in love!"

"with who?"

"darkness rise!"

"golly"

i dont know who said "golly" for sure but it sounded like some sort of creature

i just...cant belive it...rarity is in love with me too . now i just need to tell her...

where did she go?

i went inside the library and saw rarity,twilight and a small dragon.he looked at me as if he was mad at me.he went upstairs.i went home.later i finally plucked up the courege to tell rarity how i felt about her,so i went to her boutiqe.when i arrived rarity wasnt there.i looked all over ponyville but there was no sign of rarity.i went to tell twilight.she got everypony together."we have got a very serious dillema,girls.rarity is missing!" said twilight. i said i was going to find rarity...alone.without letting twilight speak,i ran into a place called "the everfree forest" it looked kinda creepy so i used a shield spell.i hope rarity is ok...

what the...?!?

i spotted a really creepy looking castle and i saw rarity through a window.but...there were guards.yeah,figures.but then,i remembered that i'm a unicorn,so i hypnotised them into letting me through.when i got in, rarity ran up to me and hugged me,but her eyes changed colour and her coat changed colour.i knew who this was...

new colt in town (chapter one)

hi i'm darkness rise,im a dark-looking colt with a sunny personality . im from manehatten and i'm moving to ponyville . my parents died when i was just a foal in a car accident so i was put in an orphanege but noone wanted to adopt me for some reason . i still keep a picture of my parents and when i get home every morning i look at that picture with a sad glint in my eye and say "hello mom and dad" . so i'm on the train to ponyville just sitting there . when i arrive i step out the train and walk to ponyville . i decided to go to the town hall . when i got there i walked to the reception "hello,how can i help you?" said the receptionist "hello,i need a place to live . i just moved here from manehatten" i said "oh of course . here is a list of houses and a map on where to find them"

"thank you"

i left to go find a home.

it took about an hour but i finally found a home.i got quite bored so i went for a walk.

saivour (final chapter)

it was Queen chryistalis "HOW DID YOU GET PAST MY GUARDS!!???" shouted chrystalis "i came here because i want to rescue rarity" i said bravely "ha! fool,you will never get past me!".she beat me down...hard.even some of my best spells wouldnt work.then i got an idea.she was about to zap me with another spell but i used a teleporting spell "i'm over here" i said

"here"

"over here"

"what are you,blind? i'm over here!"

she got SO angry that she literally made a hole in the floor by stomping.then i got another idea.chystalis was turned to look at me but i was gone.then i appered "Hello" i said before pushing her into the hole.she screamed as she fell in the bottomless pit.

i looked for rarity.i eventually found her in a dungeon.i used a detection spell to find the key to the chains.i felt like this was the right time to tell her."er,rarity?" i said "yes darkness?" "em,well,uh...i love you,ok?" she gasped,smiled then kissed me then said "i love you too".

and that is the story of how i met...rarity

oh,darkness darling,you didnt have to tell them the WHOLE story!

what??? i'm telling them what happend

kid 1(filly) weee!

kid 2(foal):yay!

THE END