//-------------------------------------------------------// true love -by mermaidshadow11- //-------------------------------------------------------// //-------------------------------------------------------// meeting new friends //-------------------------------------------------------// meeting new friends i met a pony called applejack who introdeuced me to her friends twilight,fluttershy,pinkie pie and rainbow dash! but she said there is one more pony left "she is a little bit of a prima donna but she is great once you get to know her" said AJ so we went to her boutiuqe and when we got there a white pony was sowing a dress with a sowing machine "hey rarity" "oh hello applejack,darling!" said rarity . oh my celestia, she is beautiful . i was frozen on the spot . i saw sparks flying, i... i think i'm in love with this white mare . she smiled at me,sighed then fainted . i wasnt moving , i didnt even blink let alone move . i was too hypnotiesed by the beautey of rarity (AJ told me her name) i think rarity loves me too but i'm not sure... //-------------------------------------------------------// finding out //-------------------------------------------------------// finding out "hey darkness! yoohoo! is anypony in there?!" i snapped back to reality, i was moving again,the sparks stopped flying and all i saw was applejack and rarity lying on the floor rarity woke up when we left and i dont know what she did but i did see her running to twilight's library so i listened through the door . this is what i heard: "twilight!" "rarity?" "you have got to help me!" "what's the problem?" "I'm in love!" "with who?" "darkness rise!" "golly" i dont know who said "golly" for sure but it sounded like some sort of creature i just...cant belive it...rarity is in love with me too . now i just need to tell her... //-------------------------------------------------------// where did she go? //-------------------------------------------------------// where did she go? i went inside the library and saw rarity,twilight and a small dragon.he looked at me as if he was mad at me.he went upstairs.i went home.later i finally plucked up the courege to tell rarity how i felt about her,so i went to her boutiqe.when i arrived rarity wasnt there.i looked all over ponyville but there was no sign of rarity.i went to tell twilight.she got everypony together."we have got a very serious dillema,girls.rarity is missing!" said twilight. i said i was going to find rarity...alone.without letting twilight speak,i ran into a place called "the everfree forest" it looked kinda creepy so i used a shield spell.i hope rarity is ok... //-------------------------------------------------------// what the...?!? //-------------------------------------------------------// what the...?!? i spotted a really creepy looking castle and i saw rarity through a window.but...there were guards.yeah,figures.but then,i remembered that i'm a unicorn,so i hypnotised them into letting me through.when i got in, rarity ran up to me and hugged me,but her eyes changed colour and her coat changed colour.i knew who this was... //-------------------------------------------------------// new colt in town (chapter one) //-------------------------------------------------------// new colt in town (chapter one) hi i'm darkness rise,im a dark-looking colt with a sunny personality . im from manehatten and i'm moving to ponyville . my parents died when i was just a foal in a car accident so i was put in an orphanege but noone wanted to adopt me for some reason . i still keep a picture of my parents and when i get home every morning i look at that picture with a sad glint in my eye and say "hello mom and dad" . so i'm on the train to ponyville just sitting there . when i arrive i step out the train and walk to ponyville . i decided to go to the town hall . when i got there i walked to the reception "hello,how can i help you?" said the receptionist "hello,i need a place to live . i just moved here from manehatten" i said "oh of course . here is a list of houses and a map on where to find them" "thank you" i left to go find a home. it took about an hour but i finally found a home.i got quite bored so i went for a walk. //-------------------------------------------------------// saivour (final chapter) //-------------------------------------------------------// saivour (final chapter) it was Queen chryistalis "HOW DID YOU GET PAST MY GUARDS!!???" shouted chrystalis "i came here because i want to rescue rarity" i said bravely "ha! fool,you will never get past me!".she beat me down...hard.even some of my best spells wouldnt work.then i got an idea.she was about to zap me with another spell but i used a teleporting spell "i'm over here" i said "here" "over here" "what are you,blind? i'm over here!" she got SO angry that she literally made a hole in the floor by stomping.then i got another idea.chystalis was turned to look at me but i was gone.then i appered "Hello" i said before pushing her into the hole.she screamed as she fell in the bottomless pit. i looked for rarity.i eventually found her in a dungeon.i used a detection spell to find the key to the chains.i felt like this was the right time to tell her."er,rarity?" i said "yes darkness?" "em,well,uh...i love you,ok?" she gasped,smiled then kissed me then said "i love you too". and that is the story of how i met...rarity oh,darkness darling,you didnt have to tell them the WHOLE story! what??? i'm telling them what happend kid 1(filly) weee! kid 2(foal):yay! THE END