Reaction's and death.View OnlineEternal LoveReaction's and death."SHE WHAT!!!"Rarity was confused,she wasn't expecting to of her best friend's to fall in love with each other. Rainbow was still crying Fluttershy was the mare or stallion she had ever liked Twilight took her away. "I know I should be happy for them but Fluttershy's was the only pony I ever loved in a special way and Twilight took her from me."Rainbow was still upset for what unfolded in main room of the library. "Rainbow Dash I know your upset but their are plenty of other pony's in equestria and..."she got cut off by a lavender princess flying over. "Hey guy's...um rarity what's wrong with Rainbow Dash?"Twilight questioned at seeing the bravest pony in Ponyville pouring a river of tear's out of her eye's.Rarity looked to Rainbow she nodded and Rarity responded."um Rainbow saw you and Fluttershy kissing and Rainbow's been mad in love Fluttershy since she and Fluttershy were fillies." Twilight had a look of sadness on her face, "I'm sorry Rainbow Dash I can't help my emotion's for another pony maybe if you had told me about this I would have not kissed her but now me and Fluttershy are dating and their's nothing that can stop that."This filled rainbow with rage and before she could think she kicked Twilight with all of her strength in face and blood came out of her snout.Twilight was tired of giving Rainbow chances and this was the last straw."Rainbow I'm terribly sorry but you have left me no other choice."with that Rainbow was lifted into the air limb's being torn off of Rainbow's body first was the wing's next came the leg's and right before she bled out.Twilight used the last of her energy to rip Rainbow's heart out and lit it on fire."Bitch I've givin you one to many chances and this time you blew it." Rarity saw the horror go down but she knew better than to stand up to Twilight and especially now that she had the power of the alicorn amulet it's self.Rarity just cried with blood coating her coat.'Rainbow I'll miss you and I've always loved you.even more than a friend." Author's Note WOW! Dark right? I know I hadn't planned on putting it that way but trust me it will play in with the story eventually.What do you think is going to happen next will somepony try and stop Twilight find out next chapter.:D I know another short chapter don't yell at me.
The mare in stripes and magic without endView OnlineEternal LoveThe mare in stripes and magic without end"Ah I see you have arrived but know prepare to die."Zeccora said in her normal rhyming speech.This puzzled both of them. "Zeccora don't tell me they got you into this to."Twilight asked but when the word's escaped he mouth dust came from Zeccora's direction,it was a blue began to make Fluttershy and Twilight very tired.Before the mist got the better of her she realized what the powder was."NIGHTSHADE!!!"Then her eye's became heavy and the world began to spin until she blacked out unconscious.Fluttershy on the other hoove had covered her snout with her hooves.Zeccora smiled when she saw how well her plan unfolded until she noticed Fluttershy had covered her snout preventing the nightshade from affecting her. "Ah little miss Fluttershy is so sly but you will not get by."Fluttershy moved her hooves from her mouth to talk but the very second she moved them the powder was blew in her face and she joined Twilight in a unconscious sleeping.When Twilight awoke they were in the middle of the everfree forest nopony was around nor was Zeccora any where to be seen she just noticed that she was cuddled up with her favorite mare in the world.Fluttershy.Twilight didn't want to wake her but for some reason had an urge to nibble on Fluttershy's ear.A few hour's passed and Twilight had set up a shelter out of some wood leave's to tie the wood together.It was a bunch of tree houses connected by bridges.When Fluttershy awoke she woke up in a wood building.Before she took in her surrounding's she screamed "TWILIGHT WHERE ARE YOU."Twilight flew in as fast as she could."What is it Fluttershy,what's wrong?"Twilight questioned she saw her expression go from worried to relieved.Before Twilight could react Fluttershy pounced Twilight and they fell out of the house of the bridge and onto the ground luckily twilight used her wing's to land and her magic to catch Fluttershy from hitting the ground."Phew.That was a close on eh Shy?" Twilight chuckled.Twilight moved to where Fluttershy was laying and cuddled up next her.When they heard a voice an almost voice that was to familer."What are you to doing out here?"Asked the voice that was very close to applejack when they turned they saw a little filly It was Applebloom."The better question is what are you doing here Applebloom?"The filly smiled and opened her mouth to reply when Applejack walked up."Applebloom how many times have aha told you stop talking to your..."she looked up and saw Twilight and Fluttershy cuddling in grass.Applejack's jaw dropped,she was speechless.On one hand she hated seeing them and wanted to buck their face in,and on the other she wanted to welcome them into a warm welcoming hug.Before she could think she was wrapped in the middle of a hug between Twilight and Fluttershy."Ahve missed you guy's so much,Pinkie told me what happened at the center of town and how you to ran away to the Everfree Forrest." All three friend's sat quiet for a little Twilight was crying softly and Fluttershy had try'ed nuzzling,kissing hugging,and cuddling. Nothing Applejack was the first to speak up again."Pinkie also told me you ended Dashes life,I wanted to hear it from you...did you kill Rainbow Dash?"Twilight began to cry even harder she didn't mean to kill Rainbow it just happened before she knew it Rainbow was just blood on Twilight's coat.After she realized what she did to her it was to late."Yes...yes...I did I couldn't control myself it was like some dark force was forcing me to slaughter her."Twilight managed to let out through soft sob's. Author's Note So what do think is the dark thing causing her to do evil thing's she doesn't want to do?let me know in the comment's below.
UnfairView OnlineEternal LoveUnfairTwilight was still crying her eye's out for AJ's question,AJ regretted asking Twilight this question after seeing how much depression she put her through."I'm sorry Twi I didn't know..."Twilight almost didn't hear what AJ said. "It's ok you deserved...to know."Twilight said through sob's.AJ knew she had to leave soon the family was probably wondering where she and Applebloom went.She didn't want to leave her friend's in the middle of the Everfree Forrest alone but she knew if she brought them into town that all of Ponyville would chase them or worse. "Well It's almost sundown agh think that me and Applebloom should get headed home,I'll come by tomorrow to come and hang out with you two,"AppleJack managed to squeeze out. "oh alright just can you please bring food,were almost out of our supply."Fluttershy cued softly.Applejack gave a soft and smile,turned to leave when she noticed something different about Twilight.Her eye's weren't their normal lavender,they were pure white,like they were when they used the Element's Of Harmony. "Ummm...Twi you feeling ok?"Applejack questioned,quickly her eye's returned to normal and she felt 'funny'. Twi didn't hear the questioned nor did she know what happened.The last thing she heared was Applejack going to leaving then everything was 'fuzzy' "I'm sorry what did you say AJ I...spaced out" AJ gave her a look of confusion,she had done more than space out.She hardly looked.like Twilight with her eye's all white. "Don't...worry about it."AJ said in confusion,she was still unsure if Twilight was even sane any more,and if Fluttershy was safe to be around her of course she knew the answer to that one,she knew better than anybody that Twilight would never hurt Fluttershy as long as she lived ,even if she was going insane Fluttershy is one thing she would always love and never harm."Well goodbye I'll see you two tomorrow."With that AJ gave them a weak smile and began to walk they other way,the way back to sweat apple acre's.Fluttershy and Twilight flew up to their tree house and snuggled up in the tree leave bed that Twilight made for Fluttershy while she was out due to the nightshade.Now it was a bed for the two of them.When they escaped to the dream world nothing could have prepared them for what would happen.Princess Luna flew onto the platform with a grim face she did not want to bother the two lover's.She also did not want to defy her sister.She was given very simple instruction's fly to their outpost,capture them,bring them back to Canterlot to be executed.When she grabbed Fluttershy with her magic,she realized that this was a big mistake by a flash of magenta and a sharp pain in her head. "Oh Luna did you really think I was going to let you take us especially to be executed."She knew what Celestia had ordered her being a princess also give's her the ability to hear what Luna and Celestia order."Did you really think I would even let you touch either of us and get away with it?If you did you were sadly mistaken..."She got cut of by a shot fired from Luna's horn she barley missed the powerful burst of energy fired in her direction."Oh bitch it's on!!!" with that Twilight shot Luna's leg's,wing's,and finally she walked over to the broken alicorn she knelt down her horn glowed and before she finished Luna off she knelt down and said. "Luna I expected better of you,I thought I could at least trust you but like everypony you to have tried to kill me.and one last thing did you really think I would even let you touch Shy?"Luna shook her head and closed her eye's,for she knew what was coming next and as if on cue,Twilight used her magic and ripped Luna's dark blue head clean off .Twilight finally snapped back in to her normal self and saw the horror scene laid out before her she knew who was to blame . Herself.When Fluttershy awoke she heared Twilight sobbing loudly when she looked in the direction of the sobbing she knew why. Twilight began to speak."I...I...I'm a monster.I...killed Princess Luna,It's just not fair why was I the one chosen to have these evil feeling's.It's just unfair."with that the two were silent for a little until Fluttershy came over and nuzzled Twilight's neck. . Author's Note sorry I haven't been on the "Twishy" topic lately but It will come back soon.Theirs just some topics that I have to get across first but don't worry it will be coming back.
EndingView OnlineEternal LoveEndingWell,hater's I hope your happy because of you guy's and my horrible romance writing skills I am no longer continuing Eternal Love,for those of you who enjoyed the fiction I'm sorry to let you know this but I will be starting a new fic that is better than this but it will be a long time until it is released. Author's Note Sorry.
Lost and FoundView OnlineEternal LoveLost and FoundIt was an hour after the reception of Twilight being crowned a princess and she had this wired feeling in her chest that she couldn't explain she liked this feeling but couldn't quite but her hoof on it.This feeling was love she had finally realized this when she looked at Fluttershy and her heart skipped a beat.She was tired of hiding this feeling and went up to her crush and asked something."Fluttershy can you meet me at the library in a few hour's?" Fluttershy didn't mind meeting Twilight there after all Twilight was her best friend out of all of them."Yea sure Twilight what for?" Twilight wasn't ready for this but she knew if their was any chance of being with her she would tell her something. "ummm...I can't say right now but I'll let you know when you arrive.So I'll see you soon."with that there was a flash of white and Twilight was gone.Fluttershy was now very curious on what Twilight was up to so their was no way she was going to miss this get together. It was now sunset and Twilight was more nervous then she had been her whole life.Then their was a knock at the door."come in Fluttershy." Then the door opened and a cremeish yellow Pegasus with a pink mane walked in."you wished to see me princess." Twilight chuckled she was not expecting this. "Fluttershy you can call me Twilight there's no need for you to use my title." "Oh ok so what did you need me for?" Twilight's heart skipped another beat her face blushed and she began to sweat."Twilight do you feel ok your...sweating."Then Fluttershy noticed her cheek's were redder than paint.Fluttershy let out a gasp. "Fluttershy...I...I..."she was cut off by a warm feeling in her mouth she opened her eye's to see nothing but yellow she then shut her eye's again.This moment could have lasted forever if they didn't have to breath.Finally Fluttershy broke away catching her breath and spoke up."I love you too Twilight."Nothing else mattered to Twilight she would be fine with anything as long as she had Fluttershy nothing else mattered. Author's Note I know this is a short chapter but there will be more.Also what do you think is going to happen?tell me in the comment's.
Heartbreak View OnlineEternal LoveHeartbreak Heartbreak It was an hour after the reception of Twilight being crowned the newest princess of equestria.She saw Fluttershy talking to Twilight and she wanted to know what they were talking about so she bolted up to a nearby cloud and listened in to every single word that was said.Then their was a flash of white and Twilight was gone.Rainbow noticed she wasn't on the same plush cloud that she was just laying on.She was in the library,pinned to the wall with magic and she looked up to see a lavender alicorn that was very very angry."Oh hi princess..."she was cut off by a pain in her leg.She let out a scream of pain.Twilight wasn't going to kill Rainbow dash nor was she going to break a bone she was just expressing her anger. "Oh hi Rainbow Dash I didn't see you their"Twilight said in a sarcastic tone."Oh and one more thing why were you eve's dropping on me and Fluttershy?"Rainbow knew she had been busted.She also knew one wrong word and she might go to sleep forever,Twilight was not the one you wanted to be around when she was mad she could very easily end your life."Oh I saw you to talking and I wanted to know what you to where talking about,and I didn't want to interrupt your conversation so i flew up to a nearby cloud and heard you ask Fluttershy to come visit."Rainbow must have picked the right word's because the magic holding her against the wall let her go and she hit the floor with a thud."OK I'll let you go but leave,NOW!!!Rainbow knew better than to argue with Twilight right now.She nodded and left.She had plan's for the night she planned on asking Fluttershy out.It was sundown and Fluttershy was at Twilight's library door.She knocked herd twilight call her in and she came in.Rainbow was up at the window.Twilight did't see her this time she was to focused on Fluttershy to notice Rainbow spying on her.At first she saw them talking but then she felt a large pain in her heart as Fluttershy's and Twilight's lip's connected.She felt as if their was no reason for life.Like their was no light left in life.She was dead on the inside. Author's Note What a twist am I right? or did you guess this would happen if you did or didn't let me know in the comment's and let me know what you think will happen to Rainbow.What do you think will happen between Fluttershy and Twilight?How will their friend's take their new relationship?and sorry for another short chapter.
LossView OnlineEternal LoveLoss"Why Tw..Tw..Twilight Rainbow was are friend?"Fluttershy questioned she was just told by Rarity what had happened.Twilight was depressed she let her dark side get the better of her she was not wanting to kill Rainbow she didn't even want to hurt her but alas Rainbow was now nothing but dead and it was all her fault."Fluttershy...I'm...so...sorry."Twilight said threw soft sob's she meant what she said and she really didn't even want to harm her."My dark side got the better of me please...please...please forgive Fluttershy everyone I know and loved is abandoning me even my parent's hate me."Fluttershy had considered leaving Twilight to rot but her kind nature got the better of her. "You know I'd never leave you like that." Fluttershy was the one who stayed with the monster known as Twilight but know they would have to move because she picked Twilight's side and everyone in town was getting together to capture and execute the princess.They packed everything they needed. Which wasn't much just some food and a picture of all of their friend's in a group hug.Those were the day's where they were all just friend's nothing was wrong,the day's where they didn't have worries or plan's of dating.They ran as fast as they could past the town but then in the center of Ponyville they got surrounded.even pinkie was their with her mane all flat and a butcher knife in her hand's."YOU TOOK MY DASHIE AWAY AND KNOW IM GOING TO END YOUR LIFE!!!"pinkie screamed."FLUTTERSHY MOVE OUT OF THE WAY!!!"Fluttershy was not going to move she would rather die with alicorn she loved the most then watch her die."no i'm not going to let you kill the only pony who bring's a smile upon my face and love's me day and night."Fluttershy cued above her normal tone of voice. "Fluttershy on three open your wing's and fly as fast as you can to the Forrest. We can station out there for a while."Twilight whispered so no one else could hear.Fluttershy nodded."1...2...3!!!" at that moment Fluttershy and Twilight into the air lightning fast.When they landed in the Forrest they were next to a familer face.The face of a zebra. Author's Note Yea Zeccora is going to be in the story.Tell me how you think of the story so far.What do you think will happen next?
