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Wake up. See This. What do? (Comment driven story)

by RazortheAwesome
(This story is driven entirely by user comments) Out of nowhere you suddenly wake up to find yourself in Equestria with Twilight Sparkle looking down at you with a lascivious grin. What do you do?

This story is driven entirely by user comments. So whatever you say, it will happen.
Continued in Part 2: Raise the Flag

You wake up to find that for whatever reason you are now in Equestria and Twilight is looking down on you with a look on her face that you can only describe as "lascivious." What do you do?

Edited by Kiro0613

Updates Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays

Authors note:
I will be checking up on this story every few days or so to see what you all are saying. Whatever comments you make, regardless of how silly, stupid, or insane it is. I will make it happen. :D

Sister stories
Wake up. See this. What do? Rainbow Dash Edition by me and Hankyhannah (Cancelled)
Everfree Survival by Hrafn
Wake Up With A Hangover. Have Morning Wood. See This. What The Hell Do You Do? by RainbowBob

Teen
Complete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Comedy
Adventure
Random
Human
 
MLBOT

186961 words: Estimated about 16 hours to read
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76 Chapters:

  1. It Begins 2013-02-19 04:35:36 UTC
    1030
  2. The Book 2013-02-19 22:12:49 UTC
    1187
  3. Hello 2013-02-20 19:19:01 UTC
    817
  4. Run Away 2013-02-21 22:22:53 UTC
    1348
  5. Apples Attack 2013-02-22 22:23:55 UTC
    1443
  6. Meet Lyra 2013-02-23 21:47:45 UTC
    1648
  7. Comment Special 2013-02-24 00:32:32 UTC
    303
  8. Lyra answers your questions 2013-02-24 22:24:03 UTC
    3147
  9. Meet Bon Bon 2013-02-25 21:16:05 UTC
    1971
  10. Snacks 2013-02-27 00:11:32 UTC
    1863
  11. Bonus Chapter: PONY KOMBAT - Twilight and Applejack vs Lyra and Bon Bon 2013-02-27 01:15:31 UTC
    1717
  12. Drop Kick the Door 2013-02-27 20:33:49 UTC
    1446
  13. IMPORTANT MESSAGE 2013-02-28 01:36:00 UTC
    29
  14. Grovel Before the Fashionista 2013-03-01 01:43:06 UTC
    2568
  15. Rarity Answers Your Questions 2013-03-02 01:04:45 UTC
    3807
  16. Thwartin My Plans 2013-03-02 22:57:46 UTC
    2563
  17. Bonus Chapter: PONY KOMBAT II - Twilight vs Rarity 2013-03-03 00:31:09 UTC
    2052
  18. Eaten by a Grue 2013-03-03 20:27:15 UTC
    1966
  19. Diplomacy 2013-03-04 19:23:59 UTC
    2038
  20. Debt to be Repaid 2013-03-05 23:50:32 UTC
    2655
  21. Cardboard Box 2013-03-06 19:47:50 UTC
    1658
  22. Encounter 2013-03-07 21:18:31 UTC
    1806
  23. Interrogation 2013-03-09 01:03:55 UTC
    2432
  24. Bonus Chapter: PONY KOMBAT III - Applejack vs Rainbow Dash 2013-03-09 03:32:46 UTC
    2250
  25. I'd Like to be a Tree 2013-03-09 19:34:08 UTC
    1515
  26. Extra Chapter: Ghost Sombra 2013-03-10 01:48:36 UTC
    197
  27. Tree House 2013-03-10 19:55:44 UTC
    2041
  28. To the Windows To the Walls 2013-03-11 20:50:47 UTC
    2500
  29. Ponelicious Ponyville 2013-03-12 23:41:24 UTC
    3246
  30. Bonus Chapter: PONY KOMBAT IV(?) - Pinkie Pie vs Braeburn 2013-03-13 00:34:28 UTC
    1356
  31. To the Forest 2013-03-13 20:42:20 UTC
    3844
  32. Tea Time with Fluttershy 2013-03-14 23:56:17 UTC
    4795
  33. Cuddles 2013-03-15 23:48:48 UTC
    5202
  34. Intermission: Enter Twilight 2013-03-15 23:57:31 UTC
    243
  35. Intermission: Panic 2013-03-16 19:26:11 UTC
    1693
  36. Intermission: Absolutely Nothing Wrong 2013-03-17 18:41:58 UTC
    1775
  37. Intermission: Wake Up 2013-03-19 01:51:36 UTC
    3504
  38. Intermission: Tracking 2013-03-19 22:49:19 UTC
    2747
  39. Extra Chapter: Things People Want to do to Ponies 2013-03-19 22:56:00 UTC
    122
  40. Intermission: I HAS MADNESS!!! 2013-03-20 20:33:04 UTC
    1999
  41. Intermission: Tea Time with Fluttershy Part Deux 2013-03-22 00:12:07 UTC
    4245
  42. Intermission: PONY KOMBAT V - Twilight Sparkle vs Fluttershy 2013-03-26 22:38:15 UTC
    4846
  43. Announcement: Fanart Contest 2013-03-26 22:56:09 UTC
    1195
  44. Intermission: Equestrian Standoff Begins 2013-04-01 01:42:40 UTC
    5326
  45. Part 2 Begins 2013-04-01 21:38:30 UTC
    4027
  46. What the f*** is going on 2013-04-03 22:01:15 UTC
    3619
  47. Comment Special part 2 2013-04-04 02:15:03 UTC
    222
  48. A Good Nights Rest 2013-04-05 23:22:20 UTC
    3155
  49. A Few Days in the Past... 2013-04-05 23:22:23 UTC
    1942
  50. Wake up, Time to Play 2013-04-05 23:22:26 UTC
    459
  51. Breakfast Time 2013-04-06 20:42:19 UTC
    3130
  52. Off to the Farm 2013-04-07 22:37:36 UTC
    3177
  53. THIS STORY IS BROUGHT TO YOU BY 2013-04-07 22:57:10 UTC
    78
  54. Workin on the Farm 2013-04-08 20:39:23 UTC
    2592
  55. Somepony Needs a Hug 2013-04-10 22:36:07 UTC
    3542
  56. Liquorice Headed Little Sister 2013-04-13 00:30:22 UTC
    2835
  57. It's Time To Party 2013-04-13 22:42:17 UTC
    1696
  58. When it's Time to Party 2013-04-14 21:53:31 UTC
    2832
  59. We Will Party Hard aka WALK THE GOD DAMNED DINOSAUR!!! 2013-04-15 20:24:34 UTC
    3027
  60. The(Not) Hangover 2013-04-17 21:20:45 UTC
    4047
  61. The Talk 2013-04-19 23:39:44 UTC
    3590
  62. Fanart Contest Winners 2013-05-03 20:43:29 UTC
    43
  63. From the desk of Risen Flag 2013-05-15 06:09:07 UTC
    8
  64. You will do it 2013-05-16 00:17:13 UTC
    3677
  65. Tour of Ponyville 2013-05-17 23:29:42 UTC
    4453
  66. Duh duh da da duh duh duh da da 2013-05-20 23:59:50 UTC
    3772
  67. Advertisement: The Artwork of Blazewings thunder 2013-05-21 00:14:55 UTC
    221
  68. Countdown to Fate 2013-05-22 23:23:43 UTC
    4253
  69. Dinner 2013-05-25 03:41:46 UTC
    7640
  70. The Fuzz (As in the fuzzy white coats of the Royal Guard) 2013-05-28 00:06:47 UTC
    2833
  71. Hi Princess Celestia 2013-05-30 04:10:01 UTC
    1621
  72. Troll the Estia 2013-06-01 03:47:50 UTC
    5345
  73. Grand Tour of the Royal Palace 2013-06-04 03:49:14 UTC
    8125
  74. Elsewhere in the Palace 2013-06-04 04:03:32 UTC
    4805
  75. ARE YOU READY!?!?!? 2013-06-06 21:11:14 UTC
    38
  76. The Story Continues 2013-06-07 05:21:25 UTC
    22