The human who appeared in Equestia

by Flamez

Rating: everyone
Tags: Romance, Adventure, Alternate Universe, Sad
Length: 631

this is my first story...... I hope y'all like it

A 14 year old boy finds himself in a new world, a lot of colors, many ponies, he gets magic, and a great adventure was waiting to be made!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-02-10 19:56:08 UTC

1: Where am I?

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// Story: The human who appeared in Equestia

// Chapter: 1: Where am I?

// Author: Jonah

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On Earth…

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Me and the 8 of my friends were at war with a great enemy, we were the best team there was.

But for this war, we were falling and dying….

We were still fighting to protect our country, there were 3 of us now…..

1 of them goes down by a grenade.

Now, there was just me and my best friend left, we knew that we had to retreat.

So, we were running for awhile, and we stopped and hid underneath a small hill. We thought that we were gonna die.

  Then, I looked to my right, I saw something, it looked like a rainbow portal to another world…

I told my friend to look, and he did.

He was very surprised.

So, we were  sprinting toward it, while we were running, I saw my friend go down, he got shot by a sniper.

I turned around and saw him down, I tried to help him, but the portal was closing, I didn't know what to do.

He looked at me and said "Jonah…….. go…… save yourself……." I couldn't do it, but, he pushed me in it, and it closed.

I was falling from the sky, while I was falling, I saw a big city in the clouds. "Whoa!"

I also saw a huge castle. "I must be dreaming"  I was wondering where I was…..

Finally, I crashed on a mountain, and hit a tree.

"Owww, that was a wild ride…."

I got up and looked around, but I saw nothing but snow

It was getting colder by the second

I tried to keep my self warm, but it was no use

I traveled up the mountain and saw a cave, it was a big cave

I entered it

"Hello? Anybody home?"

My voice echoed and I was getting scared, then I saw something flash at the end of the cave

"What the hell is that?"

I went in deeper, and I found a big shiny rock

"WHOA!"

I saw something red inside it

"I think I'm gonna blow up this rock"

I took out my grenades and poured gunpowder around the rock and made a line to where I was hiding

Then, I lit a match

"I hope this works…."

Dropped it, and the gunpowder starting lighting up

Then, I heard a big explosion, I looked

There was fire gems everywhere, they were in every color too!

"HOLY CRAP!"

I started putting them in my bag while I was saying to myself

"These will might help me, I can sell these to someone….."

I had about 600 fire gems in my bag

"Ok, I think thats enough."

"I'm getting out of here"

I run to the entrance of the cave and I jump off of the mountain

I'm falling and screaming, as loud as I can

I look down and I see the ground, I don't know what to do

BAM!!

I'm laying there, on the ground, my eyes were closing

I open my eyes and I see 2 pegasus together

1 of them is black, and the other is blue, but has rainbow hair

I'm passed out

The Black one looks down and sees me

The blue pegasus follows him

They're both on the ground and are looking at me

I open my eyes barely and I see them, but I shut my eyes again

the black pegasus said,

"What is that?"

The blue one replied,

"I don't know…."

black pegasus said,

"Should we help him?"

blue replied

"I think so.."

And then, they both picked me up, threw me on his

back, and they flew me to a hospital…

End of Chapter 1